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Romance Duja via ( vintage romance thriller incest punjabi story
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lagda kavita ji bhul e gae....
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Lgda koi superduper scene aan wala koi kiran ty preet da swap krao whtever u think best ya koi roleplay to spicec
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o ethe v kirpa kar k update de deo madam ji please
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Kavita Ji, update deo plzzzzzzzzzzzzz. Chahe chota hi deo.
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'Tun tan edan keh riha jiven kuwarey mundey ney pehli baar liti hundi a'  debu dey hathon kagajn di potli fad chehkdi hoyi ramanjot boli ..hath ch aye kagaj vekh khushi nal khind e uthi c oh ..
' nyi o gal nyi'  ramanjot wal vekhda bolea debu'  changa nyi lag riha eh sab' 
 'Kyoun swad nyi ayea'  gaur nal  debu wal vekhdi ramanjot boli' vekhn ch tan gaddar run a' 
 'Tusi samjdey kyoun nyi'  hichkichanda hoyea debu bolea '  aj tak preet ton elawa kisi hor nal nyi..'
 'Ohhh .. ' debu wal vekhdi ramanjot boli  'ena na soch' 
Kuch na bolea debu .. samj nyi aa rahi c usnu k usney ranno nal kr theek kitta k galat rat da chetey kr kambn lga . Kabu na rakh sakeya c apnry aap tey c e chakmi run ...
 'Vekh debu ..  ' debu nu chup khada vekh kuch sochdi hoyi ramanjot boli  ' hun jo ho gya ho gya .. naley eh kyoun sochda tun glt kita kuch der chup reh fer  boli'  naley fer teri preet b tan hun kisi hor ton marwandi a ..
Jhatka e lga debu nu preet barey sun 
O b eney khjlley lafjhn ch ramanjot dey munh ton sun ..
'Mera matlab apney dujey gharwaley ton .. ' gal sambhldi ramanjot debu nu samjandi boli'  aap e tun kehnda bdi khush a hun oh .. tenu ki lagda usdi nyi lenda hona jeetu ..ja o nyi dindi honi gharwaley nu..  j o sab bhul tere bhra jeetu nu dindi a ..tun kyoun sochda k galt kita tun ..  ranno tan aap ayi c tenu den tun kehra aap ..'
Kuch samj na ayi ki jwaab devey oh  jameen wal vekhdey dean  lattan kambn lagea .. sahi tan keh rahi a eh ... preet tey jeetu .. sochdey sochdey lun jhatka lay akad jeha gya ... 
 'Mein kagaj vekh lwan fer tenu dasdi haan agey ki krna'  kagaj lay kahli kahli  bahr nu jandi   bina us wal vekhey boli ramanjot..


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'Aa debu ..' plang tey  sarey kagaj khilaar  chaukri maar beithi ramanjot kamrey andr aye debu wal vekhdi boli'  ah vekh debu sarey kagaj kutti sambh k beithi c' 
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 'Ji ... 'plang kol aa khada hunda kagajn wal vekhda bolea tan kuch nyi debu pr ramanjot dean akahn di chamak tey awaz di khank vekh smj gya kinni khush a ramanjot unha kagajn nu vekh....
' Eh eh'  ek kagaj chuk debu nu dikhandi boli ramanjot'  eh panj lakh tan usney ramneek dey sohrey mla hari singh  nu ditta hoyea ney' 
 'Panj lakh ..' gaur nal ramanjot dey hath ch fdey kagaj wal vekhda debu hairaan hoyea bolea'  edi waddi rakm..'
 'Aho jameen baichi c usney pichley sal  'agey  nu ho debu nu kagaj dikhandi ramanjot chehkdi hoyi boli 
 'Ji ...  'sah niglda debu bolea .. dil dhark uthea usda  jidan  plang tey beithi ramanjot agey nu hundi usnu kagaj dikha rahi  c debu di njr kagaj ton hatt sidi usdi di hik tey jaa tiki wadey wadey mottey mottey mummey kameej dey galley vichon nikl jhattia mardey chah k b na rok sakeya debu uthey vekhn ton ..adey ton jyada mummey bahr nikl udaria mardey ... gorey chittey mulaym chikmey ..  mummeya di  dungi laakir  nu tan kameej andr pyi  njr andi chiti bra b na luko saki 
  'Tun gal krin es barey mla naal'  mud plang tey chaukri maar beithdi ramanjot  chehkdi hoyi boli  'puchin kad waps deney usney ..'
 'Ji koi na ..' ramanjot wal vekhda debu chah k b apnia najran uston dur na kr sakeya . chaukri mar k beithi dey mottey mottey sudaul pattn upr ghut hoyi chitti salwar vichon lishkda bharey bharey pattan da gulabi pan .. patta ch uljheya kameej da palla .. kuch tan c us punjbn bharpur hati katti uchi lambi jatti  dey jism ch  jehra debu chah k  b uston apni njr na hta sakeya
  'Tun sattey nu keh gaddi kad sehar jana'  debu dean njrn ton beparwah ramanjot us wal vekhdi boli'  vakil nu milna tey naley ramneek tey karanveer nu b mil ayoungi bdey din ho gye' 
' ji'  ramanjot ton akhn churanda debu bahr nu janda kuch sochda hoyea bolea ... ' mein sochda c j kal ..'
 'Kyoun ..! 'Debu wal vekhdi ramanjot  hasdi hoyi usnu tichar krdi boli'  kyoun ranno ney aana....fer ek dum usnu ghurdi hukm dindi   boli'  jaldi tyar ho ja waps b ana....'




' Ki gal eni gaur nal kyoun vekh riha' sattey nu  bahr bdi gaur nal kisi nu   vekhdey vekh hotal ch beith chah peendey debu   ney pucheya ' kaun a eh '   
 'Eh jassi a ramneek da gharwala'  gaur nal sdak tey gaddi  kol khadey bandey wal vekhda bolea satta
 'Naal kon a esdey ..' us bandey nu naal khadi kudi  naal  hass hass gallan kardey vekh debu ney puchea
 'Esdi saheli'  kuch sochda hoyea satta cha da ghut bharda  bolea'  suneya es di rakhail a .. viah karwan nu firda  '
 'Rakhail'  ek sum hairaan hunda debu bolea'  sardarni nu pta es barey' 
 'Nyi ..   ' gaur nal jassi nal khadi kudi wal vekhda satta bolea'  kisi college di mastrni a ...
' kmaaal a eni changi sohni vohti dey hundey hoye b eh..'  jassi wal vekhda burburaya debu...
'Mla di bigdi hoyi aulaad a'  us wal     vekhda satta bolea'  pta nyi kyoun sardar hurra ney ramneek da viah es naal .. ' 
 'Hmmmm...' kuch sochda hoyea debu bolea'  ramneek nu pta...'
' haan bechari sardani di ijjat kr chup a ..' jassi nu gaddi ch us kudi nal beith k janda vekh satta bolea'   kehn nu tan mla ney esnu gharo beidkhal kitta hoyea a ..par  sirf duniya di njr ch ...lokan nu dikhan lyi ...sab pta usnu apney mundey di kartoot da.. vakhri kothi b usney e lay k diti a' 
 'Sardarni ney kuch b nyi keha'  sattey wal vekh hairaan hunda bolea debu'  
 'Ek baar gal kiti c mla naal ..kyoun kitta beidakhl esnu' kuch der chup reh bolea satta' pr  .. kudi  da mamla a .. pind ch apni ijjat kr chup a ..naley fer kehar singh da yaar velli c mla'
' mein karunga gal'  kuch sochda hoyea debu bolea 
 'Koi fayda nyi .. 'uth khada hunda  satta kuch der chup reh bolea   '  sardarni puj gyi honi karanveer nu lay k  ramneek kol.. chal hun..'
 'Haan'  sadak wal vekhda debu  cha da khali gilas mej tey rakh kuch soch khada hunda bolea...' galat gal a eh' 



Yakeen nyi ho riha c ramanjot nu eh debu a k kehar singh jini haleemi saleekey nal ramneek kol beitha debu usnu put put keh galln kr riha c ... 

