Fantasy Ron~the dragon holder (Sgp2009) - ( Completed)

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THE RON~Origin of Dragon holder

writer:- sgp 2009

24th July 2012

https://xossip.com/showthread.php?t=1170123

UPDATE-1

Samundar me ek ke baad ek uthati hui ,tej aur vishal lahro ko chirta hua ek jahaj Atlantic ocean ke pashchimi disha me aage badh raha tha..us ship ke ek chhor pe khada us ship pe kaam karne wala ek shaks apni ankho ki range se door dekhane ki koshish kar raha tha.wo samne uth rahe bhayankar bawandar ko dekhkar sak paka gaya..
"Captain,hum shayad devils traingle ke pass pahunch gaye hain.."
kuch der wo wahi khada raha,jab us taraf koyi dusara nahi aaya toh usne ek baar phhir wahi lagayi...
"ye kaisa tharki captain diya hain,jab dekho tab ship me maujood ladkiyo ke sath maje karta rahta hain..aur hume yaha khada karke rakhwali karwata hain..sala tharki.."
"kya hua be apna gala kyun phad raha hain.."
samne se aate hue lambi height ,aur majboot sharir wale shaks ne apna shirt ko thik karte hue kaha..
"Captain Aditya,mujhe lagta hain hum shayad devils traingle ke pass pahunch gaye hain.."
"pahunch gaye,itni jaldi..chal samne se hat.."
Captain Aditya ne apne shirt ki jeb se map nikala aur samne faile vishal samundar ki taraf dekhne laga..
"ye map bhi phat gaya hain,sahi situation ka maloom nahi chal raha.."
"ab kya kare captain..bolo toh jahaj ko rok du.."
"abe ship ko kyun rokega..apni ye gatayan jaisi ankho se dekhta rah,koyi khatra dikhe toh phhir se awaj dena..main aata hoon kaam adhura chhut gaya tha.."
Aditya waha se wapas ship ke andar bane ek room me chala gaya..gate khula hua tha,gate ko dhakka dekar wo room me aa gaya..samne bed pe ek ladki apni taange khole hue padi thi,uska pani tapak kar bistar par lagatar gir raha tha..
"aa gaye mere captain..aaja, ab aur intezar nahi hota.. "
"sali ye apna jharna band kar,ye chadar tera baap aakar dhoyega.."
Aditya ne apni ungali uski choot me ghusa di..
aaaahhhhhhhh.......dheere captain dard hota hain..
"le pahle lund choos kar khada kar ,us sale langoor ne bulakar ise baitha diya..."
biatar pe leti hui wo ladki khusi se Aditya ka lund apne hath me bhara aur jaise hi wo apne mu me lene wali thi..ship buri tarah hilne laga..
"ab kya hua,tu yahi padi padi apna jharna bahate rah main dekhkar aata hoon..."
ship ke bahar khada wo shaks ab bhi samne ki taraf dekh raha tha..
"abki baar kya hua be.."
"captain ,lagta hain bawandar pass aa raha hain,"
"bawandar ,iska matlab samundar ki gand me khujali ho rahi hain....abe ye kya hain.."
"kaha captain.."
"samne dekh ..ye asman me itne bade panchi kab se ghumne lage.."
pure jahaj pe andhera chhane laga,..samundar ki bhayankar lahre lagatar ship se takra rahi thi..ship me jhatke lagne se ship me maujood sabhi log bahar ki taraf bhagne lage...aur samne faile andhere ko dekhne lage...
"Aditya-abe koyi batayega ki,asman me kya ud raha hain..
"captain ,hato .."jahaj me kaam karne wale ne Aditya ko pichhe ki taraf khinch liya..aur uske baad jo hua waha khade har ek shaks ke rongate khade ho gaye..
"captain ye toh dragon hain.."
"achchha toh ye dragon hain,isiliye inki gand se aag phek raha hain..bandooke nikalo,aur bhoon dalo ,aaj raat ke khane ka intezam ho gaya..."
sabhi shant khade zinda jal rahe do logo ko dekh rahe the..
"Aditya-abe,inhe nahi khana hain,jao aur bhoon dalo in dragons ko 
Sabhi jahaj ke andar se apni bandooke nikal kar samne faile bhayankar andhere me goli chalane lage..samundar ke andar se ek tej awaj pure mahol me phail gayi..sabke hath unki bandooke chhodkar unke kaan pe aa gayi..
"Aditya-ab samundar ke andar kaun besura hain..
"captain....samne dekho..."
samne samundar ka kayi guna upar utha gaya tha..aur wo awaj ek baar phhir gunji..aur samundar ke uthe hue vishal roop ne us jahaj ko ek jhatke me apne andar le liya..........
CALCUTTA,india....
calcutta ke famous hotels me shumar Oberoi grand ke samne ek ke baad ek kayi mahangi car ki line lag rahe thi..jiska karan tha oberoi brand me hone wali emergency meeting ,jisme sahar ke sabhi rahis aa aaye hue the..
"sabhi aa gaye..yaha"meeting room me baithi ek 23 saal ki navyuvati apne seat se uth kar boli...sabhi ne haan me jawab diya..us ladki ka 

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UPDATE-2
Jaldi-jaldi ship me baitho ,kuch hi der me hum sabhi yaha se nikalne wale hain,..neeche khada Captain Nair sabhi ko ship me jane ke liye bol raha tha..ship me Ron aur Riya pahle se hi the..dono Captain Nair ko dekh rahe the..
"Riya-dekha ,Ron ek navy ko lene ka fayada..is baar hum jaroor kamyab honge..
"Ron-waise har baar tum yahi bolti ho..
"Riya-lekin is baar confirm karke bol rahi hoon..
"main hoon isliye na.."
"nahi main hoon isliye.."
"Riya ,tumne abhi tak mujhe ye nahi bataya ki,akhir us devils traingle me rakha kya hain.."
"vaqt aane me pata chal jayega..waise tum waha kabhi gaye ho.."
"hmm..haan karib 200 saal pahle main wahi rahta tha.."
"kya,200 saal pahle,majak mat karo.."
""khair chhodo ,tumne mujhe Captain kyun nahi banaya..."
"wo bhi tumhe vaqt aane pe maloom chal jayega.."
Riya aur Ron baat kar hi rahe the ki waha Captain Nair aata hain..
"Nair-mam ,ab ship ko chalne ka adesh dijiye ,.sab ready hain..
"Nair tumne map liya..aur ye kuch goro ko kyun apne sath liya hain.."
"mam,inhe bas sharab do,kaam ki ye chinta nahi karte..aur rahi map ki baat toh wo ship ke main chamber me fit hain..hume har jagah ki location milati rajegi..aap befikra rahiye.."
"Ron-tumhara map Atlantic ko paar karne ke baad kaam nahi karega..toh thik yahi hoga Riya darling ki Captain mujhe bana do..
"Nair-mam,ye namoona kaun hain..
Ron apne jeb se sharab ki botal mu se lagate hue.."Namoona ,lekin mera nam toh The Ron hain..famous shikari.."
"famous shikari,kiska maine toh tumhara nam kabhi suna.."
"ab tumne name nahi suna ,toh doob maro .."
"abey oye yadi is ship me safar karna hain toh jo main kahta hoon wo karna hoga..warna abhi tujhe utar dunga.."
"achchha toh ye baat hain,lekin ek baat tu bhi yaad rakh le yadi us jagah se zinda wapas aana hain toh mujhe toh is ship me rakhna padega..."Ron waha se chala gaya,Ron ko jate hue Captain Nair aur Riya dono dekh rahe the..
"Riya-relax,Captain,Ron kya kya bol ke nikal jata hain,use koyi nahi samajhta ..chalo aage ki planning karte hain..
"Captain Nair-mam,main aapko apne assistant se milwata hoon..Seth idhar aao,..
ship ke dusari taraf se seth bhagta hua Riya aur Captain Nair ke pass aaya..
"Seth-Captain aapne mujhe bulaya..
"Nair-haan,inse milo ye hain miss Riya..aur mam yahi hain mera khas assistant aur mera dost Seth..
"Riya-ab chal kar aage ki planning kar le..
teeno ship ke andar bane ek chamber me aa gaye jaha unke samundari raste ka map laga hua tha..
"Captain Nair-mam...ye place hain Atlantic ocean ka ,yaha tak pahunchane me hume koyi jyada pareshani nahi hogi..lekin uske baad yaha se west direction ke Samundar ke baare me andaja lagana mushkil hain..waha pahunchkar hi main kuch bata paunga..
"Riya-its ok..ab main thoda aram kar loon..raat ka kya intejam kiya hain..
Captain Nair ,Riya is sawal par Seth ki taraf dekhane laga..
"seth-mam,maine saari lights check kar li hain ,sabhi thik hain ..aur jaisa ki captain ne bataya Atlantic ocean ke pahle humare liye koyi khatra nahi..bas ek iceland padega ..lekin wo sab bahut door ki baat hain aaj raat ship samundar ke uchhal bhare pani ka samna karna hoga ,jo koyi badi baat nahi..thats all..
"Riya-well done seth..now i am going to sleep ,gd night..
Riya us chamber roon se bahar nikal gayi..Captain Nair ne bhi Seth ko gd night bola ..
Ron ship ke party wale mahol me abhi bhi baith ke sharab pi raha tha...usne hath me ek botal uthayi aur ship ke bahar aa gaya..
"maloom nahi aaj kal ke launde apne aap ko kya samajhte hain..koyi baat nahi Ron tujhe jis mauke ka intejar tha wo ab aa chuka hain..chal ab fatafat Naksha khol aur dekh daal.."
Ron ship ke khule area me aa chuka tha,apne jeb se usne ek Naksha nikala ,jo Kapde ka bana hua tha..Ron ne sharab ki botal ek side me rakh di..aur wahi baithkar Naksha dekhane laga..
"yaha se daye..bahut achchhe jahaj ko daye hi moda hain..,lekin inko ye nahi maloom hain ki Atlantic ke pahale do iceland milenge..inhe keval ek ka pata hoga..hun..wo dusara wala iceland kabhi kabhar hi samundar se bahar nikalta hain..aur ye samay uske bahar rahne ka hain..mera kaam ho jayega..."
Captain Nair raat ko sone se pahle ek baar ship ko puri tarah check kar rahe the..ship ka round lagate hue wo Ron ke pass ja pahunche..
"Captain Nair- tu yaha kya kar raha hain,aur ye tere hath me kya hain...
Ron hadbada kar utha aur Nakshe ko jeb me rakh liya..
"mere hath me daru ki botal hain,jo main nahi dunga.."
"main is botal ki baat nahi kar raha hoon ,tere jeb me kya hain.."
"mere jeb me,hmm honge kuch samundari machhaliya(fish),jo sad chuki hongi ,mujhe bahut pasand hain.."
Captain Nair ne pass me pada lohe ka ek rod utha liya aur rod ko Ron ki taraf dikhate hue bola..
"jyada hoshiyari nahi,warna pura ka pura tere pet me ghused doonga.."
"nikal le bachhe ,warna maar khayega..wo bhi buri tarah.."
"abe tujh jaiso kitno ko maine thik kiya hain..aaj tu nahi bachega.."
"aisa hain toh phhir aa jao Captain Nair.."
Ron ne apne kamar se talwar nikal li..dono ek dusare ki taraf badhne lage..Captain ne rod ko Ron ke pair ki taraf teji se ghumaya ,lekin Ron upar kudkar Captain ke war ko khali kar diya..
"Ron-koshish achchhi thi,.chal aaja..
Ron itna kahkar waha se bhagne laga..Captain ne bhi uske pichhe daud laga di,."rook sale jungali bhagta kaha hain abhi toh ahjt badi badi baate kar raha tha.."lekin Ron ship ke charo taraf bhagta raha ..Ron ne apni speed dheere kar di ,aur ship ke kinaro pe lage rods pe pair rakhkar chadh gaya..Captain ki speed tej thi ,wo sambhal nahi paya ,Ron ne apne jeb me pada hua ek kapda nikala aur us kapde se Captain ka chehra dhak kar uske chehre ko kash ke kapde se bandh diya..
"ab bol,kya nam hain tera Captain Nair..ab jaan gaya main kaun hoon.."
Captain Nair wo kapda hatane ki koahish karne laga..use kuch nahi dikh raha tha..isi me Nair ship ke side me pahunch gaya aur dekhte hi dekhte ship se neeche Samundar me ja gira....Ron wahi khade use dekhta raha..
"bhag le beta Ron ,yadi kisi ko maloom chal gaya toh khair nahi..chal chup chap do teen botal chadha ke so ja...............continue..........

