[rafiqshaikh9059]

Superstar writer ka super dhamal update maza aa gaya

[ABDUL RAZAK]

Super gand faadoo update

[KingLimon]

what a dick raising update! superb! mind blowing brother.

[thepirate18]

Rate the story as well as updates 

(there is rate button at end of each update or post ....click on that and add rating )

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Thanks for your comments and adding reputation

Enjoy

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The Emotional Housewife       Update 31 D     Re updated  
 

नेहा का परिवार : लेखिका सीमा


Sarita Ki Journey


HAWELI By The Vampire


Main, meri behen aur blue film


वक़्त के हाथों मजबूर

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[Vicky007]

for completing 100 pages and also for this extremely hot update.

[Shabaz]

Waiting next update bro...

[thepirate18]

:Next update within next 20 days. :shy:

Your story is good but update speed is very slow. Only 4 updates in last 45 days. Tjhis makes the story monotonous. Moreover you shouldn't beg for rating. If someone finds it too good to rate you then they will definitely give you ratings. You have 183 ratings. So don't become comments/rating begger like some other writer does. It don't suit you

Don't follow my story and don't comment here please

Please thank you

[Ella]

extremely hot and erotic!very very exciting update,it is really too hot.thanks a lot bhai

[rafiqshaikh9059]

6 month se ye story chal rahi hai ab jake sahi track par aayi kya likha yara jaldi update 33E dedo

[Invisible]

just amazing update,absolutely dick blasting update!

[Jaan]

Great hot update

[thepirate18]

ekdom gajab kamuk kahaani!bahut bahut exciting kahaani

Mast story good

extremely hot update!

waiting for the next update

eagerly waiting brother.

Thanks for your positive comments

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[TedBundy]

Brother, when will we hope for the next update?

[Muskan]

Awesome Update Dear ....
I know Its Very Difficult to Write In Busy Life ...

Your Update Is Worth Waiting ...
Ignore The Idiots Who Comment Like This ....
These People Dont Know Anything About writing ... The People Who Comment like this cannot Even Write A Single Line of a story ...

[TedBundy]

Tu itni jaldi chid kyu jaata hai re. Agar tujhe koi negative comments de de to tu aisa behave karta hai jaise usne teri jaan le li ho. Sirf Readers Ko ignore Kara karo mat bulwa khud bhi seekh kuch. Negative comments Ko ignore Kara kar. Tere bhale waaste hi bola hai samjhaa ki nahi. :D

If you don't like this story or the writer,please don't come to this thread.To write a story is  very tiresome works.So try to respect a writer. They are not  bound to write a story by leaving their important personal business.

[hfmwife]

wow! wow! and wow! Great update, very very hot and erotic dialogues.

[Rumana]

agla update jaldi dijiye bhai

[rafiqshaikh9059]

Bhai jaldi dena midnight ko bahot waqt hai please bahot intzar hai update ka

[rafiqshaikh9059]

Bhai tumhari story super hit hai Filmfare award to aap ka banta hai

[thepirate18]

super exciting story! very very hot writing.

Superb! Kya ek gajab scene banaya aapne bhai, bahut bahut exciting

Wow! one of the most erotic adult stories I have ever read! very very hot and exciting! super excellent writing.

Absolutely hot and extremely erotic! This update is too exciting to control  my  phallus.Great job brother.

oh my God! Extremely hot, absolutely exciting and erotic update.

thanks .....

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