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u r right bunty9018 aap shi kh rhe hai bhai chudai ko jitna jada dirty dailog ke sath krne me mja ata hai utna ek dm nhi aakhir neha ek pativerta indain nari hai jo mandir jati hai bhagvan me ashtha rkhti hai uski chudai ko ek Gasstiiiiii ki chdai ki tra nhi ek ghrelu sanskaari indiadn woman ki tra slow slow adda ke sath sharm ke sath dirty talk jada se jada bo bhi pati ke samne
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osm ..jabrst erotic story
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(05-01-2020, 07:26 AM)Goldy007 Wrote: u r right bunty9018 aap shi kh rhe hai bhai chudai ko jitna jada dirty dailog ke sath krne me mja ata hai utna ek dm nhi aakhir neha ek pativerta indain nari hai jo mandir jati hai bhagvan me ashtha rkhti hai uski chudai ko ek Gasstiiiiii ki chdai ki tra nhi ek ghrelu sanskaari indiadn woman ki tra slow slow adda ke sath sharm ke sath dirty talk jada se jada bo bhi pati ke samne
thank dost mera to manana hi chudai se jayda maza sexy baato mi aata hi javed neha se kahe ki bulbul apni jawani ke jalwe dikha kar uska laida khada kare javed ke samne neha matak kar chale apnichuchiyo ko khud masale apni chut ko sehlaye or javed se reqiest kare chodne ki or javedusko bole rani pehle khud apni taange khol kar apni chut mi ungli karke uska lauda khada kare tab wo chodega
javed neha ko or tapadye apna lauda dikha kar randi tuze ye chahiye na tera is ungli ya teri namard pati se lulli se kya hoga
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Update 20
Lekin ab bahut der ho chuki hai..... judgement time aa gaya hai......
Neha ka dil joro se dhadak raha hai jo doorbell ki awaaj se tej baj raha hai....
Dhak dhak....dhak...dhak....
Usko saans lene me takleef ho rahi thi.... haath per sunn pad rahe the..... per kuch nahi ho skata... neha soch rahi hai uska kya haal hoga wo kaise ye samay nikalegi...
Day: Saturday Tme: 7: 45 PM
Location: Javed's farmhouse
Judgement day and final countdown start...
Tik tik. .... tik.tik..
Door open hota hai....aur...Javed ka chehra saamne aata hai...
J: Hey Karan.... hello Neha.....
K: Good evening sir.....
Neha apna thook nigalte hua haklate hua boli...
N: go...oood evè..ning si..r....
Javed dekhta hi reh jaata hai.... Neha bala ki khoobsurat lag rahi thi.... wo sari me bahit sexy lag rahi thi... uske khulle baal.... sudol boobs... patli kamar.... ubhar leti gaand.... laplapte lips.. bedaag chehra....motio jaise teeth... uski jhijhak.. badi badi eyes ... per sharam ke maare jhuki hui.... gale mangalsutra jo gavahi de raha hai ki wo kissi aur ki amanat hai...transparent sari se dikhta uska sapat pet.... gehri naabhi....
Karan ko bada garv ka anubhav hua ki Neha ko dekhkar javed ki eyes phat gayi.... aur Javed Neha ko ghure ja raha tha...
(Javed mann me sochta hai ... Karan ki biwi mall to thi... per aaj to qayamat lag rahi hai...mere kehne ke according saj dhaj ke aayi hai... aaj mazza aa jaayegi... )
Javed ka koi jabab na pakar Karan bola...
K: Sir kahan kho gaye....
Neha apni taraf Javed ko ghurte dekh aur thandi pad gayi... aur sharm se eyes nahi mila pa rahi thi... uske pet me hulchal ho rahi thi.. aur per kaanp rahe the..
J: oho.. kahin nahi.. Good evening both of u .
Neha tumne Karan ko bacha liya ... tumhare jaise samajhdar biwi sabko mile.... aur Karan tumko bhi apni patni ka shukragujar hona chahiye.... aur Neha you are fabulous in this sari... looking beautiful as always..... by the way welcome in my farmhouse. Aur isse apna hi ghar samjho...
Please come in....
Karan aur Neha dono Javed ke aise warm welcome karne pe thoda comfortable ho gaye..... Neha jo thodi nervous thi usko thoda tension release ho gaya lekin ab bhi wo apne dono hatheli apas me ragad rahi thi.. saans ab bhi tej chal rahi thi.. pero me kamppan ho raha tha.
Wo teeno andar aa gaye aur Javed ne door lock kar diya phir wo dono Javed ke peeche 2 chalne lage. Gallery pass karte wo log drawing hall me pahunch gaye... jaise hi Karan aur Neha drawing hall me pahunche unko jeevan ka sapse bada jhatka laga... unki eyes phati ki phati reh gayi...
Wahan sofe pe Javed ka dost S.P Gupta baitha hua tha...