 'Bapu aj bdey laad ch didi nal gal kr riha ki gal'  ramanjot wal vekhda karanveer  hasda hoyea bolea 
' bdey dina baad miley hay na es lyi shyad  'unha wal vekh karan wal vekh gal bdldi boli ramanjot'  tun das teri padayi kidan chal rahi a parda b a k ..awen sehar ch . '
 'Nyi nyi mummy puri mehnat kr riha'  ek dum bolea karan 'agley haftey ton paper shuru a .'



 'Tun fikr na kr ..  sab theek ho jana ..' ramneek dey sar tey hath rakh debu ney ek baar ramanjot wal vekhea fer ek dum   bolea'   mein krda jassi nal gal...
 'Nyi bapuji.. tusi koi gal nyi gal karungey'  debu nu rokdi hoyi ramneek boli'  awen mere nal aa k kalesh karu ..'
 'Edn kidan kalesh karu'  ramneek wal vekhda debu bolea'  asin maar gye haan .'
 'Aj meri wdi fikr kr rahey o'  gaur nal debu wal vekhdi  ramneek boli'  udon kyoun nyi fikar kiti jad mera viah ..' 
 'Sanu ki pta c putt' ramneek dey sar utey hath ferda debu gardan ghuma ramanjot wal vekhn lga ...
 'Sab pta c tuhanu'  boldi boldi awaz bhar ayi ramneek di 
 'Nyi putt sachin nyi pta c ..'gaur nal ramneek wal vekhda debu bolea  'kehra maa peo apni dhee nu ..'
Kuch na boli ramneek apney aap nu sambhaldi edr udr vekh lgi 
 'Eh ki hoyea  ' gaur nal ramneek di gardn tey pye nissan wal vekhda debu bolea
 'Kuch kuch nyi'  kahli kahli ch apni gardn dey nissan nu chunni nal lukondi ramneek uston akhn churandi boli.... ' tusi beitho mein  roti bna di haan' 
 'Nyi roti baad ch khawa gey.. thora kam jana teri mummy ney'  ramneek kolon uth ramanjot kol anda debu bolea'  chaleyea hun pehln hari singh nu mil ayea fer pta nyi kitey daurey nu na nikl javey '

 'Haan haan..' ramanjot b khadi hundi boli'  sattey nu kaho gaddi kadey.'



 'Ramneek khush nyi a jassi kol'  gaddi ch beitha debu sattey wal vekh fer  ramanjot wal vekhda bolea 
 'Tenu kis ney keha ..' thori hairaan hundi ramanjot debu wal vekh sattey wal vekhn lgi
 'Kehna ki a .. usdea galln ton pta lag riha ramanjot wal vekhda debu thori talakh jehi awaz ch bolea'  udn kehndey o mein eh kr sakdi haan oh kr sakdi haan tey apni kudi da pta nyi o sukhi a k dukhi ...
 'Ki matlab ... ' car agey beithey debu nu ghurdi boli ramanjot 
 'Jassi koi hor janani rakhi beitha tey ..' bolda bolda chup kr gya debu ..gaddi chalndey chalndey sattey di tan jaan e halk ch aa gyi eh eh debu ney tan saaf e das ditta sardarni nu
 'Ki ... ' ek dum sidi ho  car ch beith  akhn kad di boli ramanjot'  jassi ney hor jnani ..'
 'Aho tuhanu kyoun yakeen ana ..tusi tan  pind  ch rasukh ijjat bnan lyi mla dey ghar viah diti kudi eh nyi vekheya o uthey  khush b a k nyi..'gardan ghuma pichey nu vekhda debu gussey ch burburaya..
 'Kadi ramneek ney daseya e nyi ..'hairaan hoyi ramanjot b burburayi
 'Ki dasdi bechari ..' sadak wal vekhda vekhda chup kr gya debu fer kahla jeha pay sattey wal vekhda bolea'  hor kini dur a mla di kothi ..'
' bs agley mod tey ...' gaddi ek psssey nu morda satta car ch lagey sheeshey vichon pichey beithi ramanjot wal vekhda bolea ..samj gya aj kuch na kuch mla di kothi ch hoyouga edi wadi gal hovey tey sardarni chup rahey. ..

' mein gal karungi  mla.. naal tun kuch na boli'  debu wal vekhdi ramanjot boli .... 



 'Bha ji..  j tuhanu pta c jassi edan da tuhanu sadi ramneek da viah usnal nyi karwana chahida c'  debu wal vekh kuch sochdi hoyi ramanjot hari singh wal vekhdi boli
 'Sanu lageya viah ton baad sudr jayouga ..' ramanjot wal vekhda hari singh bolea'  sochya   ramneek wargi samjdaar pdi likhi vohti ..smja sidey rah lay ayougi par afsoos o b kuch ..'
 'Tusi tan bdi asani naal keh dita afsoos ...'meri dhee da ki banu' mla hari singh tey usdi vohti wal vekhdi ramanjot boli
 'Usnu kis cheez di kmi ... vakhra ghar  kothi sab tan hay uskol . .'ramanjot tey debu wal vekhdi mla di vohti boli'  naley bhai saab di salah naal e tan..'!
 'Pr jehra tusi jassi beidhkl kr ditta apni jmeen jyadaad ton ...' unha wal vekhdi ramanjot boli
 'Ohhh ..' hsda hoyea hari singh bolea'  o tan tuhanu pta e a rajneeti ch eh sab... hun virodhi dhir nu koi mauka thori dena c ..naley jsssi kehra sadey ton dur a anda e hona .. dsseya c usnu tusi aana ..'

 'Lo aa gya jassi'  andr andey jsssi nu vekh mla di vohti  chehkdi hoyi boli'  aa jassi putt vekh tere sass sohra aye ney ..'

