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Fantasy MERI JINDAGI(FANTASY+MAGIC+THRILLER)
#61
UPDATE 42

Toa pichle update mea aap ne dekha tha ki kaise black dragons aane wale kal ke liye koi planning kar rahe the wahi ek anjan shaks aa aaryan se chipak padtay..
Jisse aarayn uska sabak ek thapad mar sikha ta hea..

Ab aage
Mera thapad padtay he rosel bed se niche gir gayi or uske hotho se thora khun aane lagga..
Jis wajase uske aank se 2 boond aasu b aagire jisse dekh muje bura toa lag raha tha..
Par jo kuch b usne kiya tha wo sahi nai tha..

Par fir b muje uske liye bura lag raha tha isliye mea uske pass ja usse uthane ke liye apna hath uske kandhe par rakha par usne mera hath kandhe ke jagha sidhe apne dil par rakha or meri ankho mea dekhte huye boli..

Chahe jitna man kare karlo sitam..
Par rahenge hamesa tumhare he ham..

Uske itna bolte he uski ankho se aansu behne lagge jisse mene apne hatho se pucha or usse kaha..

Dekho rosel tumne abi jo kuch b kiya wo galat hea..
Ham dono kabi ek nai ho sakte . .

Meri baat sun jatse wo boli..

Q nai aaryan q nai..
Kya mea buri dikhti hu ya mujme koi kami hea..
Agar tum ye mere pehle kiygaye bartav ke liye bol rahe ho toa mea tumhare per pakad kar mafi mangti hu..

Itna bol wo mere pero ke taraf jinke lagi jisse mea rokte huye kaha .

Aisi baat nai he rosel..
Tum sundhar ho balke bohot he jada sundhar ho..
Par mea tumhe apna nai sakta..
Meri majburi hea..

Rosel apne ansu pohachte huye boli..

Q aaryan q..
Mea tumhe aajse nai balki na jane kitne salo se pyaar karti hu..
Bas tumhare intazar mea he mene apne iss sarir ko jinda rakha tha..
Warna kab ka mene tumhare sath he apne is sarir ko tyaag tumhari ruh me miljana tha..
Bas tumhare ek waade ke liye mea aaj tak ruki hui hu..
Par ab jab tum wapas lote ho toa muje apnane se inkar kar rahe ho..
Toa ab is jivan ka koi mol nai hea mere liye..
Ab mere mar jana he tk hoga..

Itna bol rosel yaha waha dekh ne lagi tabi usne diwar pe laggi talvar nikali or apne pet par marne he wali thi ki tabi mene talwar ko pakad liya..
Or usse chin dur fhek diya..

Par rosel yahi nai ruki wo aage badh dusri talwar nikalne lagi diwar se isliye usse rokne ke liye muje usse thapad marna pada..

Mene usse usi hath se thappad mara tha jis hath se mene pehle talwar pakdi thi..
Jis karan ussme se khun beh raha tha..
Or thappad marne ke karan mera khun uske face par b lag gaya..

Or tabi achanak sab kuch tham sa gaya or mere andhar se khanjar bahar agayi..
Or mujse boli..

Aaryan ab tumhe rosel ko apna na he hoga qki uski mang me tumhara khun gir gaya hea jisse ab wo tumse jud chuki hea..

Khanjar ki baat sun mea chounk gaya tha or bola..

Ab ye kya naya jamela he yaar..
Aise kaise usse apna lu..
Tum janti ho mea Nikki se kitna pyaar karta tha par uske janeke baad mene kabi kisi ko apne karib ni aane diya..

Khanjar - Toa fir zoya or tumhare bich jo rista hea wo kya hea..
Kya tum usse pyaar nai karte..
Bolo..

Uski baate sun mea soch mea padgaya or bola.

Nai na mea usse pyaar karta hu na wo mujse..
Hamare bich jo rista he wo bas ek dusre ki jarurato ko pura karne ke liye hea..
Isse jaada kuch nai wo bas meri dost hea..

Meri baat sun khanjar haste huye boli..

Dekho aaryan tum jitna sachai se dur bhago ge utna tum uske karib pohchoge..
Rahi baat tumhare or zoya ke riste ki toa ye sawal tum apne aap se karo..
Kya tum zoya ke jaane ke baad reh paoge kabi uske bina..
Or agar tum rosel ki baat karo toa batadu..
Ki pichle janam me rosel tumhari 5 patniyo or tumhari panch sakti mea se ek thi..
Par tumhari mrityu ke baad usne apne app ko samay ke chakra se bhin kar liya..
Jisse uske liye samay wahi ruk sa gaya he..
Or tumhari baki patniyo ke tarha wo b tumhara intazar kar rahi thi najane kutne warso se..
Tum kya janoge ek ladki ka dard..
Uske liye kya kuch ni tha uske aage par usne tumhare liye sirf tumhare liye ye sab kiya..
Or tumne kya sila diya uske pyaar ka..
Muje pata he abi tumhe bohot kuch janna baki hea isliye tumahre liye ye sab apnana muskil hea..
Par ab jo jo ho raha he tumhare sath usse hojane do..
Uske khilaf jaa tum tumhare apno ko he thes pohcha rahe ho..

Khanajar ki baate sun mea soch mea padgaya or kuch der sochne ke baad mea bola..

Muje tumhari baat samaj aagayi hea..
Par aise toa kitni sari ladkiya aayengi mere jeevan mea toa kya mea sabi ko apna ta firu..

Khanjar meri baat par haste huye boli..

