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VASNA KI NA KHATM HOTI AAG
#1
Namskaar ! Mera naam Sarika hai aur main is website par ek kahaani likhne jaa rahi hoon, Mujhe ummed hai ki aap logo ko meri kahaani pasand aayegi aur kahaani ko accha response milega, Main agli post me kahaani ka pehla bhaag likhoongi, Ek baar jaroor padhna aur apne comments dena, Pehla bhaag bahut jaldi hi post karoongi
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BHAAG  -  1
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Namaskaar , Main aaj is kahaani ka pehla bhaag likhne jaa rahi hoon, Main koi lekhak nahi hoon, pahli baar likhne ka prayaas kar rahi hoon isliye kahaani me kaafi trutiyaan bhi ho sakti hain, aap log kahaani ko padhe aur agar kahin koi truti hoti hai toh comments kar ke bataaye main un trutiyon ko sudharne ki koshish karoongi



Main isko kahaani kahoon ya kuch aur samajh nahi aa raha hai, kyonki main yahan likh kar jo aap sabke saath baantne jaa rahi ho, wo mere jeevan ki sacchi ghatna hai, jisko main aap logo ke saath thoda mirch - masala laga kar pesh karne jaa rahi hoon, aap log padh kar bataaye meri pahli koshish kaisi rahi



Ab aur jyada samay kharaab na karte huye kahaani ki taraf chalte hain...... . .


Mera naam Sarika hai, Meti umar 42 saal hai aur mere 3 bachche hain, Meri shaadi ke kuch saal baad bahut se badlaav aane lage aur ' Rati - Kriya ' shabd bahut kam hota chala gaya.........



Haalanki, Mujhe to iski zarurat thi, par pati kuch badal se gaye, Unki ab isme koi dilchaspi nahi rahi, lekin meri abhi bhi hai, Hum vaise to bihaar ke hain, lekin pati orissa me kaam karte hain, isliye hum yahaan kiraaye ke makaan me rahte the



Yeh baat tab ki hai jab main 33 ki thi aur mera doosra bachcha 4 mahine ka tha, Hamaare pados me ek aadmi rahne aaya jiski umar 50 - 52 saal thi uska naam amar tha, Wo bhi hamaare hi taraf ka tha to jaan pehchan hote der na lagi, aise hi dheere -dheere hum ek doosre se kaafi ghul - mil gaye...................



Mere pati jab ghar nahi hote to shaam ko wo timepass ke liye hamaare ghar aa jaate ya hum log chatt par baat karte dheere - dheere hum ek doosre ki shaadi shuda zindgi ke baare me baat karne lage



Fir ek din aisa aaya ki hum apni sambhog kriyaon ke baare me bhi charcha karne lage, Hum ek doosre se apne pati aur patni ke bare me baate karne lage, Usne bataya ki wo apni patni se khush nahi hai aur fir maine bhi apne pati ke baare me bata diya...................



Us waqt mera doosra bachcha sirf teen mahine ka tha, Aise hi baate karte huye ek mahina beet gaya........



Ek raat ko jab mere pati raat ki shift me the to amar ka phone aaya, Hum pahle to idhar - udhar ki baate karte rahe, Fir amar ne voh baat kah di jis se main darr rahi thi..........................



Usne kaha " Sarika ! Hum dono ko hi saathi ki zarurat hai ! Kyon na hum ek doosre ka saath de aur apni - apni iccha ko poora kar le....................



Mere dilo - dimaag me bizli si kaundh gayi, Main us se baate zaroor karti thi, Lekin sirf timepass ke hisab se, Maine kabhi socha nahi tha ki aisa bhi ho sakta hai, kyonki voh mujhse umar me kaafi bade the, Maine bina kuch kahe hi phone rakh diya.....................



Kuch der ke baad unka dubara phone aaya, par maine nahi uthaya, Kareeb 5 baar ke baad maine phone uthaya to vo mujhse maafi mangne lage, fir hum aise hi kuch der baate karte rahe.................



Lekin kuch der baad ghoom - fir kar baat fir se ' Rati - Kriya ' par aa gayi, fir voh mujhe samjhane lage ki isme koi burayi nahi hai aur umar se iska koi lena - dena hai, Kaafi der tak unke samjhane bujhane ke baad aakhirkaar haar kar maine bhi ' Haan ' kah diya...............