 'Ki hall a sassu maa'  agey nu ho ramanjot dey pairn nu hath landa jassi hasda hoyea bolea'  aj bapu ji kol..ki gal khair tan hay ..'
 'Kuch kam c mla ji naal'  jassi wal vekhdi ramanjot apna gussa pee muskuraan di kosis krdi boli 
 'Hor sohra saheb bdey din la dittey bahrley mulk'  debu wal vekh akh marda jassi hasda hoyea usnu tichar karda bolea'  ki gal ..'
Debu oh tan shyad usnu e udeek da c bolea kuch nyi khada ho usdean akhan ch vekhn lga 
 'Ki gal edan ki vekh rahey o'  hasda hoyea jassi sareya wal vekh debu wal vekhda bolea'  jwayi haan tuhada ...jwayiiii...'
Eston agey na boln ditta debu ney jassi nu  ... khich k eni jor di thappd mareya usdey munh tey ...bhurak ek passey nu ulrda digda digda bachea
 'Teri himmat kidan hoyi kehar singh ...jassi nu thappd marn di .. ' garjda akhn kad da hari singh  cheekda debu agey aa khada hunda bolea
 'Tun thappd di gal  kr riha  shukr kr esdi gardn lah tere hath utey nyi rakh ditti'  uston b uchi awaaz ch cheekda gurraya debu 
Ek baar tan ramanjot b hil gyi  debu nu gussey ch cheekda vekh 
 'Esdi himmat kidan hoyi.. sadi kudi tey hath chukn di'  mud agey nu ho gardn ton jassi nu fad gussey ch apney wal khichda bolea debu

Kudi nu matlab ramneek tey hath chukya jassi ney ..'sundey e gussey ch pagl ho jassi wal vekh agey nu hundi gurrayi ramanjot'  tun ramneek tey hath chukya ..'
 'Bhain ji bhain ji  'kehar singh tey ramanjot nu gussey ch Pagal hoye vekh hari singh apney app nu sambhlda unha wal vekhda bolea 'ghar ch niki motti gal tan hundi...'
'Niki motti gal 'akhan kad hari singh wal vekhdi ramanjot gussey ch kadakdi awaz ch boli'  meri ramneek tey hath chukya esney  ...' pagl hoyi ramanjot pistol kadn lyi dab ch hath pandi  boli'  khadey khadey nu goli na maar dewan'
'Bhain ji bhain ji 'agey nu ho bhaj k ramanjot da harh fad jassi di maa  usnu rokdi boli'  minnat ali gal a mein maffi mangdi haan jassi walon... yakeen dilandi haan agey ton kadi b jassi ramneek nu...'
'Agey ton' jassi nu ghurdi gussey ch kambdi  ramanjot cheekdi hoyi boli 'j es kol rahugi tan e kuch kahuga ... sadey nal pind jayougi ramneek huney ...
'Jidan tuhanu theek lgey' hath jod ramanjot dey agey aa khada hunda hari singh kambda hoyea bolea 
 'Tey tun 'jassi wal vekh ramanjot gussey ch  gurandi hoyi boli  'j ramneek nu milan ja us kol aan di kosis b kiti  jeounda e jameen ch gadd dayoungi ..'




 'Mein mein... pind ja k ki karungi..'hairaan hoyi ramneek debu tey ramanjot wal vekhdi boli 
Sadey kol rahungi tera apna ghar a'  agey nu ho ramneek nu upr ton lay haithan tak vekhdi ramanjot boli' jassi tey usdey peo nu mil k aye haan asin  .. ho gya faisla koi lod nyi tenu jassi nal rehn di ..'
'Agey kehra o ethey rehnda'  unha wal vekhdi burburayi ramneek 
'Ki gal hoyi bapuji ..' unha dean gallan sunda hairaan pareshaan hoyea karanveer agey nu hunda bolea
' kuch nyi ..' karan wal vekhda debu bolea' tun b chal sadey naal pind' 
 'Pr agley haftey mere paper ney bapuji' ramanjot wal vekh debu wal vekhda karan bolea
'Ohhhh..' ena keh  kuch sochda hoyea debu ramanjot wal vekhn lga...
 'Koi na tun pappern ton baad aa jawin..' apna faisla suna di ramanjot ramneek wal vekhdi boli' tun tyar ho ramneek' 
Kuch na boli ramneek samj gyi sab pta lag gya mummy nu jassi barey..'
Pr mein ekela ethey kidan ..' kuch sochda hoyea karan bolea' edn nyi ho sakda mein tey didi papern ton baad pind waps ..'
'Nyi ramneek hun ethey nyi'  ek dum boli ramanjot'  awen jassi ethey aa esnu tang karo ..'
'Edn kidan tang karu ..' mein nyi haiga ethey ..' ramneek wal vekhda karan b gussey ch bolea 
'Mummy  karan theek keh riha ..' ramanjot wal vekh kuch sochdi hoyi rambeek boli'  asin karan dey papern ton baad pind aa jawangey..'
'Nyi ramneek... awen ethey aa jassi tenu tang karu '  pareshaan hundi ramanjot debu tey karan wal vekhdi boli 
'Nyi mummy usdi fikar na karo'  ramanjot wal vekhdi lamba sah lendi boli ramneek'  o tan pehlan e ethey aa k khush nayi c ..bs lok laaj tey tuhadey dr krkey kadi kadi aa janda c ..'

'Ena kuch teri jindgi ch ho riha c tun menu daseya e nyi'  gaur nal ramneek wal vekh pareyshaan ho ramanjot boli
'Ki dasdi mummy'  ramanjot wal vekh fer debu wal vekh  hauka jeha lendi boli ramneek' jassi kidan da a sab pta tan c bapuji nu ..'

Kuch na bolea debu kehnda b ki ... usnu tan aap kuch nyi pta c aj e milia c hari singh tey jassi nu ..'

Mummy asin papern ton baad pind waps aa jawangey'  ramanjot wal vekhda karan bolea'  kuch e dina di tan gal a ..'
Kuch der chup rahi ramanjot fer debu wal vekh karan tey ramneek wal vekhdi boli'  waisey tan hun jassi himmat nyi karda ethey aa tenu tang krn di .. edn krdi haan jiney din tusi ethey rehna satta b ethey e tuhadey kol rahega ..'
'Haan eh theek rahuga mummy..' ramanjot wal vekh fer ramneek wal vekhda karan bolea .' Kyoun didi ..'
 'Jidan tuhanu theek lgey ..'kuch sochdi hoyi ramneek kuch der chup reh boli'   mein tuhadey lyi roti bna di haan ..'
'Nyi roti rehn e dey .. asin waps pind jana'  ramneek wal vekh ramanjot wal vekhda  debu bolea.'
' haan putt bukh rahi e nyi ..' ramneek wal vekhdi ramanjot boli'  vohat mada hoyea tere naal' 
Kuch mada nyi hoyea mummy'  agey nu ho ramanjot dey gal lagdi ramneek boli'  meinu pta c jis din tuhanu pta lag gya ..ehi hona c ..' 




