Adultery RANGIN HAVELI

[Piyush64]

Bhai update kb ayega

[Introvert]

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[Real man]

Awesome update
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[Rahul 26]

Update chahiye

[Jaan]

Intezaar...!

[sharadsinghanna]

जब कहानी लिखना ही नहीं है तो शुरू क्यों करते हो

[Vicky007]

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[admin123]

 plz update bro

[Rumana]

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[Mr. Spicy]

shandar aur bahut h mast kahaani

[Ghosthunter]

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[Sam Fisher]

Waiting bro... Last update was too good. Ab Archana ki story suru hogi

[Starkmen]

PART - 10

Archana ne Yash ko bataya ki agle hafte uski Best Friend Rita ki Goud-bharai hai.. Aur usne dono ko invite kiya hai.. Par Yash ne bataya ki use to agle hafte ek bahut badi business tour pe jana hai.. Isliye wo to nahi aa sakta.. Archana mayush ho gayi.


Yash apne business kaam me itna ulaj gaya ki wo Archana ko pura waqt bhi nahi de pata tha.. Archana andar hi andar Kaam vasna ki aag me jalti rahi.


Ek hafta gujar gaya.. Archana ne apna saman pack kar liya tha.. Yash to business tour pe janewala tha.. wo bhi pure ek hafte tak.. isliye uska saman thoda jyada tha.


Archana - '' Yash tum bhi chalo na sath.. Ek din ki hi to baat hai.. Phir tum vaha se sidha chale jana. ''


Yash - '' Aisa nahi ho sakta baby.. Muje kal subah hi nikal na padega. ''


Archana - '' Itni jaldi kyo?.. Hum to parso nikalnewale hai naa.!.''


Yash - '' Sorry tume batana bhul gaya par parso ko sari flights book hai isliye muje ek din pehle hi nikal na padega. ''


Archana - '' To mein kaise jaugi ? ''


Yash (sochte huve) - '' haa ye bhi hai.. Ek kaam karte hai.. Mein Karimchacha ko bol deta hu.. Wo tume le jayege. ''


Archana - '' Kya.!. Karimchacha?.. Par wo kaise aa sakte hai? ''


Yash - '' kyo?.. Isme kya problem hai ?.. Karimchacha to apne hai.. To unke sath jane me kya harz.!. Bhul gayi hamare honeymoon pe vahi to airport tak chhodne aaye the. ''


Archana - '' wo sab to thik hai par.. Akele unke sath jana.. ''


Yash - '' offfhhoo.. Tum bhi na bahut sochti ho.. Karimchacha acche bharose ke aadmi hai.. Tum befikar jao.. Agar kisi chij ki jarurat ho to bejijak bol dena.. Wo sab kaam kar dege. 


Archana - '' Thik hai.. Jaisa tum thik samjo. ''


Yash - '' Good girl..'' bolte huve Yash ne Archana ko banho me bhar liya aur kiss karne laga.. Archana kasmasane lagi.


Archana - '' Chhodo naa.. Kya kar rahe ho.. ''


Yash - '' Are Pyaar kar raha hu apni janeman ko.. Ab to pure hafte tak akele rehna padega.. To kyo naa aaj raat thoda maja karlu. ''

Archana kuch boli nahi.. Chupchap Yash ka sath dene lagi.. Uss bichari ko to ab iski aadat si pad gayi thi.. Aur janti thi ki Yash ka pyaar kabhi bhi uski Pyass nahi buja payega.. Yash pagalo ki tarah uske hotho ki laali chus raha tha aur namardangi bhare dhakke laga raha tha.


Niyati ye najara dekh  jor jor se Yash pe hasne lagi.
(Ha.ha.ha.ha.ha.. Chus le lalla.. Chus le.. Aaj jitna dil chahe utna chusle.. Kyoki bahut hi jald inn Madhur Hotho ka Raspan koi aur karnewala hai.. Apne hotho ko uske hotho se milake uspe apna adhikar siddh karnewala hai.. Kale Khurdure hi sahi Par teri aurat ki pyass buja dene wale.. Yun samaj teri hasin raate ab kisi aur ke naam honewali hai.)