Fir kya tha usko to bas iska hi intzaar tha Amar ne mujhse kaha - " Main tumhaare ghar par aa raha hoon "



Mujhe to ghabrahat si hone lagi thi toh maine kah diya - " Raat kaafi ho gayi hai kisi aur din sochenge "



Lekin voh maan ne ko taiyaar nahi tha..... Usne kareeb 12 baje mera darwaja peeta Maine ghabraate huye darwaja khola samne amar muskurate huye mujhe dekhne laga...........



Main sharam se paani - paani ho gayi thi, Main andar aa gayi aur mere peeche voh bhi darwaja band karke chala aaya.........



Mere andar aate hi usne mujhe peeche se pakad liya aur mujhe choomne laga, Main bas sahmi huyi si uski chuwan ( touch ) ko apne badan par mehsoos kiye jaa rahi thi, Usne mere stanon ko dabana shuru kar diya, Mujhe ajeeb sa lagne laga



Ek pal ko to ye khayaal bhi aaya ki yah main kya karne jaa rahi hoon, par vaasna mere ooper bhi havey hone lagi thi shayad isiliye main koi virodh nahi kar rahi thi, Usne mujhe jahaan - tahaan choona aur sehlana shuru kar diya, Uski chuwan se mere andar ki vaasna aur jyada dahakne lagi.........................



Main us raat salwar kameez me thi aur dupatta andar kamre me hi bhool gayi thi Usne ab mere stanon kp sehlana aur dabaana shuru kar diya tha, fir uska ek haath dheere - dheere neeche aane laga, Pahle pett, fir naabhi, fir achanak se meri yoni par.....................



Main kaanp uthi aur seham kar uski taraf munh kar ke us se chipak gayi, Maine use kas liya, uska shareer mujhe gajab ki garmahat de raha tha, Main ab garam hone lagi thi, Meri yoni me ab main halki nami mehsoos kar rahi thi...............



Amar ne mujhse kaha - " Sarika ! Ab sharmao nahi....khul kar is pal ka aanand uthaoo..............



Fir usne mere chehre ko oopar kiya aur apna munh mere munh se laga kar mujhe choomne laga, Usne mete honthon ko choosna shuru kar diya, Kuch der baad voh apni zubaan mere munh ke andar karne ki koshish karne laga..............



Pahle to main virodh karne jaisa karti rahi, fir maine apna munh khol diya, Voh zubaan se meri zubaan ko choone ki koshish karne laga.............



Kuch der usne koshish ki, lekin use kamyabi nahi mili to usne kaha - " Sarika apni zubaan baahar nikaalo "...........



Main kuch der sochti rahi par uske 1 - 2 baar aur kahne par maine apni zubaan baahar nikaal di, Usne turant hi meri zubaan ko choosna shuru kar diya.........



Kuch der baad main bhi uska saath dene lagi, Kabhi voh meri zubaan choosta aur laar pi jata to kabhi main uski zubaan ko choosne lag jaati.............



Usne ab apne haath mere nitambon par rakh diye aur mujhe apni taraf kas kar kheench liya aur apni kamar ko ghumane laga, Maine mehsoos kiya ki salwar ke ooper se hi uska ling meri yoni par lag raha tha......................



Hum kaafi der tak is avastha me ek doosre se chipke  aalingan karte rahe, Tabhi amar ne kaha - " Ab andar chalo, Mujhse raha nahi jaa raha hai ! Main apne ling ko tumhari yoni ke andar daalna chahta hoon "...................



Hum turant hi andar chale aaye, Main ab bistar par aa gayi, Amar mere paas aaya aur meri salwar ka naada khol kar meri salwar nikaal di...............



Maine andar kuch nahi pehna tha, yah dekh kar usne kaha - " Tum andar penty nahi pehanti kya "



Main - Raat ko nahi pehanti hoon



Amar - Kya bra bhi nahi pehanti ?



Main - ' Nahi '



Ab hum khulne lage the aur sab tarah ki baate bhi hone lagi thi, kyonki ab hum itne garam ho chuke the ki sharam- haya sab bhool gaye the...............



Ab amar mere ooper aa gaya aur mujhe choomne - choosne laga, Mere to jaise tan - badan me aag si lagne lagi thi, Mujhe aisa lag raha tha, jaise mera badan aag me jal raha hai...................



Voh kabhi mujhe kamar se pakad kar jor se apne jis ko mere ooper dabaata aur mujhe choomta, to kabhi mere stano ko dabaata aur masalta tha, Mere munh se 'Siskaari ' nikal jaati thi, jise sun kar voh aur bhi josh me aa jata...................