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UPDATE-3 :love::love:
Ye zinda hain..samundar ke beech me bane ek iceland me rahne walo ne samundar ki andhi me bahkar aaye hue shaks ko dekhkar ek dusare se puchhane lage..
"lagta hain mar gaya..iske pahnave se toh ye kisi jahaj ka Captain lagta hain.."us iceland me rahnewalo me se ek ne bola...tabhi neeche pada wo shaks jise sab mara hua samajh rahe the..wo khanste hue utha..
"are ye toh zinda hain.."waha maujood sabhi log aapas me khusar-phusar karne lage..
"hii..i am Captain Aditya.."Aditya ne apna hath un logo ki taraf badhate hue kaha..lekin wo log pichhe hat gaye..
"lagta hain ye jungali log hain,english nahi jante,..koyi baat nahi hindi me baat karke dekhata hoon.."Aditya ne man me socha..aur ek baar phhir apna hath un jungaliyo ki taraf kiya..is baar wo aur bhi pichhe hat gaye...
"Aditya-are tum sab ki phhat kyun rahi hain..main bhi tumhari tarah ek insan hoon...
Aditya ki baat wo log nahi samajh paye aur hua-hua karte hue ek dusare se baat karne lage..
"Aditya-salo tumko hindi bhi samajh nahi aati.. Jawab me Aditya ko keval hua-hua sunne ko mila..
"kaha phans gaya yaar,ek wo gand se aag phenkne wale janwaro ne pahle se hi maar li hain,upar se ye hua-hua.."Aditya wahi apna sar pakad kar baith gaya..aur un jungaliyo ko dekhane laga..sabhi ke kaan aur nak me chhed tha..aur sabhi Aditya ki taraf dekh rahe the..Aditya ne un jungaliyo ko apni taraf dekhata pakar apna sar niche kar liya.."ye jungali kahi mujhe kachha khane ka vichar toh nahi kar rahe.."Aditya ke khayalo me dakhal dete hue kisi ne use awaj di ...
"hindustani ho kya.."
Aditya ko apne kano pe yakin nahi hua ki koyi usse hindi me baat kar raha hain..Aditya ne upar dekha ,laghbhag usi ke umra ka ek naujwan uski taraf dekh raha tha..
"Aditya-kya..tumne hindi me baat ki..
"haan,main hindi samajh sakta hoon,.."
"good yar..ab mujhe yaha se bahar nikalne ka rasta batao.."
"thoda der aram karo..phhir is bare me baat karenge.."
"are chal na yar ,mujhe jaldi se yaha se bahar nikalna hain.."
"thik hain ruko main intezam karta hoon..."
kuch der ke baad dono iceland ke kinare par the..
"Aditya-ab ye khule samundar ko tair ke paar karna padega ,ya phhir koyi intezam kiya hain..
"pichhe dekho,humare log ek chhoti si nav lekar aa rahe hain.."itna kahkar wo naujwan apne sathiyo ke pass chala gaya..aur ek patwar ki taraf ki taraf Aditya ka ishara kiya..Aditya ne us patvar ko utha liya..dono us nav me baith gaye..aur patvar ke sahare aage badhne lage..
"Aditya-ek baat batao,hum hain kaha..
"hume kabhi jaroorat hi nahi padi ye janne ki.."
"matlab tum mujhe is samundar me gol duniya me ghuma rahe ho..khair chhodo ye batao tumhara nam kya hain.."
"raaj..."
"kya,maine socha ki tera nam kisi jungali ki tarah hoga..lekin aisa nahi hain..kya main vajah jaan sakta hoon.."
"main chhota tha..tab humare ghar se mujhe aur meri ma ko kuch ajib se logo ne jabajasti utha liya tha..aur phhir jab meri ankh khuli toh maine khud ko ek samundar ke kinare paya..lekin usi samay samundar ne mujhe aur meri ma ko nigal liya..main samundar me bahta hua yaha aa gaya..in logo ne hi mujhe bachaya...aur mujhe pala.."
"ab samjha tujhe hindi kaise aati hain..matlab tu in jungaliyo me se ek nahi hain..."
"ab kya is samundar me kud jao tab mera yakin karoge.....
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Ron,tumne Captain Nair ko kahi dekha..Riya ,Captain Nair ko na pakar Ron se puchhane lagi..
"mujhe kya maloom..hoga kahi "
"Ron,maine pura ship dhoond liya Captain ka koyi pata nahi chala.."
"ye toh bahut bura hua..lekin Captain Nair kaha gaya..ye tum dhoondo mujhe kuch kaam karne hain.."
Ron ,waha se door aa gaya ,aur apne jeb se Naksha nikal kar dekhane laga.."hmm..toh is registan me wo Naksha dafan hain..lekin waha pahuncha kaise jaye,,bina us Nakshe ke main samundar ka rasta nahi dhoond paunga.."Ron ko usi samay seth ne toka..
"Ron, tumne Captain sir ko kahi dekha.."
"ab tu kaun hain be..aur ye Sab us Captain ko kyun dhoond rahe hain.."
"bina Captain ke is ship ko aage kaun le jayega.."
"agar aisi baat hain toh mujhe Captain bana do..yyakin mano zinda wapas launga.."
"tu aur Captain..he..he..shakal dekhi hain Captain banne ki.."
"abey shakal se toh tu bhi Captain nahi dikhta ..ab fut le yaha se kahi mera dimak na khisak jaye.."
"abhi mujhe kaam hain isliye ,ja raha hoon..lekin agali baar tujhe jaroor jawab dunga,."
"mujhe intezar rahega tere jawab ka..."
sabhi pure ko dekh chuke the lekin Captain Nair ka koyi pata nahi chala..Riya pareshan thi..kyuki Captain ke bina ship ko jyada der nahi chhoda ja sakta tha..
"kya soch rahi ho janeman.."
"Ron,tum yaha mere room me kya kar rahe ho..."
"kuch nahi bas bahar man nahi lag raha tha..socha kyun na apni janeman se mil ke aau.."
"Ron,Captain Nair ka kuch pata nahi.."
"tum log uski fikar kyun kar rahe ho..dar ke bhag gaya hoga..abhi bhi vaqt hain mujhe Captain bana do.."
"Ron,kahi tumne toh kuch nahi kiya.."
"main toh bahut sarif hoon,main bhala kya kar sakta hoon.."Ron ne riya ko ankh marte hue kaha..
"tum mujhpe chance mat maro.."
"darling teri jaisi gulab ki kali maine aaj tak nahi dekhi..lekin mujhe ek baat karni hain..."
"kya.."
"ye tumhara jahaj sahi disha me ja raha hain kya..."
"isme koyi shaq nahi Ron..sab thik chal raha hain.."
Ron waha se jane laga..lekin palatkar riya se bola..
"tum asman me sair karne wale janwaro ke bare me socha hain..."
"kabhi nahi kyunki main in faltu baato pe yakin nahi karti.."
"alwida janeman..meri botal mera intezar kar rahi hogi..baad me milte hain..."
ship me Ron ek hath me botal liye ghoom raha tha,use ek kone me kuch log khade hue dikhayi diye ,wo bhi usi taraf chal pada..
"abey tum log ko koyi kaam dhandha nahi hain kya jahaj ko dayi taraf modo.."
Riya bhi wahi khadi thi..usne waha khade ek shaks ko ishara karke main chamber room me bheja..
"Ron-ye safhed kapde pahne hue ye kyun khade ho be..suna nahi is jahaj ke Captain ne kya bola..
"Riya-Ron,tumhe Captain kisne bana diya..
"Ron-tumne janeman...
"Riya-lekin jaha tak mujhe yaad hain ,maine abhi-abhi Sethji ko is ship ka naya Captain banaya hain..aur jaha tak mujhe ye bhi yaad hain ki tumhara nam Seth nahi Ron hain...sorry The Ron..mahan samundari shikari...
"tum meri bejjati kar rahi ho,ya ijjat kar rahi ho.."
"kabhi apne hath is botal ko alag karke samajhne ki koshish karo toh sab samajh me aayega.."
"main chalta hoon janeman..ek ladki mera intezar kar rahi hain.."
Ron ke jane ke baad waha wo shaks aaya ,jise Riya ne main chamber room me bheja tha..
"Captain Seth ,wo sahi bol raha tha,map ke anusar ship ko dayi taraf modna hain..yahi humari direction hain............continue............

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Update-4

Raat ho chuki thi,lekin ship apni full speed se aage badh raha tha..Riya ke man me Ron ki jasoosi karne ka khayal aaya...woh apne room se bahar nikli aur Ron ke room ke taraf chal padi..Riya ,bahar khadi hoke aas-pass dekhne lagi..darwaja andar se band tha ,jiska matlab saaf tha ki Ron andar hain..Riya darwaje ke chhed me se andar dekhane ki koshish ki..aur jo usne andar dekha uski saanse atak gayi..Ron ne ek ladki ke mu pe apna lund ghusa rakha tha..aur teji se andar bahar kar raha tha..Riya darwaje ke samne jhuk gayi ,taki usko andar dekhane me asani ho..Ron bahut der tak apne lund ko us ladki ke mu me andar bahar karta raha..ladki ke kahne par Ron ne uske mu se apna lund bahar nikala..Ron bade lund ko dekhkar Riya ne apna hath apne chuchiyo(boobs) par rakh liya..Ron ne us ladki ko uthakar apne bikhare hue bistar pe patak diya ,aur ek jhatke me hi uske saare kapde utar diye..wo ladki ab keval bra aur panty me hi thi..
"Ron-janeman..kya maal hain tu,tere in gore gore santaro ka size kya hain...
bistar pe padi wo ladki apne chuchiyon ko dabane lagi..pink color ke bra aur panty me us ladki ka gora badan kayamat dha raha tha..bahar chhup ke dekh rahi Riya ki ungaliya uske night dress ke andar chali gayi..Ron ke kahne pe wo ladki ghum gayi..Ron ne us ladki ke kamar pe hath phhirane laga..aur us ladki ki bra khol di..Ron us ladki ko wapas seedha kar diya..aur uski gori gori chamakdar chuchiyon ko apne dono hath se kaskar dabane laga....
Aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh....pleaseee dhere..aaaahhhhn...uski siskariya chalu ho gayi thi..Ron ki ungaliya uske nipple pe ja ruki..wo use sahlane laga..us ladki ne apne hath se Ron ka lund pakda ..."jaldi se kapde utaro..aur chodo mujhe.."
"kapde kya lena dena..wapas kaun pahnayega.."
Ron ne ab apne hath uske nipple se hata kar ,neeche ki taraf le jane laga..aur uski choot ko us ladki ke gulabi panty ke upar se hi sahlane laga...ooooouuuuuhhhhhhhh....ek baar phhir us ladki ki siskari kamre me gunji..Riya darwaje ke chhed se pura maja le rahi thi...Ron ne us ladki ki panty ko utar phenka aur ek jhatke se us ladki ke upar aa gaya..Ron ka lund ,uski choot ki deewaro se takara raha tha..dono garam ho chuke the..Ron ne bistar me pada takiya uthaya aur us ladki ke gand ke neeche rakh diya..aur uske baad uske gore gore jangho ko apne hatho se masalne laga..us ladki ki choot ne risna shuru kar diya tha..jisse uski gulabi choot chikani ho chuki thi.. Ron ne uski taango ko phailaya aur apne lund us ladki choot ke saamne rakha..
"please aap dheere dheere karna..bahut dino se kisi ka liya nahi.."
"tu fikar mat kar janeman..aaj phhir se ise khol dunga,."
Ron itna bol kar apne lund ko dhakka diya..please niiiikkkaaaalllloooo...uuuuuuiiiiiii ..mmmaaaaaaa....Lekin Ron ne usi samay do aur dhakke jad diye,uska adha lund choot ke andar pravesh kar chuka tha..aur teji se andar bahar karne laga..
"pura andar ghus gaya kya,ki aur bhi baki hain..."
"abhi toh sirf jaal bichhaya hain hai darling shikar karna toh baki hain.."
Ron ne ek aur jordar jhatka mara..Aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh.......wo ladki phhir chinkhi..Ron lagatar jhatke maar raha tha ,uska pura lund us ladki ki choot me ghus chuka tha..wo ladki apni ankh band kiye hue ,apne dono hatho se bistar ko kaske pakdi hui thi..aur apni kamar hila kar Ron ka sath de rahi thi..uska dard maje me change ho gaya tha..Ron lagatar use chod raha tha,.isi beech wo ek baar jhad gayi..lekin Ron ruka nahi aur lagatar apne lund ki gati ko badhane laga..jhadne ke karan us ladki ki choot pahle se bhi jyada chikni ho gayi thi..Ron lagatar dhakke marta raha,kuch der baad Ron bhi jhad gaya ,aur us ladki ko kaskar pakad liya..thodi der baad Ron bistar se utha aur us ladki ko jane ke liye bola..Riya apne room me wapas aa gayi..lekin Riya ko neend nahi aa rahi thi..wo wapas Ron ke room ke taraf chal padi..is baar gate khula hua tha..Ron apne kamre me baitha hua kuch soch raha tha..
"Riya-kya soch rahe ho ,The Ron...
Ron pichhe palta,,"tum kya kar rahi ho,yaha.."
"bas neend nahi aa rahi thi..toh socha kyun na tumhari bakwas baate sun liya jaye.."
"achchha idea hain..toh main shuru karu..lekin uske pahle main miss. Riya se kuch puchh sakta hoon..."
"bilkul..puchho.."
"tumne is ship ka nam BALLADONNA kyu rakha.."
"kyun tumhe pasand nahi ye name.."
"aisa hi samajh lo.."
"phhir is ship ka kya name hona chahiye.."
"mere hisab se Murdo ka jahaj...The Spiritual Ship.."
"Balladonna ,matlab samajhte ho.."
"nahi..shayad tumhare kisi rishtedar ka nam hi ye Balladonna.."
"Balladonna ka matlab hain,.ek mari hui khunsurat ladki,jo andhere me ghumte hui ,ship ko apne ruhani taqat se duba de..itni bhayankar ki us ship me sawar ek bhi jinda na bache.."
"kahi wo mari hui khubsurat ladki tum toh nahi..."
"khair chhodo,aur mujhe ye batao ,tumne jahaj ke direction ka sahi andaja kaise lagaya.."
"janeman..maine kaha na ki main 200 saal pahle us devils traingle me ja chuka hoon..."
"kya...Riya jor jor se hasne lagi..
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"hum pichhale do dino se chale ja rahe hain,chale ja rahe hain..lekin zamin ka koyi namo-nishan tak nahi...tumhe rasta maloom bhi hain ya yun hi mujhe ghuma rahe ho..."Aditya ne apne sath baithe hue Raaj se puchha..
"ye behuda sawal karne ki bajay patwar chalao ,jyada thik rahega tumhare liye..."
"ye patwar..bore ho chuka hoon ,main.."
"phhir tumhe Martin ke Murde iceland me bhej dena chahiye...waha zamin me dafan murde tera achchha time pass karenge.."
"kya..koyi majedar topic lagta hain..isi ko aage badhao..is viran samundar me kuch toh time pass hoga.."
"mujhe jyada kuch nahi maloom..bas itna suna hain ki..us death iceland me kayi admiyo ko zinda dafnaya gaya tha..sath me samundar ki shan The Spiritual Ship ko bhi,,"
"ye kaun sa ship hain.."
"kaha jata hain ki jab ye ship samundar me chalta tha toh ,iski raksha Mare hue logo ki ruhe karti thi..."
"Aditya-ha..ha...kya bakwas hain..
"kuch log ise sach mante hain...Raaj chup ho gaya..uske peeth pe jalan shuru ho gayi thi..jiska matlab wo achchhi tarah janta tha........continue.........