Nayi tumhe sirf unko apnana he jisse tumhare dil apnay..
Lekin muje apnane ke baad..
Tumhe un sabi ladkio ko pyaar dena hoga jo tumhe beinteha mohabbat karti ho..
Bhale he tum un sabi se shadi na karo par pyaar tumhe sab ko dena hoga..
In short ye samaj lo ki tum ek aisi kitab ho jisme har ladki ho ya aurat wo sabi tumhare jeevan me aa us kitab me apna naam likhna chahenge..
Lekin tumhare dil ke karib wohi hogi jisse tum shadi karoge .

Khanjar ka itna he kehna tha ki wo fir gayab hogai or samay fir apni raftar se chalne lagga..
Or rosel aaryan ke samne dusro thapad khane ke baad chup chap apne jagha par khade ho roye jaa rahi thi..

Tabi meri najar uspar padi or mene aage bad rosel ko apne gale se laga liya..

Rosel ko toa kuch samaj he nai aaya par mere gale lagne se uska rona band hogaya or usne b muje kaske gale laga liya..

Kuch der ham aise he gale lage rahe na wo kuch boli na mea.
Bas hamdono ek dusre ki dhadkan ko mehsus kar rahe the..
Or rosel ki dhadkano me muje apna naam sunayi dea raha tha jisse uska mere prati pyaar or smarpan dekh meri ankho se aansu behne lagge..
Or mene rosel ko alag kar usse pucha..

Q karti ho mujse itna pyaar tum..
Ye jante huye b ki muje tumhare pyaar ki kadar na tab thi na ab hea..
Ek tum ho jo sirf mere liye na jane kitne warso se tadpi ho or ek mea hu..

Ye baat mene uske gal par hath pherte huye kaha jaha kuch der pehle mene thappad mara tha jisse meri ungliyon ke nishan uspar chapgaye the..

Un nishano ko dekh mere ankho se beh rahe aasuo ki dhar or tej hogai or mene usse ruaasi aawaj me pucha..

Dard ho raha he kya..

Mere is kadar apni care karta dekh wo bas muje pyaar bhari najro se dekhe ja rahi thi..
Usne toa palak japkana b chor diya..
Jaise koi sapna dekh rahi ho .
Par meri aakhri line sun usne dhire se apni gardan naa mea hilayi..

Jisse uska pyara chera or b pyaara lagne lagga..
Or mene aage bad apne hoth uske hoto se jod liye..
Or dire dire uske hoto ko chusne lagga..
Jahase mere thappad ke karan khun beh raha tha..
Wo sab mea pite ja raha tha..

Rosel ke liye ye sab kisi sapne se kam ni tha..
Kuch der toa wo bas meri kiss ko feel kar rahi thi..
Par jab usse yakin hua ki ye sapna nai hea..

Toa usne apne dono hath mere gardan ke piche leja mere balo ko pakad wildly muje kiss karne laggi..

Hamdono mea ek baar fir jung chid gayi thi par is bar talwar ki jagha hamari jib ek dusre se takra rahi thi..

Bas intazar tha toa iska ki kon sabse pehle har mane..
Par rosel ki saas fulne par b wo ruk nai rahi thi..
Jis karan majburan muje he usse khud se alag karna pada..

Or jab mene usse alag kiya toa uski sakal aisi hogayi thi ki jaisi chote bache se uska pasandida khilona lea lene par hoti hea..

Khair mene usse samajate huye kaha..

Rosel abi toa ham mile hea..
Abi jada aage barna sahi nai hoga..
Upar se sagar ko jab hamare bareme patta chalega tab wo kaise react karega kya patta..

Meri baat par usne mere daye side se gale lagte huye kaha..

Tum sagar bhai ki chinta mat karo..
Unhe toa pehle he pata hea balki meri puri family ko hamare bareme pata he bas tumhare is janam ke bareme sayad maa baba ko pata na ho..
Par unmese kisiko b hamare bareme jaan koi aapati nai hogi..
Qki meri toa pehle he tumse shadi ho chuki hea..

Ham abi ek dusre se bate kar he rahe the ki tabi pichese se sagar ki awaj aai..

Sagar - oohoo matlab laila majnu fir ek hogaye hea..
Kya baat hey..

Sagar ki baat par rosel sharmane ki jagha ulta usse boli..

Q aapko koi takleef..
Jab aapko pata tha aaryan ke bareme fir b aapne mujse ye sab chupaya..
Or ab hamdono ek huye hea toa aap hamare piche lage huye ho..

Rosel ni jis prakar ye sab kaha tha.
Wo dekh meri or sagar ki hasi chut gayi or hamdono ko hasta dekh wo waha se per patakte huye bahar chali gayi..

Rosel ke bahar jate he sagar aa mujse gale mila or bola .

Shukriya bhai meri behen ko apnane ke liye..
Warna usne toa jina he chor diya tha..
Bas naam ki jinda thi..
Or jabse tum aaye ho usme fir se jaan aagayi ho aisa hua..
Maa baba b ye pariwartan dekh khush hea..

Fir ham dono ne kuch der aise he baate ki or fir dining table ke taraf chal pare khana khane ke liye..

Dining table par sagar ki puri family ke sath ankit b maujood tha..

Tabi khana khate huye mene kaha..

Sagar toa fir aaj kab nikalna he mt.thunder par chadai ke liye..

Tabi sagar ke pitaji bole .