Usne ab ek haath se mere ek pair ko alag kiya, to maine khud apne dono pair ko faila kar uski kamar se kas liye, fir hum ek doosre ko usi avastha me pyar karne lage



Maine mehsoos kiya ki amar apni kamar se kuch kar raha hai, Uske ling se meri yoni me sparsh ho raha tha, Jiska dabaav kabhi jyada to kabhi ka ho raha tha..........



Main samajh gayi ki amar ab poori tarah se taiyaar ho chuka hai, Mujhe yonn aanad ke sagar me gote lagvaane ke liye fir main bhi apni kamar ko uske saath  hila kar uska saath dene lagi............



Ab amar ne ek haath ko meri yoni par le gaya aur sehlane laga, Mujhe gudgudi si hone lagi.........



Tabhi amar ne kaha - " Tumhari yoni kitni geeli ho chuki hai aur yah kitni mulaayam hai '..............



Apni tareef kis ko acchi nahi lagti, Main bhi amar ke munh se apni tareef sun kar khush ho gayi...........



Kuch der sehlane ke baad usne kaha - " Main tumhari yoni ke ras ko chakhna chahta hoon "



Fir voh meri yoni ki taraf jhukta chala gaya, Meri kuch samajh aata us ke pahle hi usne meri yoni ko choosna shuru kar diya, Mujhe gajab ka majaa aane laga tha Aisa ehsas main bahut saal ke baad mehsoos kar rahi thi................



Main poori masti me us pal ka majaa lene lagi, Mere poore jism me sihran si hone lagi, Main samajh gayi ki ab main skhalit hone waali hoon, to maine uska sir kheench liya aur boli- " Ab bas karo "



Fir voh mere ooper aa gaya aur mujhe choomne laga, Kuch der baad usne kaha " Tumhare stano se doodh nikalta hai, vo mujhe peena hai "



Fir usne mera kurta nikaal diya, ab main bilkul nangi thi, Mere mann me ek baar khayaal bhi aaya ki main ek paraaye mard ke saamne nangi ho gayi par ab is se koi farak nahi padne wala tha kyonki ab hum bahut aage nikal chuke the..........



Usne pahle to meri tareef karte huye kaha - " Tum kitni sunder ho, tumhara jism ek dam makhmal ki tarah hai aur tumhare stan gol - gol aur bahut hi sundar hain "



Main apni tareef sun rahi thi aur voh mere stano se khelna shuru kar chuka tha, Meri chuchuk ko munh me bhar kar choosne laga aur doosri choonchi ko haath se dabaane laga.............



Ab voh mera doodh peene laga tha aur main uske sir ko sahara dete huye uski madad kar rahi thi, Jab voh is khel me magan tha, tab mere dil me uske ling ko choone ka khayaal aaya aur maine ek haath se pajaame ke oopar se uske ling ko choo kar dekha.............



Yah dekh kar amar ne apna pajaama nikaal diya, lekin is avastha me pareshani ho rahi thi to hum let gaye, ab voh mere bagal me karvat le kar lete huye mere stano se doodh pee raha tha...........



Ab maine uska ling apne haath me le liya to mujhe current sa laga aur meri aankhe khul gayi, tabhi meri najar bister par soye huye mere bachche par gayi aur main ruk gayi..............



Yeh thi meri jindgi ki daastan jiski abhi to shuruaat hi hai, iske aage kya kya hua agar aap jaanna chahte hain to aap log  apne comments bheje, aage abhi bahut kuch likhna baaki hai agar aap sab ka sehyog milega to aage jaroor likhungi aap apne comments dete rahe aur main update dete jaungi







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#3
BHAAG -  2
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Ab voh mera doodh peene laga tha aur main uske sir ko sahara dete huye uski madad kar rahi thi, Jab voh is khel me magan tha, tab mere dil me uske ling ko
choone ka khayaal aaya aur maine ek haath se pajaame ke oopar se uske ling ko choo kar dekha.............



Yah dekh kar amar ne apna pajaama nikaal diya, lekin is avastha me pareshani ho rahi thi to hum let gaye, ab voh mere
bagal me karvat le kar lete huye mere stano se doodh pee raha tha...........



Ab maine uska ling apne haath me le liya to mujhe current sa laga aur meri aankhe khul gayi, tabhi meri najar bister par soye
huye mere bachche par gayi aur main ruk gayi..............


Ab uske aage.....................