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Update-5 
kuch log ise sach mante hain...Raaj chup ho gaya..uske peeth pe jalan shuru ho gayi thi..jiska matlab wo achchhi tarah janta tha..
"Aditya-aisi shakal kyun bana li,kuch gadbad hain kya..
"Raaj-nahi,sab thik hain..tum patvar chalate raho..
"abey bol na,kya problem hain..aur ye tera chehra laal kyun ho gaya achanak.."
Raaj apne kapde utar kar Nav ke kone me rakhi ek botal Aditya ko deta hain..
"Aditya-iska kya karu main..khane ka maal hain kya iske andar..
"isme jo bhi hain mere peeth me bane hue Nishan pe laga de.."
Raaj apni peeth Aditya ki taraf karta hain..uske peeth ka Nishan jal utha..Raaj chillane laga..
"yyyaaaaaaa jaldi laga us botal me jo bhi hain.."
Aditya turant botal ko khol kar uske andar hath daalkar usme maujood lep Raaj ki peeth pe lagane laga..us Nishan ke pass jalti hui aag shant hone lagi..Raaj ko aaram mila,wo baith gaya...
"Aditya-abey ,ye kya tha..jab se un dragon ko dekha hain aisi vahiyat chize dekhane ko mil rahi hain..
"Raaj-chhod,bahut purani baat hain..ab sab thik hain...
"Aditya-yar tera alag hi fanda hain..ek toh tu achanak se us virane iceland me pahunch gaya..aur bina kisi dar ke tu is bhayankar samundar me mujhe leke aa gaya..aur upar se ye tera jalta hua Nishan..waise ye Nishan hain kis kism ka maine aaj tak nahi dekha...
"Raaj-tu manega nahi na..toh sun,ye Nishan jab main paida hua tab se mere sharir me hain..ek din kuch log aaye aur mujhe aur meri ma ko jabardasti uthakar samundar ke kinare phenk diya..us din samundar ne mujhe aur meri ma ko nigal liya lekin main bach gaya..us din se maine tay kiya ki samundar ke dwara shikar kiye hue ki madad karna..isliye kuch log mujhe Samundar ka Shikari bhi kahte hain.....
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Asman me badal chhaye the..jisse mausam kafi suhana tha..Balladonna me maujood sabhi log apne kamro se bahar aa gaye the..aur thandi hawa ka anand le rahe the...Balladonna me kayi videshi log bhi maujood the,..wo bhi tharki kism ke..isliye unke hatho me sharab ki botal thi...Riya ek sharabi se baat kar rahi thi..Ron ki botal khali ho gayi..usne aas pass dekha..toh Riya jisse baat kar rahi thi uske hatho me sharab ki botal dekhkar Ron uski taraf badha..
"abey ,la botal mujhe de..."Ron ne usse botal chheen li..wo gusse se Ron ki taraf dekhane laga..
"kahi tu mujhse apni sharab wapas toh nahi lene wala..."
"Riya-ab bas bhi karo Ron..ye behuda harkate band karo..
"tumne apni shakal aisi bana rakhi hain..ya haqiqat me tum tumhari shakal itni kharab hain..."
"what..Ron tum had se jyada badh rahe ho..."
"jao main ladkiyo se ladayi nahi karta.."
Riya Ron ko jawab dena chahti thi ,ki samundar me se ek bhayankar awaj ne Balladonna me maujood sabhi logo ko hila diya..
"Riya-Ron ,ye kya tha..
"shayad tumhari bakwas sunkar samundar bhi chillane laga.."
"ya majak karne ka time nahi Ron,akhir itni bhayankar awaj aayi kaha se..."
"dragons ko kabhi dekha hain"
"nahi..ye kya bol rahe ho.."
"aaj dekh lena...sab andar ghus jao..aur mere kamre se mera bandook lake do..."
Jahaj phhir se hilne laga..samne kohra chhane laga..
"ye sale abhi se pichhe pad gaye,maine socha tha Atlantic tak sab shant rahega..."
"Ron kya soch rahe ho..jaldi kuch karo..."
"bola na janeman,andar jao..abey kisi ne mera bandook laya..."
Ek ladka bhagte hue Ron ke pass aaya ,aur apne hath me maujood bhari bharkam bandook Ron ko de di...Ron ne us bhari bharkam bandook ko ek hath se utha liya..
"ab sabhi andar jaoge ya yaha rook kar marne ka intejar hain..."
Captain Seth sabhi ko andar bhejane laga..
"Seth-tum akele inse nipat loge..ya main help karu..
"Ron-umm..tumhari bhalayi isi me hain ki tum inke sath hi jakar apne room me sar chhupa kar baith jao..mujhe kisi ki bhi jaroorat nahi..
"teti jaankari ke liye bata doon ki,main Navy se hoon..ab dekh inka main kya karta hoon.."
Captain Seth us bhayankar kohare me dragons ko dekhkar bola..
"Ron ,ye kaun se prani hain maine aaj tak nahi dekha...'
Ron apni bandook ko kholke saaf kar raha tha...apne jeb se packet nikal kar bandook me barood bharne laga...
"Ron,maine puchha ye hain kaun..."
"dragons ke baare me kabhi suna hain..."
"haan ,wahi na jo aag phenk sakte hain..lekin ye sab toh kahani kisse me hote hain..."
"ye usse bhi khatarnak hain..ab apne admiyo ko bol do main jis taraf kahunga usi taraf jahaj ko mode,yadi zinda rahna hain toh...ur tum mere sath aao..."
Ron aur Captain Seth ship ke saamne aa gaye..
"is adam jamane ke gun se unko maroge,ye chalti bhi hain..."
"bas dekhte rahi iska kamal..."
dragon pass me aa gaye..Captain Seth ne apne army ko upar bula liya..aur un dragons par attack karne ke bola..sabhi un dragons pe gola barood chhodane lage..dragons pass aate gaye..kuch der baad bilkul karib...dragons ko dekhkar sabhi dar gaye ..keval Ron ko chhodkar..
"ship ko full speed se aage badhao..aur aage jakar bayi taraf ghuma dena.."Ron sharab ki botal ka dhakkan kholte hue bola...
dragons ne ship par hamla kar diya..kuch dragons ka size ship ke barabar tha,.unke nukele bade bade daant the..Ron ship ke sabse saamne wale area me gaya...
"abey kha pi ke nahi aaye kya..aur goli chalao..warna aaj gaye kaam se..."
dragons ship ko takkar dene lage..unke mu se aag nikal rahi thi..dragon ek bhayankar awaj ke sath lagatar ship pe attack karne lage..Captain Seth bahar aa gaya..aur hath me rakhe gun se dragons par hamla kar diya..
"Seth-aao salo,tumhe maloom nahi tumhara pala kisse pada hain..tabhi ek vishal dragon ship pe kud gaya..Captain seth ne us par hamla karna shuru kar diya..lekin us dragon par koyi asar nahi hua..wo dragon ship ko dubane laga..
"Seth-Ron,waha khade khade kya dekh rahe ho..meri madad karo...
Ron ne apni botal ek taraf phenk di aur hath me pakde bandook se us dragon pe fayar kiya..Ron ki bandook se goli ki jagah ek bhayankar aag nikli...ship pe sawar dragon jalne laga..Ron ne us jalte hue dragon ko laat mari ,lekin wo vishal dragon hila tak nahi..
"Ron-ship ko ek taraf uthao re..aur ye kinare me lage pillers ko ukhad do,,,
"Seth-ye kya kar rahe ho...
"Ron-mujhe dragons ko samundar me dubana bahut pasand hain...
Navy ke sabhi log pillar ko ukhadne lage..ship kayi feet tak Samundar me dhans chuka tha..Ron waha se wapas kinare par aaya aur Navy army dwara ukhade gaye pillar ko uthakar samne se aate hue dragon par de mara..wo lohe ki rod seedhe us dragon ke sharir me dhans gayi...
"kya nishana lagaya hain ,maine.."
saare dragons ship ko gher chuke the...lekin Ron waha khada dragons ko gin raha tha...
"Seth-ab kya in danav se hath milane ka vichar hain,.jaldi se inpar attack karo..
"Ron-hath milane ka koyi irada mera nahi hain..main toh inhe ginkar dekh raha tha..ki mujhe kitni baar apni bandook chalani padegi..Ron apni bandook ko uthakar pichhe ki taraf chala diya..pichhe se aata hua dragon bhi jalne laga..aur kuch der baad samundar me gir gaya...
"seth-is dragon ka kya kare..ship samundar ke andar doob raha hain..
"sabko andar jakar do ko ek kinare khade ho jaye ,mera matlab bayi taraf phhir jahaj ko dayi taraf ghuma do..."
"tum pagal ho gaye ho..ship doob jayega.."
"abhi kaun si kami hain doobne me..jaisa bolta hoon waisa karo..warna sham ka khana narak ki aag me khaoge..."
Ron apni bandook ka muh baki bache dragons ki taraf karke bandook chalani shuru kar di..kuch dragons ship se bhi takra gaye,,jisse ship ko bhari nuksaan hua...Ron ke kahe anusar Captain seth ne ship ko dayi taraf ghuma diya..ship me maujood wo jalta hua dragon seedhe neeche samundar me ja gira..ab mahol shant ho chuka tha..Ron pass me padi botal ko uthakar andar jane laga...
"Ron-sabko bol do ki,khuli hawa khane wapas bahar aa jaye,,,aur ek mast ladki ko mere kamre me bhej do,.,yaad rakhna videshi honi chahiye.................continue.........



Update-6
Dragons ke hamle ke baad sabhi ship me bahar aa gaye the..Riya Captain Seth ke sath baat kar rahi thi..

"Riya-ship ko bahut nuksan hua hain..tumhare navy ke kitne gaye..

"do ghayal hue hain bas..Ron ne achchha kaam kiya,yadi wo nahi hota toh shayad hi hum unka mukabla kar pate..."

"Ron hmmm..isiliye main use layi thi..lekin ye sab wapas bhi aa sakte hain...tab hum kya karenge.."

Captain Seth ke pass koyi jawab nahi tha..

"wapas jaroor aayenge janeman aur wo bhi isse bhi badi tadad me.."

Riya-Ron,aage ke baare me kuch bata sakte ho..

"Ron-ek shart pe main tumhari madad karunga...

"Riya-kaisi shart...

"Ron-ummm..wo main baad me bataunga.abhi rahne do..

Ron waha se jane laga lekin Captain Seth ne Ron ko rukne ke liye kaha..

"mujhe maloom hain,ab tum mera shukriyada karoge.."

"Captain seth-mera aisa koyi plan nahi hain,main keval tumhari bandook dekhna chahta hoon..aur wo barood bhi...

"apne dimak ka ilaj karwao,..main apni chize kabhi bhi kisi ko nahi dikhata..ab mera rasta chhodo warna main un dragon ki tarah tujhe bhi bhoon dunga..."

Captain Seth samne se hat gaya..aur gusse se uski taraf Ron ko jate hue dekhne laga..

"Riya-kya hua Captain,Ron se kyun jhagad rahe the..

Captain seth ne riya ko Ron ki aag ugalne wali bandook ke karname ke baare me bataya..

"Seth-mam,yadi waisi hi bandook sabhi logo ke pass hogi toh..hum un samundar ke janwaro ko badi asani se maar sakte hain...

"Riya-yadi aisa hain toh phhir main Ron se baat karti hoon...

Riya ,Ron ke kamre ke taraf chali gayi...

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Raaj ke mu se samundar ka shikari nam sunkar Aditya hasne laga..

"Raj-hans kyun raha hain..

"teri baat sunkar hans raha hoon..tu aur samundar ka shikari..."

Raj chup hi raha..Aditya ne samundar me kisi ko bahte hue dekha...

"Aditya-abey ,ye kaun hain..insan hi hain na ki phhir kisi janwar se panga hone wala hain...

"Raj-insan hi lagta hain..chal naav uski taraf ghuma hain...dekhte hain..

naav ki disha us bahte hue insan ki taraf ki ho jati hain..Aditya aur Raj usko upar late hain..

"Aditya-ye chutiya samundar me swimming kar raha tha ,kya..zinda bhi hain ki mar gaya..

"Raj-iske kapde tere kapde jaise hain,kahi tum dono ek sath kaam toh nahi karte..

Raj ke kahne par Aditya uske kapde ko dhyana se dekhta hain,Aditya ki najar uske batch par gayi..Captain Nair...

