A wedding ceremony in village

[dragonslair]

hot update. waiting for next eagerly

[Rakeshsingh1999]

mast update logan bhai.

[Pussyfan]

Mene apni life me itni acchi story nahi padhi.
Congratulations to u dear writer.

[Shabaz]

Waiting bro

[koolme98]

Waah Logan Bhai! aapne poori story ko itminaan se likha hai. Har ladki ke sanyam ki vristit vyakhya kari hai, saath hi saath saare characters ki sthithi ka poorna varnan kara hai.

Very much in awe with the story progressing...

thanks

[Suryahot123]

Please update logan bhai

[Rizzi1198]

Waiting

[Humsub]

Plz update very nice story

[Logan555]

mast update logan bhai.

hot update. waiting for next eagerly

Dhasu update

Dhasu hot update bro

बढिया update मजा आ गया जी।

Too good

Thanks Rakesh Ashajee Rizzi Shabaz Supriya Dragon

[Logan555]

Mene apni life me itni acchi story nahi padhi.
Congratulations to u dear writer.

Thanks Chut Premi Ye to aap readers ka pyar hai jisne ise itna pasand kiya ja raha hai.

[Logan555]

Waah Logan Bhai! aapne poori story ko itminaan se likha hai. Har ladki ke sanyam ki vristit vyakhya kari hai, saath hi saath saare characters ki sthithi ka poorna varnan kara hai.

Very much in awe with the story progressing...

thanks

Thanks bro, mai puri koshish karta hu ki har kirdaar ko uska proper space du aur har ladki ki kahani ka flavour bakiyo se alag rakhu. Isilye saato kirdaro ko ek doosre se alag rakha hai. Kai kahaniyo me sex scsne jaldi laane ke chakkkar me situation nahi ban pati maine koshish ki hai ki har situation ko aram se banau.

Thanks for appreciating it.

Thanks

[Logan555]

Wo black SUV us raat ke andhere pathreele aade tede rasto se hote hue apni manzil ki taraf badi ja rahi thi, Par kaha thi uski manzil. Kuchh ghanto ke safar ke baad uski manzil aa gai wo farmhouse jaha subah wo nachne wali chandni Shabana khan ko lekar aai thi jaha use strip mujre ki training di gai thi, yani is SUV me wo charo the. SUV ke charo gate khule aur Lalu, Dev, Kundan aur Pratap ek sath neeche utre aur farmhouse ke andar daakhil ho gae. Andar ghuste hi un dono buddhe nakro ne usne salam thoka.



Lalu: Shambhu kaisa hai.
Shambhu: Theek hu malik.
Lalu: Subah do memsaab log aai hogi.
Shambhu: Ha andar hai ek to wo purani wali memsaab thi aur unke sath ek nai memsaab bhi thi.
Lalu nazre tirchi karke: Nai wali memsaab kaisi lagi tum log ko.
Bansi: Makkhan hai saab makkhan. Itti gori auart to aas paas ki kai gaavo me bhi nahi hai. Kaha se dhood kar lae ho ye safed kabootari.
Lalu: Hum to jungle ke baaz hai bansi aur aisi nai nai kabootariyo ka shikar karna to humara shauk hai. Lagta hai use dekh kar tunhare buddhe lund me bhi jawani aa gai.
Dono buddhe naukar daat nikal dete hai.
Lalu: Chalo abhi intezaam me lag jao jo tum log har baar karte ho. Aur ha meri almari se wo naya maal nikal lana jo aise hi kisi khas mauke ke liye Thailand se magaya hai.

Wo dono naukar waha se chale gae aur wo charo us bade se hall numa karme me dakhil hue jaha shabana ne mujre ki training li thi. Hall me pahuch kar Dev ne Chandni ko awaaz lagai. Awaaz sunte hi chandni us kamre se bahar aai jaha shabana tayar hui thi.



Dev ne bina kuchh bole aankh ke ishare se chandni se poocha ki sab kaise hai aur chandni ne bhi palke jhapka kar ishare se hi bata diya ki sab ready hai.
Dev: To ja le aa use subah se intezaar kar rahe the ab sabar nahi hota ja le aa use.
Chandni: Jee mai abhi use tayar karke laai.
Chandni kamre me wapis chali gai. Kundan fridge se chaar bear cane aur ek bootle sharab le aya aur aur charo sofe par baith kar bear peene lage. Cane khali karne ke baad Kundan ne wo bottle pena shuru kar diya.



