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#41
Kamal with her sohra Saab.
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#42
Kavita jee lee aoo hun kamal nounn
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#43
(17-01-2019, 10:56 PM)kavitakhullar Wrote: Thrilling  n big update coming soon

Kitthe hai

Nit fiddu kichi jan de
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#44

'Ki haal a seerat ..' jiven e phone milia kamal ney chehkdi hoyi puchea'  tun tan  pammi kol ja k phone e nyi kitta' 
' theek haan bhabhi ..' phone wal vekh hasdi hoyi seerat boli'  time e nyi lga naley fer sochea kyoun phone kr  tang krna deor bhabhi nu ..najarey lutdey honey ..lutt lain '
 'Hye kinni changi a tun' bed nal dho la beithdi kamal hsdfi hoyi boli'  hor ki kr rahi a ..'
' kuch nyi vehli c ..' hssdi hoyi seerat sofey tey aram nal beithdi boli'  gharwala tan mera apni bhabhi  nu thalley napi beitha a  ..mein ki krna..' kuch sochdi hoyi seerat boli  'rishab aya shopping krn apni hon wali vohti nu lay k' 

 'Hye sonal b ayi a   'chehkdi hoyi kamal boli'  karwayi gal
 'Market gye ney satvinder naal'  hall ch rdr udr vekhdi seerat boli ..

 'Jad aavey tan gal karwa ween'   apney wallan di latt ungl ch lapet di  kamal  boli
 'Jarur jarur'  hasdi hoyi seerat kamal nu cherdi boli'  hor daso janda fer pura pura deor da' 
 'puch na purey najarey ney'  angrayi lay   kamrey ch edr udr vekhdi kamal boli
 'Dhiyan nal davinder veerey ton  ' kuch sochdi hoyi seerat boli' kitey  veerey nu shak na pay javey' 
 'Pay Javey ..  'hasdi hoyi kamal boli  'o b tan meri bhain sukhjeet nu  chod da....mein kidan usda bhra suka chad dewan ..'
 'Oye hoye  sadkey jaa wan jatti dey ..' kuch der chup reh sochdi hoyi seerat boli  'fer b changa nyi lgda awen kisey din fadey jayoungey' 
 'Fadey jawangey?  ' boldi boldi hass pyi kamal'  fadey gye..' 
 'Hye rabba'   hairaan ho  hik tey hath rakh sidi ho sofey tey beithdi boli seerat'  ferrrr..
 'Lgey hoye c asin  ' apna hassa rok boli kamal'  uton eh aa gye kamrey ch 
 'Hye rabba fer'  ghabra e gyi seerat 
 'Fer ki gussa tan ana e c a'  lat tey lat rakh aram nal beithdi kamal boli' akhn samney apni vohti nu kisi hor ton chud di vekh' 
 'Oh no ..' pareshan hundi seerat boli' fer tan deepu nu  vohat gussey ..'
 'Nyi usnu tan kuch nyi keha  ' kuch sochdi kamal boli'  par menu . .'
' ohhh..' phone wal vekhdi seerat boli
 ' haan yaar Puch na..' apney patt ghut ahh bhardi kamal boli'   nangi tan mein c e  ...gussey ch  kaudi kr  lya. kehndey jyada e agg lgi a mein thandi krda' 
 'Hye rabba fer'  hun tan seerat dey dil di dharkn b tez ho gyi 
 'Fer ki.. ' boldi boldi uchi uchi hassn lgi kamal'   gussey ch changi rail bnayi meri ...'
 'Ohhh .. deepu ...' kamal nu hasdi sun ek dum boli seerat'  deepu nu tan nyi  kuch keha..'
 ' ehi  keha ruk tun .. vekh k jawin kidan teri bhabhi chaud da mein ..' ahh bhardi kamal boli'  usdey samney e ragaria menu ..'
 'Eh tan galat gal hoyi ..' hairaan hoyi seerat boli  
 'Haan bechara uthey e ruk vekhda riha' kuch soch chetey kr muskurandi hoyi kamal boli' Baad ch mera hassa nikl aya deepu wal vekh ..'
 'O kyoun  ..' kahli kahli ch seerat boli
 'Hor ki ...'hasdi hoyi kamal boli  'usnu lga usdey  veerey ney sanu dona nu kardey hoye  fad lya c ..' 
 'Neley kehndey o tusi lagey hoye c jad davinder veerey ney tuhanu dona nu fadeya..' hairaan hoyi seerat nu samj na ayi ki keh rahi a kamal bhabhi 

 'Aho sun tan sahi ..  'hasdi hasdi kamal boli'Pta ki hoyea  ena nu pta c mere tey deepu barey enha ney e keha c mein vekhna tuhanu deor bhabji nu' 
 'Ki...' ek dum kahli kahli ch cheekdi hoyi seerat boli
 'Aho gal eh hoyi c ..' apni hik tey hath rakh bull tuk phone wal vekhdi kamal boli' eh bahron e vekhu gey... pr andr aa gye tey deepu dey samney e menu..' 
 'Ohhh. ' hun kuch kuch samj kgi seerat nu
' Kehndey Exictment control nyi hoyi'  apney bull ghut lamba sah lendi boli kamal'   tey usdey samney e kaudi kr kr ragar ditta  menu' 