Beta waha jane sea pehlea tumhe or sagar ko ek rasham karni hogi..
Jisse tum dono apas mea jud sakoge..
Or fir tum ek dragon holder banne ke liye tayyar hojaoge..
Aishe baate karte huye hamne khana khatam kiya or fir kuch der baad mehel ke piche training ground jaha meri or rosel ki fight huyi thi wahi wo rasam rakhi gayi thi..

Ham sabi waha pohache rasam ke liye fir wo kuch der kuch puja huyi or fir sagar apne dragon wale roop mea aagaya or mene b apne sare kapde utar sirf ek gown type kuch tha lal color ka wo pehen liya..

Or fir sagar ne apna muh mere taraf kiya or juk kar niche baith gaya..
Or fir sagar ke papa ne ham par koi roshni dalli jisse hamdono hava mea urne lagge..

Or charo taraf dire dire tej roshni failne laggi..
Roshni itni tej thi ki waha khaadehar shaks ki ankhe band hogayi thi..

Mere or sagar ke sarir mea us roshni ke wajase bohot dard ho raha tha..
Jis karan meri chik or sagar ki dhad nikal gayi..
Jisne us watawaran ko or b darawnabana diya tha..

Kuch der baad wo roshni dire dire kam hone lagi..
Or fir ek dam gayab hogayi..
Par abi meri or sagar ki ankhe band thi..

Par waha khade har shaks ne jab hame dekha toa unki aankhe choda gayi thi..
Or toa or rosel ke muh se excitement ke mare wowwww nikal gaya..

Sry thori deri ke liye..
Par kosis bar pur kari hea iss update ko likhne mea..
Apne reviews dea meri kosis ko safal jarur banana
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#62
UPDATE 43

Jaise he mea or sagar normal huye..
Hame dekh rahe har shaks ki aankhe choda gayi thi..
Kuch ko toa wiswas he nai horaha tha ki aisa kaise ho sakta hea..

Waha khada har shaks bas mantrmugd ho hame he dekh raha tha..

Akhir dekhe b q na sagar jaha pehle ek normal par bada dragon tha ab uska aakar b bad chuka tha or sath he sath usme se golden glow or sparks b aarahe the..

Wahi mene jaha pehle ek simple sa red gown pehna tha ab uske jagha mere pure body par ek golden reddish suit cum armor jaise dikhne wale kapde aagaye the..
Or sath he or b kuch chije thi ko badli thi hamdono mea..

Tabi achanak waha fir ek roshni chamki or ek safed dress mea ek bujurg aadmi us roshni me se nikle jaise ki wo roshni koi portal ho..

Us bujurg admi ko mea toa ni pehchan pa raha tha par unhe waha dekh sabi ne unhe pranam kiya..

Ab tak mea or sagar b wapas jamin par achuke the par sagar abi b dragon he bana hua tha..

Tabi sagar ke pitaji bole..

Gurudev aap yaha itne saalo baad..

Par gurudev ne unke baato ka bina koi jawab diye hamare yani mere or sagar ke taraf badne lagge or bole..

Aakhir kar hamare purwajo ne batayi aakash wani sach ho he gayi..
Aakhir kar dragons ke itihas ke ab tak ke sabse jada taqatwar or sakhtisali dragon or uska holder ka nirman ho higaya hea..

Guru dev ka itna he keh na tha ki waha khada har shaks sirf guru dev or rosel ko chod sabi apne gutne par bethgaye apna sir jukaye..

Ab ye sab dekh mera pehle se hila hua dimag or b hil gaya or mea apne aap se bola..

Ab ye kya naya sayapa he yaar..

Or fir aage bad mene sagar ke mom dad ko gutne par se khada kiya or baki sabiyo ko b normal hone ko kaha..

Or gurudev ke pass ja unse pucha..

Gurudev aap kya keh rahe ho mere palle ni pada jara b..
Itihass mahan taqatwar ye sab kya tha kuch samaj ni aaya..
Or ye sab aapki baate sun apne gutno par q bethe ye b ni samaj aaya muje..
Kripaya kar iss guthi ko sikhaye gurudev..
Warna mene aise he pareshan ho makrana hea..
Waise b mere life me kam sayape the jo ye ek or jud gaya..

Meri baat sun gurudev muskurate huye bole..

Maharaj aapne o sagar jo ye rasam ki apne app ko ek dusre se jodne ke liye..
Isse aapdono appas me jud toa gaye jisse appki sakhtiya najane kitne levels badchuki hogi iska andaja lagana muskil hea..
Par ye jo kuch b hua he yaha iski akashwani kahi hazaro warsho purv hui thi..
Jab ham dragons evolve yani vikshit hone lagethelaor hamme samaj aani suru hui thi..

Guruji ki baat sun mene jigyasa was pucha aisa kya tha us akashavani mea or hamdono kaise us akashwani se jude he..

Fir gurudev ne bolna suru kiya ki..
Wo akashavani thi ki aaj se kahi warso purv ek aisa joda janam lega dragon or insan ka jo sabi dragons ke sartaj banenge or unke aane se sabi dragons ek juth ho apne pragti or kushal jeevan ke taraf badenge..

Unki baate sun mea soch me padgaya tha ki ab ye kya naya funda he yaar..

Tabi fir guru dev bole..

Maharaj ab bas aapko wo thunder crown ko pana hoga fir is dunia mea jitne b dragons honge unke aap sartaj banjayenge..
Bhale he wo acha ho ya bura par usse aapki baat mani he hongi..
Or sagar isme aapka pratyaksh hoga jo aapke yaha na hone par yaha ka raja hoga..