Amar ne mujhse poocha - " Kya hua  bhaybheet kyon rahi ho, main aisa kuch nahi karoonga, jis se tumhe takleef ho "



Tab maine usko bataya ki meri pareshani ki vajah kya hai, Usne uth kar bachche ko paalne me sula diya aur fir mere paas aa gaya....Ab voh mere najdeek aaya aur muskurate huye bola - " Mujhe laga ki tum mere ling ka aakaar dekh kar bhaybheet ho rahi ho "



Fir voh jor - jor se hansne laga, maine usko shaant kiya ki kahin koi sun na le fir maine us se kaha - " Aisi baat nahi hai "



Lekin sach me uske ling ke aakaar ko dekh kar mujhe zaraa bhay sa lag raha tha, kyonki uska ling kaafi lamba tha......



Hum dubara se ek doosre ki baahon me kho kar pyaar karne lage, ab to main poori tarah se garam aur geeli ho chuki thi aur amar ke ling me bhi kaafi tanaav aa gaya tha...............



Amar ne mujhse kaha - " Sarika ! Ab aur raha nahi jata.....Main jald se jald sambhog karna chahta hoon "



Maine bhi sir hila kar ishaare se usko " Haan " kah diya, Mere andar chingaari sulag rahi thi aur main bhi jald hi shaant hona chaah rahi thi...........



Ab usne ek takiya meri kamar ke neech rakh diya aur meri jaanghon ke beech me aa gaya aur mere pairon ko faila kar mere ooper let gaya, Uska ling meri yoni par sparsh kar raha tha, Usne mujhe apni baahone me kas liya aur maine bhi usko jakad liya.............



Amar ne mujhse poocha - " Kya tum taiyaar ho "



Maine bhi " Haan " me jawab diya, fir amar apne ling ko meri yoni ke andar ghusaane ki koshish karne laga par jab bhi voh ghusaane ki koshish karta uska ling fisal jaata............



Tab usne mujhse sahyog karne ko kaha to maine uske ling ko haath se yoni ke oopar rakha aur amar se jorr lagaane ko kaha, amar ne jor lagaya aur uska ling meri yoni ke andar ghusta hi chala gaya aur mujhe halka sa dard hua, Main sisak uthi...Aaaahhhhhh.....yah dekh kar amar mujhe choomne laga..............



Shayad voh bhi jaanta tha ki yah sukoon ki siski hai aur saath hi voh dheere - dheere jorr lagata raha, Main uske har baar jorr lagaane par sisak jaati, Uske ling ke jyada lamba hone ki vajah se mujhe takleef zaroor ho rahi thi, lekin vaasna ke aage kuch nahi dikhta............



Main dard ko bardasht karte rahi jab tak ki uska poora ling meri yoni me samaa na gaya, Maine 1 - 2 baar uski taraf bhi dekha, shayad usko bhi takleef ho rahi thi kyonki meri yoni uske ling ke liye tung ( tight ) lag rahi thi...............



Ab humne ek doosre ko jor se kas liya aur usne ek baar fir jorr lagaya aur is baar uska bacha - khucha ling bhi andar samaa gaya aur is baar meri siski zaraa jorr se nikal gayi...eeee..sssss..hhhhh....



Is par amar bole - " Kya hua......Tumhe dard ho raha hai ?



Maine bas sir hila kar ' Naa ' me jawaab dete huye kaha - " Ab der mat kijiye.....Jaldi se mujhe pyaar kariye "



Sach kahoon to dard to mujhe ho raha tha par jaanti thi ki kuch hi palon me yah gayab ho jayega to maine use jaldi dhake lagaane ko kaha, Uske ling ki thoker meri bachchedaani me lag rahi thi, jis se mujhe halka dard to ho raha tha, lekin uske garam ling ke sukhad ehsaas ke aage sab kuch majaa de raha tha..........



Usne sambhog ki prakriya shuru kar di pahle dheere dhakke lagaaye fir uski raftaar tez ho gayi, Mujhe bahut accha lag raha tha, Mujhe bahut majaa aa raha tha, Meri yoni me jitne adhik dhakke lagte, Utni hi adhik geeli ho rahi thi.......



Main amar ko poori taqat se apni baahon aur pairon se kas chuki thi aur usne bhi mujhe jakda hua tha, Aisa lag raha tha jaise aaj hum ek doosre me poori tarah se samaa jayenge..........