 'Galat gal a ..' kuch sochdi hoyi seerat boli 
 'Ehi kehnda deepu b naraj jeha ho apnry kamrey ch chala gya..' hasdi hoyi kamal phone wal vekhdi boli
 'Ohh...' ena e munh vichon niklya seerat dey 
 'Mein b gussey ho  enha  nu  keha tusi mera deor naraj kr ditta  ' kuch soch hasdi hoyi kamal boli' menu kehndey   mna lay ja k ...'
' gye fer tusi deepu kol'  gaur nal kamal di gal sun seerat boli
 ' aho ..' kuch der chup reh kamal boli' jad mein deepu kol gyi uthey pinki ayi hoyi c ..'
 'Ohhh fer ..' ek dum utsukta wadh gyi preet di pinki da naa sun 
 'Usney b puchea ki gal deepu upset kyoun ..' phone wal vekhdi kamal boli' 
Mein jo hoyea  das ditta ..usney b ehi keha jeth ji ney galt kitta..'
 'Oh fer ..' kuch sochdi hoyi seerat boli'  c tan galat e kitta veerey ney'  
 ' haan yaar'  lamba sah lendi kamal boli'  mein samjaya deepu nu enha nu pta c sadey barey ..kehnda fer b veerey nu mere samney tuhadey naal nyi .. eney nu eh b aa gye kamrey ch . .tey hasdey hoye kehndey tun b kr lay mere samney ..
' davinder veerey ney eh keha'  hairaan hundi seerat boli
' aho'  hasdi hoyi kamal boli'  mein pinki wal vekhea kuch jijhkdi hoyi o b  boli'  mna layo didi tusi apney deor nu uni der mein roti bnandi haan...'
' fer ..' ek dum boli seerat 
 'Fer ki o roti bnan rasoyi wal ch chali gyi'  hasdi hoyi kamal  boli  bdi muskil nal deepu nu samjaya ..'
 'Fer ..' sah aya seerat nu eh sun 
 'Fer ki eh sofey tey beithey  rahey ..tey asin bed tey ..' chehkdi hoyi kamal boli
' matlab  veerey dey  samney e ..' hairan hundi seerat boli
 'Aho .. bda swad aya' bull ghutdi hoyi kamal boli' mein b enha nu dikha dikha chumia lay lay deepu da khada kita..!
 'Veerey ney kuch nyi ..' thori hairan hundi seerat boli
 'Nyi ..akhan fad fad vekh rahey c  jad mein  jeev kad kad  deepu da lun chatdi c  ' hasfi hoyi  kamal apney bulln tey jeev ferdi boli' eney nu pinki b enha lyi roti bna lay k aa gyi 
'Ohhhhh'  hauka jeha lendi seerat boli'  sara swad kharab dita usney ruk k nyi aa dakdi c 
 'Lay o b beith gyi'  hasdi hoyi kamal boli'  roti khandey  dono sanu vekhn lgey ..'
 'Hye  sachin'  hairaan hoyi  seerat boli' o b davinder naal beith tuhanu vekhn lgi ..hye fer .'
 'Fer ki'  hasdi hoyi kamal   bull tukdi boli' kini der vekhdey.. eh b bed  tey sadey kol  aa gye' 
 'Matlab dono ..tuhanu' ' apni hik tey hath rakh kahli kahli ch boli seerat 
 'Haan dono chimbd gye ek  mummey chungey ek fudi chattey'  apni lat tey lat rakh siskdi hoyi kamal boli'  mein b enha da hath ch fad deepu da munh ch lay ruh nal chungea'  