"Aditya-ye toh meri tarah Captain hain kisi ship ka..

"Raaj-ye zinda hain, 

Raaj Captain Nair ka pet jor jor dabane laga..jisse Nair ke pet me ghusa samundar ka pani bahar aaya..Captain Nair khanste hue utha..

"Captain Nair-tum dono kaun ho..aur wo behuda jungali kaha hain,jisne mujhe samundar me giraya...

"Aditya-abey shant rah..aur ye bata tere sath kya hua..

"main Belladonna ship ka Captain hoon..raat me ship me maujood ek jungali se meri ladayi hui..usne mujhe dhoke se samundar me gira diya..agar dobara wo jungali mujhe mil jaaye toh chhodunga nahi..."

"Aditya-Balladonna ship ka tu Captain,ye Balladonna ship kahi Riya ka toh nahi...

"right ,lekin tujhe kaise maloom,us ship aur Riya ke baare me.."

"main bhi Riya ke ek ship ka captain hoon ,lekin wo ship doob gaya badi mushkil se maine apni jaan bachayi..."

"Raaj-maine teri jaan bachayi..bhool gaya..

"Nair-ye kaun hain..aur tum dono is beech samundar me is chhoti si naav me bhangda kyun kar rahe ho .

"Raaj-main bas is namoone ki madad kar raha tha..

"namoona kise bola be,sale jungali.."Aditya ne Raaj ko ghoorte hue kaha..

"tujhe bola be namoona..aur teri himmat kaise hui mujhe jungali bolne ki,abhi is samundar me phenk dunga.."

"hath laga ke dikha..gand tod dunga..,"

Captain Nair ne dono ko shant kiya..aur kaha ki Balladonna ship isi raste aayega..hum usi taraf chalte hain..ship mil jayega..

teeno Balladonna ki direction me apne naav ki sahayata se badhne lage...

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Riya,Ron ke room ke taraf aa rahi thi..Ron ke room ka darwaja khula hua tha,Riya seedhe Ron ke room me aa gayi...

"Ron-mujhse kya kaam pad gaya tumhara ,jo tumne yaha aane kast kiya...

"Riya-mujhe tumhara bandook dekhna hain..

"Ron-wo toh main ek hi shart pe dunga...aur wo shart ye hain ki tum aaj raat mere sath ..janeman tu kafi samajhdar hain..samajh hi gayi hogi ki main kya kahna chahta hoon..

"Riya-tumhari himmat kais hui,mujhse is tarah ki baat karne ki..

"kya karu Riya darling tujhe dekhte hi khada ho jata hain..ab faisala tujhe lena hain..."

"toh maine ye faisala liya hain ki...Riya ne apna skirt utar diya..

"mujhe pasand aaya ,tumhara ye faisala..kafi bade hain tumhare ..."

Riya ne apna chehra dusari taraf ghuma liya..Riya ki taraf Ron badhta gaya..Ron tum pakke shikari ho..wo toh main hoon hi janeman..ab kuch mat bolna mujhe maja nahi aata..Ron ne,Riya chehra apni taraf kiya..Ron ne uske kamar ko kaskar pakad liya..Riya apne aap ko Ron se chhutane lagi..lekin Ron bahut majbooti se Riya ke kamar ko kase hue tha..Riya chhatpatane lagi..lekin Ron par iska koyi farak nahi pada Ron Riya ko kamar se utha kar apne se lipta liya..

"janeman bahut kam haseena ke sath kapde utar ke maje karta hoon..tum unme se ek ho..kapde utaro mere.."

Riya,ektak Ron ki ankho me dekhne lagi..Riya halka halka kaanp rahi thi..Ron ne apne hath Riya ke kano aur gardan pe phiraya..aur kiss kiya..Riya sihar uthi..Riya ke honth kuch khule hue the..Ron ne apne honth lejakar Riya ke hontho se mila diye..aur Riya ki jeebh ko chusne laga..Riya ne bhi responce dena shuru kar diya..Ron ka lund puri tarah tan chuka tha..anjane me hi Ron apne lund ko Riya ki jangho me ghusane ki koshish kar raha tha..kiss lete samay Ron ne Riya ki kamar ko kaskar pakad kar apni taraf khincha..Riya ke boobs Ron ke seene se buri tarah ragad gaye..Ron ke hath Riya ke kamar ko sahlate hue ,chutaron pe atak gaye..Ron ne unhe kaskar daba diya..Ufffffffffff...what r u doing Ron....Ron ko english nahi aati thi ,lekin use maloom tha ki Riya kya bolna chah rahi hain..usne aur kaskar Riya ke chutaron ko daba diya..Riya ne apne hontho ko azad kiya aur Ron ke gardan pe kaat liya..Ron ne apna baya hath Riya ke boobs pe rakha aur bra ke upar se hi masalne laga.."aaaahhhhhh...pyar se nahi daba sakte kya..."

"janeman ,main pyar nahi shikar karta hoon"

Ron buri tarah uske baye taraf wale boobs ko masalne laga..Riya ,Ron ke lund ko bahar se hi sahlane lagi..Ron ne Riya ki is harkat pe apna paint hi utar diya..aur Riya ke hontho ko phhir apne hontho se kaid kar ke chusne laga..Riya ne apne hatho se Ron ke lund ko bahar nikala ..aur Ron ke lund ko dekhkar ek baar uski saans hi atak gayi..meri chut bhi aise lund ka maja lena chahegi Ron,jaldi se apna lund ghusa do.."jaisi tumhari marji,abhi ghusa deta hoon..." Ron ne jaldi hi apne aur Riya ke kapde utare dono ab nagn awastha me ek dusare ke samne khade the..Ron ,Riya ko utha kar uski chut me apni ungali daal di,,Riya ki chut se pani rish raha tha..Riya ko lejakar bed bistar par patak diya..aur kud pada Riya par..Riya ne apne hatho se apni chut ki deewaro ko faila kar Ron ke khade lund ko chunaoti di..lekin Ron apna lund ghusane ke bajaye apni ungali ghusa di ,Riya ko tadpane me Ron ko maja aa raha tha.."Ronnnn..aaaahhhhhh ab ungali se hi jhada dega ki lund bhi dalega..."Riya ki baat sunkar Ron ne Riya ke dono tango ko apne kandho pe rakha ,aur apne lund ko Riya ke chut ke muhane pe rakha. Aur kaskar ek dhakka lagaya..Riya ki choot tight thi wo chilla uthi..pleaseeeeeee arammmmm se Ronnnn aaaaaaaahhhhhhhh..lekin Ron rukne walo me se nahi tha..usne Riya ke dono gore tango ko kaskar pakadte hue ek tej dhakka mara adha lund riya ki chut me pravesh kar chuka tha..lekin Riya ki ankhe laal ho chuki thi..usne kaskar Ron ki kamar ko pakad liya tha..aur Ron ko door karni ki koshish kar rahi thi..lekin Ron ne Roya ki dono hatho ko pakad kar uske sar ki taraf apne hatho se band liya..Ron Riya ki taraf jhuk gaya..aur uske tadpte raseele hontho pe apni jeebh fira di..aur ek tej dhakka mara Ron ka pura lund riya ki chut me ghus chuka tha..Riya phhir chillane lagi...uuuiiiiiiiiiii mmaaaaaaaaa....kiiitttnnnaaaa bbaadddaaa luuunndddd...Ron ne pure ghuse hue lund pe aur jor lagaya..aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh....Riya siskariya lene lagi..Ron kuch der tak apne lund ko yun hi rahne diya phhir ek jhatke me bahar khinch kar ,ek pahle se bhi tej jhatke ke sath andar daal diya..Riya phhir chilla uthi..Ron,Riya ki chuchiyon ko chusne laga..aur apne lund ko tej speed ke sath andar bahar karne laga..Riya kabhi Ron ke sar ke baal ko pakad kar nochati ya phhir apne nakhun se Ron ke peeth pe nishan banakar..Ron ke tej dhakke sath Riya ki siskari jari thi...bahut der ke baad jab Ron jhadne wala tha yoh usne Riya ke hontho ko chusna aur katna chalu kar diya,.aur ek tej dhakke ke sath jhad gaya,..Riya is pure khel me teen baar jhad chuki thi aur hanf bhi rahi thi..Ron Riya ke upar hi let gaya..aur uske chuchiyo ko sahlate hue bola..."sorry jan,par meri bandook toh samundar me hi gir gayi thi..."Riya ka matha thanka..usne Ron ko upar se hataya..aur khadi ho gayi..

"Ron-dhang se chus toh lene diya hota,.bahut mulayam hain,.

"Riya-dekh,main bahut gusse me hoon,apni bandook mujhe de de ...

"sach bol raha hoon janeman,bandook kal dragons se ladte waqt samundar me gir gayi.."

"iska matlab tumne mujhe..."

"bilkul sahi kah rahi ho ,maine tumhe muft me chod diya..shikari hoon..shikar toh karna hi padega..."
Riya gusse se apne kapde pahankar waha se wapas apne room me aa gayi.....................continue.............



jab tujhe balladonna ka captain banaya gaya tha toh apne sath doorbin vagareh nahi rakhi thi kya...maloom nahi tujhe Captain kisne banaya"Aditya ,Captain Nair ko tana marte hue kaha..
"tu bhi toh Captain hain,tujhe hosh nahi tha ..mujhe bol raha hain.."

"tu mujhse panga mat le ,warna tu mujhe janta nahi ,mera nam Captain Aditya hain..."

"toh kya hua ,mera nam bhi Captain Nair hain..wo bhi tere jaisa aisa waisa nahi hoon...Balladonna ka Captain hoon..."

"sale teri itni himmat ki mujhe yani Captain Aditya ko aisa waisa bola..ab tune teri toh... "Aditya khada hua..aur Captain Nair ko jhadkte hue bola..Nair bhi akhir ek Captain tha,,use bardasht nahi hua ki koyi uski ijjat utare..wo bhi Aditya ko bakta hua khada ho gaya..dono ko rokne ki Raj ne koshish ki..lekin Raj dono ko rokne me nakam raha..dono ek dusare se ladte rahe..jiske karan jis naav pe wo teeno baithe the..wo naav palat gayi..teeno samundar me gir pade.....

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Ron apni hamesha ki adat ka palan karte hue..apni mu me sharab ki botal lagaye ship ke bahar aaya..sabhi ship ki marammat kar rahe the..

"oye..ye sab kya kar rahe ho.."

Captain Seth sabhi ko instruction de raha tha..Ron ki baat par kisi ne dhyan nahi diya..

"Ron-kar lo marammat ship ki..bahut jald hi phhir se dragons aane wale hain..

is baar sabhi ne Ron ki taraf dhyan diya ..sab apna kaam chhodkar Ron ki taraf dekhne lage...

"tumhe kaise pata ki ,wo dragons phhir se aayenge.."sabhi ek sath chillaye..

"Ron-ab aaye na line pe..

"Seth-oye,tu inhe dara kuun raha hain..sabhi apna apna kaam karo ise bakwas karne ki adat hain..

"Ron-captain,kabhi manav dragon ke baare me suna hain...

"ab tu mujhe kaam karne de warna ship ke neeche phenk dunga.."

"mat man,mujhe kya,,akhiri baar bhi maine tujhse puchha tha ,dragons ke baare me yaad hain..lekin tu mana nahi tha,."

Ron ,waha se chala gaya..wo riya ke room ke taraf ja raha tha..Riya apna room lock kar rahi thi..Ron ,riya dekhkar mushkurane laga...

"Riya-yaha kyun khade ho..

"abhi tak naraj ho,janeman..main yaha tumhe kuch dikhane aaya tha.."

Riya ko laga ki Ron apni gun dikhayega ,lekin Ron apna hath apne lund ki taraf le gaya,...

"Ron-dekho ,kal raat se khada hain..

"sun be jungali ,dobara yadi aisi harkat ki toh balladonna ke neeche phenkwa dungi..."

"chhoti baaton pe itna gussa nahi hote janeman,pahle tum batao ki tumhe us devils traingle par kya milega.."

"wo toh tumhe zindagi bhar maloom nahi chalega.."

"sahi me,yani zindagi bhar tum mere sath rahogi,."

Riya waha se chali gayi..

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"ab tum dono me se koyi bhi kuch bola toh ,is baar dono ko yahi phenk kar chala jaunga.."Raaj apne kapde ka utarte hue bola...

"Aditya-abey oye captain apne kapde nikal de,warna thandi me mar jayega..mujhe marne ki jarurat nahi padegi..

"Nair-captain kabhi apna dress nahi nikalta..

"Aditya-Captain ,tera ship kaha hain...kahi tu is naav ka captain toh nahi hain..he..he..

"Raaj-tum dono phhir chalu ho gaye be...

Raaj bolte hue chup ho gaya..use samne se ek vishal ship aata hua dikhayi diya...

"Raaj-abey kya yahi hain ,tumhara Balladonna ship ,.

Aditya aur Raaj samne dekhte hain..Nair khusi se uchal padta hain..
"Nair-yahi hain Balladonna..mera ship ,ab sabse pahle waha pahunchkar us jungali ko bahar phenkunga



Nair-yahi hain Balladonna..mera ship ,ab sabse pahle waha pahunchkar us jungali ko bahar phenkunga...
"Aditya-us jungali ko baad me bahar phenkna pahle pichhe dekh...

pichhe ka najara dekhkar Captain Nair ka halak sukh gaya..jish Balladonna ki wo itni der se tarif kar raha tha..utna bade bade kayi dragon usi taraf aa rahe the...