Aisehi he kuch der or unhone apna pravachan diya or muje apne badi hui saktiyo ke bareme vistar mea bataya jisse me ab mea kahi b khud ja paunga yani mea kahi b teleport ho sakunga.. bas uss jagha ke bareme sochna hea or mea waha pohach jaunga..
Par meari portal kholne wali shakti abi b jaghi nai hea or ussme abi thora waqt or hea..

Khair kuch samay or gurudev waha rukhe par bina sagar ke pita se mile waha se chale gaye..
Ye baat muje atpati lagi par mene badme ispar sochne ka socha qki ab mea sagar ankit or rosel dark dragons ke kabile ke taraf khuj karne ke liye jane wale the..

Jaha drako ko b mehsoos hogaya tha ki achanak se 2 ek dam se badi shaktiya wo mehsoos kar paa raha tha..
Jis wajase wo b pareshan tha qki ye shakti uske khud ke shakti se kahi jada adhik badi thi or issi karan ek pal ko toa wo dar sa gaya tha ki usse itna jada taqatwar toa sirf or sirf wohi ho sakta he jiske bareme akashavani hui thi..
Or akashavani sach kese hogai wo b itne warso baad..
Insabi baato se uske man me b ek anjana sa dar ghar kar gaya tha..

Fir b ussne ye sab baato ko side mea rakh apne plan par focus karne lagga jisse amal karne ka waqt aagaya tha..

Ham charo b black dragons ke kabile ke liye rawana hochuke the..
Jisme mea or sagar abi b wahi roop mea the jo hamare ek hone ke baad hua tha..
Wahi rosel or ankit normal he the..

(Yaha batadu ki muje udna nai aatahe isliye me sagar ke pith par baitha tha sath he sath rosel or ankit b par unhe udna aata tha)

Kuch dur janeke baad hamsabi ek nadi ke pass se gujre jisme pani ke jagha lava beh raha tha or jaha se wo lava behna suru horaha tha wo jagha kafi dur thi or ham sabi uss disha mea jarahe the..
Jab ham lava ke starting point par pohache toa waha par niche dragons ka ek kund tha jo hame aata dekh turant he dahad marne lagga jaise sabi ko savdhan kar rahe ho..

Or unki dahad sun us jagha waha majud sabi dragons aagaye or fir unhone sabine apna insani roop lea liya or sagar ne b waisa he kiya tha..

Tabi un dragons mea se ek hatta katta kala sa dikhne wala aadmi bahar aaya jo ki bahubali ke kalkeye jaisa dikh raha tha..
Or wo aage badh sagar ko or muje gurta hua bola..

Toa rajkumar kya tumhare pita or mere bhaiya satyagaye he jo tum 4 jano ko yaha aanediya ye jante huye b ki yahase aajtak koi b white dragon jinda nai gaya hea..
Or tum kal ke aaye chillar pillar muh uthaye aagaye ho yaha..

Uski baate sun waha khade uske sainik hasne lagge or sagar ka para chadne lagga par mea cool tha qki meane ab shant dimagh se sab kuch karne ka socha tha..
Par sagar aage badh kuch bolne he jaa raha tha tabi usse rokte huye mene kaha..

Baat tk he teri drako par mere pass kya hena jada samay nai hea dialogue bazi karneka..
Isliye sidhe sidhe mt.thunder par jane dea warna tera or tere logo ka wo ka hasar karunga ki ...
Kii

Sry yaar dialogue bhul gaya mea..
Khair tu meri bhavana samaj he gaya hoga..

Isbar meri baat sun hasne ka waqt hamara tha or ham charo he hasne lagge..

Jisne drako ke gusse mea ghi k kaam kiya or usska gussa or jadda bad gaya or gusse me til milate huye wo bola..

Teri ye majal tu kal aaya ladka drako se juban ladata hea..
Tum charo yaha aatoa gaye ho par ab koi b yaha se jinda nai jayega..
Or itna bol usne Drake karke awaj lagai tabi bhid mea se ek or kala sa hatta katta banda bahar aaya jo na he inshan or na he janwar par dono ka mila jula roop tha usse dekh he lag raha tha ki ye banda hawaniyat ka dusra roop hea..

Khair wo aage bad mere samne khada hogaya or fir drako ne kuch darte rakhi mt.thunder par chadne ki jisme pehle toa muje iss gende se ladna tha wo b bina hathyar ke..

Or upar se mera koi b dost kisi b prakar ki help ni kar sakta tha..
Or iss fight mea jo jinda bachega ya jo samne wale se har manwayega wo he jitega..

Or agar mea jita toa wo muje or sagar ko mt.thunder par jane dega or agar wo jita toa white dragons par b uska raaj hoga sath he sagar ke family par b jispar mea raaji ni horaha tha par sagar or ankit ne meri ekna suni or drako ki sari sharte manjoor karli..

Or fir suru hui hamari fight
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#63
UPDATE 44

Drako ke sari sarte mantehi fight suru hogai mere or drake ke bich..

Mea or drake wahi unlogo ke bich lava ke upar ek pagdandi si thi waha fight kar rahe the..
Jisse agar hamese koi lava mea gira toa sayad drake toa bachjaye dragon jo thera par muje mera pata nai tha..

Qki sehen shakti ki jo mene training kari thi usme mene aag yaa lava se khud ko train nai kiya tha..
Jisse muje iss baat ka pata nai tha ki mera sarir lava ki garmi seh payega ki b nai..