 ' Tey Pinki'  kuch sochdi seerat boli..
 'O oh bhandey chuk rasoyi wal chali gyi'  uchi uchi hasdi hoyi kamal boli ..' pr jaldi e waps aa  kutti sofey tey beithi menu dono bharwa ton chud di vekh swad lendi rahi..  mein e  keha eni dur beithi ki vekh rahi a kol aa k vekh lay'  
 'Ayi fer..'  sah rok seerat boli
 'Aho ..hichkdi sharmandi akhir a gyi bed tey  ..' chat wal vekhdi kamal ney keha  
 'Sachin ..' ek dum chehkdi hoyi boli seerat 
 'Aho ..' kuch sochdi hoyi kamal boli'  jad eh mere upr aye  deepu ney b  holi holi hath fer gram kr  e lyi pinki' 
 'Ohh..' lamba sah lendi seerat boli'  fer ..'
 'Fer ki'  boldi boldi uchi uchi hassn lgi kamal'  deorani jehtani eko bed tey chudeya .. deepu pinki upr tey mein enha dey thalley' 
 'Hye sharmayi jijhki nyi pinki veerey samney deepu nu dindi'  hairaan hundi seerat boli 
 'Jijhkdi b  rahi.. sharma sharma mja b lendi rahi kutti '  hasdi hoyi kamal boli
 'Veerey samney nangi ..' gaur nal kamal di gal sundi boli seerat
 ' aho..' kuch soch hasdi hoyi boli kamal'  mere tey deepu dean najran bacha pura akh matka kardey rahey eh tey pinki ..'
 'Matlab pinki teu davinder veera'  ek dum kahli kahli ch boli seerat 
 'Haan mein tan sharart ch pinki da hath fad  ena dey lun tey rakh ditta'  hasdi hoyi kamal boli'  mein sochea ghabra k hath prey kr layougi ...pr kithey o tan deepu ton akh bcha  hath ch fad holi holi hilan lgi ..'
 'Ohh fer'  ek dum sidi ho kamal di gal sun chehkdi hoyi seerat boli' Deepu ney vekheya nyi ..' 
 'Jad b usnu  lagda  deepu vekhn lga .. hath prey kr lendi'  kuch soch muskrandi bull tukdi kamal boli'  thori der bad fer akh bacha hath agey kr fad k hilan lagdi' 
 'Matlb dil kr riha c usda b pr drdi c deepu ton' kuch sochdi hoyi seerat boli 
 'Haan uton mein usdey aag lyi jandi  c 
' apney patt ghut fudi nu masl siskdi chetey krdi kamal boli' deppu utey chad tap tap usnu apni fudi ch  deepu da kadak lun andr bahr hunda dikha dikha'  ek lamba sah lendi boli kamal' soch lya c  mein deepu  ton nyi utrna vekhdi kini der udeek kr sabr krdi a  '
' fer ..' exicted ho seerat soffey tey chaukri maar beithdi boli
' fer ..' kuch sochdi kamal boli'  deepu ney vekheya eh nangi kol pyi pinki dey pattan wal bina akh jhapkey vekh rahey ney..Meinu lga kitey deepu mind na kr javey enha nu edan pinki di fudi nu vekhdey vekh ...usnu tease krn lyi keha vekh tera veera pinki di fudi nu vekh riha'   
Ek dum josh ch aa tika k meri fudi ch gassa marda chek k bolea'  haan' 
 Kuch der chup reh fer boli kamal'  akhir mein e keha .. tun pinki nal kr hun uni der mein tere veerey nu ..  hor kitey tera veera pinki nu  na fad lavey pta deepu ney ki keha ..'
 ' ki'  ek dum gaur nal kamal di gal sundi seerat boli 
'Kehnda ohi tan mein soch riha  veerey tey pinki  nangi pyi a bed tey fer kyoun ..'  Mein keha tere krkey shyad pinki.
.Kehnda mein b usdey samney tuhadi. .. mein keha ..Hun mein ki keh sakdi haan kuch krdey tan hay nyi sanu e vekhi ja rahey ney..'
' fer'  exicted hoyi seerat phone wal vekhdi boli
' fer..' sochdi hoyi kamal boli 'Akhir mein e keha  pinki nu.. lagda aj nyi deepu menu chad da ..j tere dil krda da apney jeth naal ..'
ek dum ghabra k boli pinki' nyi nyi mera dil nyi ...' uswal vekhda deepu bolea  kyoun jooth boldi a j dil nyi krda fer veerey da fad k kyoun hilandi a' 

 'Omg  matlab deepu ney vekh lya c pinki nu davinder veerey da fad k hilandi nu ..' ek dum boli seerat
 'Haan pr nakhrey krdi mni nyi kutti   'hasdi hoyi boli kamal' akhir deepu ney e usnu cherdey keha mein tan sari raat bhabhi d laini aj .. j tera dil krda tan jeth ton ..'
Kehndi nyi ji mein tan aj apni jethani vekhni deor tey jeth nu dindi ..'
Mein b keh ditta Hye j deor chadu ga menu tan e tera jeth' 
Kuti  meri bund tey hath fer enha wal vekhdi boli' koi na jeth ji dholki bja laingey tuhadi . .kina swaad ayouga ek ageyo tey ek picheo tail la meri jethani di layouga' 
' pinki ney eh keha'  hairaan hundi seerat boli
 ' haan ..' hasdi hoyi kamal phone wal vekhdi boli' Mein b keha dholki tan e bajwani j tun tail la chikna karungi apney jeth da ..'..'Kehndi koi na eni ku help tan kr dayoungi jeth ji di ...'
' fer'  exicted hoyi seerat boli'  fer laya tail pinki ney davinder veerey dey lun tey ..' 
 ' haan'  chehkdi hasdi hoyi kamal boli'Pura swad lay lay ruh nal tail la chikna kita usney enha da ...'