Dusre din Yash nikal gaya.. Jate jate Yash ne Ghar me sab ko bata diya ki Archana ko uski dost ki yaha Goud-bharai ki Rashm me jana hai..  Isliye Karim usko saher uski dost ke vaha le jayega.. Karim Haweli ka vafadar naukar tha isliye kisi ne apati nahi jatayi.. Yash ne Karim ko bhi ye baat bata di.. Karim ye baat sunke bahut khush huva aur Yash ko bola ki wo jara bhi fikra na kare.. Wo ChotiMalkin ko bade acche se le jayega.


Iddhar kamre me Archana apna bacha kucha saman pack kari thi.. Kal usko Karimchacha ke sath akele jana hai Ye baat soch kar use andar hi andar kuch kuch ho raha tha.. Wo sara kaam complete karke soyi par nind nahi aayi.. use uss Raat ki ghatna yaad aa gayi jab usne chupke se Karimchacha ka Musaldar Lund dekha tha.


Aahhhhh.. Kitna bada tha wo... Ssssssss..


Archana karvate badalne lagi.. Bahut try ki sone ki par Karimchacha ka lund use sone nahi de raha tha.. Wo beth gayi.. Kamre me ghumne lagi.. Par kuch adar nahi huva.. Archana ne socha kyo naa thoda sa naha le sayad nind aa jaye.


Wo bathroom me chali gayi.. Bathtub ka shower on karke wo usme utar gayi.. Par kehte hai naa ki aag ko jyada bhadkane ka kaam hawa karti hai thik vaise hi bathtub ka thanda pani uski kaamagni ko shant karne ke bajaye use aur bhadka diya.


Archana ne apni aankhe bandh karli.. Karimchacha ka Lund ek baar phir uski bandh aankho ke samne tairne laga.. Wo pani ke andar hi garm hone lagi.. Uska hath apne ek boobs pe chala gaya aur use masalne lagi.. Uski chut me kuch kuch hone laga.. Wo apni tango ko apas me ghisne lagi.. Aise hi aise uska hath apni chut pe chala gay aur wo use ragadne lagi.





Aahahhhhh..sssssss.. Mithi siskariya bathroom me gunjne lagi.. Archana khud ko mastrubate karne lagi.. Apni chut ko jor jor se rub karne lagi.. Use bahut maja aane laga.. saas tej chalne lagi.. Apne najuk hotho ko chabane lagi.. Aur jab uski chut ne pani choda to wo jor se chikh padi.


Aaahhhhh... FUCK ME.... 


Wo nidhal ho gayi.. Aur kuch der aise hi padi rahi.. Pani me uska Virya tairne laga.. Par wo santust nahi huvi.. Wo bichari mayush ho gayi.. Kaas agar Yash ka aisa hota to yun bathtub me khud ko shant na karna padta.


Archana nahake gown pehnke so gayi.. Kal subah usko jaldi nikalna tha.. Par wo ye nahi janti thi ki kal ki subah uski jindgi me ek naya ujala lanewali thi.


Dusre din subah jaldi uth nahake fresh hoke kamre me mast taiyar hone lagi.. Ek behad hi khubsurat saree nikali aur pahenne lagi.. Half sleeve blouse.. Gale me sone kaa haar.. Hatho me chudiya.. Kano me jumke.. Mathe pe tika.. Aankho me kajal.. Hotho pe lipstic.


Khud ko jab aayne me dekha to Kayamat lag rahi thi.. Upar se uski bhari bhari chatiya saree me se bhi apna wajood dikha rahi thi.. Archana sharma gayi.


Taiyar hoke wo niche chali gayi.. Uske saas sasur tab tak jaag chuke the aur Shanta bhi aa chuki thi.. Khane ke table pe sabne eksath nasta kiya.. Shanta upar gayi aur Archana ka sara saman leke niche aa gayi. 


Archana jane ko taiyar thi.. Usne apne saas sasur ke pair chuke ashirwad liye aur bahar chal di.. Karim vaha car leke khada uski raah dekh raha tha.. Jaise hi usne Archana ko dekha wo ektas dekhta hi reh gaya.. Aaahhhhh... Kitni khoobsurat lag rahi thi wo mano kisi Jannat ki noor.. Archana ne bhi Karim ki aur dekha.. Karim bhi aaj acche kapdo me tha.. Usne ek badami rang ka kurta aur paijama pehna huva tha.. Archana ne uski aur dekha aur ek pyari si smile di.. Karim ne bhi vahi kiya.