Karan ko bhayanar jhataka laga... aur wo Javed ki taraf question wali najro se dekha.. Javed ne usse issare se chup rehne ka sanket diya...
Tabhi gupta ne Karan ko dekha...
G: arre Karan tum yahan bahut badhiya come on...
Tabhi gupta ki najar Neha pe gayi aur uski aankhen phati ki phati reh gayi.. itna jordaar maal usne bahut dino ke baad dekha tha....
Gupta bus usse taktaki lagaye dekhta reh gaya..
Karan ne fufusa ke pooccha...
K: Sir ye Gupta yahan kaise ....
J: Mujhe nahi maloom ye mere pass achanak se aa gaya aur tum bhi jaldi aa gaye... maine socha tum 8:30 tak aaooge tab tak me isse futa doonga..
K: Sir ab kya karre....
J: tum thoda chup baithna main isko yahan se bhagata hoon..
Dono log fusfusa ke baat kar rahe the..
G: arre Karan ye kaun aaya hai tumhare saath..
(Neha ki gaand fat gayi do logo ko dekhkar... usper Gupta usko behad gandi najar se dekhe raha tha... usko bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha ye majra kya hai... wo sehem gayi thi aur karan ke peeche chupne lagi...)
(Isse pehle Karan jabab deta .... Javed ne bola)
J: are Gupta koi nahi hai... Karan mujhse milane laaya hai...
G: Abe Karan ye sab kaam tu kab se karne laga .. yahi wajah hai ki Javed tujhe pasand karta hai...
J: Gupta aise koi baat nahi ye meri ek client hai jo Karan milane laya hai...
( Neha confuse yahan chal kya raha hai wo shabhi ko baari 2 se dekh rahi thi... aur wo poore mahol ko samjhne ki koshish kar rahi thi... Hall me tej roshni thi..bada well decorated hall tha.. king size sofa jispe Gupta baitha hua tha us sofe ki samne ek badi glass table aur uske agge 100 inch se badi smart tv with home theater.)
G: Abe Javed. Mujhe gaandu samjha hai kya ... client ko farmhouse pe wo bhi raat me ... kya office kam pad gaya hai.. wo bhi itni jordar client raat me taiyyar ho ke aayi hai jaise koi party me ja rahi hai. Abe saale yehi dosti hai .... rupchik maal hai to dost ko bhool gaya...
( Karan thoda upset hota ja raha tha... Neha uski taraf dekhne lagti hai..)
G: abe Karan ye maal kahan se laaya hai... Javed ko khush karne ke liye laya hai...
( ab Karan ko thoda gussa aa raha tha)
G: oye randi tera naam kya hai....
( Neha ko samajh me nahi aaya ki usne kisse ye sawal poocha, lekin use dar lagne laga aur ghabrat me wo aur sunder dikh rahi thi...)
G: abe bhosadi ki tujhse naam poocha maine.. kya naam hai tera....
(Neha ekdum hadbada gayi...)
J: Rinky naam hai iska.... Aur maine Karan ko bheja tha isse yahan lane ke liye.. bus...
( Javed ne Neha ki pehchaan chupa li.. Karan aur Neha ka dhayaan bhi nahi tha per ab dono ne chain ki saans li ki sahi naam nahi bataya)
G: abe tu bada naam jaanta hai iska ye pehle bhi yahan aayi hai kya. Saale pehle kyon nahi bulaya mujhe ..yehi dosti hai...
J: Nahi yaar. Pehli baar aayi hai....
(Karan ko ajeev lag raha tha ... Javed usko rok kyon nahi rahe hai...)
G: To Rinky randi tu kya Javed ke pass pehli baar aayi hai.. mujhe Javed pe bharosa nahi raha.. keh raha hai client hai.. saala akele 2 maal khane ke chakker me hai... tu sach bata...
( Ab Karan ka gussa satve aasmaan pe.. wo usko maarne wala tha.. tabhi Javed ne uska haath pakad liya aur chup rehne ka ishara kiya)
J: Nahi yaar me keh to raha hoon pehli baar maine socha pehle mil liya jaaye agar pasand aayegi to rokunga nahi Karan ke saath vapas bhej doonga. Mujhe to pasand nahi aayi... me vapas bhej deta hoon.
G: abe pagal hai kya .... aur andha bhi ho gaya hai.. tujhe pasand nahi aayi... saale kya maal hai..
Madarchod sathiya gaya hai kya... saale filmi heroine bhi iske aage fiki hai... Karan mujhe ye Randi chahiye...bol kitne paise doon.. aaj me choduga isse...
(Ab gupta saari seemayen laangh gaya Karan ko ab bardasht nahi ho raha tha usko bus ab gupta ke peetna tha)
( Ab Neha ki gaand fat gayi.. uski aankhen dabdaba gayi.. wo Karan aur Javed ki taraf dekhne lagi...saayad koi to gupta ko chup karaye)
Javed karan ka hath pakad ke kamre ke ek kone me bar counter ke pass le gaya. Neha ko vahi khade rehne ka isahra kiya.