"Raaj-ye dragon apni seema kaise paar kar sakte hain..atlantic ocean ke is taraf inka aana mana hain...ab gaye kaam se..

"Aditya-dekh bhai ,ye koyi niyam kanoon batane ka waqt nahi hain..jo bhi ho mujhe pakka yakin hain ki hum koyi sapna nahi dekh rahe hain..jo bhi hain ye sab sach hain...

"Captain Nair-mujhe ek baar Balladonna me phuncha do ,in salo ko main bhoon dalunga...

"jaldi jaldi patwar chalo..hume jald se jald balladonna me pahunchna hoga...warna aaj in khooni darindo ke mu ka niwala ban jayenge..."

Ron ship ke bahar hi khada tha..use samne se aate bhayankar toofan ki bhanak lag gayi...

"aaj wo danav bhi aaya hain...aaj toh Balladonna ko upar wala hi bachayega..abey is mamooli jahaj ki chhod,tujhe kaun bachayega..."Ron bhagta hua ship ke andar ghus gaya.."abey kaamchoro baar jao...hamla karne ki taiyari karo..dragon ka hamla hone wala hain..kaha mar gaye sab ke sab.."

Ron ke hungame ke karan sabhi bahar aaye..

"Riya-ye hungama kyun macha rakha hain Ron..

"Ron-pichhe dekho..tum sabke mehman aa rahe hain...

Ron ke kahne par sabki najre pichhe ki taraf gayi...sabki saanse atak gayi..balladonna ship se bhi bade bade dragons..

"Seth-Ron,maine tujhe kaha tha..apni gun dikha de lekin tu nahi mana ab in dragons se mukabla kaise kare.,jo humare ship se bhi bade hain..

"Ron-abhi wo pass nahi hain Captain,isliye itne chhote dikh rahe hain..

"kya,ye tujhe chhote dikh rahe hain..."

"captain abhi wo bahut door hain..warna unke ahat se hi tumhara ye jahaj doob jata...

"tumhe ya sab kaise maloom Ron..aur hum tumhari baat par kaise yakin kar le..."

Captain Seth ke is sawal par Ron ne apne pass hi khade navy ek army se uski gun chheen li..aur Captain seth ki taraf nishana lagane laga..ship me maujood sabhi achambhit rah gaye ki Ron ,Captain seth par kyun Nishana laga raha hain...

"Seth-abey pagal ho gaya hain kya..maine thik hi toh sawal kiya...

"Ron-samne se hat...dragons pe nishana laga raha hoon..Captain Seth waha se turant hat gaya..Ron ne kayi goliya fayar ki lekin dragon ki taraf koyi halchal nahi hui..

"dekha sabne us taraf se koyi halchal nahi hui..yani wo goli ki pahunch se door hain..yani bahut door hain..lekin jyada der nahi..wo teji se balladonna ki taraf badh rahe hain..wo ise tabah kar denge koyi zinda nahi bachega..sivay mere,."

seth ,Ron ko rokte hue bola..."ek minut ,tumne khud ko samajh kya rakha hain..ki sivay tumhare koyi nahi bachega..jab balladonna hi khatam ho jayega toh tu kya samundar tair kar paar karega...bevkoof...."

"captain ye sawal yadi mujhse puchhne ki bajay Riya se puchha hota toh jyada behtar hota..kyun janeman..aur rahi baat meri toh ek baat jaan lo Captain Seth, Ron us shaks ka nam hain,jo samundar se tairti hui ek chhoti si machhali ko dekhkar uski chal bata sakta hain...ummid hain tum sabko kuch samajh nahi aaya hoga:D"

sabhi ko kisi ki awaj sunayi deti hain..sabhi apne aas pass dekhte hain..

"Riya-awaj shayad neeche se aa rahi hain..jaldi dekho kahi koyi gir gaya kya..

ship me maujood kuch log bhag kar ship ke kinare pe lage rod ko pakadkar neeche dekhne lage...

"are ye toh apne Captain Nair hain..par Captain Nair ke sath ye do namoone kaun hain..."

Nair naav me baitha baitha hans diya..Aditya ko ye baat khatak gayi..

"sale namoona hoga tera baap..main Captain Aditya hoon..."

"Captain Nair-iski baat ka bura mat jana..hume upar lane ka koyi intezam karo...

Captain Nair ki awaj tab tak Riya,Ron aur seth ke kano me bhi pad chuki thi..teeno waha aa gaye...Ron Captain Nair ko dekhkar pichhe hat gaya..

"ye kaha se aa gaya..ab ye sabko bata dega ki maine hi ise jahaj se giraya tha..upar se ye dragons pichhe padae hue hain"

"ship ki speed kam karo..Captain Nair ko upar lana hain..."

Riya ne un teeno ko dekha Aditya ko jab usne dekha toh use yakin hi nahi hua..usne confirm karne ke liye Aditya ki taraf ungali se ishara karte hue boli.."tum Captain Aditya ho kya,..."

"Riya mam aap yaha kya kar rahi hain..."

"Riya- Aditya...sorry sorry Captain Aditya..tum zinda ho jaankar bahut khushi hui..ship ki speep ko kam karo...

"Ron-riya,jahaj ki speed ko kam mat karo..dragon bahut karib aa chuke hain...

"Riya-Ron,teri toh koyi baat main manungi nahi aur mere dono khoye hue Captain mil gaye..upar se ek ship me alredy maujood hain..ab jis jahaj pe teen Captain ho uska koyi kya bigad sakta hain...mujhe maloom hota ki Captain Aditya mil jayega toh main tujhe yaha kabhi nahi lati..ab apna mu band karke khisak le...

"Ron-janeman ,tumhe maloom nahi hoga,isliye bata deta hoon..jis jahaj me teen teen Captain ho ,wo jahaj teen disha me jayegi,nateeza ye hoga ki tumhara ye balladonna apne akhiri padav par hain...

Balladonna ki speed kam ho gayi..sabhi ne badi mehnat se teeno ko upar khincha...

"Raaj- meri naav ko bhi upar khinch lo...baad me kaam aayegi..

"welcome Captain Aditya and Captain Nair....mujhe aap dono se bahut kuch puchhna hain..lekin abhi aap dono aaram kijiye..."

"Captain Nair-mam,main Balladonna ka captain hoon..mujhe aram nahi karna un samundari danavo ka hamla hone wala hain..

Aditya aram karne ja raha tha ,lekin phhir uske andar se awaj aayi ki jab Captain Nair nahi thaka hain toh phhir toh Captain Aditya ki baat hi alag hain..Captain Aditya bhi riya ki taraf badhaya..."mam,actually mujhe bhi thakan nahi hain..ab bhale hi mera ship doob gaya ho..lekin main bhi toh ek Captain hi hoon na..."

"Riya-mujhe tum dono ki lagan dekhkar khusi hui...lekin Captain Aditya tumhare sath kya hua tha..ekdum achanak tumhara connection humse kat gaya tha...

"Aditya-mam..hum Atlantic ocean ko laghbhag paar chuke the ,aur devils traingle start hone wala tha..tabhi dragons ne humate ship pat attack kar diya,,mam unhone pure ship ko dubo diya..ek adhabhud taqat hain in dragons ke pass..Aditya phhir Raaj ki taraf ishara karte hue bola..."mam isne meri jaan bachayi samundar ke baare me bahut kuch janta hain..."

Riya ne Raaj ko upar se neeche tak dekha.."ladka kaam ka lagta hain...Seth isko kaam samjha do..."

Riya waha se jane lagi lekin Captain Nair ne riya ko rok liya...

"mam,wo jungali kaha hain...apka chaheta The Ron..."

"tum uske baare me kyun puchh rahe ho..."

"mam,main use zinda nahi chhodunga usi ki vajah se main is samundar me gira tha,,ya phhir kahe ki us namurad jungali ne mujhe balladonna se neeche giraya tha..."

Riya aur seth ki cheenkh nikal gayi..

"Riya-kya Ron ne tumhe is samundar me giraya tha..:eek:

Ron apni bandook liye hue bahar aata hain..."kaise ho Captain Nair bahut yaad aayi teri..tune bhi mujhe bahut yaad kiya hoga..kyun.."

"Nair-seth la ghu de,abhi sale ki khopdi ko uda deta hoon bahut bak bak karta hain...

"Ron-mujhe maaf karna darling ,par abhi tujhe mujh par goli chalane ke bajay ....Ron chup ho gaya aur apni bandook ko mu pichhe ki taraf kiya..."toh main ye bol raha tha ki abhi is vaqt mujh par goli chalane ke bajaye yadi in dragons pe chalaoge toh jyada maja aayega ..."Ron itna bolkar apni bandook ko dag deta hain..ek bhayankar aag Ron ke bandook se nikal kar pichhe se aa rahe dragon ko apni chapet me le liya...dragon jalne laga...waa ship pe maujood sabhi logo ke dil ye bhayankar nazara dekh kar dahal gaye...dragon jalte hue waha aas pass kuch der udta raha ...kuch der baad dragon samundar me gir gaya...
"Ron-mujhe samundar ka SHIKARI yun hi nahi kahte........



Ron-mujhe samundar ka SHIKARI yun hi nahi kahte..ab mera khubsurat chehra dekhne ke bajay,yadi in dragons ke badsurat chehre dekhoge toh shayad zinda bach jao..hamla karo re ,in badsurato par..
sabhi apne apne hathiyar lekar dragons ka intezar karne lage..saamne kohra chhane laga..usi kohre ke andar se kayi prakar ki kaanfadu awaaj aayi..

"Raaj-ye banda kaun hain,.aur ye itna mahir kaise hain..

Captain Nair wahi khasa apne hathiyar ko dragon ki disha me taane hue tha..

"Nair-kya khak mahir hain..dhoke se mujhe balladonna ke neeche giraya tha..kamina kahi ka..aage in dragons se mil loon ,phhir is samundar ke Shikari ka kaam tamam kar dunga..

"Raaj-samundar ka Shikari,aur ye ,Raaj hasne laga..

"abey daant kyun dikha raha hain..maine toh wahi kaha jo wo bolta rahta hain.."

"phhir toh main is behrupiye se jaroor milunga..jo mera naam lekar logo ko bewkoof bana raha hain.."

"abey gun toh le le,warna in dragons se tujhe kaun bachayega.."

Raaj apne chehre par ek smile late hue bola"in dragons ko mujhse kaun bachayega ,iski chinta karo.."Raaj wahi pass me pade ek rod ko uthakar Ron ki taraf badh chala...

"kaise ho samundar ke shikari..."Raaj ,Ron ke kandhe par rakhte hue kaha..Ron peechhe muda...Raaj ko dekhkar wo sochne laga ki ye kaun hain..jab Ron ,Raaj ko nahi pahchan paya toh apni bandook ko Raaj ki taraf karte hue bola..

"tu kaun hain be..tujhe kabhi dekha nahi..shayad 3rd class me rahta hain..door chal mujhse.."

"chup ho ja behrupiye..warna ye rod tere pet ke aar paar kar dunga.."

Raaj ke dwara behrupiya bolne par Ron apne chehre ko chhune laga..

"ankh ka ilaaj karwa..mere chehre par koyi mask nahi hain..aur tu hain kaun..mere khayal se tu mera prashanshak hain.."

"Ron name hain na tera ,toh sun waise mera naam Raaj hain..lekin log mujhe Samundar ka shikari kahte hain.."

Ek taraf dragons ki toli Balladonna ke karib aa rahi thi..wahi dusari taraf Ron aur Raaj ki bahas jari thi..

"Ron-mujhse toh bol diya..par kisi aur se mat kahna..warna jaan se maar denge...

"jaan se marana tere bas ka khel nahi hain..beharupiye.."

"beharupiya..mera nam ,sunkar maja nahi aaya.."

"chal samne se hat beharupiye..aaj tujhe dikhata hoon shikar kaise karte hain.."

Ron samne se hat gaya..ek dragon teji se ship ki taraf aa raha tha..Raaj ne apne hath me pakdi hui rod ko us dragone pe nishana laga kar phenk diya..sabhi Raaj ke nishane ko dekhte rah gaye..Raaj ke dwara phenka gaya Rod dragon ke mu me ghus kar uske sharir ke aar paar ho gaya..

"Ron-kya khak shikar kiya hain..aisa shikar toh is jahaj ka Captain Seth bhi kar deta hain..Nair ,Seth ke nam ke aage Balladonna ka Captain shabd sunkar gusse se Seth ki taraf dekhta hain..seth ,Nair ke pass aata hain..

"Seth-Captain aap ,uski baaton me na pade..aap yaha se gayab the,isliye riya mam ne mujhe Captain bana diya tha..

"Nair-yar main iske liye gussa nahi hoon..us jungali ne teri insult ki isliye.....Captain Nair ki juban ruk gayi ,usne apne hath se samne ki taraf ishara kiya.."oh my god..ye kaisa bhayankar najara hain..ye dragon toh bahut bada hain.."

sabhi samne ki taraf dekhne lage..laal rang ka dragon jiske samne Balladonna bhi chhota lag raha tha..aur us dragon par baitha hua ek kala saya..jiske hath me ajib tarah ka farsha tha..sabhi ship ke andar bhagne lage..

"Ron- ruk jao be..daro mat is kallu se..

Ron ki awaj sunkar us dragon par baitha hua kale saya ne apne gardan Ron ki taraf ghumayi..uski ankhe laal ho gayi..usne apne farshe ko kaskar pakad liya aur upar uthaya..wo saya aage kuch karta isse pahle hi Ron ne apni bandook uski taraf taan kar kaha..