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#45
Agg la ti Kavita ji back with a bang tuci punjabi section te hero ho
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#46
Nice update
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#47
Nice update waiting for kamal new incest again
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#48
Ohh fuck sooo Hot
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#49
beautiful update
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#50
Bahut wadia te excitement wala update si kavita ji. Feels really good apni favourite story nu continue hundi dekh ke. Tuhadi is story vich sari conversation te scenes di imagination bahut kamaal hundi aa. Poori rooh nal te time kadd ke story likhde ho. Jaan pai jandi aa story vich. Thanks very much sada readers da inna khayal rakhan layi. Keep updating. Aur agar tuhade kol old story di txt ya pdf pai hai ta ki provide karva sakde ho? 2 vaar padh chuka story but hor padhan nu dil krda var var. Thanks very much Kavita ji.
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#51
This was a marvelous scene with the two brothers swapping wives but pinki seems like a namesake wife for deepu, his true wife is seerat and a scene with deepu, davinder, kamal and seerat would be ten times better, it would have makings of one of best scenes of this story yet. Also, in this update i sensed a little inclination from seerat towards davinder, may be it is just me, but a scene with these two will be awesome, even though seerat being with any other person than deepu is a controversial subject in this story, i hope you consider these two as a pairing. Thanks for this great story in any case, it was arguably one of the best if not best story on xossip.
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#52
You got this down however if you really want suggestions as you said in first post of this story, i would suggest going forward with older male with younger female because most of the scenes in this story involve older female with younger male. With that said jagtar with kamal is my favourite scene till now, you can go for pairing like seerat with davinder if seerat with some other than deepu does not agree with you then you can have pairing like deepu with one of younger generations like parul, priya, rashmi or if you want to go the other way around then someone like rupi with yuvi because to me the character of yuvi really like a horny bastard who would go for anybody even some one like rajwant. In any case looking forward to some great updates in the future from you.
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#53
Boaht hi wadhya....
too hot....
please continue by sending regular updates....
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#54
Nice story ji bhut hi vdia
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#55
Bhut vdia likhre ho mja aa gya ji
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#56
Burraaaaaaahh...finally i find this story nd immedately create account to comment...i love this story...great story kavi darling jldi jldi deyo tuc hun....update
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 'Omg  matlab deepu ney vekh lya c pinki nu davinder veerey da fad k hilandi nu ..' ek dum boli seerat
 'Haan pr nakhrey krdi mni nyi kutti   'hasdi hoyi boli kamal' akhir deepu ney e usnu cherdey keha mein tan sari raat bhabhi d laini aj .. j tera dil krda tan jeth ton ..'
Kehndi nyi ji mein tan aj apni jethani vekhni deor tey jeth nu dindi ..'
Mein b keh ditta Hye j deor chadu ga menu tan e tere  jeth nu dayoungi  ' 
Kuti  meri bund tey hath fer enha wal vekhdi boli' koi na jeth ji dholki bja laingey tuhadi... kina mja ayouga ek ageyo tey ek picheo tail la meri jethani di layouga' 
' pinki ney eh keha'  hairaan hundi seerat boli
 ' haan ..' hasdi hoyi kamal phone wal vekhdi boli' Mein b keha dholki tan bajwani j tun tail la chikna karungi apney jeth da ..'..'Kehndi koi na eni ku help tan kr dayoungi jeth ji di ...'
' fer'  exicted hoyi seerat boli'  fer laya tail pinki ney davinder veerey dey lun tey ..' 
 ' haan'  chehkdi hasdi hoyi kamal boli'Pura swad lay lay ruh nal tail la chikna kita usney enha da ...'
' matlab deepu samney e davinder veerey da fad ..' hairaan hundi seerat boli'  fer ..'
 'Fer ki deepu da fudi ch tey enha da meri di  bund  ch'  ahh bhar  hauka lendi boli kamal'  dono padseyo tilk tilk janda c ..'
 'Hye doh doh ekethey tuhadey andr..' apni hik tey hath rakh sah kabu krdi boli seerat'  Cheekn nyi niklia  tuhadia ..'
 'Cheekn kyoun pura pura swad ditta dona ney'  apney bull ghut masti ch kambdi boli kamal  
 ' Hye mera tan sun k eh haal a'  apney sah kabu krdi    chehkdi hoyi boli seerat' pinki jehri vekhdi c  usda ki haal' 
 'Usda tan bura  hall c bs deepu karkey jijhak rahi c'  hasdi hoyi boli kamal' Mein enha nu keha tusi  karo kosis kehndey usdi marji ton bina nyi ...'

Usnu bechain ho sanu vekhdi vekh akhir  deepu ne  keha'  kyoun jijhakdi a mein b tan bhabhi nal  . akhir bol e pyi tusi naraj  tan nyi howongey j mein ..jad deepu ney keha nyi bilkul b nyi bed ton utardi boli'  fer mein jawan dujey kamrey ch' 
 ' Mein e wanh fad usnu  keha  deni tan ethey e paini a dujry kamrey ch nyi . .'
 'Fer ..' gaur nal kamal di gal sun di seerat boli
 'Fer ki mere upr deor tey pinki utey jeth ..' kehndi kehndi uchi uchi hassan lgi kamal  
 'Oye hye ..sachin'  kamal bhabhi nu hasdi sun seerat chehak uthi
 'Aho.. Dona bharwan ney sanu ragar k  e rakh dita'  angrayi lendi khumari ch dubdi kamal chehkdi hoyi boli'  edan liti sadi dona di  jiven unha ch race lgi k kaun kis di vohti nu tika k ragarda' 
 'Fer kis ney'  gaur nal kamal bhabhi di gal sun hasdi hoyi seerat voli
 'Ghat dona ch koi nyi  c ..asin b dona ney purey najarey luttey'  apna bull chabdi hasdi hoyi kamal boli
 'Fer tan pinki ney puri ruh naal swaad lita hona'  phone wal vekhdi seerat hasdi hoyi boli.
' puri ruh naal ..' hasdi hoyi kamal boli  
 ' Kehndi chotti bhabhi jeth nu jaldi  dindi nyi j dindi a tan fer ruh naal e dindi..' ..Meinu chad deepu b  pinki nu chimbd gya  ek da ageo ek da  picheo puri ruh kharkayi dona ney...  ' apney bull ghut ahh bhardi kamal boli' das nyi  sakdi kinna swad aya ...  pinki nu dono ton chud di vekh ... hay b kutti niri  aag ... 