K: Sir isko rok lo nahi to me isko maroonga...
J: Karan shant raho... mere pass iska illaj hai..
K: Nahi sir program cancel, mujhe neha ke saath wapas ghar jaana hai...
J: Karan apne Javed sir pe bharosa karo... thodi der ruk jaaoo, me sab theek karta hoon, nahi to tum Neha ko le ke chale jana....
K: Kya karenge...aap
J: mujhko gupta ko handle karna aata.. hai.. iske bus ki baat nahi hai ye sab karna aise hi shor machata rehta hai... me abhi isko ek drink bana ke deta hoon usme behosh karne ki dava hogi .. usko pite hi ye behosh ho jaayega...phir saale ko dusre kamre me phenk denge....tum apna mazza kyon kharab kar rahe ho....
G: Chal randi idhar aa... mere pass aa...
( Neha ko kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha ye kya ho raha hai... usne Karan aur Javed ki taraf aasha bhari najro se dekha)
Javed ne Neha ko Gupta ke pass jaane ka ishara kiya.. aur neha gupta ke pass ja kar khadi ho gayi... achanak se Gupta ne Neha ko apni aur kheench liya aur wo uski godi me gir gayi.. achanak is hamle se neha taiyaar nahi thi...wo hadbada gayi... Gupta ne uski qamar me haath daal ke pakad liya . Usne Neha ko apni godi me ek per pe baitha liya...
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G: wah kya maal hai... bahut chikni hai... ekdum mal mal ki tarah...
(Karan ko bahut gussa aa raha tha per javed ki wajah se chup tha... Aur Javed ne teeno ke liye drink banane laga)
Gupta ko Neha ka mangal sutra dikh gaya..
G: arre tu shadi shuda hai...
(Neha uski godi me chatpata rahi thi..kyonki Gupta uska pura badan touch kar raha tha... Gupta ka ek haath uski jaangh pe aur dusra uski peeth sehla raha tha)
G: Rinky raand tu kabse is dhande me hai...
J: uska pehli baar hai.....
G: tu kya madarchod uska dalal hai. Jo saare jabab de raha hai iss raand ko bhi to bolne de.
Aur kya is randi ne moonh me dahi jama rakha hai...
G: ab bata tera pehla time hai...
Neha ne haan me sir hilaya...
G: Tabhi saali nakhre dikha rahi hai
(Gupta ne uski ek choochi pakad ke marode di.. Neha ki dard se chikh nikal gayi.... aur neha ki rone wali surat ho gayi... karan ko bardhast nahi ho raha tha per Javed ne usko roke diya... phir whiskey ka ek glass karan ko de diya aur dushra glass gupta ko dene chala gaya... )
J: Gupta ye sab to chalta rahega le whiskey pee..
Aur whiskey gupta ko de di...
J: chal pehle usko pee...phir kuch aur karna..
Gupta ne puri whiskey ek baar me pee li kyonki usko dono hatho se neha ko touch karna tha..
Javed gupta ke whiskey ke glass ko le ke karan ke pass laut aaya aur usko aankh maari aur bola
J: karan bus 5 ya 10 min intejaar kar lo..iska khel khatam hone wala hai....
Karan ab thoda relex ho gaya ... usse bus max 10 min aur jhelna tha is Gupta ko..
Phir Javed ne apna glass uthaya aur cheers kiya karan ke saath.. aur wo dono bhi whiskey pine lage...
Gupat thoda height me chota tha kuch 5 feet 5 inch aur neha karib 5 feet 6 inch. Gupta ke god me baithne ke karan gupta ka face uske kandhe tak aa raha tha aur is wajah se wo usko face pe kiss nahi kar pa raha tha. Aur Neha bhi alert hone ki wajah se sèedhi baithi hui thi.. to Gupta usko kutte jaisa pura sungh raha tha.. Neha ke pass se badi acchhi mehak aa rahi thi... bodylotion aur perfume ki.. wo usko nange haatho per kiss kar raha tha.. jiski wajah se Neha badi uncomfortable ho rahi thi aur bachne ke liye idhar udhar ho rahi thi.
G: saali theek se nahi baith pa rahi... machal kyon rahi hai... pehli baar kissi ki godi me baithi hai...
Phir gupta ne Neha ka haath pakda aur apne lund pe rakh diya... aur bola...
G: Rinky ye kya hai... bata to jara..
( Neha sakpaka gayi gupta ke khade land pe haath rakh ke.. kuch boli nahi.)
G: Bata na randi ye kya hai....