Lalu: Itni mat pee lena ki kuchh karne layak hi na rahe.
Kundan: Abe ye to mera josh badane ki dawa hai itni sharab se to mai subah kulla karta hu. Ise peekar hi to mere andar ka haiwaan jagega.
Lalu: Sahi hai aaj raat mujhe tum teeno me haiwaan hi chahiye. Jitni zor se us waqt log mujh par hase the jab usne mujhe jhapad mara tha usse zada zor se aaj uski cheekhe nikalni chahiye.
Dev: Tu chinta na kar aaj uski wo halat karenge ki marne ki dua mangegi.
Lalu: Badiya hai, sabke saamne jhapad mara tha na sali ne us raat logo ki hasi nashtar ki tarah mere kaano me chubh rahi thi ab to uski cheekhe hi mere kano ko sunkoon degi.
Dev: Aisa hi hoga.

Tab tak wo dono naukar waha aa gae unke haath me ek packet tha.
Shambhu: Malik ye raha apka maal.
Pratap: Ye kya hai
Lalu: Haiwaan banne ki dawa jisne maine specially Thailand sr mangaya hai.
Lalu ne us packet me se ek sheeshi nikali jisme ek safed powder bhara tha.
Lalu: Ye thailand ki sabse powerfull drug hai iska ek joint inaan ke andar ka haiwaan jagane ko kaafi hai ye lene ke 5 min ke andar insaan ke dimag par asar karti hai. Us musalli par chadne se pehle iska ek ek joint le lena phir uske baad andar ka jo haiwaan bahar aaega kasam se maza aa jaega. Chodne ka maza dugna ho jaega.
Lalu ne us sheeshi me se thode thode powder ki teen pudiya banakar teeno ko thama di.



Lalu ne shabana ke liye ek behad haiwaniyat bhara plan banaya tha. Teeno ne wo pudiya apni apni jeb me rakh li.
Dev: Tu nahi lega ye drug tu nahi chadega aaj us par.
Lalu: Nahi Sher akela khata hai jhund ke saath nahi aur waise bhi ye drug lene ke baad tum log pata nahi uske sath kya kya kar dalo. Dhyan rakhna kahi jaan hi lelo uski aur kahi aisi naubat aa gai to koi to hona chahiye hosh me tumhe rokne ke liye. Tum log bhi thoda dhyan rakhna aur kabu rakhna khud par kahi maar waar mat daalna use.
Charo thahake maar kar hasne lage apni ghatiya soch par jo ek aurat ko bus upbhog ki cheez samajhti thi aur bechari shabana ko to is baat ka koi andaza bhi nahi tha ki agle kuchh ghante uske saath kya kya hone wala hai.

Dev ne hall se zor awaaz lagai: Are aur kitni der intezaar karwaogi meri jaan bahar aao. Are o chandni kitna samay lagega re use mujre ke liye tayar kar rahi hai ya suhaagraat ke liye.
Kuchh hi der baad hall ka darwaza khula usme se pehle chandni bahar aai aur uske peeche peeche shabana.
Dev: Badi der kardi sanam aate aate.
Kundan: Andar kya apni jhante saaf kar rahi thi.
Chandni: Maafi huzoor aap logo ko khush karne ke liye achhe se tayar kar rahi thi ise. Ek nazar dekhe to ise kuchh kumi to nahi reh gai.



Dev Kundan Pratap ne Shabana ko upar se neeche tak ghoor kar dekha tavayafo jaise laal libaas me shabana sach me ek nachne wali lag rahi thi aur uska makeup bhi kuchh isi tarah kara gaya tha. Gaadi laal lipstick gaalo par rose aankho me lamba kajal khule baal shabana ne khud kabhi itna tadak bhadak wala makeup nahi kara tha jaisa aaj uska chandni ne kara tha. Dev Kundan Pratap use badi lalchai nazro se ghoor rahe the Shabana ko waha unke saamne behad sharmindagi si mehsoos ho rahi thi. Usne chor nazro se Lalu ki taraf dekha wo sir jhukae baithe jaise shabana ki halat par bada sharminda ho. Shabana ko to andaza bhi nahi tha ki uski is halat ka asli zimmedaar to wahi hai.