 'Eh tan hay jad mood ch hundi  a pinki fer tan puri ruh naal ..' kuch sochdi hoyi seeart boli' Ek gal kehni c  tuhanu' 
 'Haan haan keh'  ek dum boli kamal
 'Pta nyi kahan k na'  thori jijhkdi hoyi seerat room ch edr udr vekhdi boli 
' eh ki gal hoyi'  gaur nal phone wal vekhdi kamal boli'  agey tere mere ch koi gal luki a ..'







'Menu lagda pinki ney kisi hor nu b diti a' akhir hichkhichandi hoyi seerat ney keh e ditta
 'Kisi hor nu  'gaur nal  seerat di gal sun di kamal boli.
'Haan'  kuch sochdi hoyi seerat boli
 'Canada ch ..kisi gorey nu'  utsuk jehi ho kamal ney puchea
 'Nyi punjabi a . ' dil dhark uthea seerat da ...' kidan dasey satvinder barey
 'Punjabi ...Kaun a ..' exicted ho kamal boli
 'Eh nyi das sakdi tusi puch k daseyo ..' ek dum mukrdi hoyi seerat boli 
 'Lay eh ki gal hoyi ..' hairaan hundi kamal boli' naley tenu kyoun lagda pinki ney kisi hor nu diti  .'
 'Bs lagda ..' bull tukdi hoyi seerat boli
 'Fer das kaun'  phone wal vekhdi  kamal kahli kahli ch boli
 'Menu lagda..' boldi boldi chip.kr gyi seerat  pta nyi kyoun himmat na hoyi satvinder da naa lain di 
 'Das b kisnu'  hun tan kamal nu b kahli pay gyi eh pta krn di pinki ney hor kis nu diti hoveygi
 'Oh ek baar pinki tey satvinder kitey gye c  ' kamrey ch edr udr vekhdi holi jehi phone wal vekhdi seerat boli' wapsi ch storm krkey rat dono hotal ch rukey c 
 'Ohh satvinder nu puch laina c ..' exicted ho kamal chehkdi hoyi boli
 'Pagl o bhabhi usnu kidan mein puchn'   bdi muskil naal boli seerat munh vichon  nikln lg c'  puchea c satvinder nu o tan kehda ..' apney aap nu sambhaldi boli' tusi pinki nu ..'
 'Puch layoungi  hssdi chehkdi hoyi kamal boli' pr menu nyi lagda' 
 'Tusi pucho tan sahi'  kahli kahli ch boli seerat 
 'Gal tan sun  ' seerat  di gal vichaley e katdi hoyi kamal boli' menu nyi lagda hotal ch suki chadi hovegi satvinder ney . .pkka ragri honi pinki..'
 'Tusi puch k daseo  ' haukey bhareya sah lendi seerat bull ghutdi boli
 'Koi na  puch layoungi'  kuch der chup reh sochdi hoyi boli kamal' ek min gal sun ..'
 'Hanji'  gaur nal phone wal vekhdi boli seerat 
 'Pinki apney kamrey ch e a '  kuch soch bahr wal vekhdi kamal ek dum boli' huney ja puch lendi haan..'
 'Theek a puch k Daseo ki kehndi ' aram nal sofey tey beithdi seerat  boli'  mein thori der baad phone karungi ..'
 ' thodi der baad kyoun...'bed ton utar khadi hundi kamal apney phone wal vekh  chehkdi hoyi boli' tun aap e sun lay ki   kehndi o ...mein phone naal lay jandi haan tun phone na kati fer apey sun lawin  diti k nyi pinki..ney'



'Tusi b sochdey honey mein kini besrm haan ..' kamal nal sofey tey beithi thori jijhakdi hoyi pinki boli
 
'  mein b tan tuhadey nal usi bed tey c  ..'  apney hath ch fadey phone wal vekh hasdi hoyi kamal boli 'Fer tan tun b sochdi honi mein  b kini besrm haan'
 'Nyi nyi  didi.. mera matlab   ' ek dum hichkhichandi hoyi boli pinki'mera matlab  kadi sochea nyi c jeth ji nu dayoungi'   ekethi jehi hundi bull ghutdi boli' o b deepu dey samney ..' 

' tey liti b dona ney eketheya .. ek ageo ek picheo ..hye ragar e diti  meri deorani bechari '  akhan matka kamal hauka lay sah  lendi boli 
 'Tuhadi b tan dona ney liti  ' jad pinki ney eh keha  phone ch pinki di  awaz sun ek khumari bhari kambni jehi mehsoos hoyi seerat nu.. sach e keh rahi c kamal bhabhi .. deepu tey davinder veerey dona ney  chaudya pinki nu..sochdey e sarsari jehi daur gyi seerat dey ang ang ch..'