(Neha uske ek per pe baithi thi...aur gupta majbooti se usse pakde baitha tha.. uske ek haath uski qamar pe ghoom raha tha aur dusra haath uske haath ko pakad ke lund pe rakha hua tha.... per is baar bhi neha ne jabab nahi diya)
G: Madarchod tujhse kuch poonch raha hoon ...ki teri abhi me maa chodu...
Neha ekdum ghabra gayi aur roni shurat bana ke boli..
N: lulli..
G: abe kya boli lulli...ha..ha...ha....
G: abe Javed is raand ko kahan se pakad ke laye ho isko lulli keh rahi hai....
( Neha itna humiliation feel kar rahi thi jiski kalpana bhi nahi kar sakti thi... uske aankho se ansoon behne lage...aur wo karan aur Javed ki taraf dekhne lagi ki saayad ye log usse bacha le)
G: Chal randi ki aulad meri pant khol... me dikhata hoon ye lulli hai ya kuch aur...
(Neha ekdum jadvat...usko kuch samajh me nahi aa raha ki wo kya kare kya na kare)
G: Madarchodi suna nahi tune....
J: Karan dekho Gupta thodi der me behosh hone wala hai.. aur neha tumhari presence me comfortable nahi ho paayegi.. aisa karna tum bagal waale room me chale jaoo..
( Karan ko ek aur jhatka laga....uski fantasy ka kya hoga usko to Neha ko chudate hua dekhna hai)
J: Karan wo mirror dekh rahe ho wo us kamre se attached hai.. wo mirror transparent hai...tum us kamre se is hall me sab kuch dekh sakte ho...
Ab karan ke jaan me jaan aayi...usko ye idea pasand aaya...
G: are behenchod tu behri hai kya chal saamne aa aur meri pant khol...
(Neha saamane khadi ho gayi.. usko Gupta ke chaangul se choot ke acchha laga. Phir Gupta ne uska haath pakad ke apne saamne baitha liya.
(Neha saamne baith gayi per kuch nahi kar rahi bus eyes jhuka ke baithi thi.. phir gupta ne uski dusari choochi noch li... phir se neha ki cheekh nikal gayi...javed aur Karan chounk ke dekhne lage.... javed ne karan ko chup hone ka ishara kiya Karan ka khoon khaula ja raha tha )
J: Karan thodi der aur jhel lo Gupta ko ye behosh hone wala hai
Gupta ne uska haath uthakar apne pant ke uper rakh diya per neha ne haath to pant pe rakh diya per pant nahi khol rahi thi... uske dimag ab bhi kaam nahi kar raha tha... ye sab Javed ke saath hona the .. per ye dushra aadmi kyon bulaya... ye sab kya aur kyon ho raha hai.. usme confuse thi ..usse lag raha tha ye kis tarah ka aadmi hai ...jo kitni gandi tarah treat kar raha hai...gandi bhasha aur gandi tarah se touch kar raha hai... uska bhi man kar raha tha is aadmi ko thappad rasid kar de ... per Karan aur Javed ke karan majboor thi...)
J: Karan mere khayal se tumko bagal wale room me chalna chahiye tum chale jaaooge to me gupta ko handle kar paaoonga....nahi to..
(Tabhi ek jordaar awaaj aayi.... chataaakkkk..
Javed aur Karan ne dekha ki Neha apna gaal pakad ke baithi hai.. Neha ekdum sakte me hai..sab ke sab shocked me dikhayi de rahe the sivay Gupta ke.. jaise hi neha ki najar Karan aur javed pe padi wo jor se rone lagi.... aasoon ki dhaar uske eyes se uske gallo pe behne lage.... usko insult, humiliation, ki chot thappad ki chot se gehri thi.... )
G: Madarchodi nakhre kar rahi thi... maine kaha pant kholo.. pant kholo...nahi khola to diya mila ke ek... behenchod....
To be continue....
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Mind blowing.... Sandar.... Update please
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sorry but ye gupta wala character shi nhi lga update ka mja khraab ho gya sorry per shi nhi lga javed ke sath hi hona chahiye tha sb kuj
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(05-01-2020, 09:50 PM)Goldy007 Wrote: sorry but ye gupta wala character shi nhi lga update ka mja khraab ho gya sorry per shi nhi lga javed ke sath hi hona chahiye tha sb kuj
Wait karo goldy bhai... aage aapke pass do option hoge..
Aap jaisa chahoge waisa hi mod de denge.. mere kuch point hai aap gaur kare..
1. Javed ko Karan ka intention nahi pata wo apni wife kyon de raha hai.
2. Javed ye one time nahi karna chahata...
3. Javed Karan ko cuckold banana chahta hai..
At least abhi kahani chal rahi .... abhi kuch aur twist hai..
Agar pasand nahi aaye to thread closed kar doonga...
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(05-01-2020, 09:50 PM)Goldy007 Wrote: sorry but ye gupta wala character shi nhi lga update ka mja khraab ho gya sorry per shi nhi lga javed ke sath hi hona chahiye tha sb kuj Dear Goldy bhai,
Agle update ke baad kuch question poochunga aapse.. phir aap batana me sahi hoon ya aap.