Shanta ne sara saman dikky me rakh diya.. Bhanupratap ne Karim ko sambhal kar jane ko kaha.. Aur phir wo dono safar pe nikal pade.


Karim gadi badi aram se chala raha tha.. Archana piche ki sit pe chupchap bethi thi.. Kabhi mobile dekhti to kabhi bahar ka najara.. Par andar andar kuch kuch ho raha tha.. Dono hi chup chap bethe the.. Dono me se koi baat nahi karta tha..  bich bich me Karim mirror se usko dekhta.. Archana bhi kabhi use dekhti aur najare ghuma leti.. Wo bahut hi sharma rahi thi.. Karib 1.30 ghanta bit gaya.. Abhi saher pahuchne me bahut der thi.. Archana ab thodi bore hone lagi.. Usne socha kyo na thodi si baat chit ki jaye.. Thoda time spend ho jayega.


Archana - '' ammm.. Karimchacha.. Aur kitna waqt lagega saher pahuchne me. ''


Karim - '' abhi karib 2 ghante to lag hi jayege choti malkin.. Agar kuch kaam ho to batayiye. ''

Archana - '' Are nahi nahi.. Aap chalate rahiye.. ''

Kuch der dono aise hi chup rahe.. Archana ne vapas baat shuru ki.


Archana - '' Karimchacha.. Agar aitraaz na ho to ek baat puchu?. '' 


Karim - '' Ha.. Ha.. Puchiye na Choti Malkin.. ''


Archana - '' Aap Haweli me kitne barso se kaam kar rahe hai.?. ''


Karim - '' Bachpan se choti malkin.. Mere abba huzur bhi isi haweli me kaam karte the. ''


Archana - '' kya aap pehle se hi iss haweli me reh rahe hai? ''


Karim - '' Nahi choti malkin.. Pehle mere baap dada ka gaon me ek bahut bada Ghar bhi tha.. Magar barso pehle sukha padne ki vajah se ghar baar sab bik gaya.. Mere Maa to bachpan me hi ,.' ko pyaari ho chuki thi.. Mere abba huzur akele the meri dekhbhaal ke liye.. Koi ashra na tha.. Phir aapke dada sasur yani bade malik ke pitaji ne hame Haweli me rehne ka ashra diya.. Tab se hum vahi reh rahe hai.. Aur haweli ki dekhbhal kar rahe hai.. Pehle mere abba huzur aur ab mein. ''


Karim bich bich me baat karte karte shishe me Archana ki khoobsurati ko nihar leta.. Archana ka sundar yovan usko ghayal kar raha tha.. Jab bhi wo use dekhta uske paijame me kuch kuch hone lagta.. Kabhi usko lagta ki ye galat hai.. Archana uski beti ki umra ki hai.. Par uski Dahekti kaya Karim ke Mardane badan me Vasna ka sanchar karne lagti.. Akhir tha to wo ek Mard hi.


Archana - '' kya aapka koi aur pariwaar nahi hai?. ''


Karim - '' Nahi Choti Malkin.. Sirf mein aur mere abba huzur do hi the.. Mere abba ki sari jindgi to meri aur iss haweli ki dekhbhal me chali gayi.. Jab me 28 saal ka tha tab wo bhi chal base.. Tabse mein akele hi unki jagah iss haweli ki seva karta chala aa raha hu. ''


Archana - '' To kya aapne ab tak kisi se Saadi nahi ki?. ''


Karim (thoda haste huve) - '' Saadi aur mein?. Muj jaise Garib se kon saadi karta choti malkin..! Naukar hu.. Na khud ka Ghar na koi thikana.. Kon mere jaise ka hath thamta.. muje apnata.?. ''


Archana ko bahut dukh huva Karim ki baat sunke.. Use Karim se hamdardi hone lagi.. Par tabhi achanak uske andar se ek awaj nikal aayi.


'''' MEIN APNAUGI KARIMCHACHA APKO.. MEIN APNAUGI.. MEIN THAMUGI AAPKA HATH.. SARI JINDGI.. SARI UMRA.. AAP HI KI BANKE RAHUGI.!. ''''


Phir achanak Wo hosh me aa gayi.. Ek pal to wo soch me pad gayi ki ye kaisa khayal aa gaya mere jahen me.. Mein Aur Karimchacha ke sath.?. Nahi nahi.. Aisa nahi ho sakta.. Sayad galti se aisa khayal aa gaya mere dimag me.. Muje aisa nahi sochna chahiye.. Usne phir aage pucha.