'Mein tan udon e samj gyi c jad tun bhandey rasoyi ch rakh waps ayi c aj pkka chudgi chotti bhabhi apney jeth ton ..' pinki dean akhn ch vekhdi kamal usnu cherdi boli...
 'Hun ekeli  didi bechari nu  dona ney napeya hoyea c madad tan krni paini c 
 ' kamal wal vekh pinki hasdi   usnu cherdi hoyi boli'  Pr ek gal a jeth ji ch sabr vohat a mein tan sochdi c o pehl karugey' 
 'Sabr b   tey josh b vohat a ..' thori hor  pinki dey  nedey ho  usdey modey nal modda mar hasdi hoyi boli kamal'hye  tenu thalley nap josh ch pagal ho  tika tika gassey maar tere upr jad tapdey  c .. ' teria kamrey ch gunjdean siskia tey haukey bharey sah sun vakhra e swad aya'
 'Eh tan hay dona vichon ghat koi nyi c 
 ' kamal wal vekh bull ghutdi pinki boli'  jad jeth ji ney mere goddey hik nal laa andr dhakeya  meri nikli cheek sun deepu ney mere wal vekhea hye  rabba udon bdi shrm ayi..'
'Tey  tenu enha ton chud di vekh deepu ney josh ch jehra menu ragera'  akhan matkandi kamal hasdi hoyi boli'vakhra e josh c usch udon' 
 'Hun gharwaley dean akhn samney koi hor usdi vohti thok riha c usney ghat krni c'  kamal dey patt tey hath rakh pinki usdean akhn vekhdi boli'  jad deepu  tuhadea lattan chuk apney modey tey rakh tika tika gassey maar tuhadi fudi ragar riha c udon jeth ji da josh vekhn wala c .apni vohti di fudi ch andr bahr hundey deepu dey lun nu vekhdey hoye jehrey lambey lambey gassey  meri fudi ch marey jeth ji ney .. ahh edan lagda c har gassey nal mera  pani nikln lga ..' 
 'Tey tun kehri ghat c dona dey lun ekethey munh ch lay chungey' kamal bhabhi dey munh ton eh sun dil e dhark uthea seerat da . .omg pinki ney dono lun ekethey chungey ..'
 'Tey tusi meri jan e kad diti jad jeth ji da fad mere pichey     .. ' kamal dey modey nal apna moda mardi pinki boli'  hye tail laa changi trah chikna tan kr  dindey jeth ji dey lulley nu' 
 'Mja e ena aa riha c tenu apney ghar waley  da lun chungdi vekh..' pinki dey bulln  wal vekhdi kamal hasdi hoyi boli '  sochea dholki b bajdi vekh lwan apni deorani di .. sachin cheekan kadwa ditia teria'

  'Niklnia  e c  '  bull tukdi khumari ch kambdi boli pinki'  hay b jeth ji da ageo motta' 
 'Fer Kidan da lga jeth ji da'  pinki dean akhn ch vekh muskurandi hoyi kamal boli 
 'Kadak grm deepu ton thora chotta pr ageo   deepu to thora jyada motta  .. ' akhan meech davinder dey lun nu chetey kr hichki lendi boli pinki' uff edan da swad kadi nyi aya .. ' 
 'Sachin..' apney hath ch fdey phone wal fer pinki wal vekhdi boli kamal 
 'Hanji ..' angrayi lendi pinki chehkdi hoyi boli' edan da swad kadi nyi litta hye doh doh mundey ekethey menu chimbdey .'
 'Oye hoye ..Eh tan das ..' gaur nal pinki wal vekhdi  boli kamal' Kis kis da litta aj tak' 

 'Mein'  khumari ch dubi akhan meech bull chabdi boli pinki' sab ton pehln kuwari hundi ney  deepu da  fer viah ton baad gharwaley da fer   usdey dost tey gharwaley nal swap type . .pr koi fun nyi c unha naal.. tey us raat  jeth ji da.'
 'Hor kisi da nyi  ' phone wal vekhdi kamal muskurandi hoyi boli 
 'Nyi.. hor kisi da nyi'  hasdi hoyi kamal   wal   vekhdi boli' tusi daso tusi kis kis da ..'
 'Mein sab ton pehln tere jeth ji da  ' kuch der chup reh kuch sochdi boli kamal' fer deepu nu..'

