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Misc. Erotica Gande Varke ( ਗੰਦੇ ਵਰਕੇ )
going great brother. awasome writing. waiting for next update...
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Brilliant just brilliant brother. I love your writing. After reading the update I can understand the feelings going inside mind of the innocent wife. At one side she loves her husband so much and on the other side she is getting excited by a stranger .

I am speechless brother. I adore you.
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Kaimmm
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Awesome start
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Bahut khoob bro.......par eh tusi hindi story " chhoti si Bhool " nu punjabi translate kr rahe ho.....thoda change krke jarur likho fer jada maza aayega....
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(08-01-2020, 08:06 PM)Ilovesinghni Wrote: Hae attttt. Thx for update

Thanks bro for reading and commenting.
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(08-01-2020, 08:15 PM)NAV nAv Wrote: End sirra

Thanks for the reply bro.
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(08-01-2020, 10:31 PM)AFSAR Wrote: Hats off prince bro. What a seductive story man. Innocent wife falling for stranger. Amazing narration bro. You are number one writer .

Thanks bro for the precious comment. But narration in first two updates is inspired by writer jatin (Hindi Section) . So credit goes to him. I will originally write 3rd,4th and 5th update .
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(08-01-2020, 11:25 PM)Neo_ Wrote: going great brother. awasome writing. waiting for next update...

Thank you so much bro for the kind words.
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(08-01-2020, 11:25 PM)Waliaz Wrote: yourock yourock yourock

Brilliant just brilliant brother. I love your writing. After reading the update I can understand the feelings going inside mind of the innocent wife. At one side she loves her husband so much and on the other side she is getting excited by a stranger .

I am speechless brother. I adore you.

Thank you so much bro for always encouraging me.
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(09-01-2020, 01:21 AM)Sukha.jatt Wrote: Kaimmm

Thank you so much.
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(09-01-2020, 07:03 AM)thanedar Wrote: Awesome start

Thanks bro.
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(09-01-2020, 07:49 AM)Sarpanch004 Wrote: Bahut khoob bro.......par eh tusi hindi story " chhoti si Bhool " nu punjabi translate kr rahe ho.....thoda change krke jarur likho fer jada maza aayega....

Thank you so much bro for reading and replying. Yes bro eh story Choti so bhool by jatin di story toh inspired hai. Hanji bro story changed hai bas basic premise and the first update is purely inspired par I have made necessary changes in it. 

The story will be entirely different in coming updates.so don't worry brother.
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Waiting for next bro
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update ????
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Update kdo aauna next???
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Krdo g update,, sundy sukka langh gia
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(11-01-2020, 08:18 AM)Sarpanch004 Wrote: Waiting for next bro

(11-01-2020, 04:07 PM)Anmol Sidhu Wrote: update ????

(11-01-2020, 04:14 PM)Love1234 Wrote: Update kdo aauna next???

(12-01-2020, 08:26 PM)Ilovesinghni Wrote: Krdo g update,, sundy sukka langh gia

Ajj update aa reha hai doston. Thanks for the patience.
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(13-01-2020, 02:21 PM)The Blue Prince Wrote: Ajj update aa reha hai doston. Thanks for the patience.
Kine vje bhra plzz jma sahi tym dseo
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kro update
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