Archana - '' Bada dukh huva ye sunke Karimchacha. ''


Karim - '' Isme dukh ki kya baat Choti Malkin.!. Sayad meri takdir me yahi likha tha. ''

[Starkmen]

Archana 2 minute chup rahi.. Phir vapas boli.


Archana - '' Bura naa mane to ek baat puchu Karimchacha?. ''


Karim - '' Puchiye naa Choti Malkin. ''


Archana - '' Kyaa... Kabhi aapka Mann nahi karta.? ''


Karim (hairani se) - '' Kis chij ka Choti Malkin? ''

Archana apne Mangalsutra ko sehlate huve thoda khulke boli - '' KISI AURAT KAA... Usek Sath Ka... ''


Karim ko ye thoda ajib laga par wo samaj gaya ki Archana kya kehna chahti hai. '


Karim - '' Abb iss umra me ye sab soch ke kya fayda choti malkin..!. Sayad wo sukh iss jamn me mere nasib me nahi. ''


Archana mann hi mann ( to phir uss din aapka wo kiski yaad me apna josh dikhaye khada tha Karimchacha..? Aap bhali hi naa bataye Par mein itna to samaj hi chuki hu ki meri tarah aap bhi usi Aag me jal rahe hai.)


Saher aane tak dono me koi baat nahi huvi.. Archana ne Karim ko Rita ka address diya aur wo log sidha vaha pahuche.


Rita ka ek bahut bada Bunglow tha.. Archana andar gayi.. Bahut sare mehmaan aye huve the.. Tabhi Rita apne kamre se niche aayi aur usne Archana ko dekha.. Wo khushi se jum uthi aur Archana ke pass jake use gale laga diya.


Rita - '' Ohh.!. Archana.. Akhir tum aa hi gayi.. Kab se teri raah dekh rahi thi.. Tuje dekh ke bahut accha laga. ''


Archana - '' Muje bhi Rita.. Kitna waqt bit gaya tujse mile.. Vaise badi chupi rustom nikli tu.. Itni badi khushi ki baat tune mujse chupayi.. Par badi acchi lag rahi hai.. Muje sach me bahut khushi huvi. ''


Rita - '' Thanks dear.. Par tu akeli kyo aayi?.. Jiju nahi aaye?. ''


Archana - '' Are unhe business ke kaam se bahar jana pada.. Isliye mein aayi. ''


Rita - '' Matlab tu gaon se yaha tak akeli aayi?. ''

Archana - '' Akeli kaha.!. Mein to Karimchacha ke sath aayi. ''


Rita - '' Wo kon hai?. ''


Archana - '' wo hamari haweli ke Nauk..( archana ko laga itne bhale bujurg aadmi ko naukar kehna thik nahi hoga).. Wo hamari haweli ki dekhbhaal karte hai.. Haweli ke hi sadasya hai. ''


Rita - '' Accha.. Accha.. Abhi tu thak gayi hogi.. Thoda aaram karle.. Shaam ko bahut bada function hai ghar me.. Tab tak mein Karimchacha ke rehne ka bandobast bhi karti hu. ''


Rita ne Archana ko Guestroom me aaram karne bhej diya.. Aur Karimchacha ke liye bahar outhouse me rehne ka bandobast kar diya.. Karim bhi thaka huva tha isliye wo bhi thoda fresh hoke so gaya.


Shaam ko Rita ke Bunglow pe bahut bada function organise kiya tha.. Archana mast taiyar hoke niche aayi.. Rita ne apne pariwar aur dosto se use milvaya.. Rashm phir shuru huvi.. Sab log enjoy kar rahe the.. Nach Gaana.. Khana pina.. Goad bharai.. Etc.




Archana ne bhi enjoy kiya.. Karim bhi khana khake thodi der car ki dekhbhal ke liye chala gaya.. Jab sab log batto me vyast the tab Archana bahar sofe pe akeli bethi apne khayalo me khoyi huvi thi.. Tabhi Rita uske pass aayi.


Rita - '' Yaha akeli kya kar rahi ho Archana.!. Andar chalo. ''


Archana - '' Mein badls thodi si taji hawa khane bahar chali aayi.. Tum jao mein thodi der yahi thik hu. ''


Rita - '' Kya baat hai Archana.. Tum kuch pareshan si lag rahi ho.. ''


Archana - '' Nahi to.. Aisi koi baat nahi.. ''


Rita uske pass beth gayi.. Archana thodi sahem si gayi.