"abey oye chaparganju kallu..aram se ye bandook dekh raha hain..ye wahi bandook hain ..yaad kar.."

Us kale saye ne apne farshe ko neeche kiya..aur ek jordar awaj me dahada...

"Captain The Ron ,is baar tujhe main is samundar me dafan kar dunga warna mera nam samundar ka shikari nahi..."

"Riya-ek aur shikari..pata nahi aur kitne aayenge aur apne aap ko samundar ka shikari batayenge..

"Ron-janeman,uski baat ka bura mat mano..ye kallu jhoot bahut bolta hain..tum pahle ki tarah mujhe hi shikari mano..jiska proof main abhi is farshe wale ko uda ke dikhata hoon..abey kallu bhag yadi bhag sakta hain toh"

Ron ne apni bandook ko fyre kiya..lekin uski bandook se wo aag nahi nikli jisne ab tak kayi dragons ko ko jal samadhi lene par majboor kar di thi..Ron ne kayi baar koshish ki par uski bandook pahle ke tarah hi shant rahi..Ron ne us saye ki taraf dekha..

"m..m...maaf karna kallu ji,,lagta hain barood khatam ho gaya hain..aapki ijajat ho toh main barood le aau,."

Wo saya asman ki taraf sar karke dahadne laga..Raaj ,Ron ke pass gaya..aur uske kano me bola..

"bye the ocean's hunter The Ron..sabse pahle ye tujhe marega.."

Us saye ne apne farshe ko kandhe par rakh liya..aur Aditya ki taraf farsha karte hue bola.."main toh iske liye yaha aaya tha..lekin mujhe mera purana shikar Captain The Ron bhi mil gaya..aaj mere sathi dragon tum sabko kachcha chaba jayenge.."

Us saye ne jaise hi bolna band kiya dragons ke ke kafile ne Balladonna par hamla bol diya,dragons balladonna par maujood logo ko seedhe kachcha chabane lage..Ron apni bandook liye ship ke ek kone me jake baith gaya..

"ye kallu aaj apna badla pura karega..kaise bachu ..kaise bachu..Ron abhi tak dhang se soch bhi nahi paya tha dragon pe baitha hua wo saya Ron ki taraf kud gaya..us saye ko apne samne dekhkar Ron ne apne jeb se botal nikali aur peene laga..

"tujhe apni maut ka dar nahi..aaj tera vinash kar dunga main.. "
"wo kya hain na kallu ki jab main kisi ko jaan se marta hoon toh uske pahle sharab jaroor pi leta ,kisi ne kaha hain ki marne wala narak me jata hain...taiyar ho ja kallu tere baki ke sathi narak me tera intezar kar rahe hain....................

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"wo kya hain na kallu ki jab main kisiko jaan se marta hoon toh uske pahle sharab jaroor pi leta hoon,kisi ne kaha hain ki marne wala narak me jata hain...taiyar ho ja kallu tere baki ke sathi narak me tera intezar kar rahe hain..itna kahkar Ron waha se bhag nikla..
"teri yaddasht ke liye bata du..mera nam Morgan hain.."
"kallu me kya kharabi hain..ye nam tere badbudar kapde se bahut milta bhi hain.."itna kahkar Ron waha se bhag nikla..""darpok kahi ka.."Morgan bhi uske peechhe bhagne laga...Ron bhagte bhagte Captain Nair ke pass pahuncha..
"Ron-Captain Nair ek yatri aapko gali de raha tha..
""kaun wo baddimak..nam batao uska.."
Ron ne peechhe ki taraf ishara kiya..jaha Morgan apne farse par hath phhirate hue aa raha tha.."Ron aaj tu marega..buri maut marega.."
Ron ,Nair ko Morgan ki taraf dhakka de deta hain..Nair Morgan se takra gaya..aur usi ke upar gir pada..Ron waha se phhir khisak liya..
"bevkoof main tujhe dragon ke samne kachcha chaba jaunga.."Morgan ne Nair ke gardan ko daboch liya..aur hawa me uchhal diya..ek dragon jo balladonna ke karib tha..usne Nair ko daboch liya..
"Ronnnn"Morgan ki dahad pure vatavaran me ek baar phhir gunj uthi..Morgan ke samne jo bhi aata wo use apne farse se buri tarah kat deta..Morgan ke khaufnak darindagi ko dekhkar balladonna me maujood har shaks kanp gaya..riya apne hath me gun liye dragon par hamla kar rahi thi..Raaj uske pass aaya..
"gun achchha chala leti ho,kaha se seekha.."
"bachpan me security officerwale ka revolver chheen liya tha..aur masti me usi ke sar ko uda diya..ummid hain dobara ye sawal nahi puchhoge..ab jao yaha se,mujhe apna kaam karne do.."
Raaj ,apna chupchap waha se khisak liya..aur anjane me hi Morgan uske samne aa gaya..
"is kambkhat ko abhi hi aana tha.."Raaj wahi khada ho gaya..Morgan ne Raaj ke gale ko nishana banakar apna farsa chala diya..Raaj neeche jhukkar bach gaya..aur Morgan ka pair pakad kar use dhakka de diya..girte girte Morgan ne apna farsa Raaj ke peeth par chala diya..farsa Raaj ke peeth me dhans diya..Raaj wahi ludhak gaya..balladonna me maujood kisi ki najar Captain Nair par padi..jo dragon se apne life ke sangharsh kar raha tha.."Captain Nair ko dragon ne pakad liya hain ,koyi bachao unhe.."
dragon ka hamla abhi bhi jaari thi,dragons balladonna me maujood adhe logo ko apna shikar bana chuke the..Aditya ne Nair ko musibat me phansa dekha.."le sale mujhse panga lega..ab gaya kaam se "Riya ,Aditya ke pass aayi..
"Captain Aditya..tum Nair ko bachane ki koshish kyun nahi karte.."
"mujhse panga leta hain..aaj usko maloom chalega ki ,Captain Aditya se panga lene walo ka kya haal hota hain.."
"Aditya yadi tumne Captain Nair ko bacha liya toh..balladonna ke Captain tum rahoge.."
"sach ,phhir toh is dragon ki maa ki ankh.."Aditya daudte hue gaya..aur apni gun ki disha dragon ki taraf kiya..
"abey goli dragon ke ankh me chalau ya gand me..main confuse hoon.."
"ye kya bak raha ho.."Riya boli..
"sorry mam,aap hain ,maine socha koyi aur hain..aap dekho kaise is dragon ka main khatma karta hoon.."
Nair dragon se abhi bhi lad raha tha..dragon ne apna sar jhadka ,Nair achanak hue is jhatke ko jhel nahi paya aur girne laga..aur girte hue Nair ne us dragon ka pair pakad liya..
"Riya- Aditya jaldi nishana lagao..
Aditya ne nishana toh dragon ki ankh me lagaya,lekin dragon usi samay upar ki taraf udne laga..goli seedhe jakar Nair ke pair me lagi..
"Nair-salo tum logo ki ankh hain..dragon ki gand..mujhpe goli chala rahe ho..
Aditya waha chup chap khada tha..tabhi uske kandhe par kisi ne hath rakha..
"hath hata be..warna is puri goli tere bheje me ghusa dunga.."Aditya ne uska hath jhadak diya..lekin usne phhir apna hath Aditya ke kandhe me rakha.."teri toh" Aditya pichhe muda,.uski ankhe phhati rah gayi..samne Morgan khada tha..Morgan ne seedhe apna farsa chalaya..Aditya peechhe hat gaya..lekin Morgan ne uske pet par ek laat maar di..Aditya balladonna se neeche gir pada..Morgan ko rokne ke liye bahut log aaye..lekin Morgan ne sabke gardan kat kar us sabko dharasayi kar diya...Riya ke pass ab ek hi rasta tha..Ron..wo Ron ko pukarne lagi..Morgan ne Riya ki awaj sunkar apna farsa rok diya..Morgan kisi ko marne ke liye apna farsa chalane wala tha..jab riya ki awaj uske kano me padi..
"teri gardan ka khoon baad me piunga,."Morgan waha se riya ki taraf chal pada..Morgan ko apne taraf aata dekh Riya kanpne lagi..Morgan riya ke karib badh raha tha ,tabhi waha Ron pahunch gaya..aur Morgan par apni bandook taan di..
"Ron-ruk ja be kallu..nahi toh aaj jal kar samundar me bhagna padega..

Morgan ,Ron ki taraf ghuma.."khali bandook chalayega.."
"abhi maine isme barood bhar diya hain.."Ron ne apni badook chala di..Morgan ka shrir aag ki lapto se dhak gaya..Ron ne Morgan ke pichhwade ko nishana banakar pass pada rod uthaya..aur de mara,
"Morgan-agli baar tu nahi bachega ..Morgan balladonna ke neeche kud gaya..Ron apni kamar me rassi bandhi aur ek chhor ko us dragon ki taraf phenka ,jisse Nair latka hua tha..rassi us dragon ke lambe lambe nukeele dant me phans gaya..
""palat gaya pasa.."Ron balladonna se kud gaya..Ron ke vajan se dragon ke daant me dard hone laga...Nair ka hath chhutne wala tha..Ron rassi ke sahare chadta hua..upar jane laga..dragon ki halat kharab ho chuki thi..Ron ne rassi ko chhodte hue ek jump lagaya..aur seedhe dragon ke gardan ko pakad kar latak gaya..
"Ron-dragon ki taraf jahaj ko ghumao..
dragon ab wapas jane laga tha..balladonna bhi dragon ki taraf full speed me badh raha tha..jab balladonna dragon ke thik neeche aa gaha toh Ron ne apni kamar me phansi hui badook nuikal kar apne hath me le liya..
"bayi taraf ghumao..."Ron ne kaha..
"seth-pagal hain kya..wo dragon ship se takra jayega..
"Riya-bayi taraf ghumao...
Riya ke kahne par ship ko bayi taraf ghuma diya gaya..Nair ship se takra gaya aur balladonna me gir pada..sabhi ab Ron ki taraf dekhne lage..
Ron chahta toh dragon se neeche kud sakta tha..lekin wo dragon par hi chadha raha..tabhi use samundar me tairta hua Aditya dikha..
Ron neeche kud gaya..aur samundar me girne laga..girte samay Ron ne apni bandool se dragon par fyre kar diya..dragon aag ki lapto me sama gaya..sabhi dragon ko jalte hue dekhne lage..
"abey salo mujhe upar kaun khinchega.."sabhi ka dhyan tuta ,sabhi balladonna ke neeche dekhne lage..Ron apne kandho par Aditya ko tange hue tha..
"abey rassi neeche phenko ,samundar ka pani bahut kharab hain..is sale dragons ka khoon mix hain yaha,,aur main shakahari hoon.........................continue.....................

[Mahii rathore]

Superrrrr Update
Sabse alag h ye story
Padne m mja aa rha h
Thanks for "Ron"

[LoveStar]