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Sara mood khraab kr diya...
Is Gupta ki entry ne.. ek fantasy bni thi... Ek ladki ka character dikhaya or abhi use itna insult krwa rhe ho....
Raand thodi hai housewife hai.kuch to plot rekho.
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Amazing bhai plzzzz update fast..... Continue this Gupta character.... I know u have some amazing plot in your mind... Love ittt
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Brother, please don't mind. You have spoiled the excitement of the story by adding Gupta
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Mind blowing update............please continue the story in ur own way..........because different person have different fantasies and so u cannot content everyone....but ur story have different and unique flavour.......which I like to read again and again............
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wow nice story. keep going
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(06-01-2020, 07:09 AM)mihikagupta1991 Wrote: Mind blowing update............please continue the story in ur own way..........because different person have different fantasies and so u cannot content everyone....but ur story have different and unique flavour.......which I like to read again and again............
Thanks bro...
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(06-01-2020, 02:32 AM)Aasif34 Wrote: Amazing bhai plzzzz update fast..... Continue this Gupta character.... I know u have some amazing plot in your mind... Love ittt
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Update 21
G: Madarchodi nakhre kar rahi thi... maine kaha pant kholo.. pant kholo...nahi khola to diya mila ke ek... behenchod....
Ab aage....
(Karan ki ankhoo me khoon utar aaya... Karan ne kabhi bhi Neha pe haath nahi uthaya tha.. aur neha ko bhi kabhi itni jordaar thappad nahi pada tha.. Neha ki saari jaan nikal gayi....uske gore gore gaal pe pura panja chap gaya.. thappaad itna jordar tha ki neha ko uper se lekar ander tak dard hua... Neha ke saare nakhre uski gaand me ghus gaye... is thappaad ne Neha ki aatma tak ko ghayal kar diya... neha sofe ke saamne jamin pe baithi ro rahi thi ...
aur dono ki taraf dekh rahi thi ki koi to usko is pagal aadmi se bachaye...aur is thappaad ka jabab de.... Karan Neha ke pass jaane hi wala tha ki Javed ne Karan ko roka aur bola:
J: Karan ruko me handle karta hoon.
Javed Neha ke pass gaya aur uske kandhe pe haath rakh ke uthaya...Neha ka bahut acchha laga ki dono me se koi to aaya per Karan aata to aur acchha lagta.
J: Gutpa tera dimag kharab ho gaya hai.. saale. Dara diya hai tune isko....
Javed ne Neha ke cheeks se ansoon poche.. aur uske Neha ke dono kandhe pe apna ek haanth rakh diya..
J: saale gupta aise koi treat karta hai... tune nahi bulaya hai isse maine bulaya hai.. ye meri mehmaan hai na ki teri....
Javed ne Neha ko apne se aur sata liya.. Neha ko bhi badi secure feeling ho rahi thi... Javed ki bahon me... Wo bhi usse sat kar khadi ho gayi...per karan pe thoda gussa aa raha tha ki wo kyon nahi aaya... usko thappad pada to Karan ko react karna chahiye...
J: saale gupta tabhi to me tere ko bulata nahi hoon saala sara mood kharab kar diya.. maradchod ....
Gupta sir jhukaye baitha tha... aur javed ki khari khoti sun raha tha...
G: per ye mera kehna nahi mann rahi thi...Nekhre dikha rahi thi... Nekhre to me kissi ke jhelta hi nahi.
J: tujhe samajh nahi aata ki ye uska pehli baar hai.. maine pehle hi bola tha tujhe iska pehli baar hai... tujhe pehli baar ka matlab bhi samjhana padega...bahenchod....
Javed ne ye baat chillakar aur gusse se ye baat boli...
Javed ka gussa dekhkar Gupta ab bilkul chup ... Gupta sir jhukaye baitha tha.....Aur Neha ka badi khusi mili.. ki koi to hai jo Gupta jaise neech insaan ko sabak sikha raha hai... Javed ne Neha ko aur apne se chipka liya.... neha ka puri side body javed ke puri side body se chipki hui thi...
J: bhosadi ke Dekh iski taraf ...
Javed ne Neha ki chin ko haath se uthaya...
J: Dekh kitni massom hai ye.... aaj tak isne kuch bhi aisa waisa nahi kiya hai aur to behenchod uspe rob jhaad raha hai...ek sharif ladki pe rob jhad ke mard ban raha hai..
(Karan bhi ab khush tha ki Javed Gupta ki class le raha hai.
Neha me bhi Shakti ka sanchhar hua ki Javed ne usko protect kiya Gupta naam ke jaanwar se... aur usko masoom bolne me uski eyes dabdaba gayi. Neha ab badi comfortable mehsoos kar rahi thi Javed ki aagoosh me....)