Rita - '' Archana mein tumari best friend hu.. Tuje barso se janti hu.. Jarur koi baat hai jo tum mujse chupa rahi ho.. Batao muje Archana.. Tume meri Kasam. ''


Archana ka chehre fika pad gaya.. Uske nain bhari ho gaye aur palke bhigi.. Wo Rita se apne dil ki baat batayi.


Archana - '' Rita mein soch rahi thi ki kya kabhi meri kismat me bhi wo din aayege jab meri Goad Bharai bhi isi tarah hogi.!.''


Rita - '' Lo kar lo baat.. Itni si baat ke liye tum itna pareshan ho rahi thi.. Ek baar Jiju ko bol do to Bahut jald tumari kokh bhi haribhari ho jayegi..'' Rita hasne lagi.


Par Archana ki aankho se aasu behne lage.. Rita ne jab ye dekha to wo samaj gayi ki jarur koi badi baat hai.. Usne Archana ka hath apne hatho me le liya.. Archana ke aankho se dharaye behne lagi.


Rita - '' Kya huva Archana..?. Tum roo kyo rahi ho?. ''


Archana kuch bol nahi payi.. Wo khadi huvi aur vaha se apne kamre me chali gayi.. Rita ko bahut ascharya huva par wo apni dost ko iss halat me nahi dekh sakti thi.. Jab Raat ko sare mehmaan chale gaye uske baad wo Archana ke kamre me aayi.. Archana aankhe bandh kiye bed pe leti huvi thi.. Rita uske pass beth gayi aur use jagaya.


Archana - '' Are Rita tum?.. Abhi tak soyi nahi kya?. ''


Rita - '' Meri sabse acchi dost jaag rahi ho to mein kaise soo sakti hu.''


Archana halka muskurayi.. Rita ne uske gaalo ko pyaar se sehlate huve pucha


Rita - '' Kya baat hai Archana.. Tum vaha se chali kyo aayi.?.. Kya baat hai jo tume andar hi andar khaye jaa rahi hai.. Aisa kon sa Raaz hai jo tum muje nahi bata rahi.. Please batao Archana.. Tume hamari dosti ki kasam.. Please muje batao. ''


Itna kehte hi Archana Rita ko jor se chipak gayi aur fut fut ke rone lagi.. Rita uski pith ko sehlane lagi aur puchne lagi kya baat hai.





Archana bilkati huvi boli - '' Mein kabhi MAA nahi Ban sakugi Rita.. Mein kabhi MAA nahi ban sakugi. '' aur vapas joro se rone lagi.


Rita uske ye sabd sunke hairan ho gayi - '' Kyaaaa?.. Ye kya keh rahi ho tum ?. ''


Archana - '' Jo tu sunn rahi hai.. Mere sath bahut bada dhokha huva hai Rita.. Bahut bada dhokha. ''


Rita - '' Dhokha?.. Kaisa dhokha?.. Kisne kiya dhokha..? Muje saaf saaf bata.. Dekh Archana aise rone se kuch nahi hoga.. Muje khul ke bata sacchai kya hai?. ''


Archana ne khud ko thoda shant kiya par aanshu ab bhi chalak rahe the.. Phir bhi usne himmat juta ke kaha.


Archana - '' YASH.. Usne muje bahut bada dhokha diya hai.''


Rita - '' What.?. Ye tu kya keh rahi hai.?. Jiju ne tuje dhokha diya?. ''


Archana - '' Haa.. Usne muje dhokha diya hai.. Bahut bada dhokha.. Mere pyaar ka majak banaya hai.. Mere Armano ko kuchla hai usne. '' Archana vapas rone lagi.


Rita - '' Archana.. Archana.. Dekh.. Tu kya keh rahi exactly mein kuch nahi paa rahi.. Saaf saaf bata Jiju ne tuje kya dhokha diya hai?. ''


Archana - '' Tu Janna chahti hai naa to sunn.. ''


Archana ne Rita ko sari sacchai bayan ki.. Ab tak jo jo uske sath huva wo sari baat usko batayi.. Rita ko to yakin nahi huva ki uski dost ki jindgi me itni badi uthal puthal mach chuki hai.. Uske aankho me bhi aanshu aa gaye.. Sari sacchai batane ke baad Archana uske kandhe pe sir rakhke fut fut ke rone lagi.. Rita uske mathe ko sehlane lagi aur use jaise taise shant kiya.