Kundan: Waah Chandni baai waah sach me tayar to bada zabardast kara hai tune is rundi ko. Iska makeup dekhkar hi mera khada ho gaya.
Kundan ne shabana ko dekh kar haste hue jeans ke upar se apna lund masal diya. Shabana ko khud par ghin aa rahi thi ki uske ek galat faisle ne use kis halat me lakar khada kar diya hai. Par philhaal uske paas dusra koi chara bhi nahi tha.
Pratap: Chalo ab ye tayar ho gai hai to hum jis kaam ke liye aae hai wo shuru kara jae. Mujra shuru kara jae.
Pratap uthkar wahi kamre me rakhe music system ke paas gaya aur us par wo gana play kara jis par is update ka naam rakha gaya tha. Music system par gana bajna chalu hua aur chandni ne naachna shuru hi kiya tha ki paratp ne gana rok diya.
Paratp: Ae sali kutiya aaj hum tujhe aur tera dance dekhne nahi aae hai aaj to hum is nai rundi ka mujra dekhna aae hai to hat saamne se aur ise bol naachne ko. Ae saali tu naachegi ki nahi.
Chandni waha se hat gai aur Lalu ke paas akar khadi ho gai. Par Shabana ab bhi sir jhukae chup khadi thi.
Paratap: Saali ye to chupchap khadi hai sara mood kharab kar rahi hai. Ae Dev to upload karde iski photo.



Dev ne apni jeb se apna mobile nikala bhar tha ki shabana ki saans halak me aa gai.
Shabana: Nahi please....
Shabana ne aansoo bhari aankho se lalu ko dekha usne bhi ishare se shabana ko ashwast kara ki wo ghabrae nahi wo hai na aur bina sankoch aur dar ke naachna shuru kare.
Dev: Kya nahi naachegi ki nahi jaldi bol itni der inrezaar karne ki adat nahi hume ek baar humara mood off ho gaya phir tu nangi bhi nachegi to bhi koi fayda nahi hoga to jaldi decide kar nachegi ki nahi.
Shabana ne chupchap haa me sir hila diya.
Kundan: Aur badiya naach dikhana jaisa us raat party me dikhaya tha agar maza nahi aya to samajh le phir tu hum dubara nahi bolenge.
Kundan ne Pratap ko ishara kara aur music system par ek baar phir gana bajna chalu ho gaya.



Mein tere aakhon ka sahil
Mein tere Hi Dil ke kaabil
Tu Musafir mein teri Manzil

Ishq ka dariya hai Behta dub ja 
Tujhse Hai Kehta 
Aaa… Meri Baaho Mein Aankhe Mil

Gana bajne ke saath hi shabana ne apni kamar hila kar naachna shuru kar diya.

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Shabana puri shiddat se naach rahi thi taki un teeno ko gussa hone ka mauka na mile par achanak ek baar phir gaana ruk gaya.
Dev: Aae sala ye to yaha dance dikha rahi hai hum yaha dance nahi Mujra dekhne aae the. Aae Chandni ki bachhi tune ise bataya nahi mujra kaise kara jata hai.
Chandni: Jee bataya tha sab bataya tha.
Dev: Phir ye to yaha aise naach rahi hai jaise Dance India Dance me performance de rahi ho aur hum show ke judge hai. Sala mujre wali feel hi nahi aa rahi. Sala ek rundi ki tarah mujre jaisa dance kar rahi aur kapde kya iski amma utaregi aur sharab kya iska abba laaega.
Chandni: Maaf kar dijiye huzoor iska pehli baar hai isilye thoda nervous hai.
Chandni ne shabana ko sharab ke counter ki taraf ishara kara. Gana ek baar phir bajna chalu hua aur is baar shabana ne jada kamuk andaaz me naachna shuru kar diya.



Woh Sharabi Kya sharabi
Dil mein Jiske gamm na ho….
Lutt gaya woh sharabi pass jiske 
Hum Na Ho..

Saake…Saaki…Saaki….
O saki saaki re saaki saaki
Aa..paas aa..rehna jaye koi 
Khwaish baaki!!