J: Gupta dekh iski taraf kitni sunder, kitni jaheen, kitni ghrelu hai ye ladki... aur tu isko sata raha hai... saale khuda se to darr.
Aur Javed ne neha ko apne se aur sata liya.. ab uski ek choochi javed ke seene se sat gayi... Neha ko pata nahi chala phir javed ne neha ke kandhe se haath hatakar uski qamar me daal diya.....
J: kitni shareef ladki hai ye ... agar koi aur hoti to abhi tujhe maza chakha deti... kya bajaroo randioo pe tu itni buckchodi kar pata.. saala mood ki maa chod di...
Javed ne apni pakad aur tight kar di neha pe... lekin neha ko pata hi nahi chala....javed uski nangi qamar pe haath phira raha tha...
Karan aur Neha ko bahut acchha lag raha tha ki Javed Gupta ki gaand maar raha hai...
G: are Javed bhai kya keh rahe ho ...is ladki ke liye dosti ki ma chod rahe ho..
J: are dosti ki ma nahi chod raha lekin insaniyanat bhi kuch hoti hai... tujhe dikh nahi raha wo kitni masoom hai... komal hai... aur sabse badi baat meri mehmaan hai.... tu hai ki meri bhi izzat ki maa chod raha hai... tujhe samajh nahi aa raha ye is type ki ladki nahi hai....
( neha ki najro me Javed ki izzat bhad gayi.. wo kitna defend kar rahe hai usko...javed aur Gupta ke beech itni gali galoj ho rahi thi.. phir bhi Neha ko koi fark nahi pad raha tha..kyonki usko lag raha hai ki Javed Neha ke apmaan or baijitti ka badla le raha hai aur saath 2 usko Gupta jaise insaan se protect kar rahe hai )
J: tu saale dosti ki duhai de raha hai... lekin isme is masoom ka kya dosh.... agar maine isse bulaya hai to meri baat ki izzat kar..
Gupta bilkul backfoot pe...
G: wo yaar lagta hai me hosh kho betha ... Rinky hai hi itni khoobsurat... maine aaj tak itni sundar ladki nahi dekhi.... bla ki khoobsirat hai..
Neha sehmi si javed ke agosh me khadi thi...
J: agar Rinky sundar hai to uski sundarta ki kadra karo... uski tariff karo... per saale ye kya madarchudai hai ki tum usko maaro... uski bekadri karo...
Javed ne apna aur kasab neha pe tight kar liya
G: yaar me keh raha hoon me pagal ho gaya rinki ko dekh kar..... wo kissi heroine se kam nahi hai... usko jaldi paane ke liye thodi jaldwazzi kar di....
J: abe dekh gupta iski taraf tume iski kya halat kar di... Rinky me mafi mangata hoon ... iske liye..
Neha badi masoomiyat se Javed ki taraf dekhne lagi... uska bada acchha laga koi to uski dignity ke liye lad raha hai... uski aankhon se phir ansson behne lage... javed ne bade pyar se Neha ke ansoon pochhe.... aur pyar se gale laga liya ... neha ko bhi bada sakoon mila ... wo bada safe mehsoos kar rahi thi javed ki agosh me...
J: Gupta ... agar tu isse pyar se baat karta to kya ye mana karti... kyon Rinky ...
Neha ne javed ki taraf dekha aur haan me sir hilaya...
J: dekha Gupta.... ye badi acchhi aur sharif ladki hai... tujhe tameej hi nahi hai kaise ek sharif ladki se baat ki jaati hai...
Javed ne ye baat neha ki taraf dekhte hua boli..
Neha aur javed dono ek dushre ki taraf dekh rahe the.. tabhi javed nè neha ke cheeks pe ek kiss kar diya... aur bola
J: jhaantu gupta tune iska gaal laal ker diya aur pura chehre ka huliya bigad diya...
Phir Javed ne Neha ke dono gaal pe baari 2 kiss kiya....
Neha to apni sudh budh kho baithi thi thappad khane ke baad usko to acchha lag raha tha koi to hai jo usko itne apmaan ke baad pyar se sambhal aur uski dignity ko protect ker raha hai...
Uska kuch bhi ajeev nahi lag raha tha... kyonki abhi 2 wo ek mental trauma se gujari thi..usko bada shakoon mil raha tha... javed ki bahoon me ...
J: gupta me batata hoon logo ko kaise treat kiya jata hai aur mujse shikh... Rinky meri taraf dekho......
( Neha javed ki taraf apna sir uthaya per uski eyes jhuki hui thi.....)
J: meri taraf dekho....
(Neha ne eyes uthakar javed ki taraf dekha... dono ab ek dusre ko dekha rahe the... javed ne hath uthaker uski eyes pocchi... pura chehra jo ansoon se bhiga hua tha....phir uske chehre ko saaf kiya.... Neha ki sharir me current daur gaya ... uska pura sharir javed ke sharir se touch ho raha tha ... javed ka dushra haath....uski qamar pe tha...