Archana - '' Mein kya karu Rita?.. Mein kya karu?.. Mein bahut akeli ho gayi hu.. Bahut akeli. ''


Rita - '' Nahi Meri Sakhi nahi.. Tu akeli nahi hai.. Kabhi nahi.. Mein tere sath hu.. Hamesha tere sath hu..(Rita ne uske aanshuo ko pochte huve kaha).. Abhi tu bahut thak gayi hai.. Thoda aaram karle.. Mein tujse kal baat karti hu.. Tab tak ke liye apne dil se ye sare boj nikal de. ''


Rita ne Archana ko pyaar se sula diya.. Aur apne kamre ki aur chal di.. Ghar ke sare log soo chuke the.. Rita dhire dhire apne kamre ki aur jaa rahi thi ki sidiyo ke pass koi khada tha jise dekh wo ruk gayi aur uski aur dekh muskurayi.


Ek 65 saal ka buddha aadmi jiska naam BIRJU tha.. Jo iss Ghar ka purana naukar tha wo apne hath me ek Gulab ka phool liye vaha khada tha.. Rita ko aate dekh wo muskuraya.


Rita uske karib chali gayi.. Birju ne use Gulab ka phool diya aur bola.


Birju - '' Aaj ke iss khushi ke mauke par meri taraf se ye chota sa taufa bahurani. ''


Rita - '' Sukriya Birjuchacha.. Par aapne taufa dene me itni deri kyo ki?. ''


Birju - '' Sach kahu to muje dene me sankoch ho raha tha.. Aaj ke din kitne bade bade ek se ek badhiya taufe mile aapko.. Uske badle me ye chota sa taufa to kuch bhi nahi.. Mein Garib aapko iske alawa aur kuch de bhi nahi sakta. ''


Rita uske aur karib aa gayi aur usse sat gayi.. Birju uski saaso ko mehsus karne laga.. Rita ne apna chehra aage kiya aur Birju ke hotho pe ek lambi si kiss kardi.


Rita - '' Aapne muje jo Taufa diya hai uski visat me ye taufe to kuch bhi nahi Birjuchacha.. Uske liye mein hamesha aapki aabhari rahugi. ''

Birju uski baato se khush ho gaya aur Rita ke hotho pe apne hoth rakh ke use chumne laga.. Rita bhi uske chumban ka sath dene lagi.. Karib 10 mintute baad wo alag huve.


Rita - '' Ab mein chalti hu kaka.. Muje apni dost ke liye aaj raat bahut kuch sochna hai. ''


Birju samaj nahi paya aur wo apne kamre ki aur chal diya.. Uddhar Rita apne kamre me aayi.. Uska Husband gehri nind me soo raha tha.. Rita dhire se uski bagal me let gayi aur uski aur dekha aur mann hi mann boli.


( Kya har yug me hum Aurato ko hi balidaan dena hoga..?. Kya hamari koi iccha nahi?. aarzoo nahi?. Meri dost aaj bahut badi musibat me hai.. Muje uske liye kuch na kuch to karna hi hoga.. Kyoki ab aisa nahi hoga.. Harbaar ki tarah ab sirf Aurate hi balidaan nahi degi.. Wo bhi jiyegi.. Dil khol ke jiyegi.. Chahe uske liye kuch bhi karna pade.. Kuch bhi. )


Rita ne apni dost ke liye kuch soch liya.. Jise wo kal Archana ke samne rakhnewali thi.. Ab dekhna ye hai ki Archana uss raah pe chalegi ya nahi.





Continuee...

[Chiraunjilal]

Bahut hi umda update hai, par har 2-3 din me ata rhe to hi matlab h kahani ka

[Raj sharma]

Uff kya story hi ...jaldi se chudwao archna ko kreem se

[Shabaz]

Dhasu story he bro.....good writing skills bhai

[Nsingh]

update shaandar hai. next plz jaldi dena?

[Suryahot123]

Excellent writing...
Update kab aayega ye hamesha intajar rehta he..
Aage kya hoga ye sochna padta he har baar. Thoda incomplete lagta he har baar.... Please update more

[Ghosthunter]

Excellent update! Mind blowing and also dick blowing