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Bhut hi vadiya update hai
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Good one let's see no hunda hun
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Nice one
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Hmm bhot khubsurat update
Debu ki life to barbaad kar di ramanjot ne par debu uski family ki madad kar raha hai vaise ramanjot esse kaam se uska dil pasij jaye essi aurat lag to nahi rahi but dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
Debu bhi aaj action me aa hi gaya vaise debu ke maze ho sakte hai ramanjot uski jholi me aa jayegi but lagta hai ramneek bhi uski jholi me aane wali hai chalo bonus kise pasand nahi hota :D
Preet = ranno+ramanjot+ramaneek+.......n
Ab is chain me kon kon add hoti hai dekhne wali baat hogi

Bhot mast update
Bas thoda jaldi update diya karo
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Sirra update g
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(22-01-2019, 07:58 AM)kavitakhullar Wrote:
'Tun tan edan keh riha jiven kuwarey mundey ney pehli baar liti hundi a'  debu dey hathon kagajn di potli fad chehkdi hoyi ramanjot boli ..hath ch aye kagaj vekh khushi nal khind e uthi c oh ..
' nyi o gal nyi'  ramanjot wal vekhda bolea debu'  changa nyi lag riha eh sab' 
 'Kyoun swad nyi ayea'  gaur nal  debu wal vekhdi ramanjot boli' vekhn ch tan gaddar run a' 
 'Tusi samjdey kyoun nyi'  hichkichanda hoyea debu bolea '  aj tak preet ton elawa kisi hor nal nyi..'
 'Ohhh .. ' debu wal vekhdi ramanjot boli  'ena na soch' 
Kuch na bolea debu .. samj nyi aa rahi c usnu k usney ranno nal kr theek kitta k galat rat da chetey kr kambn lga . Kabu na rakh sakeya c apnry aap tey c e chakmi run ...
 'Vekh debu ..  ' debu nu chup khada vekh kuch sochdi hoyi ramanjot boli  ' hun jo ho gya ho gya .. naley eh kyoun sochda tun glt kita kuch der chup reh fer  boli'  naley fer teri preet b tan hun kisi hor ton marwandi a ..
Jhatka e lga debu nu preet barey sun 
O b eney khjlley lafjhn ch ramanjot dey munh ton sun ..
'Mera matlab apney dujey gharwaley ton .. ' gal sambhldi ramanjot debu nu samjandi boli'  aap e tun kehnda bdi khush a hun oh .. tenu ki lagda usdi nyi lenda hona jeetu ..ja o nyi dindi honi gharwaley nu..  j o sab bhul tere bhra jeetu nu dindi a ..tun kyoun sochda k galt kita tun ..  ranno tan aap ayi c tenu den tun kehra aap ..'
Kuch samj na ayi ki jwaab devey oh  jameen wal vekhdey dean  lattan kambn lagea .. sahi tan keh rahi a eh ... preet tey jeetu .. sochdey sochdey lun jhatka lay akad jeha gya ... 
 'Mein kagaj vekh lwan fer tenu dasdi haan agey ki krna'  kagaj lay kahli kahli  bahr nu jandi   bina us wal vekhey boli ramanjot..


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'Aa debu ..' plang tey  sarey kagaj khilaar  chaukri maar beithi ramanjot kamrey andr aye debu wal vekhdi boli'  ah vekh debu sarey kagaj kutti sambh k beithi c' 
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 'Ji ... 'plang kol aa khada hunda kagajn wal vekhda bolea tan kuch nyi debu pr ramanjot dean akahn di chamak tey awaz di khank vekh smj gya kinni khush a ramanjot unha kagajn nu vekh....
' Eh eh'  ek kagaj chuk debu nu dikhandi boli ramanjot'  eh panj lakh tan usney ramneek dey sohrey mla hari singh  nu ditta hoyea ney' 
 'Panj lakh ..' gaur nal ramanjot dey hath ch fdey kagaj wal vekhda debu hairaan hoyea bolea'  edi waddi rakm..'
 'Aho jameen baichi c usney pichley sal  'agey  nu ho debu nu kagaj dikhandi ramanjot chehkdi hoyi boli 
 'Ji ...  'sah niglda debu bolea .. dil dhark uthea usda  jidan  plang tey beithi ramanjot agey nu hundi usnu kagaj dikha rahi  c debu di njr kagaj ton hatt sidi usdi di hik tey jaa tiki wadey wadey mottey mottey mummey kameej dey galley vichon nikl jhattia mardey chah k b na rok sakeya debu uthey vekhn ton ..adey ton jyada mummey bahr nikl udaria mardey ... gorey chittey mulaym chikmey ..  mummeya di  dungi laakir  nu tan kameej andr pyi  njr andi chiti bra b na luko saki 
  'Tun gal krin es barey mla naal'  mud plang tey chaukri maar beithdi ramanjot  chehkdi hoyi boli  'puchin kad waps deney usney ..'
 'Ji koi na ..' ramanjot wal vekhda debu chah k b apnia najran uston dur na kr sakeya . chaukri mar k beithi dey mottey mottey sudaul pattn upr ghut hoyi chitti salwar vichon lishkda bharey bharey pattan da gulabi pan .. patta ch uljheya kameej da palla .. kuch tan c us punjbn bharpur hati katti uchi lambi jatti  dey jism ch  jehra debu chah k  b uston apni njr na hta sakeya
  'Tun sattey nu keh gaddi kad sehar jana'  debu dean njrn ton beparwah ramanjot us wal vekhdi boli'  vakil nu milna tey naley ramneek tey karanveer nu b mil ayoungi bdey din ho gye' 
' ji'  ramanjot ton akhn churanda debu bahr nu janda kuch sochda hoyea bolea ... ' mein sochda c j kal ..'
 'Kyoun ..! 'Debu wal vekhdi ramanjot  hasdi hoyi usnu tichar krdi boli'  kyoun ranno ney aana....fer ek dum usnu ghurdi hukm dindi   boli'  jaldi tyar ho ja waps b ana....'




' Ki gal eni gaur nal kyoun vekh riha' sattey nu  bahr bdi gaur nal kisi nu   vekhdey vekh hotal ch beith chah peendey debu   ney pucheya ' kaun a eh '   
 'Eh jassi a ramneek da gharwala'  gaur nal sdak tey gaddi  kol khadey bandey wal vekhda bolea satta
 'Naal kon a esdey ..' us bandey nu naal khadi kudi  naal  hass hass gallan kardey vekh debu ney puchea
 'Esdi saheli'  kuch sochda hoyea satta cha da ghut bharda  bolea'  suneya es di rakhail a .. viah karwan nu firda  '
 'Rakhail'  ek sum hairaan hunda debu bolea'  sardarni nu pta es barey' 
 'Nyi ..   ' gaur nal jassi nal khadi kudi wal vekhda satta bolea'  kisi college di mastrni a ...
' kmaaal a eni changi sohni vohti dey hundey hoye b eh..'  jassi wal vekhda burburaya debu...
'Mla di bigdi hoyi aulaad a'  us wal     vekhda satta bolea'  pta nyi kyoun sardar hurra ney ramneek da viah es naal .. ' 
 'Hmmmm...' kuch sochda hoyea debu bolea'  ramneek nu pta...'
' haan bechari sardani di ijjat kr chup a ..' jassi nu gaddi ch us kudi nal beith k janda vekh satta bolea'   kehn nu tan mla ney esnu gharo beidkhal kitta hoyea a ..par  sirf duniya di njr ch ...lokan nu dikhan lyi ...sab pta usnu apney mundey di kartoot da.. vakhri kothi b usney e lay k diti a' 
 'Sardarni ney kuch b nyi keha'  sattey wal vekh hairaan hunda bolea debu'  
 'Ek baar gal kiti c mla naal ..kyoun kitta beidakhl esnu' kuch der chup reh bolea satta' pr  .. kudi  da mamla a .. pind ch apni ijjat kr chup a ..naley fer kehar singh da yaar velli c mla'
' mein karunga gal'  kuch sochda hoyea debu bolea 
 'Koi fayda nyi .. 'uth khada hunda  satta kuch der chup reh bolea   '  sardarni puj gyi honi karanveer nu lay k  ramneek kol.. chal hun..'
 'Haan'  sadak wal vekhda debu  cha da khali gilas mej tey rakh kuch soch khada hunda bolea...' galat gal a eh' 



Yakeen nyi ho riha c ramanjot nu eh debu a k kehar singh jini haleemi saleekey nal ramneek kol beitha debu usnu put put keh galln kr riha c ... 