Upar se drake dragon tha toa wo ud b shakta tha apne normal roop mea b par mujme abi tak ye ability nai aayi thi..

Mea abi apne jitne ke chances ko calculate kar startegy bana he raha tha ki drake ne normal roop me he bhag ke aakar mere jabde par punch mara..

Punch lagte he mea gisatte huye pagdandi ke edage tak aagaya or mera ek per pagdandi se niche latak raha tha..

Waha muje punch marte he drake hukar bharne lagga or uske sathi b uske iss karname par hukar bharte huye hooting kar rahe the..

Wahi mea shock me tha..
Drake ke punch se nai balke uski speed se..

Dhiknemea drake kisi sand se kamni tha par uski speed dekh ab muje lag raha tha ki ye fight easy nai hogi..

Or muje ek he punch me girta dekh ankit sagar or rosel b shock the..
Qki unhone choro mene b ye umid ni kithi ki ye genda itna taqatwar or furtila hoga..

Mea apne sare vichar jatak kar khada hua or fir wahi aaya jaha se usne muje punch marra tha..

Muje fir khada dekh..

Drako bola ki..

Kyaa hua chilguse thodi der pehle toa badi baate kar raha tha or ab dekho ek he mukke me dhul chatli..

Itna bol wo sabi dragons hasne lagge..
Par mene uske baat koi jawab na dete huye apna stance lea liya jisse dekh waha par 4 chero par muskaan aagayi or 1 ki fatke char hogayi..

(Ab in pacho ki pehchan aab sab comment kar batana..)

Mera stance dekh drake muje ajib tarikese dekhne lagga apna sir daye or baye hilate huye..

Tabi mene usse apne right hand joki hava lehraha raha tha usse usko apne taraf aaneka ishara kiya..

Jisse dekh uski jali or wo fir ek baar bhagte huye mere taraf bada..
Par isbar mea ready tha or uska punch ko usne fir mere jabde par marne ke kosis ki usse mene dodge kiya..

Apna war nakam hote he drake paglo jaise mere muh ke taraf punches marne lagga..
Par uske sarre punches mea kabi apne hatho se toa kabi side ho dodge kar raha tha..

Jisse pehle se guuse me drake ka gussa or badda or ab usne punches ke sath lath marna b suru kar diya..

Isbar kuch toa mene aaramsea dodge karli par ek laat sidha mere pet par laggi jisse mea udta hua pagdandi se niche girgaya..

Jisse dekh rosel chik jorse chik padi ...

AaryannnnnnA..

Wahi drako apne sthan par beth ye sab dekh raha tha wo ek damse uchal pada or hasne lagga..

Sare black dragons ko yahi lagraha tha ki mea lava me gir gaya hu or wo sabi khushiya mana rahe the. ..

Tabi meri awajse unke khushiyon ko brake lagga..

Oyee mamu log abi toa khel suru hua hea..
Or tum sabi abi se apne har ka jashan Manane lagge..

Meri baat sun fir ek baar drake mere taraf lapka or wahi tarikese attack karne lagga..

Par ab mene soch liya tha ki bas hua bohot khel liya iske sath ab isse jald khatam karte hea..

Isliye mene drake ka right leg jo wo mere taraf marne jaa raha tha usse hava mea he pakda or drake ko uthake dusri taraf phek diya..

Mera ye daav dekh jaha ab tak saare black dragons hooting kar rahe the..
Wo sabi ab ek dam shant hogaye the..

Par mea yahi nai ruka..
Isse pehle ki drake mere kiye gaye attack se khudko recover karta mene aage bad usspar apne punches ki barsaat kardi..

Mere sare punches uske vital points par lagrahe the..
Jiske chalte jaha jaha mera punch lagta wo hissa bejaan hota jaraha tha..

Drake ko toa uske sath ho kya raha he ye b samaj nai aaraha tha..
Or jab tak wo samaj pata tab tak mene apna kaam kardiya tha..

Ab uske body me uske muh ko chod koi b hissa hil ni paa raha tha..

Or jab ye baat drake ko mehsoos hui wo paglo jaise chillane lagga..

Ham dono larte larte ruk q gaye or drake q chilla raha he ye waha khade kisi ko b samaj ni aaraha tha..
Wahi drako ke sar se b abb paisnabehne lagga or wo bar bar ankit ke taraf dekhe jaa raha tha..

Par ankit ke chere par muje jiita dekh aayi muskan dekh drako ko samaj te der nai lagi ki uske sath ankit game khel raha hea..

Tabi drako ne chillakar kuch kaha jisse sun drake ek dam shant hogaya..
Or wo ek dam se dragon mea badal gaya..

Drake ke dragon bante he jis pagdandi par ham lar rahe the wo half tut gayi thi..
Bas ab jaha mea khda tha wahi hissa bacha..
Thaa..

Dragon bante he drake ne mere upar aagse hamla karna suru kardiya..

Par mea uske saare hamle apne spped se dodge kar raha tha..
Or ye b soch raha tha ki drake ko kese haraya jaye bina hatyar ke..

Tabi mere man me ek awaj aayi..

Aaryan tumhe drake ke right phank ko ukhdna hoga wahi ek raasta he usse marne kaa..
Or jab tak tum usse nai maroge wo har nai manega..

Ye awaj kiski thi mene samaj nai paya qki khanjar ki awaj alag thi mea janta tha..
Ye koi or he thi..
Par abi muje drake par focus karna tha isliye..
Jaise ki uss awaj ne kaha mea wo karne ke liye..