Udher Gupta aur Karan moonh phade dekh rahe the ki ab javed kya karega....
Phir javed ne Neha ke lips ko apni finger se touch kiya.... Neha ki puri body hil gayi.... uske lips laraj gaye... uske lips me kamppan hua jo uski puri body me fail gaya... aur is kamppan ki wajah se uske moonh se ek garam saans nikli aur uske lips khul gaye...
Jaise hi uske lips khule... javed ne apne lips us per rakh diye....halke 2 unko kiss karne laga... Neha ke pure sharir me sirhan daur gayi.... usko laga ki is sirhan se wo gir jaayegi to usne apne haath uthakar javed ki qmar pe rakh liye... automatically uski eyes band ho gayi... thodi der baad javed uske lips chusane laga.... Neha bhi apni sudh budh kho baithi thi aur is pal ka anand utha rahi thi... halaki wo kiss me apni taraf se support nahi kar rahi thi per uska denial bhi nahi tha....)
(Ye garama garam scene dekhkar Karan aur gupta ka lund tan gaya...)
( Javed ne neha ko apne se aur sata liya aur uski nangi peeth pe hath phirane laga..... aur jaise hi neha ko aur acchha lagne laga .... Neha ne bhi acahnak javed ke lips ko choose liya... Javed samajh gaya Neha ko mazza aa raha hai ... to usne kiss todd diya.... jaise hi kiss band hua to javed ne dekha neha ki saans uper neeche teji se chal rahi hai... uski eyes closed hai... )
(Jaise hi kiss band hua Neha ko jhataka laga ... wo chahti thi kiss chale... to usne eyes open karke dekha ki Javed ne kiss kyon rok di... aur jaise hi Javed se eyes mili .. to Neha ne shram se phir eyes jhuka li....)
Javed ne Gupta ke diye mental pressure ka pura fayada uthaya.... Neha Javed ko apna protector samajh rahi thi... usse lag raha tha Javed ne Gupta se usse baccha liya... aur Javed ne Neha ke emotional moments ka fayada uthaya.
J: Gupta chutiye... ek sharif aur izzatdar ladki se pyar se koshish ki jaati hai.... dekh is ki taraf ye kitni chuimui aur komal hai... saale tune mere hi ghar me mere hi saamne is per haath uthaya...
Saale teri jagah koi aur hota to uske haath tod deta...
(Neha Javed ke moonh se apni tarif sunkar aur Gupta ki class lene ke wajah se aur confortable ho gayi... usko aur acchha laga ki koi to uski side le raha hai...uske atamsammaan ki raksha kar raha hai)
G: Sorry Javed bhai, galti ho gayi..... maine bhi aaj tak itni sundar ladki nahi dekhi to bhavnaoo be beh gaya.
J: Bhavnaoo me beh gaya... tu madarchod... tujhe shreef ladki aur bajaroo ladki me fark nahi karna aata.. saala mood off kar diya...
(Ab jab Javed Gupta ki maa chod raha hai... Neha andar se bahut kush ho rahi thi aur uska confidence bhad raha tha)
J: Gupta phir se dekh iski taraf.... ( javed ne neha ko gupta ki taraf ghuma diya)... chehra dekh kitni sundar hai, iski body dekh kitni nazakat hai.. iske kapde dekh kitne stylist hai... kya aisi koi bajaroo ladki hoti hai.... ye bahut sharif ghar se hai... aur agar hamse mil rahi hai to kya hum isko zalil kare... agar tu isse pyar se baat karta to kya ye mana kar deti.... kyon Rinky tu isko mana kar deti agar ye pyar se baat karta....
(Neha to hypnotize ho gayi thi Javed ke moonh se apni taarif sunkar... Neha ne nahi me sir hilaya.... jaise hi neha ne hammi bhari ki usko koi aitraaz nahi hota agar koi usse pyar se baat karta. Lagta hai thapaad ne uski sudh budh kho di thi.... phir Javed ne usko gale laga liya aur kaan me bola kiss kaisa tha... Neha sharma gayi .. gale lagne ke baad usne eyes open ki to dekha Karan khada tha.. usko dekhte hi neha ne thoda jor laga ke Javed se alag ho gayi.. aur uska dil dhak se baith gaya...usko dhayaan aaya ki wo Javed ke gale lagi thi aur Karan usse dekh raha tha... phir usse dhayaan aaya ki abhi thodi der pehle Javed ne usse kiss kiya Karan ke presence me.. itna sochte hi Neha uncomfortable aur baichain ho gayj ...aise hi wo alag hui to Javed ne socha kuch to gadbad hai.. Neha achanak peeche kyon hat gayi.. usne question wali najro se Neha se poocha.. tab Neha dheere se boli...