 'Bapu aj bdey laad ch didi nal gal kr riha ki gal'  ramanjot wal vekhda karanveer  hasda hoyea bolea 
' bdey dina baad miley hay na es lyi shyad  'unha wal vekh karan wal vekh gal bdldi boli ramanjot'  tun das teri padayi kidan chal rahi a parda b a k ..awen sehar ch . '
 'Nyi nyi mummy puri mehnat kr riha'  ek dum bolea karan 'agley haftey ton paper shuru a .'



 'Tun fikr na kr ..  sab theek ho jana ..' ramneek dey sar tey hath rakh debu ney ek baar ramanjot wal vekhea fer ek dum   bolea'   mein krda jassi nal gal...
 'Nyi bapuji.. tusi koi gal nyi gal karungey'  debu nu rokdi hoyi ramneek boli'  awen mere nal aa k kalesh karu ..'
 'Edn kidan kalesh karu'  ramneek wal vekhda debu bolea'  asin maar gye haan .'
 'Aj meri wdi fikr kr rahey o'  gaur nal debu wal vekhdi  ramneek boli'  udon kyoun nyi fikar kiti jad mera viah ..' 
 'Sanu ki pta c putt' ramneek dey sar utey hath ferda debu gardan ghuma ramanjot wal vekhn lga ...
 'Sab pta c tuhanu'  boldi boldi awaz bhar ayi ramneek di 
 'Nyi putt sachin nyi pta c ..'gaur nal ramneek wal vekhda debu bolea  'kehra maa peo apni dhee nu ..'
Kuch na boli ramneek apney aap nu sambhaldi edr udr vekh lgi 
 'Eh ki hoyea  ' gaur nal ramneek di gardn tey pye nissan wal vekhda debu bolea
 'Kuch kuch nyi'  kahli kahli ch apni gardn dey nissan nu chunni nal lukondi ramneek uston akhn churandi boli.... ' tusi beitho mein  roti bna di haan' 
 'Nyi roti baad ch khawa gey.. thora kam jana teri mummy ney'  ramneek kolon uth ramanjot kol anda debu bolea'  chaleyea hun pehln hari singh nu mil ayea fer pta nyi kitey daurey nu na nikl javey '

 'Haan haan..' ramanjot b khadi hundi boli'  sattey nu kaho gaddi kadey.'



 'Ramneek khush nyi a jassi kol'  gaddi ch beitha debu sattey wal vekh fer  ramanjot wal vekhda bolea 
 'Tenu kis ney keha ..' thori hairaan hundi ramanjot debu wal vekh sattey wal vekhn lgi
 'Kehna ki a .. usdea galln ton pta lag riha ramanjot wal vekhda debu thori talakh jehi awaz ch bolea'  udn kehndey o mein eh kr sakdi haan oh kr sakdi haan tey apni kudi da pta nyi o sukhi a k dukhi ...
 'Ki matlab ... ' car agey beithey debu nu ghurdi boli ramanjot 
 'Jassi koi hor janani rakhi beitha tey ..' bolda bolda chup kr gya debu ..gaddi chalndey chalndey sattey di tan jaan e halk ch aa gyi eh eh debu ney tan saaf e das ditta sardarni nu
 'Ki ... ' ek dum sidi ho  car ch beith  akhn kad di boli ramanjot'  jassi ney hor jnani ..'
 'Aho tuhanu kyoun yakeen ana ..tusi tan  pind  ch rasukh ijjat bnan lyi mla dey ghar viah diti kudi eh nyi vekheya o uthey  khush b a k nyi..'gardan ghuma pichey nu vekhda debu gussey ch burburaya..
 'Kadi ramneek ney daseya e nyi ..'hairaan hoyi ramanjot b burburayi
 'Ki dasdi bechari ..' sadak wal vekhda vekhda chup kr gya debu fer kahla jeha pay sattey wal vekhda bolea'  hor kini dur a mla di kothi ..'
' bs agley mod tey ...' gaddi ek psssey nu morda satta car ch lagey sheeshey vichon pichey beithi ramanjot wal vekhda bolea ..samj gya aj kuch na kuch mla di kothi ch hoyouga edi wadi gal hovey tey sardarni chup rahey. ..

' mein gal karungi  mla.. naal tun kuch na boli'  debu wal vekhdi ramanjot boli .... 



 'Bha ji..  j tuhanu pta c jassi edan da tuhanu sadi ramneek da viah usnal nyi karwana chahida c'  debu wal vekh kuch sochdi hoyi ramanjot hari singh wal vekhdi boli
 'Sanu lageya viah ton baad sudr jayouga ..' ramanjot wal vekhda hari singh bolea'  sochya   ramneek wargi samjdaar pdi likhi vohti ..smja sidey rah lay ayougi par afsoos o b kuch ..'
 'Tusi tan bdi asani naal keh dita afsoos ...'meri dhee da ki banu' mla hari singh tey usdi vohti wal vekhdi ramanjot boli
 'Usnu kis cheez di kmi ... vakhra ghar  kothi sab tan hay uskol . .'ramanjot tey debu wal vekhdi mla di vohti boli'  naley bhai saab di salah naal e tan..'!
 'Pr jehra tusi jassi beidhkl kr ditta apni jmeen jyadaad ton ...' unha wal vekhdi ramanjot boli
 'Ohhh ..' hsda hoyea hari singh bolea'  o tan tuhanu pta e a rajneeti ch eh sab... hun virodhi dhir nu koi mauka thori dena c ..naley jsssi kehra sadey ton dur a anda e hona .. dsseya c usnu tusi aana ..'

 'Lo aa gya jassi'  andr andey jsssi nu vekh mla di vohti  chehkdi hoyi boli'  aa jassi putt vekh tere sass sohra aye ney ..'

 'Ki hall a sassu maa'  agey nu ho ramanjot dey pairn nu hath landa jassi hasda hoyea bolea'  aj bapu ji kol..ki gal khair tan hay ..'
 'Kuch kam c mla ji naal'  jassi wal vekhdi ramanjot apna gussa pee muskuraan di kosis krdi boli 
 'Hor sohra saheb bdey din la dittey bahrley mulk'  debu wal vekh akh marda jassi hasda hoyea usnu tichar karda bolea'  ki gal ..'
Debu oh tan shyad usnu e udeek da c bolea kuch nyi khada ho usdean akhan ch vekhn lga 
 'Ki gal edan ki vekh rahey o'  hasda hoyea jassi sareya wal vekh debu wal vekhda bolea'  jwayi haan tuhada ...jwayiiii...'
Eston agey na boln ditta debu ney jassi nu  ... khich k eni jor di thappd mareya usdey munh tey ...bhurak ek passey nu ulrda digda digda bachea
 'Teri himmat kidan hoyi kehar singh ...jassi nu thappd marn di .. ' garjda akhn kad da hari singh  cheekda debu agey aa khada hunda bolea
 'Tun thappd di gal  kr riha  shukr kr esdi gardn lah tere hath utey nyi rakh ditti'  uston b uchi awaaz ch cheekda gurraya debu 
Ek baar tan ramanjot b hil gyi  debu nu gussey ch cheekda vekh 
 'Esdi himmat kidan hoyi.. sadi kudi tey hath chukn di'  mud agey nu ho gardn ton jassi nu fad gussey ch apney wal khichda bolea debu