Energy ball bana drake ke phanko par phekne lagga bhagte huye..
Par usse uspar kuch khass asar ni horaha tha..

Tabi muje tarkib suji jiise mene zoya ko haraya tha wahi.
Qki drake ke dragon banne ke baad uski speed slow hogayi thi bohot..

Or mea toa pehle se he fast tha..
Isliye mene apne dono hatho me energy sword banayi or gol gumte huye drake ke aag dodge karte karte uske taraf jump lagadi..

jisse dekh drako apni jagha se khada hogaya or maan me bola..

Nai nai ye kaise hosakta hea..
Kahi ye wo toa nai .
Par par usse marre huye kitne saal hogaye hea..
Nai ye wo nai hosakta..

Abi drako apne maan me ye sab soche jaa raha tha ki..
Waha mea gol gol gumte huye drake ke karib pohach gayatha..

Par drake achanak he niche jukh gaya jisse mea usske upar chadgaya tha..

Muje apne upar pate he drake yaha se waha tej urne lagga taki me niche gir jau par meane apne per uske pith ke upar bane curves me fasa rakhe the or apni energy sword se uske dono phanko par war kiya jisse wo dono katke alag hogaye..

Or drake chillata huaa lava ke taraf girne lagga..
Or jaise he mea uske upar se chalang mar alag hone lagga toa drake ne apne puch se muje mere haath samet jakad liya jisse mea apne dono hath hila he nai paa raha tha..
Or mea drake ke sath laava ke anadar chala gaya..

Yaha muje lava me girta dekh rosel behosh he hogayi thi wahi sagar ek damse apne dragon roop mea aa lava ke taraf badne lagga jaha drake muje lea girra tha..

Tabi sagar par pichese hamla hua..
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UPDATE 45

Tabi sagar par pichese hamla hua jiise wo rukkator tabi usse charo tarafse black dragons ne gher liya
Wahi ankit ka b yahi haal tha usse b rosel samet charo tarafse gher rakha tha..

Wo sabi b dragons bane huye the or sagar par hamla he karne wale the ki tabi mea lava se udte huye bahar aaya..
Or mene apne hath se ice beam bana unsabi black dragons par pheke jiske lagte he wo sabi wahi jam gaye..

(Ab aap sab sochoge ki muje ice beam se hamla karna kabse aagaya toa batadu ki ye attack meane abi 1st tym use kiya or abi abi he sikha or wo kese toa usske liye thora flashback mea chalte hea..

Drake muje apne sath pakad lava mea girgaya tha..
Lava me jate he mere pehne huye saare kapde jalgaye the..
Wahi drake ka sarir ek dam se ek nilli roshni mea badal gaya or mere saamne aa uss roshni mea se awajaai..

Maaf karna malik mea aapko jite ji toa pehchan nai paya..
Par ab apna deh tyagane ke baad muje pata chal gaya he ki aap kon ho..
He bhagya vidhata muje apni kiye par pachtava he or mea shmaa praarti hu..
Kripiya kar muje shama kare jisse muje moksh prapt hosake .

Uski baate sun ek pal ko toa muje mehoome hua ki mea kitna mahan hu ya tha..
Par muje yee baat ajeeb lagi ki drake ek roshni me kaise badal gaya..

Jisse sayad drake b samaj gaya tha or wobola..

Malik ham dragons mea marte he hamara sarir ek roshni mea badal jata hea..
Or agar hame kisine harakar mara ho toa hame jaate jaate apni taqate b usse deni hoti hea .
Mea b isliye ruka hua hu..

Itna bol wo nilli roshni tej hone laggi or mere andar samagayi..

Jiise andar se drake ki awaj aai..
Maalik ab meri saari taqate aapki hui..
Muje pata he aapko inki jarurat nai hea qki aap pehle he sarvashaktiman ho par aapki udne ki ability jo ab tak aapko mili nai he wo ab aapko mil chuki hea sath he ab aap ham dragons ka weak point yaani ab ice beam b use kar sakoge..)
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Mere ice beam attack se drako ko chod waha majood sabi black dragons jaam chuke the..

Ab waha sirf mea ankit sagar rosel jo ki behka thi abi b or drako bache the..

Drako apne saamne muje or apne sabi sathiyo ka hasar dekh dargaya tha..
Or jab uski najar mere body par bane tattospar gayi (back or front dono he qki mea iss waqt pura nanga tha)
.usse dekh wo apne gutno ke bal beth apna hath apna dil par rakh sar jukaye huye bola.

Maa maaf karna maalik mea aapko pehchan nai paya..
Muje sama karye gaa..

Ye sab bolte huye drako buri tarha kaap raha tha..
Jisse dekh meri hassi chutgayi or mene usse kaha..

Ab tum muje jaan he chuke ho toa pehle sahi se khade ho jau..
Or mere liye pehle kuch kapde lau..

Wo jatse khade ho bhagte huye pashi ke gufa me gaya or mere liye kapde lekar aaya..

Jinhe pehne ke baad mea chalte huye rosel ke taraf gaya jo abi b behosh thi..
Usko apni baho mea pakad mene uske sar par kiss kiya jisse rosel ne muje behoshi ke halat me b jakad liya or fir mere kuch der hilane par usse hosh aaya..

Or muje apne saamne sahi salamat dekh usne muje jatse gale laga liya or mere chere par har jagha chumne lagi..
Jisse mera face pura gilla hogaya..