N: Karan dekh raha hai.... sir...
J: ( dheere se uske pass jakar bola) ab me usko jaane ko bolta hoon... ki ab wo ghar jaaye.. aur thodi der baad tumko le jaaye...
Neha kuch nahi bolti per Javed ko uski body language se lag jaata hai wo bhi yehi chahati hai.. waise bhi koi patni apne pati ke saamne comfortable nahi ho sakti jab ki ye uska first time ho... Karan ki wajah se Neha uncomfortable feel kar rahi thi.. iski wajah se wo Gupta ko bhul gayi... ki wo yahan kyon hai... uska pura dhayaan sirf Karan pe tha .... Karan ke saamne ab Javed ne kuch kiya ya touch bhi kiya to sharm se mar jaayegi... uske baad javed ne Neha se dheere se bola....
J: Neha tum sofe pe Gupta ke saath baitho ab wo koi badteemeeji nahi karega.. Me karan ko vida karke aata hoon.
Neha shocked me.. ab kya kare wo ... jis gupta se bachna chah rahi thi javed usko wahan jaane ko bol raha hai...usne ghoor ke Javed ko dekha..
J: ghabraoo nahi.. usko baad me dekhte hai..ab wo kuch nahi karega.. Gupta tune Rinky se maafi nahi maangi...
G: Rinky I am sorry... mujhe maaf kar do... ab me koi bhi takleef nahi doonga... Javed mera sir me kyon dard ho raha hai... Sayaad whiskey ki wajah se...
J: Jaoo Rinky sofe pe baitho... me Karan ko handle karta hoon..
(Neha dheere 2 jaake Gupta ke pass sofe pe baith gayi aur javed karan ke pass gaya... Gupta ne jab kaha uska sir dard ho raha hai.. to karan samajh gaya dava 1 ya 2 min me kaam kar jaayegi)
J: Karan tum apne ghar jaoo... Rinky ki chinta mat karo.. wo yahan theek rahegi....( aur usko aankh marta hai)
K: Theek hai sir me chalta hoon ....
Phir Javed usko le jakar dussre room me le gaya aur mirror ke saamne baitha diya.. aur ek microphone diya ki drawing room ki awaaj sun sake...
Karan mirror ke paar Gupta aur Neha ko dekh pa raha tha aur micro phone se un logo ki baatien sunne laga..
G: Rinky mujhe maaf kar do.. mujhe tum per haath nahi uthana chahiye...
Neha koi jabab nahi deti hai...
G: please Rinky ab maaf bhi kar do.. me tumhari sundarta me behak gaya tha..
Neha dusri taraf moonh ghooma leti hai...
Idhar javed karan se bolta hai..
J: Karan tum yahi ruko me drawing hall me jaata hoon. Wo dono akele hai phir kuch gadbad na ho jaaye... aur agar Gupta uske saamne behosh ho gaya to wo darr jaayegi..
K: yes sir you go, i m comfortable...
Phir Javed Karan ko chod ke drawing hall me aa gaya.. Aate hi usne Neha ko sofe se uthaya aur uski jagah khud baith gaya..aur neha se bola.
J: Rinky us Bar table se 2 glass aur wishkey ki bottle le aaoo...saala mood of gaya Gupta aur Karan ko manage karne me..
Neha gayi aur beman se 2 glass aur whiskey ki bottle le aayi.. aur chup chap unke pass khadi ho gayi... Gupta apna sir pakde baitha tha .. aur sir neeche kiye hua whiskey ki bottle aur glass dekh raha tha...wo achanak bola..
G: Behen ki lodi ice kaun layega... is whiskey ko me kaise piyoo..
Dusare room me Karan ne jab ye gali suni to phir uska khoon jal gaya.. man me socha ye madarchod nahi sudhrega... lekin ye kya us ke haath per nahi chal rahe hai.. sir bharri ho raha tha.. eyes band ho rahi thi.... Man me socha..itna bada dhoka...maine viswaas kiya ..... aur karan ladkhada ke gir gaya aur behosh ho gaya..
To be continue.......
NOTE:- hello readers there are two possibilities
1.Ab Karan to Monday morning hi hosh ayega.. to me kahani ab Monday se start karoon... aur yahan per gupta Javed aur Neha ka kya hua wo flashback me bataoo..yanni Karan ki kahani pehle...
OR
2.Kahani present time me hi chale..yahan kya hua wo pehle discuss ho...Karan wala chapter baad me discuss karoon..yaani monday karan ko hosh me aane pe kya hua..
Tell me ... or give yr suggestion.
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Bhai Flash back wala option sahi rahenga bhut maza aayenga jab Karan ko sab details mai pata chlenga ki Neha ke sath kya kya hua raat mai... But bhai ek request hai please usko randi ke tarah treat mar krana warna maza pura marr jaenga.. Neha ko ek masoom wife he rehne dena ...
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