Kudi nu matlab ramneek tey hath chukya jassi ney ..'sundey e gussey ch pagl ho jassi wal vekh agey nu hundi gurrayi ramanjot'  tun ramneek tey hath chukya ..'
 'Bhain ji bhain ji  'kehar singh tey ramanjot nu gussey ch Pagal hoye vekh hari singh apney app nu sambhlda unha wal vekhda bolea 'ghar ch niki motti gal tan hundi...'
'Niki motti gal 'akhan kad hari singh wal vekhdi ramanjot gussey ch kadakdi awaz ch boli'  meri ramneek tey hath chukya esney  ...' pagl hoyi ramanjot pistol kadn lyi dab ch hath pandi  boli'  khadey khadey nu goli na maar dewan'
'Bhain ji bhain ji 'agey nu ho bhaj k ramanjot da harh fad jassi di maa  usnu rokdi boli'  minnat ali gal a mein maffi mangdi haan jassi walon... yakeen dilandi haan agey ton kadi b jassi ramneek nu...'
'Agey ton' jassi nu ghurdi gussey ch kambdi  ramanjot cheekdi hoyi boli 'j es kol rahugi tan e kuch kahuga ... sadey nal pind jayougi ramneek huney ...
'Jidan tuhanu theek lgey' hath jod ramanjot dey agey aa khada hunda hari singh kambda hoyea bolea 
 'Tey tun 'jassi wal vekh ramanjot gussey ch  gurandi hoyi boli  'j ramneek nu milan ja us kol aan di kosis b kiti  jeounda e jameen ch gadd dayoungi ..'




 'Mein mein... pind ja k ki karungi..'hairaan hoyi ramneek debu tey ramanjot wal vekhdi boli 
Sadey kol rahungi tera apna ghar a'  agey nu ho ramneek nu upr ton lay haithan tak vekhdi ramanjot boli' jassi tey usdey peo nu mil k aye haan asin  .. ho gya faisla koi lod nyi tenu jassi nal rehn di ..'
'Agey kehra o ethey rehnda'  unha wal vekhdi burburayi ramneek 
'Ki gal hoyi bapuji ..' unha dean gallan sunda hairaan pareshaan hoyea karanveer agey nu hunda bolea
' kuch nyi ..' karan wal vekhda debu bolea' tun b chal sadey naal pind' 
 'Pr agley haftey mere paper ney bapuji' ramanjot wal vekh debu wal vekhda karan bolea
'Ohhhh..' ena keh  kuch sochda hoyea debu ramanjot wal vekhn lga...
 'Koi na tun pappern ton baad aa jawin..' apna faisla suna di ramanjot ramneek wal vekhdi boli' tun tyar ho ramneek' 
Kuch na boli ramneek samj gyi sab pta lag gya mummy nu jassi barey..'
Pr mein ekela ethey kidan ..' kuch sochda hoyea karan bolea' edn nyi ho sakda mein tey didi papern ton baad pind waps ..'
'Nyi ramneek hun ethey nyi'  ek dum boli ramanjot'  awen jassi ethey aa esnu tang karo ..'
'Edn kidan tang karu ..' mein nyi haiga ethey ..' ramneek wal vekhda karan b gussey ch bolea 
'Mummy  karan theek keh riha ..' ramanjot wal vekh kuch sochdi hoyi rambeek boli'  asin karan dey papern ton baad pind aa jawangey..'
'Nyi ramneek... awen ethey aa jassi tenu tang karu '  pareshaan hundi ramanjot debu tey karan wal vekhdi boli 
'Nyi mummy usdi fikar na karo'  ramanjot wal vekhdi lamba sah lendi boli ramneek'  o tan pehlan e ethey aa k khush nayi c ..bs lok laaj tey tuhadey dr krkey kadi kadi aa janda c ..'

'Ena kuch teri jindgi ch ho riha c tun menu daseya e nyi'  gaur nal ramneek wal vekh pareyshaan ho ramanjot boli
'Ki dasdi mummy'  ramanjot wal vekh fer debu wal vekh  hauka jeha lendi boli ramneek' jassi kidan da a sab pta tan c bapuji nu ..'

Kuch na bolea debu kehnda b ki ... usnu tan aap kuch nyi pta c aj e milia c hari singh tey jassi nu ..'

Mummy asin papern ton baad pind waps aa jawangey'  ramanjot wal vekhda karan bolea'  kuch e dina di tan gal a ..'
Kuch der chup rahi ramanjot fer debu wal vekh karan tey ramneek wal vekhdi boli'  waisey tan hun jassi himmat nyi karda ethey aa tenu tang krn di .. edn krdi haan jiney din tusi ethey rehna satta b ethey e tuhadey kol rahega ..'
'Haan eh theek rahuga mummy..' ramanjot wal vekh fer ramneek wal vekhda karan bolea .' Kyoun didi ..'
 'Jidan tuhanu theek lgey ..'kuch sochdi hoyi ramneek kuch der chup reh boli'   mein tuhadey lyi roti bna di haan ..'
'Nyi roti rehn e dey .. asin waps pind jana'  ramneek wal vekh ramanjot wal vekhda  debu bolea.'
' haan putt bukh rahi e nyi ..' ramneek wal vekhdi ramanjot boli'  vohat mada hoyea tere naal' 
Kuch mada nyi hoyea mummy'  agey nu ho ramanjot dey gal lagdi ramneek boli'  meinu pta c jis din tuhanu pta lag gya ..ehi hona c ..' 


Dear kavita G update tey bht wadia c per tusi

Jaldi jaldi wich sb kujh mix kr dita. .. Ranno ty

Dipu wich jo kujh hoya oh khulasa tusi krna c 

Us ny potli box kidda lia ranno tun .??

Satta ty Dipu tha shop ty kiu bethy c tey ramjot

Kithy c ??

Karan ty ramneek wich ki hoya c ? 

Dipu chh aina hosla kidda aa gia jis di awaz

Ramanjot aggy nikaldi nai oh kidda mla naal

Ty jassi naal Gussy hoya ?? Shakal tey badli c

Dipu di per karan tey ramneek ny pehaneya nai

Awaz tuu k aye awaz unha dy peo di nai ??

Please Kavita G aina Sawala da Reply jarur 

Deyo....aassi udeeq kran gey .....

Ainjh hi wadia wadia likhdy ravo.. .Thnks


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Dear kavita G update tey bht wadia c per tusi


Jaldi jaldi wich sb kujh mix kr dita. .. Ranno ty

Dipu wich jo kujh hoya oh khulasa tusi krna c 

Us ny potli box kidda lia ranno tun .??

Satta ty Dipu tha shop ty kiu bethy c tey ramjot

Kithy c ??

Karan ty ramneek wich ki hoya c ? 

