03-11-2019, 07:49 PM
wow! very very nice start, you are really an excellent writer.
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03-11-2019, 07:49 PM
wow! very very nice start, you are really an excellent writer.
03-11-2019, 08:09 PM
fantastic start. very nice plot!
03-11-2019, 08:39 PM
bahut h mast shuruaat
03-11-2019, 09:09 PM
ekdom mast shuruaat bhai,
03-11-2019, 10:16 PM
exciting story
04-11-2019, 12:30 AM
Super hot story.. eagerly waiting for the next update..
04-11-2019, 05:52 AM
Is Story ko Nisha ki life (ek chhote sahar me)
wali story ki jese write karna or ho sake to sexy image sath me jitne ho sake add karna bahut kamuk erotic banana. but update thoda jaldi dena warna maja kam ho jata h kyoki wife jab randi banne par ati hai. to wo kitni gir sakti hai ye koi nahi janta hai. use low class walo se bahut sex karwana jese - sabjiwala, parchoon wala, hotel wala, watchman, courier wala, or uske yahaan ka nokar bhi apne dosto ke sath chode, pizza wala, or bus ka staff, college ka peon, or kuch padosi aas paas ke kuch 18+ age wale uske chandu ke senior dost , or ajnabi kuch bus bhai itni erotic ho jaye ki sab story chhod ke tumhari story ka wait kare. pagal kar do yaar. bus itna kahna tha bhai.. next update come soon. please but long update ok thanks.
04-11-2019, 02:05 PM
bahut badhiya shuroaat
04-11-2019, 02:33 PM
Its altogether a different type of story it seems...the plot looks nice and may become one of the best story in xossipy.......
Just regular needs.....
04-11-2019, 03:42 PM
wonderful start! keep going brother.
04-11-2019, 04:36 PM
wonderful start! very very happy to see you again. Excellent story theme. Please let a low class man to be rock the story. I also request you,please also continue bade ghar ki bahu aur betiyon.
04-11-2019, 05:13 PM
waiting next ?
04-11-2019, 06:04 PM
Update please
04-11-2019, 06:41 PM
aisi kamsi kali kam age ki amir ladki ko..badsurat kale mote admi.. budde.. low..class ke etc.. se hi chudwao tbhi woh ek achhi randi banegi next update ka intzar rahega
04-11-2019, 07:08 PM
fantastic story,excellent writing and awesome plot
04-11-2019, 07:53 PM
great story! outstanding writing
04-11-2019, 08:17 PM
As you are inspired by one of the best erotica author Aurelius, hoping that this will be a great erotic story with slow build up and lots of sexy turns and twists. All the best. Keep updating regularly please
04-11-2019, 08:36 PM
super excellent start! bahut h mast likhte ha bhai
04-11-2019, 09:18 PM
exceptionally start!
04-11-2019, 09:43 PM
Thanks and congrats for coming back and starting a new story! excellent start brother.
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