UPDATE-11
Ron aur Aditya upar aaye..Upar Nair apni tang ko sahla raha tha..kuch log uske pair me dawai laga rahe the..Aditya upar aate hi ship par let gaya..
"Ron-lagta hain tune bahut ki mehnat ki aaj ke jung me..
"Aditya-thanks yar..yadi aaj tu nahi hota toh main toh gaya tha kaam se..
Riya bhi wahi khadi thi..tabhi Seth ki nazar Raaj par padi..Raaj ke peeth se khoon risna band ho chuka tha..aur wo uthne ka prayas kar raha tha..
"Ron-ye abhi bhi zinda hain..Ron ,uski taraf badh chala..aur raaj ko apne hath ka sahara dekar uthaya..
"kyun samundar ke shikari,,ek war me hi dher ho gaye.."
raaj ne Ron ka hath jhatak diya.."Ron,aaj ki jung jeetne ke baad tune koyi bada kaam nahi kiya..aise hamle se mujhe niptana mujhe aata hain..."
"phhir toh Morgan ko tu akele hi hara dega..he..he.."
Ron hanste hue waha se chala gaya..Raaj apne kandhe ko pakad kar chalne laga..Riya ne seth ko sahara dene ke liye kaha..
"Seth-wo jungali kya bol raha tha..
"Raaj-usko main chhodunga nahi,mera majak uda raha tha..
"wo hain hi aisa..yadi uske hathiyar hume mil jaye toh phhir wo kisi kaam ka nahi.."
"main launga uska hathiyar..phhir us sale ko usi ki bandook se jala kar rakh me tabdil kar dunga.."
Raaj ko seth apne room me le gaya..aur uske kapde utar diye..
""tum zinda ho ,ye bahut ajib hain.."
"ajib to mere peeth par bana wo nishan hain ,jo mujhe kabhi marne nahi deta...main thik hoon,ab tum ja sakte ho.."
Riya,kuch der pahle hue hamle se tabah apne ship ko dekh rahi thi..Ron uske pichhwade par hath mar bola.."kya soch rahi ho janeman,ab bhi samay hain..mujhe Captain bana do.."
"Ron...tumne aaj bahut bahaduri dikhayi,,thanks"
"shukriya bolti toh jyada achchha rahta..waise aaj raat ki kya mahol hain.."
"abhi in sab ke liye vaqt nahi hain Ron,Morgan phhir se aa sakta hain..hume taiyar rahna hoga.."
"ummmm..abhi wo kuch dino ke liye nahi aayega..tab tak hum log Atlantic paar kar chuke honge..aur devils triangle ke bahut karib honge...waise tumhe devils triangle me chahiye kya.,"
"ok Ron ab main tumhe bata deti hoon ki devils triangle me hum kyun ja rahe hain..devils triangle ke pass jane ka humara maksad samundar me dafan beshumar khajane ko pana hain..tum soch bhi nahi sakte ke kitna maal waha dafan hain.."
"hmm us maal ka toh maloom nahi..par ek mast maal mere samne hain.."
Tabhi Ron ke kandhe par kisi ne hath rakha..wo Captain Nair tha..uske sath me Aditya,seth aur Raaj bhi tha..
"Ron-mujhe maloom hain,tum charo mujhe shukriya kahne aaye ho..koyi baat nahi sab chalta hain..
"Nair-shukriya toh hum bahut achchhe tareeke se ada karenge tera..Raaj iska shukriya karna tih zara..Raaj ne bandook Ron par taan di..ship me maujood sabhi log us nazare ko dekhne lage..
"Ron-abey ye meri bandook hain..koyi khilona nahi..
"Raaj-tujhe main teri hi bandook se marunga,,
"Aditya-abey pagal ho gaye ho kya..usne hum sabki jaan bachayi hain..
"Ron-Aditya sahi bol raha hain..ye kya dhoke baji hain..
"Riya-Ron..sorry Samundar ka Shikari The great Ron..ab kya karoge..ye sab humara hi plan tha..tumne hume nahi bachaya..tumhari bandook ne hume bachaya..
"Ron-meri itni tareef sunkar mujhe rona aa raha hain..lekin kya karu ye kambhakt ansu aate hi nahi..Riya darling mujhe gale laga lo..
"Raaj-chup be,aaj tu gaya kaam se,Captain Nair aap bolo toh abhi bhoon du ,is namurad ko..
Ron-ruko,marne se pahle marne wale ki akhiri wish puchhi jati hain..uske bare me kya irada hain..
"Nair-chal jaldi bol..teri wo behudi wish kya hain..
"Ron-meri wo akhiri wish hain ki main door se ek baar tum sabko thik tarah se dekh loon,taki agle janam me tum sabse apna badla le saku..Ron ki baat sunkar sabhi hasne lage..
"Riya-dekha Ron,main bhi shikari hoon..jao aur dekh lo hum sabki shakl..
Ron dheere dheere aage badhne laga..Aditya ko sabka behaviour achchha nahi laga..Ron chalte chalte ruk gaya..aur pichhe palatkar bola..
"tum log ke pass akal kami hain..mujh jaise shikari ko ek wish de dali..aur tu sun be labarganju.."Ron ki baat sunkar Nair dusari taraf dekhne lage..
"abey tu hi Captain Nair..balladonna ka captain kya,tu toh ek chhoti naav ka navik bhi banne layak nahi hain..aur Aditya tune hi mujhe in sab dhokebajo me support karne ki koshish ki..main tujhe murdo ke jahaj me sair karne ka muaka de sakta hoon..lekin iske liye tujhe mere sath is samundar me kudna padega.."
"Riya-raaj ,jaldi se bhoon do,is kamine ko..Raaj ne bandook chalaya lekin uske pahle hi Ron samundar me kud gaya...Aditya bhi dusari taaf se samundar me chhalang laga di,,Raaj daudkar balladonna ke kinare aa gaya ..aur Ron par nishana lagane laga...lekin Ron tab tak unke pahunch se bahut door ho chuka tha..
"hum kaha aa gaye..aur ye kaun si jagah hain.."Aditya ne apne samne iceland ko dekhkar Ron se puchha..
"tujhe ye puchhna chahiye tha ki hum yaha kyun aaye hain...chal sab maloom chal jayega..ye hain pallora..yaha ke baare me kuch khas toh nahi maloom par itna maloo hain ki yaha ki ladkiya bahut haseen hain.."
"are wah tu toh bilkul apun jaisa hain..khoob jamegi apni.."
"main tere jaisa hoon..chal be ,tu mere jaisa hain.."
Aditya kuch nahi bola..Ron aur Aditya iceland ke andar aa gaye...
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Balladonna me Captain Nair,Seth,Riya aur Raaj Ron ke room ki taalashi le rahe the...unhe Ron ke bandook me use hone wali barood bhi mili..
"Riya-Ron ,is sabak ko zindagi bhar yaad rakhega..wo bina bandook ke kisi kaam ka nahi..
"Nair-mam ,usne toh aaj samundar me jal samadhi le li..warna us kutte ko main bhoon deta..
"Riya-ab chhodo Ron ko..aur balladonna ke bare me socho..lagatar dragons ke do hamle se is ship ki halat kharab ho chuki hain..
"Nair-aap uski fikar chhod dijiye..hum sab milkar balladonna ko sudhar denge,...
seth abhi bhi Ron ke room ki talashi le raha tha..wo Ron ke bikhare hue kapde ko check karne laga..tabhi un kapdo me se ek kagaj ka tukda wahi neeche zamin par gir gaya..seth ki nazar us girte hue kagaj ke tukde par gayi..
"seth-ye kya hain..."seth ne us kagaj ke tukde ki taraf ishara kiya..Raaj us tukde ko uthakar dekhne laga..
"asambhav hain ye,,."
"Riya-kya hain raaj is kagaj ke tukde ke andar,..
"yadi main sahi soch raha hoon toh ye prachin jamane ka ek Naksha hain..Martin nam ka ek raja ne is samundar ke sabhi bhago ka Naksha banwaya tha..is tarah ke keval teen Nakshe the..pahla mere hath me hain..dusara Morgan ke pass hain..jo usne Morgan se chheen liya tha..aur teesara,."
"Riya-aur teesara kaha hain..
"teesara Naksha sabse important hain..jo khud Martin use karta tha..kahte hain raja Martin ke pass ek adhbhud jahaj tha..jise wo yuddh me upyog karta tha..lekin ek samay baad sab kuch khatam ho gaya..king Martin ki saltanat tabah ho gayi..uske jahaj ko bhi chheen liya gaya.."
"Nair-ek min. Tu hum sabko kya ye feki story suna raha hain..
"ye sach hain Captain Nair,.Martin ka rajya asliyat me tha.."
"he..he..ye sach hain toh phhir ye bata ki Tere us Martin ka wo ship kaha hain is vaqt ..."
"jaisa ki maina suna hain,.Martin ke rajya ko tabah karne ke baad Martin ko zinda kabra me dafna diya gaya,,aur jin logo ne ye kaam kiya tha wo log Martin ke ship the Spiritual ko lekar waha se nikal pade..lekin un logo ko ye maloom nahi tha ki..the spiritual ship Martin ke us Nakshe se chalti thi,,jo ki gumnam ho chuka hain..spiritual ship me maujood ruh ne us jahaj ko samundar me dafan kar diya,,"
"Riya-bahut kuch jante ho..samundar ke baare me..
"Raaj-mujhe samundar ka shikari yun hi nahi kahte,,,,..............continue........,.




Update-12
Pallora ek aisa iceland jaha ke logo par bhagwan kuch jyada hi meharban rahta hain..pallora me sharab ke kayi adde hain..lekin Atlantic ocean ke karib hone ke vajah se pallora me kisi ki bhi nazar aaj tak nahi pahunchi..Ron aur Aditya pallora me bane sharab ke adde me the..
"Aditya-Ron,ab tum kya karoge..un salo ne toh tumhe balladonna se hi bedakhal kar diya..
"Ron-aage ka pata nahi par aaj raat toh pallora ki haseenao ka rashpan karenge..chal aaja aur ek baat dimak me gadh band lo,pallora ki ladkiyo ko bade lund pasand hain,aur yadi unhe tera lund pasand nahi aaya toh tu toh gaya kaam se..
"Aditya-mera lund itna bada hain ki pure pallora ko apne uspe utha sakta hoon..
Aditya ,Ron ke peechhe peechhe chal pada..aur ek sharab ke theke me ghus gaya..andar ka mahol kuch jyada hi rangin tha..ladkiya nangi hokar nach rahi thi..aur sabhi un ladkiyo par sharab ki botal khali kar rahe the..
"Aditya-kya nazara hain..lagta hain abhi kisi ek ko pakad kar chod doon..
"Aditya-ja aish kar aur kal subah kinare par milna..
Ron ,Aditya ko chhodkar ek room ki taraf chalne laga..Ron us kamre ke bahar hi khada raha..us room se aaaaahhhhhhhh uuuuhhhhh ki awaj aa rahi thi..lekin thodi der baad us kamre se cheekhne ki awaj bhi aane lagi..ek shaks ne room khola aur apne lund par hath rakhkar Ron ko dekhta hua bhag nikla..Ron ,room ke andar aaya..aur kamre ka darwaja band kar diya..bistar par ek aurat leti hui ,apne ek hath se apne chut me ungali kar rahi thi,wahi uske dusare hath uske bade bade chuchiyo ko daba raha the..us aurat ne apni ankhe band kar rakhi thi..
"Ron-lagta hain bahut khujali ho rahi hain tere andar.."Ron ki awaj sukar us aurat ne apni akhe kholi..
"Ron,aaj yaha ke raste kaise aa gaye,.khujali toh bahut ho rahi hain..lekin use mitane wala koyi nahi hain.."
Ron ,us aurat ke pass bistar par baith gaya..aur uske bade bade chuchiyo ko dabate hue bola.."kafi bade ho gaye hain tere ye raseele santare.."
"hmmm ...aaj samundar ke shikari ko in santare ka rash jaroor pilaungi.."
"lekin ,main apne kapde nahi utarunga..manjoor hain toh bol ,warna aise hi ungali karte rah.."
Us aurat ne Ron ko pakadkar bistar par kheench liya..
"lagta hain bahut dino se teri aag jal rahi hain.."Ron ne use ulta palta diya ..aur uske chuttaro aur jangh par hath phhirata hua ,uske gand me ungali daal di..jawab me us aurat ne apni gand uchka di..aur apni ungaliyo se apne chut ko sahlane lagi..Ron apni ungaliya uske gand ke andar daal kar bahut der tak hilata raha..phhir Ron ne use seedha kiya..aur uski chuchiyo ke nipple par apne hath phirane laga..apni adat ke anusar Ron ne uske nipple ko jor se daba diya.."aaahhhhh Dheere Ron,dard hota hain..."lekin Ron nahi mana aur uske nipple ko kaskar dabata raha..oooohhhh Ron ,jaldi se apna lund ghusa do,main bahut din se pyasi hoon..pallora me bahut dino se koyi aisa mard nahi hain ,jo meri pyas bhujha sake..
"samundar ka khara pani kam pad gaya kya jo teri pyas nahi bhujhi.."us aurat ne Ron ko kaskar daba liya..aur apne hath se ron ke lund ko sahlane lagi..dono ko ek dusare ke sharir ki garmi ka ahsas ho raha tha..Ron us aurat ke honth chusne laga..aur apne dono hatho se uski chuchiyo ko dabane laga.."aaahhhhh...main pagal ho rahi hun Ron.."usne apni chut ko Ron ke lund se ragadne lagi.. Ron ,uske honth chuste hue apna ek hath se uske pet ko sahlane laga..phhir uski chut ko,,Apne hantho se uski chut ke deewaro ko faila kar Ron bola.."kafi bah rahi hain tu janeman.."Ron ne apna lund bahar nikala..aur seedhe uske mu me daal diya,,us aurat ki awaj ghut gayi..ron teeji se uske mu me apna lund andar bahar karta raha..us aurat ki saans ghutne lagi..usne ron ko peechhe dhakelne ki koshish ki..lekin ron ne uska sar kaskar pakad kar aur teji se apna lund andar bahar karne laga..jab uski halat jyada kharab hui toh ron ne apna lund bahar nikala...wo aurat buri tarah hanf rahi thi..uski chuchiyo lagatar upar neeche ho rahi thi..Ron ne apna mu uski chuchiyo me ghusa diya..aur chusne laga..Ron ne apni ungali uske chut me ghusa di.,jaise hi ron ne apni ungali us aurat ki chut me ghusayi..usne apni taange ko khol diya..jisse Ron ko asani hone lagi..us aurat ne apne hatho me ron ka lund tham liya..aur use daba diya..aur phhir apne hatho se ron ke lund ko hilane lagi..ron ne us aurat ke thos jangho ko dabate hue failaya aur apne lund ko us aurat ke chhote chhote baalo se yukt chut par tikaya aur dheere dheere apna lund ghusane laga..us aurat ki chut khuli hui thi..jisse Ron ko mushkil nahi hui..Ron ne achanak ek jordar jhatka mara..aur us aurat ki cheek pure room me gunj uthi..
"dhokhe se war karte ho ,aamne samne mukabala karo.."
Ron ne ek aur tej dhakka mara ...uuuhhhhhhhh.....aur tej se dhakka maro...aaaaahhhhhhhh Ron apne lund ko teji se uski chut me ghusane laga...aur ek mast awaj ke sath ke sath pura room gunjane laga...is baat se bekhabar ke Ron andar kya kar raha Aditya bahar hi apne liye bhi jugad jama raha tha..lekin abhi tak uske hath me mayooshi hi aayi thi...
"Aditya-ye sala Ron kaha gaya..koyi toh mil jaye..muth maar maar kar thak chuka hoon...haarkar Aditya ne apne hath me sharab ki ek botal li..aur us rang me shamil ho gaya...jaha pallora ke sabhi log adhi nangi ladkiyo par sharab chhidak kar maja le rahe the..Aditya ne ek ladki ko pakadkar apni taraf kheencha..aur sharab ki botal uspar khali karne ke liye botal ke mu ko uske taraf kiya..lekin sharab nahi giri..
"Aditya-sorry,janeman dhakkan band hain..abhi khol kar tere in mast chuchiyo ko is sharab se nahla deta hoon...itna kahkar Aditya ne us ladki chuchi ko kaskar daba diya..wo ladki peechhe hat gayi..aur ajib si bhasa me Aditya ki taraf ishara karke chillane lagi...
"Aditya-isko kya hua..shayad aur kaskar dabana tha.,tab ,khush ho jati..
wo ladki abhi bhi chilla rahi thi..dheere dheere uski awaj pure jashn ko thanda karne lagi..sab shant ho gaye..ek bhari bharkam mota shaks us ladki ke pass aaya..aur apni bhasa me us ladki se kuch puchhne laga..dono bahut der tak ek dusare se baat karte rahe..phhir us mota shaks ne apne hath me pakde hue mansh ke bade tukde ko Aditya ki taraf dekhkar chabaya...
"hu..hu..dasg di fcyua..."us mote shaks ne Aditya se puchha...Aditya ne socha ki shayad ye puchh raha hain ki tu is ladki ko chodega kya...
"Aditya-sure..aur maine hi iske chuchiyon ko dabaya hain...Aditya ne apni hath se us ladki ki chuchiyo ke taraf ishara karte hue kaha..
us mote shaks ne jaise ye suna..apne hath me pakde hue mans ke tukde ko phenk kar Aditya ki gardan pakad li..
"abey bhaise ye mere gardan hain..toot jayegi chhod sale.."
us mote shaks ne Aditya ki gardan pakad kar use uchhal diya..Aditya ek kone me ja gira.."abey Ron ,is bhainse se bacha.."
Ron ,andar us aurat ki gand maar raha tha..uske kano me Aditya ki awaj sunayi padi..lekin Ron ne Aditya ki awaj ko ansuna karte hue us aurat ki gand ke andar apna lund aur teji se ghusane laga..
"abey bacha be..."Aditya ek baar phhir chillaya...
"hmmm..is maal ki gand marne me jyada maja hain..pahle ise hi nipta leta hoon"Ron ne apne dhakke aur tej kar diye...aur us aurat ke kamar ko kaskar pakad kar dhakke lagata raha..bahar Aditya ko us mote shaks ne apne khankh me daba rakha tha..
Ron ne room ka darwaja khola ,sabhi ki nazare Ron ke taraf gayi..Ron ne apni chain band karte hue kaha.."abey sab shant kyun ho..daru khatam ho gayi kya..."
"Ron,idhar dekh be..is gende ne meri gardan daba rakhi hain..mera raam raam satya ho jayega kuch der baad.."
Ron ki nazar Aditya aur us gende ki taraf gayi..
"Ron- abey gende ,wo mans ka tukda nahi hain..chhod use..
"ku jhol sa fasn "us gende ne Ron ki taraf dekh kar kaha..
"abey lagta hain teri gand kisi ne maar li..chhod use warna tujhe...tujhe.."Ron bol hi raha tha ki us mote shaks ne Aditya ko chhodkar Ron ka gardan pakad liya..
"abey ise jamal ghota pilao.."Ron ne apni jeb se barood ki potli ko nikal kar us gende ke ankh me daal diya..wo apni ankh pakad kar chillane laga... Aditya aur Ron waha se bhag nikle,..bahut der tak daudne ke baad Ron ne Aditya ko rukne ka ishara kiya..
"Ron-abey tune aisa kya kiya tha..jo wo genda teri jaan ka dushman ban gaya..
"Aditya-maine toh keval ek ladki ka doodh dabaya tha................continue..........