Dipu chh aina hosla kidda aa gia jis di awaz

Ramanjot aggy nikaldi nai oh kidda mla naal

Ty jassi naal Gussy hoya ?? Shakal tey badli c

Dipu di per karan tey ramneek ny pehaneya nai

Awaz tuu k aye awaz unha dy peo di nai ??

Please Kavita G aina Sawala da Reply jarur 

Deyo....aassi udeeq kran gey .....

Ainjh hi wadia wadia likhdy ravo.. .Thnks
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Kavita G Jidan tusi preet tey jittu da mahol bana c odda

Da ranno ty Dipu wich v kujh masala laona c.. Dipu ny 

Ranno nuu sukki jaan nai ditta sawad b poora ditta tey

Kavita G tusi hun sanno sukky ty naal tarkhaoo.

Koi mirch masala v laoo tayoo rang jamuu gaa horr
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Haa gal tan Irfan bhra d thik hai, Kavita ji.
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Story a v niri agg a fudi mari te story pddi iko gl a
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yar hun ta bas ik hot update da intzar hai... te memu nai lagda jaldi milugi....... baki kavita ji menu wrong prove kr deo....
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(22-01-2019, 07:42 PM)Hot_irfan Wrote: Dear kavita G update tey bht wadia c per tusi


Jaldi jaldi wich sb kujh mix kr dita. .. Ranno ty

Dipu wich jo kujh hoya oh khulasa tusi krna c 

Us ny potli box kidda lia ranno tun .??

Satta ty Dipu tha shop ty kiu bethy c tey ramjot

Kithy c ??

Karan ty ramneek wich ki hoya c ? 

Dipu chh aina hosla kidda aa gia jis di awaz

Ramanjot aggy nikaldi nai oh kidda mla naal

Ty jassi naal Gussy hoya ?? Shakal tey badli c

Dipu di per karan tey ramneek ny pehaneya nai

Awaz tuu k aye awaz unha dy peo di nai ??

Please Kavita G aina Sawala da Reply jarur 

Deyo....aassi udeeq kran gey .....

Ainjh hi wadia wadia likhdy ravo.. .Thnks
 Tuhade swaal jayaj ne...mere dimag ch v ehi swaal ne...par writer link krn ge stroy nu...sabar rakho...
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Krwado kuj sarpanchni da hehe waiting..
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Aj jo b sehar hoyea usney debu nu bechain tey preshaan kr ditta ..samj nyi aa rahi c kyoun .. ramanjot us naal ena mada kr rahi a .. jindgi ujad k rakh ditti usdi....  fer b ramneek nu dukhi vekh usnu ena gussa kyoun aa gya .. usnu tan khush hona chahida c .
Nyi nyi  khush kyoun ...  plang tey beitha beitha burburaya debu .. es ch ramneek da ki kasoor usnu ki pta usdi mummy ki.. ramneek b tan usnu kehar Singh  samaj rahi c... 
 Kayi salan baad vekhea c ramneek nu haan kyi saaln baad ..usdi bhain navjot di saheli c .. andi hundi c unha dey ghar navjot nu milan..bdi chulbuli pr sau pyari jehi kudi .. usnu b tan veer ji kehndi hundi c .. shyad haan shyad esi lyi usnu dukhi vekh jassi dey thappd maar ho gya ..enj lagea eh sab ramneek nal nyi usdi bhain navjot nal hoyea .

J jassi ney gussey ch sehar ramneek nu tang kitta.. sochdey sochdey bechain ho utheya debu .. o bechari ..pind kyoun nyi lay k aye usnu .. uthey o ekeli.. kuch sochdey hoye burburaya debu.  karan b uskol a tey satta b uthey e a edn kidan jassi ramneek nu hun tang karu..  haan haan nyi krda eni himmat jassi .. ek lamba sah lay apney aap nu dilasa dinda  debu chatt wal vekhn lga.




Ghar waps aa tan  gyi ramanjot pr dil dimag usda ramneek wal e c .... jassi ney hath chukeya ramneek tey .. es  gal ney usnu hila k e rakh ditta....usdi fulln wargi dhee  tey hath chukeya.. dand peesdi kamrey ch edr udr ghumn lgi .. galat kitta jassi ney .. tey mein jassi nu kuch nyi keha .. goli kyoun nyi mari usnu .. mere nalo tan changa debu niklya jis ney usdey thapd tan maar ditta o b mla dey samney .. kamrey ch turdi turdi ruk bahar wal vekhn lgi ...

Bechain ho plang tey beith chatt wal vekhdi dey gussey ch sah tez hon lgey  .. sara kasur mera e a kyoun apni dhee nu mla dey mundey nal viah.. ek baar b nyi sochea ..jad k kayea ney keha b c  mla dey mundey barey ..uff apna sar fad jhatka dindi plang ton uth khadi .mein sochdi c  meri dhee  apney ghar khush a pr usda gharwala  duji jnani rakhi beitha tey ramneek ney ek baar b nyi menu daseya.. ena wada dukh apney dil andr lukoyi mere samney hasdi muskurandi rahi .. bechari ...
Jiven jiven o ramneek barey sochdi usdi bechaini wadh di jandi .. akhir ghabra k usney bholi nu awaz mari ..

 'Hanji sardarni ji kuch chahida'  kamrey ch preshaan ho edr udr  ghumdi ramanjot wal vekhdi holi jehi boli bholi

 'Haan ..' bholi wal vekh kuch sochdi hoyi ramanjot boli'  meij tey kursi ethey lay k aa..'
 'Ji sardarni ji ..' samj gyi bholi kyoun sardarni mej tey kursi uthey rakhwa rahi a ..' holi jehi boli'  naal ki bnawa ...'
 'Jo marji bna ..' kursi tey beithdi ramanjot boli'  pr jaldi karin ..'
 'Ji sardarni ..' ramanjot dey samney khadi bholi boli'  hor kuch ..'
' almari ton bottle kad  tey gilass dey ja ..' bechain hoyi ramanjot  boli'  khiyal rakhin koi andr na awey ..'
Almari ton bottle kad mez utey rakh kahli kahli ch bahar nu jandi sochan ch pay gyi bholi aj eney dinna baad sardarni sharaab ..dil dar nal kamb uthea pta c usnu sharaab pee sardarni nu hosh nyi rehndi fer gussey ch ohhh...'