Amar dhakkon ke saath mujhe choomta aur choosta, Kabhi mere stano se doodh peene lagta, Main bhi usko isi tarah se choomne aur choosne lagi, Mere andae hulchul se machi huyi thi, Mujhe bahut majaa raha tha............



Tabhi amar ne kaha - " Sarika ! Kaisa lag raha ! Tumhe koi takleef to nahi ho rahi ?



Maine uski taraf dekha uske maathe se paseena aa raha tha, Mujhe uske chehre par ek santosh aur khushi najar aayi, Jo meri vajah se thi, voh haanf raha tha.....



Usne pyaar se mujhse poocha to maine bhi kaha - " Nahi ! Koi takleef nahi hai aur mujhe bahut majaa aa raha hai, Aap bas rukna mat "



Yah sun kar usne ek dhakka diya aur mujhse chipak kar mere munh se apne munh ko laga diya, Ab voh dhakke nahi balki apne ling ko meri yoni me poora ghusa kar apni kamar ko ghumaane laga



Hum ek doosre ke honth aur jubaan choosne lage aur saath hi apni - apni kamar ghumaane lage, Main samajh gayi thi ki amar thak gaya hai isliye aisa kar raha hai par mujhe bahut accha lag raha tha, Uske ling ko main apni bacchedaani me mehsoos kar rahi thi, jis se mujhe ek alag tarah ka majaa aa raha tha.........



Thoda dard bhi ho raha tha par voh bhi kisi maje se kam nahi tha, isliye main bas uska aanand lete rahi, Uski saanse jab kuch saamanya huyi to fir se dhakke lagaane laga............



Kuch hu der me mera badan sakht hone laga to usne dhakke lagaane band kar diye, voh samajh gaya ki main skhalit hone wali hoon par shayad voh aisa nahi chahta tha.............



Tab maine us se poocha - " Kya hua ?



Usne kaha - " Itni jaldi nahi "



Main yah bhool gayi thi ki uski umar 50 se adhik hai aur anubhav bhi jyada hai Ab usne meri kamar ke neeche apne haath lagaaye aur bola - " Ab tum mere ooper aa jao....Apne pair meri kamar se bheench kar rakhna aur ling ko baahar na aane dena "




Mere liye ye ek alag tarah ka anubhav tha humne apni avastha badal, ab main uske ooper thi, Usi waqt mera dhyaan takiye par gaya, Meri yoni se nikle paani se uska khol bheeg gaya tha par use darkinaar kar sambhog par dhyaan lagaane lagi....



Main amar ke ooper baith gayi aur uske seene par haath rakh diya, Usne bhi meri kamar par haath rakh diya aur fir main dhakke lagaane lagi, hamaari masti ab aasman par thi, Uske ling ka sparsh mujhe pagal kar raha tha...............



Jab uska ling andar - baahar hota toh main uske ling ke ooper ki chamdi ko apni yoni ki deewaron par mehsoos kar rahi thi, Kuch der baad meri bhi saanse foolne lagi main bhi thak gayi thi.......



Amar is baat ko samajh gaya aur bola - " Sarika ! Tum bhi ab thak gayi ho, ab tum apne shareer ko ooper kar ke rakho "



Usne jaisa kaha tha maine vaisa hi kiya ab amar ne apne haath meri kamar par rakhe aur kaha - " Tum apni kamar ko aise ghumao, jaise english ka 8 likhte hain, tum aisa maano ki tum apni kamar se 8 likh rahi ho "



Main vaisa hi karne lagi sach me kya gajab ka majaa aa raga tha, meri bacchedani se jaise uska ling chipak gaya ho aisa lag raha tha...........



Kareeb dus minute tak main vaise hi maje leti rahi aakhirkaar mera sabra jawaab dene laga, mera shareer akadne laga aur ab main skhalit hone waali thi lekin amar nahi chahta tha ki main abhi skhalit ho jaau.............



Usne mujhse kaha - " Abhi nahi....itni jaldi....Hum saath me honge....Abhi khud par kaabu rakho "



Lekin ab mujhse ye nahi hone wala tha usne mujhe turant neeche utaar diya aur apna ling baahar nikaal liya.....



Main ab bekaabu si hone lagi aur us se vinti karne lagi - " Amar please, ab mujhse bardaasht nahi hota....Main jald se jald charam sukh paa lena chahti hu "



Amar ne kaha - " Itni jaldi nahi....Kuch der aur karte hain....Jab tak ye na lage ki hamara shareer poori tarah aag ban gaya



Main fir se vinti ki - " Please ! Ab main aur is aag me nahi jal sakti....Meri aag ko shaant karo...Main skhalit hona chahti hoon...Main nahi ruk sakti "



Usne meri vinti sun li aur apne ling ko kuch der haath se sehlaane ke baad mere ooper aa gaya fir usne mere pairon ko failaya aur unke beech me aa gaya....