Ab Shabana apne stano ko hilate hue aur gaand ko gol gol ghumate hue Chandni ne jaise jaise sikhaya tha waise naach rahi thi. Naachte naachte wo sharab ke counter ki taraf chal di. Shabana ne waha se ek sharab ki bottle li aur naachte naachte hi bottle lekar balkhate ithlate un teeno ki taraf jane lagi. Ab tak Lalu ne bhi shabana ka sharmo haya wala burke aur hijaab me dhaka hua roop hi dekha tha, shabana ka ye naya roop dekh uska bhi lund jhatke khane laga. Un teeno ke samne rakhi table ke kareeb pahuch kar shabana ne Dev ke gilaas me sharab daal kar badi adao ke sath uska gilaas use thama diya phir wo kundan ke gilaas me sharab daalne ko jhuki par Kundan ne uska haath beech me hi pakad liya.
Kundan: Gilaas se nahi janeman gilaas se to bachhe peete hai mard seedha bottle se peete hai. Apne nazuk komal haatho se hume seedha bottle se pila.


Kundan ne jhatka dekar shabana ko apne kareeb kheech liya aur sharab peene ke liye apna muh khol diya. Shabana ko andar hi andar ab thoda dar bhi lag raha tha usne ek baar phir thodi door baithe Lalu ko dekha. Aur lalu ne use tension na lene ka ishara kara aur shabana ne ek baar uska bharosa kar liya. Par chandni janti thi ki aage shabana ke sath kya kya hone wala hai par wo bhi majboor thi.

Shabana ne sharab ki bottle Kundan ke muh ki taraf kar di aur Kundan seedha bottle se sharab peene laga. Sharab peete peete kundan ne apne haath shabana ki makhmali doodhiya kamar par rakh diye aur shabana ki kamar ko sehlane laga. Charo dosto me kundan sabse kala tha aur uske kaale haath shababa ki gori kamar par alag se chamak rahe the. Shabana ki kamar ko sehlate sehlate Kundan apne haath shabana ki peeth tak le gaya aur waha shabana ki choli ke huko ko apni ungaliyo se sehlane laga. Kundan ko sharab pilate hue shabana puri tarah uske upar jhuki hui thi aur kundan bhi mauke ka pura fayda uthate hue uske badan achhe se sehla raha tha. Bagal me baithe Dev ka to ye dekh dekh kar hi khoon garam ho raha tha. Use afsos ho raha tha ki usne sharab ka gilaas kyu le liya use bhi aiae hi direct bottle se peena chahiye tha. Music system ke paas khada Pratap to apni bari ka intezaar hi kar raha tha. Par Kundan to rukne ka naam nahi le raha tha wo aadhi se jada bottle khali kar chuka tha. Shabana ki choli ke huk se khelte khelte usne unhe kholna shuru kar diya. Shabana ki choli ka ek ek huk khulta ja raha tha aur har huk ke sath uski izzat beparda hoti ja rahi thi, par shabana majboor thi kyuki use pata tha ki strip mujra ke dauran use apne ye kapde utarne hi honge. Shabana ki choli ka aakhiri huk tak khul gaya aur bottle ki sharab bhi khatam ho gai.

Kundan: Utar ise
Kundan ke kehne par shabana apne haath peeche le gai aur apni choli ko apni baho se nikalne lagi. Shabana apni choli utar hi pai thi ki Kundan ne uski dor wali bra ki gaanth kheech kar khol di.



Shabana ko achanak se iski umeed nahi thi kyuki lalu na wada kara tha ki wo uski bra panty nahi utarenge use pura nanga nahi karenge. Shabana bottle wahi chhod kar seedhi khadi ho gai aur bra neeche girne se pehle usne use apne haatho se thaam liya aur apne haath peeche le jakar wapas uski gaanth baandh li. Shabana ne kundan ki is harkat par Lalu ki taraf dekha jis par Lalu bhi gusse me Kundan par baras pada.
Lalu: Aae Kundan ye kya harkat hai ye tai nahi hua tha. Jitna tai hua tha utna hi kar.
Kundan ne shabana ko dekhkar muskurate apne dono haatho se apne kaan pakad liye: Sorry, Sorry Lalu bhai wo kya hai itna kantaas maal itne kareeb tha ki iske badan ki mehek se haath thoda fisal gaya. Sorry shabana jee dubara aisa nahi hoga.