 'Hor kisi da nyi'  gaur nal kamal wal vekh muskurandi hoyi boli
 'Nyi  hor kisi da nyi  ' pinki nu sharart ch muskurandi  apney wal vekhdi vekh   boli kamal ' edan kyoun vekhdi a' 
 'Mein suneya jad notebandi ch sohrey nal chandigarh gye c  ' kamal wal vekh akh mar muskurandi hoyi pinki boli' uthey sohrey agey ghund chuk ho gya c' 
 Dil dhark uthea kamal da es nu b pta ..pkka seerat ney dasea hona gal badldi boli' Edan tan ek baar tun b storm  ch  stuck ho  satvinder nal hotel ch  raat ruki c .. diti c satvinder nu ..'
 'Nyi nyi  apney mundey nal thori'  ek dum ghabra k gal badldi boli pinki' j Tusi kadi yuvraj nal   kitey stuck .. ki tusi 
  ' mein J kadi edan stuck ho gyi storm snow ch .. tan shyad  ..' gaur nal pinki wal vekh usnu uksandi boli kamal' tun das..diti c '
 'Nyi ..' kamal ton akhan churandi pinki hassan di kosis krdi boli'  nyi  ..' pinki da jwaab sun gaur naal phone wal vekhn lgi seerat .. yakeen c pkka jooth bol rahi a ..'
 'Chal jhoothi ..' pinki da munh apney wal krdi kamal usnu cherdi boli'  eko room ch eko bed tey  jawaan munda tey tere wargi patola punjbn jatti sutey hon rat nu fer  b kuch naa.. '
Kuch na boli pinki dil dhark k munh ch aa gya akh na mila saki kamal naal .. uston b jyada dil phone sun di seerat da dhark riha c sah roki pinki dey jwaab di udeek krn lgi
 'Mere ton kyoun lukondi a  ..' bdi gaur nal pinki dean akhn ch vekhdi kamal apney hath ch fdey phone wal vekhdi boli..' hoyea c us raat kuch ..'
 'Mein tan bs us wal pith kr suti pyi c ..rat nu suti pyi nu enj lga pichey kuch chub riha  ..mein mein  dar k agey nu kr lyi apni back ..' kuch sochdi hoyi boli pinki  .' Kuch der edan e pyi rahi fer pta nyi kidan mere ton apni back pichey nu kr ho gyi ..  fer chubya satvinder da .. kuch der udan e pyi rahi enj lageya satvinder  holi holi ragar riha ..mein thori jehi hili.. ek dum ragarda ragrda ruk gya.. ' ek lamba sah lay kamal wal vekhdi boli' pr c usda ek dum akadeya kadak grm.. '
 'Jwaan munda eni sohni kudi nal jaffi pa  sutta pya'  pinki dean akhan ch vekhdi kamal boli'  exicyment ch kadak ho gram tan hona e c ..  fer..'
 'Haan ..  thand storm ch .. eko kambl ch menu picheo jaffi pa sutta.. holi holi upr upr ragar hunda usda meri back tey chubda.. menu v exictement hon lgi pr jidan e hili o ek dum ruk gya satvinder..  menu lga o sutta pya beidhiyani naal neend ch eh sab kr  riha.. pta nyi  kyoun  menu b swaad aan lga akhir mein  b apni hor pichey nu kr usdey lun nal jod  vich vich holi holi apni back usdey khadey lun utey  ragarn lgi.. gram akadeya hoyea chahey thora jeha e chubda c pr usney ek khumari bhar diti mere andr msti ch mere ton apni upr nu chuk usdey lun tey changi trah ragar ho gyi ek dum usney apna meri back ton dur kr lya..
 'Dr gya hona.. ' pinki wal vekhdi hoyi kamal boli' ja fer usnu apni galti da ehsaas ho gya hona k apni kisi saheli naal nyi mummy nal sutta pya..'
 'Haan ...pr thori der bad achank e usney  jor laa mere hips vichkaar apna chubo dita ..  'kamal wal vekhdi pinki apney bull chabdi boli' mein tan kamb e gyi' 
 'Kyoun'  gaur nal pinki wal vekhdi ek dum boli kamal....
 'Pehln pehln jad o  meri back tey ragar riha ena gram na lga'  kuch sochdi pinki boli' par es baar menu usda gram tey  kadak  lga jiven nanga hovey..'
 'Omg matlab kad k ragerya'  hairaan ho bina akh jhapkey pinki wal vekhdi kamal boli
 'Haan mein tan ghabra k apni back dur kr lyi'  sofey tey beithi pinki  ekethi jehi hundi  boli
 'Fer kiti nedey usdey ..' apna sah rok ek baar hath ch fadey phone wal fer pinki dey munh wal vekhdi kamal boli
 'Nyi ..usney e thori der bad apna meri back nal jod hipline   andr stuck kr ditta'  kamal wal vekhdi pinki boli'  ena tan pkka c usney apna lower thalley kar mere naal jodeya c  ..pta nyi kyoun mere ton apni back usdey lun ton dur na kr hoyi..'

' dur honi b nyi c jwaan mundey da khada lun adi rat nu kudi dey takran marey ..' hasdi hoyi kamal boli'  kehri kudi apni back dur karu..'
 'Achanak e usney jor laa jhatka jeha dey andr nu  dhakeya .. mera tan dil e dhark uthea .. topa tan meri fudi dey ched utey aa atak gya ..' kamal wal vekhdi boldi boldi kambn lgi pinki 
 'Nighty uton e ..' pinki wal vekhdi kahli kahli ch boli kamal

