08-01-2020, 11:25 PM
going great brother. awasome writing. waiting for next update...
(08-01-2020, 10:31 PM)AFSAR Wrote: Hats off prince bro. What a seductive story man. Innocent wife falling for stranger. Amazing narration bro. You are number one writer .
(08-01-2020, 11:25 PM)Waliaz Wrote: yr): yr): yr):
Brilliant just brilliant brother. I love your writing. After reading the update I can understand the feelings going inside mind of the innocent wife. At one side she loves her husband so much and on the other side she is getting excited by a stranger .
I am speechless brother. I adore you.
(09-01-2020, 07:49 AM)Sarpanch004 Wrote: Bahut khoob bro.......par eh tusi hindi story " chhoti si Bhool " nu punjabi translate kr rahe ho.....thoda change krke jarur likho fer jada maza aayega....
(11-01-2020, 08:18 AM)Sarpanch004 Wrote: Waiting for next bro
(11-01-2020, 04:07 PM)Anmol Sidhu Wrote: update ????
(11-01-2020, 04:14 PM)Love1234 Wrote: Update kdo aauna next???
(12-01-2020, 08:26 PM)Ilovesinghni Wrote: Krdo g update,, sundy sukka langh gia