Shabana ne dubara lalu ki taraf dekha aur lalu ne use haath ke ishare se relax kara aur bharosa dilaya ki wo hai. Choli utarne ke baad bhi shabana ko is baat ki tasalli mili ki lalu uske liye bola aur aage bhi bolega. Saamne wo gandi harkat karne ke bawjood Kundan Shabana ko ghoorte hue besharmo ki tarah daant nikal kar has raha tha aur apni haatho me dabi uski choli ko apne chehre ke kareeb le jakar uski mehek ko soongh raha tha. Shabana waha se hatne ko hui par peeche se kisi ne uska ghaghra pakad liya. Shabana ne gardan ghuma kar dekha to wo Dev tha jo shabana ka ghaghra pakde hua tha aur has raha tha.
Dev: Use to bade pyar se daru pilai upar se apni choli bhi dekar ja rahi ho aur humare liye kuchh nahi kyu humse aisi kya narazgi.
Shabana ne apne dil ko karra kara aur apne ghaghre ko khol diya. Wo ghaghra Dev ke hath me reh gaya aur shabana bus ek panty aur bra waha se wapas dance wali jagah par aa gai.



Shabana ka gadraya gora chitta badan ab bus ek kasi hui panty aur bra me kaid tha. Dev aur Kundan use yu is tarah panty bra me dekh kar bekabu ho rahe the aur apne apne lund ko apni jeans ke upar se masal rahe the. Yu adhnangi halat me hone ki wajah se shabana ke kadam hi ruk gae the aur Kundan Dev bhi kuchh jada garam ho gae. Par Pratap ne shabana ko naachna jaari rakhne ko kaha aur shabana ne apni sharam ko darkinaar karte hue chandni ke sikhae anusaar us panty bra me hi gaane ke bol ke sath aage naachna shuru kar diya.

O  saki saaki re saaki saaki
Aa..paas aa..rehna jaye koi 
Khwaish baaki!!

Shabana naach hi rahi thi ki tabhi use apne chutado par do hath ki chhuan mehsoos hui shabana ekduk hadbada kar peeche palti peeche Pratap uske peeche khada daant nikal raha tha.
Pratap: Ek ko choli ek ko ghaghra humara bhi to khayal rakho jaaneman.
Pratap ne shabana ki kamar me haath dalkar use apni godd me utha liya aur gaane ke alfazo ke sath shabana ko apni godd me lekar nachane laga.

Teri Jaise Maashuka ,Mujhe Yaar chahiye 
Na Paisa chahiye Na ikarar chahiye

Yeh husann ka hai khumaar mera
Tujhpe hai chaaya joh
Kurban huaa mujh pe joh
Khush naseeb bada hai woh

Haan…Woh Sharabi Kya sharabi
Dil mein Jiske gamm na ho….
Lutt gaya woh sharabi pass jiske 
Hum Na Ho..



Pratap waise bhi thoda body builder type tha aur wo shabana ko manchahe tareeke se apni baho me jhula raha tha. Shabana ko bada uncomfortable lag raha tha par wo kuchh karne ki halat me nahi thi. Use bas kundan aur dev ke hasne ki awaaze aa rahi thi. Paratp ke lagatar hilne ki wajah se wo Lalu ko to dekh bhi nahi pa rahi thi. Shabana ko kaafi der ghumane ke baad Pratap ne use apni baho se utara lagatar ghoomne ki wajah se shabana ka sir chakra sa raha tha. Wo girne ko hui par char haatho ne use thaam liya. Dev aur Kundan bhi sofe se uth kar uske kareeb aa chuke the aur use apne seene se lagakar naachne lage. Peeche se Pratap bhi aa gaya shabana un teeno ke beech dab gai thi. Wo teeno sharab ke nashe me dhutt gane ke sath apni besuri awaaz me gate hue shabana ke jism ko jagah jagah chhu rahe the use bari bari apni taraf kheech rahe the. Shabana ko dabae dabae Kundan ne apne honth shabana ke hontho par rakh diye aur uske hontho ko apne hontho me daba liya, peeche se Pratap ne shabana ki kamar ko sehlate sehlate apna hath shabana ki panty ke andar daal diya aur apni ungaliyo se shabana ki chut ko sehlane laga, aur Dev ne shabana ki bra ko apni mutthi ki giraft me bhar liya aur ek jhatke me shabana ko bra ko do tukdo me phaad kar uske badan se alag kar diya.



Saake…Saaki…Saaki….
O saki saaki re saaki saaki
Aa..paas aa..rehna jaye koi 
Khwaish baaki!!