Main to pahle se hi vyakul thi to maine bina der kiye apne haath uske gale me daal diye aur kas liya, Usn haath se apne ling ko meri yoni par rakh kar jorr diya to ling andar chala gaya main sisak gayi ...Sss...hhh...hhhh.....Aaaa...aa...hhh...hhh



Usne mujhe chooma aur dhakke lagaate huye kaha - " Sarika ! Main chahta tha ki tum is pal ka poori tarah se majaa lo par tum mera saath nahi de rahi "



Maine jawaab diya - " Mujhe bahut majaa aa raha par bas ab main charam sukh paana chahti hoon "



Usne kaha - " Agar tum mujhse pahle skhalit ho jaogi to fir mera kya hoga "



Maine kaha - " Main aap ka poora saath doongi, jab tak ki aap skhalit nahi ho jaate.......



Yah sunte hi uske chehre par muskaan aa gayi aur dhakkon ki gati tez ho gayi, ab main jyada door nahi thi, Mere munh se maadak siskariyan nikal rahi thi...SSsss hhh....hhhh.....Aaaa....hhh...hhhh...eee...sss.....ssss....hhhh....hhhhh.....hhhhh



Hum dono ke munh aapas me ek ho gaye ek doosre ki jubaan se hum khelne lage aur neeche hamaare ling aur yoni ka khel chal raha tha, Maine mehsoos kiya ki amar ka shareer bhi ab sakht ho raha hai main samajh gayi ki voh bhi ab charam sukh se door nahi hai..............



Uske dhakke pahle se kahin tez aur dumdaar hote jaa rahe the, Usne apne shareer ka poora jorr mujh par laga diya aur maine bhi apne shareer ko us par chipka diya, Hamaari saanse tez hone lagi aur hum haanfne lage the...........



Tabhi mujhe dhyaan aaya ki amar ne suraksha ke taur par kuch nahi lagaya tha, is se pahle ki main kuch kah paati mere shareer ne aag ugalna shuru kar diya, Main jorro se apni kamar ko ooper uchalne lagi, to amar ne bhi poora jorr mujh par laga diya...........






Usne meri vinti sun li aur apne ling ko kuch der haath se sehlaane ke baad mere ooper aa gaya fir usne mere pairon ko failaya aur unke beech me aa gaya....



Main to pahle se hi vyakul thi to maine bina der kiye apne haath uske gale me daal diye aur kas liya, Usn haath se apne ling ko meri yoni par rakh kar jorr diya to ling andar chala gaya main sisak gayi ...Sss...hhh...hhhh.....Aaaa...aa...hhh...hhh



Main skhalit ho gayi aur kuch jordaar dhakkon ke baad amar bhi skhalit ho gaya, Uske garam veerya ko maine apne andar mehsoos kiya, Hum dono thak kar kuch der hum aise hi lambi saanse lete huye pade rahe............



Kuch der baad amar mujhse alag hua to maine dekha uska ling safed jhaag me lipt tha jo ki roshni me chamak raha tha, Uske chehre par santosh aur khushi ke bhaav alag hi dikh rahe the..........



Usne apna ling aur meri yoni ko tauliye se saaf kiya aur meri bagal me let gaya Hum kuch der aise hi baate karne lage ab hum ek dam khul kar baat kar rahe the



Iske baad bhi humne 3 baar aur sambhog kiya par hum dono ki haalat aisi ho gayi thi ki unke jaane ke baad main kab so gayi kuch pata hi nahi chala, Mujhe itna majaa aaya ki main us raat ko kabhi bhool nahi sakti...........



Aapko mera anubhav kaisa laga apne comments dekar jaroor bataaye aur haa ye daastan abhi khatm nahi huyi hai yah to sirf shuruaat hai, abhi to bahut kuch likhne ke liye baaki hai par aap logo se sahyog nahi mil raha isliye likhne me majaa nahi aa raha



Agar aap log meri is daastan ke baare me aage aur jaanna chahte hain to apne apne comments de kar mera protsahan kare main aage likhna shuru kar doongi








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#4
Great start... keep it up....
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#5
Good work. Write more
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