 'Tusi sharaab'  hairaan hoyea debu kamrey andr aanda aanda buhey tey ruk ramanjot wal vekhda bolea... ajeev c uslyi kursi tey beithi ramanjot. . samney mez tey sharab di bottle .. hath ch ada gilass sharab nal bhareya thali ch bhunneya murga ...'
 'Haan kyoun  'sar chuk debu wal vekh ishara kardi boli'  aa beith peonga tun ..'
 'Nyi  mein nyi peenda .. 'khada khada e bolea debu nashey ch dubiyan ramanjot dean akhn . .lal surakh hoyea munh larkharndi awaz adi bottle khali  vekh samjn ch der nyi lgi kafi pee chuki a  ramanjot
 'Nyi peenda tan  na sahi  'nashey dey sarur ch hasdi hath da ishara krdi boli ramanjot'  aa beith tan sahi' 
 'Nyi mein chalda tusi aram karo'  bahr nu nikln lyi pair putda debu bolea 
 'Kyoun ...'gilass chuk eko ghut ch khali kardi ramanjot debu wal vekhdi boli'  ranno ney anna fudi marwaan' 
'Nyi'  munh e khulla reh gya debu da ramanjot dey munh ton eh sun hairaan hoyea bolea' nyi nyi rat ho chuki a tusi aram kro' 
 'Aa beith fer' gilas mez tey rakh roabdar awaz ch hukm dindi ramanjot boli'   tere nal gal krni a' 
 'Ji .. 'ek dum ghabra k kursi tey beith debu usdean akhn ch vekhda bolea'  tusi hor na peevo tuhanu chad gyi'  
 'Chad gyi... chup..'  apney  munh tey ungl rakh debu wal vekhdi boli'  tun eh das..'
 'Ji  'gaur nal ramanjot wal vekhda debu apney aap tey e gussey hunda sochn lga kyoun aya o us kol es velley..
 'Mein tere nal ena mada kita.. kr rahi haan'  larkharndi awaz ch debu wal vekhdi ramanjot boli  'fer b tun sadey lyi ena changa  .. tun jassi nu thapdd..'
 'Koi kisi nal mada nyi krda'  ek lamba sah lenda debu nashey ch chur kursi tey beithi ramanjot wal vekhda bolea  'jo krda rab krda' 
 'Fer b ..' apney kambdey hathn nal gilas ch sharb pandi ramanjot boli'  tenu ena dukh ditta jeoundey ji  mareya sabit kr tenu teri vohti .. ki naa a usda  haan ..  'larkharndi awaz ch boli ramanjot' preet usnu tere ton dur kr ditta. . teria khushia nu lut lya ..'
 'Hun ki keh sakda jo rab nu manjoor'  kuch der chup reh kamrey ch edr udr vekhda bolea debu
 'Koi rab nu manjoor nyi .. 'larkharndi awaz ch kadakdi hoyi boli  ramanjot' tun kehnda c milna preet nu ..'
 'Haan keha c usdin'  holi jehi bolea debu
 'Chal aa..' kursi ton uth khadi ho ramanjot larkharndi  hoyi boli  'chal aa usnj chuk lya andey haan  fer  rakhin ethey apney kol ..'
 'Nyi nyi ek dum bolea debu .. edan da kuch nyi .. khush hay o uthey .. eni muskil nal o bechari sab bhul mud hassan khedn lgi.. nyi hun dobara usdean khushia nu ..
 'Hye kina changa a tun .mud kursi tey beithdi ramanjot burburayi'  tey ek o kanjr kehar singh c.. hramda lokan dean runna tey akh rakhda. ..' 
 'Tuhanu hun so jana chahida ..' ramanjot di halat vekh debu kuch sochda hoyea bolea
 'Kyoun tun ranno di fudi marn jana..' akhn chuk debu wal vekhdi  nashey ch uchi uchi hasdi boli ramanjot'  ja ja lutt najarey ... dey kutti nu  apna lun .. luchi kehar dey bhulekhey jwan mundey ton chud najarey lutdi pyi a..'
Dil dhark k munh ch e aa gya debu da ramanjot nu edan boldi gallan kad di sun ...samj gya hosh ch nyi a ohh ...
 'Ek gal das' gilas chuk debu wal vekhdi boli ramanjot'  sachin tera kehar singh ton lamba tey motta a 
 'Ji matlab'.... jan halk tey aa atki debu di eh ki puchdi pyi a ramanjot
 'Apey tan tun daseya c tera kehar ton 
 'Nashey ch dubdi tedi akh naal debu wal vekhdi hasdi hoyi ramanjot boli...Mein kad  ' hadbda k kahli kahli ch ramanjot ton akhan churanda bolea debu
 'Ohhh o..o.. galti lag gyi'  nashey ch kamli hoyi sarur ch dubea adh khulia akhn nal debu wal vekhdi boli'  nyi tun nyi ranno ney keha c tenu k tera kehar nalo wada tey motta a ..'
Kuch na bolea  debu kamrey rukna tey beithna muskil ho gya  
 'Hye..' ek lamba sah lay hauka lendi apna hath dikha ishara krdi  boli ramanjot'  kehar da eda lamba tey motta c hye  tera uston b lamba ..'
 'Tuhanu hor nyi peeni chahidi ..'gal badlda  ramanjot wal vekh debu kamrey ch edr udr vekhda bolea
 'Chal menu ki wadda k chotta'  nashey ch jhuldi gilass mej tey rakhdi burburayi ramanjot'  pr ek kam tun bda changa kitta jehrey ranno ton kehar singh dey sarey kagaj  waps lay lye ...'
 'Ji .. 'gal mukanda debu bolea' vohat jyada pee lyi a tusi.. hun aram karo ..'
 'Tun menu hukam dey riha  'ek dum kadakdi larkharandi awaz ch debu nu ghurdi hoyi burburayi ramanjot
 'Nyi nyi mere kehn da matlab c rat kafi ho chuki a tey tusi thori jyada pee lyi a'  ramanjot di halat vekh kahli kahli ch usnu samjan di kosis karda  bolea debu    'hun tuhanu so janna chahida ...'
 'Oh hh  rat  ' kamrey ch jagdey lattu wal vekh fer  debu wal vekhdi hasdi hoyi boli ramanjot' ki din tey ki raat mere lyi  sab ek brabr a ..'Haan teria rattan kharb kr dittia mein ..'
Koi na ji jo rab nu manjur ..' kursi ton uth khada hunda debu bolea
 'Kanjra ena changa  na bn ..' debu nu upr ton lay haithn tak vekh kuch sochdi hoyi ramanjot uchi awaaz ch boli'  nee bholi..'
Agley e pal andr bhaji bhaji ayi bholi kahli kahli ch boli'  hanji sardarni ji kuch chahida'  
 'Haan chahida...  'upr ton lay k haithan tak  bholi nu vekh ramanjot  hasdi hoyi debu wal vekhdi boli  'teri fudi chahidi a mere gharwaley nu .'
 'Ji mein ...'ek dum ghabra k debu wal vekh do kadm pichey nu hundi hki bki reh gyi bholi
 'Ki hoyea ..' bholi wal vekhdi ramanjot gilas chuk ghut bhardi  boli   'puch tan edan rahi a jidan kehar ton pehlan kadi marwayi na hovey ..'
Rang ud gya bholi da haki bki kadi debu wal vekhdi  kadi ramanjot wal ..
 'Sochdi ki a chal khol salwaar'  kadak awaz ch bholi wal vekhdi ramanjot ghurdi hoyi boli'   eney mahiniya baad bahrely mulk ton ayea tera sadar ..'
 'Ethey..' kambdi awaz  ch debu wal vekh bholi apni salwar dey naley nu hath pandi ghabra k us wal vekhdi boli

 'Nyi nyi tun ja bholi ..' bholi nu salwar da nala kholdi vekh debu kahli kahli ch bolea'  teri sardarni nu lagda sharrb chad gyi a ..'
 'Kitey nyi jana tun bholi ethey e ruk'  kadakdi awaz ch gilass mej tey rakh  debu wal vekh bholi nu ghurdi hoyi boli ramanjot ' jaldi kr..'
 'Pagal a tun bholi' ek dum hadbda k bholi wal vekhda bolea debu.. pairan ch digi salwar ...nangia kambdean bholi dean  lattan ...





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