Ye toa acha hua ki sagar or ankit b chalte huye hamre pass aagaye jinhe dekh wo rukh gayi warna ye toa rukne ka naam he nai leh rahi thi..

Undono ke pass aate he mene ek baar dono ko gusse se dekha man toa kiya ki dono ka muu tod du..
Par mea dekhna chahta ki ye dono sahi mea mere sath hea ya kisi or ke..

Qki muje pata chal chuka tha
Ki indono ne mujse kahi baate chupayi hea qki mene drako ka man padliya tha jisse muje pata chala ki ankit yaha pehle q aaya tha..
Par mea intino ka man nai pad paa raha tha jisse muje kya thi puri baat pata nai chal paa rahi thi..

Isliye mene apne expression change karte huye undono se kaha toa ab mt.thunder par charne ki surwat kahase karni he..

Jispar sagar ne kaha..
Surwat toa iss gufa ke uss par se he..

Usne uss gufa ke taraf isara kiya jaha se drako aaya tha abi..

Tabi mene drako ko apne pass bulaya or usse mt.thunder ke base tak lejane ko kaha.

Usne sirf haa me gardan hilayi or hame uske piche aaneko kaha .

Hamsabi uske sath chal gufa par karne lagge..
Or gufa par karte he hamare saamne ek bohot he ucha pahad tha jiska top badlo mea chupa hua tha..

Or upar ke taraf ishare karte huye drako bola..

Malik aapko upar tak sagar ke sath jana hoga..
Waha aage ek shield hea jisse sirf jode he par kar sakte hea..
Jaisi ki aap or sagar he..
Uss shield ko par karne ke baad aap dono me se ek pahad ki choti par jaa sakta hea jaha thunder crown rakha hua hea..
Or
Jaha tak mea samaj paya hu aap he choti tak jaaoge toa aapko wo thunder crown utha apne sar par rakhna hea..

Jisse aapne upar bijliya girne lagegi or jab tak aap un bijiliyo se tej bhaag unhe dodge nai kar lete tab tak naa toa aap uss crown ka nikal paaoge naahe mt.thunder se niche aa paoge.
Nahi koi aapki isme kisi b prakar ki madad kar payega..

Aapke aisa karte he aapme thunderstorm ki taqat aajayegi or aapki speed light se b fast hojayegi..

Uski baate sun rosel ne mera right shoulder kaske pakadliya or mujse chipakte huye boli

Tumhe koi risk leni ki jarurat ni he uss crown ke liye..
Pls tum aisa nai karoge..

Ye sab wo kisi bache ke tarha bol rahi thi jisse wo kafi cute lag rahi thi..

Isliye uske sar par kiss karte huye mene usse samjate huye kaha ki maaf karna rosel par muje mt.thunder par jana he hoga..
Qki isse meri behen ka future juda hea..
Or meri behen ke liye mea kuch b kar sakta hu..
Tum chinta mat karo muje kuch ni hoga..

Mere musee behen ka sunke rosel sagar ke taraf sawaliya najrose dekhne laggi jisse sagar ne usse chup rehne kaa ishara kiya..

Jisse mene dekh liya tha..
Par kuch bola nai..

Or fir sagar dragon mea badal gaya or fir mene rosel ke lips par ek chota sa kiss kar sagar ke pit par bethgaya or fir wo upar le taraf udne lagga..

Kuch he der udne par jab mene niche dekha toa ham kafi upar aachuke the..
Badlo ke karan niche ka kuch sahi se b ni dikh raha tha..

Or kuch he der me hamne wo shield par ki jiske bareme drako ne bataya tha..

Usse paar karte he mea aage badne lagga bina sagar se koi baat kiye tabi..
Pichese sagar ki awaaj aai..

Apna dyan rakhna bhai..

Jab mene sagar ko bolte huye uske face pe dekha toa uske face par mere liye muje fikar saaf dhulayi di jisse muje ye toa samaj aagaya tha ki sagar or ankit jo kuch b kar rahe he jarur usme mera he hit hoga..

Mene b muskurate huye haa kaha or aage badgaya..
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UPDATE 46

Sagar se baat kar mea aaga bad choti ke taraf chadne lagga..

Or kuch der ki masakat ke baad mea upar chadgaya..

Upar aate he yaha ka watawaran dekh mere rongte khade hogaye the..
Qki mea iss waqt jameen se bohot bohot upar tha or yea jagha puri tarikese badlo se giri hui thi jo ki iss waqt safed rang ke the..

Or in sabi me bicho bich top par char pilar khade the jinke bich me ek crown rakha hua tha jispar diamond se thunder ka nishan bana hua tha jo ki uss crown ko or b attractive bana raha tha..

Mea dhire dhire us crown ke taraf badne laga..
Or jese jese mea uske taraf bad raha tha mere pet mea gud gud horahi thi..

Aisa lag raha ki wo crown he muje uske taraf khich raha hea..

Or jab mea uss crown ke karib pohcha toa mene kapte huye hato se uss crown ko uthaya or ek baar aankhe band kar kajal ko yaad kiya jiske liye muje ye karna he tha..

Or mere aankhe band karte he mere samne kajal ka hasta hua chera aaya..
Or wo bhagte huye mere pass he aarahi thi..

Bhai bhai bulate huye..
Par tabi achanak uski awaj ani band hui or jo drishya mea dekh paa raha tha wo b aane band hogaye..

Or meri ankhe khul gayi..

Aankhe khultay he mene wo crown ko pehen liye..
Or turant he jis jagha se mene crown uthaya tha waha bohot badi bijli giri jiske chalte uss jagha ke pass khade hone ke karan mea b uske chapet mea aagaya or mere pehne huye kapde ek baar fir jal gaye..