 'Haan grm grn motta topa nighty uton e meri fudi dey ched nal jud gya..' kuch der chup reh apney bull ghutdi boli pinki'  Kutta pta nyi dr riha c k tarsa tarsa  meri jaan kad riha c ..  kini der nal jod edan e pya riha akhir mera e sabr muk gya pichey nu ho thori jehi hili menu app nyi pta c merj eni gram bhiji  k gilli hoyi pyi a k usda pura topa meri fudi ch nighty samet e aa atak gya ..'
 'Fer..' pinki wal vekh muskurandi hoyi kamal apney  hath ch fadey  phone wal edan vekhn lgi jiven seerat nu keh rahi hovey'  sun lya.. pa ditta tere satvinder ney apni pinki mummy di fudi ch..' 
 'Fer ki bs uthey tak fsa holi holi hilan lga'  hasdi hoyi pinki sofey tey sar tika chatt wal vekhdi boli' Bahr andi storm di awaz tey bed tey bilkul fudi andr aa atakeya satvinder  da gram topa  na o agey dhak riha c na e pichey kr riha c bs uthey e tika holi holi ragarda riha ..'
' swad b lay riha c tey dar b riha c'  pinki wal vekhdi boli'  sochda hona jini mildi pyi a uni e maar k swad lawan hor na kitey j agey wadhyea pinki mummy dur kar lawey.. '  
 'Menu b ehi lga dardey hoyea himmat nayi ho rahi c usdi'  gardan ghuma kamal wal vekhdi pinki boli' Fer mein e apni upr nu chukdi hoyi keha   ' j laini a tan changi trah lay nyi tan rehn'  ena keh uchi uchi hasdi hoyi boli pinki'   hor ki didi .. jism pura exicted ho kambda hoyea  akadn lga c tey o na agey krda na bahr jad da........ jiden e meri awaz sun menu jagdi vekh ek dum ghabra k mere ton pichey nu hateya  meri tan jaan e nikl gyi jad usda topa meri fudi vichon nikl dur hoyea ..
' fer'  dharkdey dil nal pinki wal vekhdi kamal kahli kahli ch boli ..
 agey ki hoyea eh sun an di kahli tan kamal ton b jyada es velley seerat nu c ..

 'Thori der udan e pyi rahi sabr nyi ho riha  c na mere ton na e meri fudi ton hun eni nedey aa k b dur ho gya c usda lun'   kamal wal vekhdi pinki boli' apni  nighty lak tak upr chuk  nangi back pichey nu kr  usdey nedey krn e lgi c k  mere moddey fad menu sidi kr  meria akhan ch vekhda kehnda'  tusi jag dey pye c .'..usdean akhan ch vekhdi hoyi da  mera sabr muk gya . hath thalley kr usdey lun nu hath ch ghut di boli  'mein tan  suti pyi haan pr tere esney meri usnu jga ditta  ' masoom jeha munh bna Kehnda  'sorry galti nal ...'
 'Hun kehri sorry jo hona c o tan ho gya  ... thora gya k jayada  gya  andr tan chala e gya c tera' .. usnu apney nal ghutdi boli  'thori jehi galti ho kr  lay ...na app tars na menu tarsa ..eh soch mein suti pyi haan' 
 'Fer'  apni latt tey latt rakh  gaur nal pinki wal vekhdi boli kamal 
 'Fer ki...' boldi boldi hassn lgi pinki'   fer na  o rukeya bahr storm.... tey andr mein tey satvinder .. hye ena josh  tey jaan meri doh baar jan nikli fer kitey ja usda pani niklya ..'
 'Oye hoye'  chehkdi hoyi pinki dey patt tey hath maar  kamal apney phone wal vekhdi   boli '   chaud diti fer satvinder ney apni pinki mummy ..' jiven seerat nu keh rahi hovey sun lya pinki dey munh ton..'
'pls pls didi'  kuch sochdi ek dum boli pinki'  seerat nu na daseo pls pls..'
 'Nyi dasdi ....' hasdi hoyi apney hath ch fdey phone wal vekhdi boli   kamal' eh  tan das kidan da c' 
 'Sach dasn.. bilkul deepu warga'  bull ghut akhan band kr angrayi lendi chehkdi hoyi pinki boli'  uda e motta tey uda e lamba.. tuhadi sonh edan lag riha  c jiven deepu ney andr paya hovey ..ohi swad ohi sab...'



 'Kyoun ho gya yakeen...' hasdi hoyi  apney kamrey ch aa phone wal vekhdi  kamal ney seerat nu pucheya
 'Haan lag gya pta .. pinki ney diti a  satvinder nu  ..'  kamal bhabhi di phone ch  awaz sun kamrey ch edr udr vekhdi seerat boli
 'Pinki ney nyi diti .. satvinder ney litti pinki di  ' ena bol phone wal vekh uchi uchi hassn lgi kamal 
' ohhh..' kuch sochdi hoyi boli seerat 
 'Ena na soch yaar ho janda ... masti sarur  josh tey  swad  e vakhra hunda jwan mundey da....' phone wal vekhdi kamal bed tey beithdi boli' awen na gussey hovin pinki nu ..'
 'Nyi nyi gussey kyoun ..'ek dum boli seerat' its natural.. menu tan lagda e c .....'



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#58
Awesome thanks for the update
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#59
No words dear
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#60
Crwww update kavi...kam intense hunda ja reha ..sochan ali gl ta eh a v pinki nu kamal te ode sohre bare kive pta lggya
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