Shabana un teeno ki harkate dekh shocked thi wo Lalu ke beech me akar unhe rokne ka intezaar kar rahi thi par na Lalu ko ana tha na wo aya. Gaana apne antim padav par tha aur teeno betahasha shabana par toot pade the. Kundan ki jungliyo ki tarah choomne se shabana ke honth me dard hone laga tha halka halka khoon bhi aa gaya ha. Wahi Dev bhi bahut zor se shabana ke stano ko apni mutthi me bhar kar masal raha tha aur Pratap ne to apni do ungaliya hi shabana ki chut me daal di thi.



O saki saaki re saaki saaki
Aa..paas aa..rehna jaye koi 
Khwaish baaki!!

Gaane ke aakhiri alfazo ke sath shabana apni sari takat ko bator kar teeno ko dhakka diya aur unki pakad se chhut gai aur Lalu ki taraf daud padi. Par saamne Lalu ne chandni ko apni godd me bitha rakha tha aur cigarette ke kash bhar raha tha. Shabana Lalu ke pairo me akar git padi aur usse khud ko bacha lene ki bheek mangne lagi.
Shabana: Lalu lalu bachalo mujhe ye dekho ye log kya kar rahe ho tumne kaha tha na tum yaha mere sath rahoge aur inhe kuchh galat nahi karne doge. Dekhno na dekho ye log kya kar rahe hai. Bacha lo mujhe please bacha lo. Roko inhe

Lalu gusse me un teeno ko dekhta aur unpar baras padta hai.
Lalu: Sale kutto kamino haramzaado
Shabana ke man me ek surksha ki umeed jaagi par..... achanak lalu ne shabaan ko pairo se dhakel kar peeche phenk diya.
Lalu: Salo iske doodh nange kar diye iski chut ko nanga karne kya tum sabke baap aaenge. Pura nanga karo sali rundi ko aur ha kuchh karne se pehle wo jaadu ki pudiya zaroor soongh lena.
Lalu ka ye badla hua roop dekh shabana ki aankhe phati ki phati reh gai. Use samajh aa gaya ki use kis tarah jaal me phasaya gaya hai. Kahi na kahi uska dimag use is baat ke liye aggah kar bhi raha tha par shayad usne apne dil par aur lalu par kuchh jada hi bharosa kar liya tha.
Lalu: Kya hua sali aise kya dekh rahi hai. Shock laga Shock laga Shock laga Lagaaaaaaa.....
Shabana: Tumne wada kara tha.
Lalu: Abe tune kya mujhe Bahubali ka prabhas samajh rakha hai Jo mai kahu ye mera vachan mera vachan hi hai shashan Jai Mahishmati. Sali jhapad nahi maarna chahiye tha wo bhi sabke samne.



Shabana ko ab apni galti ka ehsaas ho raha tha ek galti ko chhupane ke chakkar me wo puri tarah unke jaal me phas chuki thi. Ek chhoti si panty me shabana waha un bhediyo ke beech bebas lachaar si padi thi aur wo bhediyo use noch khane ko tayar ho rahe the. Dev Kundan Pratap ne apni apni jeb se wo drugs ki pudiya nikali uska powder apni hatheli me liya aur apni naak uske kareeb lakar uska ek zordaar kash bhara. Wo drugs vakai itni zordaar thi ki ek kash me hi unke dimaag me andar tak utar gai. Us drugs ka asar unki aankho me bhi saaf nazar aa raha tha unki aankhr khoon si surkh laal ho gai thi. Shabana unke saamne haath jode baithi thi ki shayad unme se kisi ko to us par rehem aa jae. Par drugs ke nashe me choor wo teeno aahista aahista shabana ki taraf bad rahe the aur Lalu shabana ki barbadi har pal ka pura lutfa le raha tha ek jhapad ka na jane kitna badla lene wala tha wo. Waha agar kisi ko shabana par taras aa raha tha to wo chandni thi par wo bhi bebas thi wo chahte hue bhi shabana ko bachane ke liye kuchh nahi kar sakti thi. Na jane wo teeno shabana ke sath kya karne wale the par jo bhi tha wo behad barbar aur khaufnaak hone wala tha.

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Samay ki kumi aur kuchh niji vyasttao ki wajah se update dene me waqt laga. Update ka first part de diya hai aur ab agla part banne me kuchh waqt lagega. Par us update ko banane se pehle thoda vichlit hu aur apni inner feeling apne readers se batna chahta hu.