Or mea wahi jameen par leta para tha..
Bijli ke karan pure sarir mea siran se doudne lagi thi..
Jis wajase muje kuch waqt lagga fir sambhalne mea..

Par abi mea fir khada ho pata ke tabi ek baar fir mere upar bijli giri...
Or mera pura sarir junjala sa gaya..
Bhale he mere upar uska koi gaav nai dikhrahatha..
Par muje kafi dard ho raha tha..
Or mea dard se sambhal pata usse pehle he mere upar. Fir bijli girti..

Or aisa lagatar kuch ganto tak chala..
Or mea ab behosh ho chuka tha..
Muje pata nai chala ye kab hua..
Par jab muje hosh aaya toa mea abi b wahi choti par nang awastha mea leta hua tha..
Or abi b bijli ke karan mere pure sarir mea dard ho raha tha..

Ek pal ko toa mere dimagh mea vichar b aaya ki mea sayad he ye kar paunga par dusre he pal kaju ka hasta hua chera mere aankho ke samne aaya jisse dekh mere aankho se do bund aasu chalak pare..

Muje wo bohot yaad aarahi thi wo kis haal me hogi mea yahi soch raha tha..

Or waha laksdweep mea .
Zoya or uski sabi behne mil kaju ko sambhal rahe the..
Jiska ro ro ke bura haal hochuka tha..
Or wo rote huye kehne lagi .

Didi muje bhai ke pass jana he..
Aap ne kaha tha wo aaj aayenge par wo abi tak nai aaye .
Or aap meri baat b nai karwarahe ho unse muje nai pata muje bhai ke pass jana he plss didi...

Zoya or uski behno ne lakh kosis ki usse chup karane ki samjane ki par wo thi ki manne ko tayar he ni thi..

Or aise he rote rote wo sogayi..
Par nind mea b wo aaryan ka naam pukar rahi thi..

Wahi zoya or uski beheno ne jab kajal ka uske bhai ke prati lagav dekha toa unke b aankho se aasu behne lagge..
Or we sabi he aarayn se contact karne ki nakam kosis karne lagge..

Tabi zoya man me..
He baghwan aaryan jald lout aao tum ab..
Kajal ko or sambhalna ab muskil hota jaraha he hamare liye..
Or jab isse apne mom dad or bhai ke bareme pata chalega tab ham kya karenge..
Pls aaryan jald lout aao..

Yaha dusri taraf
Mea kafi heran tha ki achanak he meri sarir ki sari thakavat or dard apne aap dur hogaye par ispar jada na sochte huye mea uss crown ki taqate pane ke liye ab mene bijliyo se bachne ki kosis karni suru kardi thi..

Jisme mea kuch had tak safal raha par 2-3 bar dodge karte he mujpar fir bijli girti..
Par me ruka nai or lagatar 5 dino ki mehnat ke baad mene bijli ki sakti apna bana liya tha..
Or mea light se b tej tha..

Or iss training ke karan mera sarir pehle se b jada bal sali hogaya tha..
Or b kahi khubiya bad gayi thi meri..

Or jab mea choti se niche utar ne lagga tabi mere upar wahi sahi kapde aagaye jo mere or sagar ke judne ke baad aaye the..

Or jab mea niche pohcha toa sagar bhag ke aa mere gale mila or mera haal chal pucha or aisehi or baate karte huye ham pahad se niche ke taraf aagaye..

Jaha gufa ke pass he rosel ek pathar pe beth pahad ke taraf he dekh rahi thi or sagar ko aata dekh wo khadi or ek tak uss or dekhne lagi or jab uski najar mujpar pari toa usne bhagte huye meri taraf chalang lagadi or mere gale lag gayi..

Uske aise chalang lagane ke karan mea sagar ke pit ke upar se niche gir gaya or rosel mere upar..

Par rosel ko toa insab se kuch pari he nai thi .
Usne fir ek baar anda dun chumban ki barsat suru kardi thi mere face par..

Or tab tak karti rahi jab tak uska man nai bhara..
Or bahar ka sor sun drako or ankit b gufa se bahar aagaye or muje or sagar ko dekh unke chero par b muskan aagayi .


Fir aisehi kuch der hamara milan chala or fir ham mehel aagya waha b jashan ka mohol bana hua tha jab unhe ye sab pata chala..

Sagar ke pita or drako ne gale mil apne sare gile sikhwe dur kiye..
Or sari praja ne muje or aaryan ko apna malik maan liya tha..

Or waha ek din ruk..
Ab samay aagaya tha waha se wida lene ka..
Or jab ye baat rosel ko pata chali toa usne apne mata pita se mere sath janeki baat kahi jispar unhone bina kuch soche hami bhardi..
Or fir ham charo waha se nikal laksdweep aagaye uss bungalow mea jaha zoya or kajal ruke huye the..

Par waha pohach samne ka najara jab mene dekha tab mere aankho se betahasha aasu nikal ne lagge..


Sry fir sort update n for compensating it parso yaani ki sunday ko b update dungi taki jald next padav ke taraf story ko bada saku..
Till then
Hope you all like this update also..
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#66
bohut khub keep going..........
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#67
Kya bat h
Bahut sannata h Aajkal
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Waitng
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Both badhiya update hain dear

aiting foor next
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Yar ab update dy bhi do
  

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#71
Update jnab g
  

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Update please...
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