Do din pehle Hyderabad me jo hua wo behad ghatiya aur vikrit mansikta ka parichayak hai aur shabana ka update banate waqt na jane kyu mujhe Lalu aur uske dosto me wahi mansikta nazar ati hai. Ye story puri tarah fictional hai aur yaha likhi har story fictional hai bus maze ke liye. Par is story ko padne wale ya yaha ki story ko padne wale inse itna jada connect na ho ki use apne dimag me bitha le.

Is story me kai log Lalu ke kirdaar ko pasand karte honge pasand kare par uske jaisi mansikta na lae. Lalu ko pasand karte karte khud lalu na ban jae kyuki lalu ek ghatiya aadmi hai aur wo wahi rahega. Kya kahu mai us incident ke bare me kaise log aisa kar jate hai. Shame on them bhagwaan uus behen ki aatma ko shanti de.

Meri yaha ke visible non visible readers se request hai yaha ki kahaniyo ko yahi pade yahi chhod de use apni mansikta na banne de. Thats all i want to say.

[Shabaz]

Super update bhai....pls ?ise jaldi ise pura kardo

[Vickydon]

Samay ki kumi aur kuchh niji vyasttao ki wajah se update dene me waqt laga. Update ka first part de diya hai aur ab agla part banne me kuchh waqt lagega. Par us update ko banane se pehle thoda vichlit hu aur apni inner feeling apne readers se batna chahta hu.

Do din pehle Hyderabad me jo hua wo behad ghatiya aur vikrit mansikta ka parichayak hai aur shabana ka update banate waqt na jane kyu mujhe Lalu aur uske dosto me wahi mansikta nazar ati hai. Ye story puri tarah fictional hai aur yaha likhi har story fictional hai bus maze ke liye. Par is story ko padne wale ya yaha ki story ko padne wale inse itna jada connect na ho ki use apne dimag me bitha le.

Is story me kai log Lalu ke kirdaar ko pasand karte honge pasand kare par uske jaisi mansikta na lae. Lalu ko pasand karte karte khud lalu na ban jae kyuki lalu ek ghatiya aadmi hai aur wo wahi rahega. Kya kahu mai us incident ke bare me kaise log aisa kar jate hai. Shame on them bhagwaan uus behen ki aatma ko shanti de.

Meri yaha ke visible non visible readers se request hai yaha ki kahaniyo ko yahi pade yahi chhod de use apni mansikta na banne de. Thats all i want to say.





dear Logan bhai is story me Lalu jo karna chahe karne do we will enjoy this but at the end usko ye kritya k karan uska aisa harsh karna taki koi Lalu na ban pay. Enjoy k time enjoy and message k time message jarur dena  don’t worry we will enjoy this  and we don’t want to do in real this type of things that’s why we are reading here and enjoying real here 

[Curiousbull]

Samay ki kumi aur kuchh niji vyasttao ki wajah se update dene me waqt laga. Update ka first part de diya hai aur ab agla part banne me kuchh waqt lagega. Par us update ko banane se pehle thoda vichlit hu aur apni inner feeling apne readers se batna chahta hu.

Do din pehle Hyderabad me jo hua wo behad ghatiya aur vikrit mansikta ka parichayak hai aur shabana ka update banate waqt na jane kyu mujhe Lalu aur uske dosto me wahi mansikta nazar ati hai. Ye story puri tarah fictional hai aur yaha likhi har story fictional hai bus maze ke liye. Par is story ko padne wale ya yaha ki story ko padne wale inse itna jada connect na ho ki use apne dimag me bitha le.

Is story me kai log Lalu ke kirdaar ko pasand karte honge pasand kare par uske jaisi mansikta na lae. Lalu ko pasand karte karte khud lalu na ban jae kyuki lalu ek ghatiya aadmi hai aur wo wahi rahega. Kya kahu mai us incident ke bare me kaise log aisa kar jate hai. Shame on them bhagwaan uus behen ki aatma ko shanti de.

Meri yaha ke visible non visible readers se request hai yaha ki kahaniyo ko yahi pade yahi chhod de use apni mansikta na banne de. Thats all i want to say.

Is story ka best post hai Logan bhai

[Suryahot123]

wonderful story! very nice writing please complete update of sabana daring......

[Shabaz]

Sahi he bhai...

[sunravi5853]

You are correct bro.