Update-13
"Ron-abey tune aisa kya kiya tha..jo wo genda teri jaan ka dushman ban gaya..

"Aditya-maine toh keval ek ladki ka doodh dabaya tha..
"tab toh sukra mana jaan bach gayi..pallora me chuchiya ko dabana apradh hain.."
"maloom nahi tha mujhe ,sorry yaar.."
"ab chal,kinare par aaj ki raat gujarenge ,..teri vajah se khana bhi nahi kha paya.."
"sorry bol toh diya Ron,ab kya karu.."
"samundar se machhali tu pakad kar layega..'
"abey pagal ho gaya hain kya..itni raat ko..samundar ne kahi mujhe nigal liya toh.."
"samundar bhooka nahi hain be..uska pet toh hameaha bhara rahta hain.."
Ron aur Aditya kinare par aa gaye..raat me chand ki halki roshani se samundar ka paani aur aas-pass ka vatavaran me ek khubsurti samayi thi..
"Aditya-yaha bahut thund hain..sala subah tak toh akad kar lakadi ban jaunga...
"Ron-chal phhir tujhe jala kar subah ke khane ka intezam ho gaya..so ja..asman ko dekhte hue..neend me bhayankar sapne nahi aayenge...
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Balladonna ki halat kafi sudhar chuki thi...balladonna samundar ko chirte hue tej gati se aage badh raha tha..Riya bahar samundar ke thandi thandi hawao ka maja le rahi thi..Riya ki najar Raaj par padi..wo Ron ke Nakshe ko dekh raha tha..
"Riya-kya dekh rahe ho ,Raaj..kuch kaam ka hain ye Naksha..
"Riya ji..is Nakshe ke anushar Atlantic ocean ki seema ko paar karne ke pahle do iceland padenge.."
"toh kya hua.."
"ek iceland death iceland hain..king Martin saltanat wahi thi.,aur wahi hume wo teesara Naksha milega..par is samay mere man me ye sawal hain ki balldonna usi taraf badh rahi hain ..lekin kyun..iska jawab aap hi mujhe de sakti hain.."
"ab lagta hain mujhe sab kuch batana padega..real me main The spiritual ship ,aur Martin ki puri kahani janti hoon..aur main spiritual ship ke us beshumar khajane ke liye hi ye sab kiya."
"hmm..toh ye puri kahani hain..lekin aage ek pallora nam ka iceland aane wala hain..uske baare me kya khayal hain..balladonna ko kuch der ke liye waha khada kar sakte hain.."
"abhi main Captain Nair ko bol deti hoon.."
Riya ne jakar Nair ko ship rokne ke liye bol diya..pallaro iceland dikhne laga..sabhi balladonna se neeche utarne lage..
"Nair-yar seth yaha ship rukwane ka kya matlab..maloom nahi ise kya sojhata rahta hain..
"Seth- Captain, hum keval uske adesh ka palan kar sakte hain..aur waise bhi ye koyi buri jagah nahi hain..bahut dino baad zamin ko chhua hain..
"baat toh teri bhi sahi hain..chal ab chalte hain.."
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subah ho chuki thi..Ron aur Raaj ek chhoti si naav churane ke firak me the...isliye dono kuch logo se puchh kar naav banane wale karigar ka pata le rahe the..
"wo samne wala ghar hain"pallora me rahne wale ek shaks ne karigar ke ghar ke taraf ishara karte hue kaha..
"Ron-chal ,Naav ka intezam ho gaya..
"lekin hum churayenge kaise..kahi us gende ki tarah kisi ne dhulayi kar di toh.."
"maar khane ke liye hi toh tujhe laya hoon..."
Aditya chup hokar Ron ke peechhe chalne laga..dono peechhe se us karigar ke ghar me ghuse..
"Aditya-yaha toh kuch dikh hi nahi raha hain..
"Ron-dekh kar kya karega..ye toh aur bhi achchha hain..jaldi se naav uda le chalte hain..
dono andhere me aage badhne lage..lekin Raaj ka pair kisi chiz se takra gaya..aur kisi chiz ke girne ki awaj bahut tej hui..andar se kisi ke khasne ki awaj aayi..
"Ron-abey dekh ke nahi chal sakta..
"dekhne ke liye light bhi toh honi chahiye..ab pair takra gaya toh main kya karu.."
"chal chup ho ja koyi aa raha hain,,."
"Aditya-isko pel ke naav leke nikal lete hain..kisi ko maloom bhi nahi chalega..
"Ron-khayal bura nahi hain..tu ja usko sambhal main Naav dekhta hoon.
"mil ja ..mil ja..ye naav kaun se kamre me rakha gaya hain..Ron andhere me maav ki talash kiye ja raha tha..tabhi use pass ke kamre me mashal jalti hui dikhayi di..Ron ne chupke se jhank kar kamre me dekha..kamre me keval mashal jal rahi thi..waha koyi nahi tha..
"achchha mauka hain..Mashal leke dekhta hoon.."Ron ne waha se mashal uthayi aur naav ki talashi karne laga..
idhar Aditya ko kisi ke kadmo ki awaj saaf sunayi de rahi thi..Aditya ek kone me jakar chhup gaya..jo bhi Aditya ki taraf badh raha tha uske hath me bhi Mashal thi..Aditya kone me chhupa hua tha,,isliye us shakas ne Aditya ko nahi dekha ..aur aage badh gaya..Aditya daud kar peechhe se uska gala pakad liya..
"jyada chalaki ki toh bhoon ke rakh dunga..tum mujhe jante nahi.."
Wo shaks kud par hue is achanak hamle se hadbada kiya..aur uski jeebh ladkhadane lagi..
"k..k...kaun.. Hain.."
"mujhe nahi pahchana..main hoon great Samundar ka Shikari The Ron..."Aditya ne Ron ke andaj me bolte hue kaha..
"shikari..meri jaan baksh do.."
Aditya sochne laga ki ye sala kitna bada fattu hain..aise hi dar gaya..Aditya ne use chhod diya..
"Aditya-mujhe ek vishal naav chahiye...jaldi se de warna tera kaleja nikal ke ....tu samajh sakta hain...bahut khatarnak hoon main"
Wo shaks Aditya ko naav wale kamre me le gaya..aur us kamre ki Mashal jala di..pure kamre me roshani fail gayi..wo shaks ne kamre me rakhi naav ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha.."naav koyi si bhi le lo..lekin patwar wo wali lena.."
Aditya patwar uthane ke liye peeche muda..tabhi us shaks ne apne pass padi ek chhoti patwar uthakar Aditya ke sar par de diya..Aditya peechhe muda..aur chillakar bola.."sale peechhe se war karta hain namard.."
"tune bhi toh peechhe se mujhe pakda tha.."
"sale meri baat alag hain..main samundar ka shikari hoon..lekin tu ek chhota sa naav banane wala hain.."
"phhir main kaun hoon re..."
Aditya aur wo shaks dono ne awaj ki taraf dekha..Ron ek naav par apna baya pair rakhe hue khada tha..
"Ron-tu sach me samundar ka shikari hain..
"Aditya-are Ron..main toh bas tera nam lekar ise dara raha tha..
"lekin iski shakal dekh kar ke toh nahi lagta ki ye dara hua hain..matlab mere nam ki tauhin hui.."
wo shaks Ron aur Aditya ko chhota mota chor samajhne laga..aur bola..
"main hoon bilandar ,pure pallora me mujhse achchhi naav koyi nahi bana sakta..tum dono ko main muft me ek badhiya naav deta hoon"
Ron kuch sochne laga..
"tu bhi humare sath chalega.."Ron ne bilandar ki taraf dekh kar kaha..
"kaha..aur mere is karobar ka kya hoga.."
"Martin ke saltant me le jaunga..soch le.."
Martin ke saltanat ka nam sunkar bilandar chup ho gaya...
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Balladonna ke sabhi log pallora me ek achchhi si jagah dekhkar aram karne ke liye ruke..
Raaj abhi bhi us Nakshe ko dekh raha tha..
death iceland..isi raste se toh main aaya tha par ye dikha kyun nahi...kahi ye gayab hone wala iceland toh nahi..
""Naksha mujhe de be bahut dekh liya..."
Nair raaj ke samne khada tha..
"Raaj-kya hua...
"abey Naksha mujhe de.."
"Captain Nair ko Naksha chahiye..lekin kyun.."
"kyun ka kya matlab jitna bola gaya utna kar.."
Raaj ne Nair ko Naksha pakda diya..Nair nakshe ko dekhne laga..
"Nair-maloom nahi riya mam us jungali ke Nakshe par bharosha kyun kar rahi hain..jabki humare pass adhunik map hain...
"wo isliye ki..ye naksha samundar ki har ek jagah ko darshata hain...aur ekdum sahi bhi..."
"le pakad ye behuda chiz..mere kisi kaam ki nahi..."
Nair waha se chala gaya


Update-14
Nair ke jane ke baad bhi,Raaj us Nakshe ko dekhta raha..
"yaha se Martin ke sahar jana padega..aur uski kbra ko dhoondkar wo Naksha nikalna padega..lekin ye Naksha Ron ke pass kaise aaya..."
"kya dekh rahe ho Raaj"
Raaj ka dhyan us Nakshe se hat gaya..samne riya khadi thi..Riya ne us waqt ghutno ke upar ek scarp bandha hua tha..aur ek neele rang ka skirt pahna tha ,Raaj ki najar Riya ke jangho par atak gayi..pahli baar riya use itni sexy lag rahi thi..Riya samajh gayi ki Raaj kya dekh raha hain..lekin Riya ne kuch nahi kaha..Riya ko bhi Raaj achchha lagta tha..Riya raaj ke pass wahi baith gayi..
"kya dekh rahe the is Nakshe me.."
"kuch nahi..bas us death iceland ko dekh raha tha.."
"mere khayal se tumhara dhyan kahi aur bhi tha.."
"k...kya matlab..main samjha nahi.."
"matlab ye hain ki tum kahi aur bhi dekh rahe the.."
Raaj ne baat ko talna chaha..isiliye usne topic ghumate hue bola...
"wo Ron zinda bach gaya hoga kya..tumhe kya lagta hain.."
"umm...shayad haan..aur ye bhi ho sakta hain ki wo isi iceland me bhi ho.."
"tum ye kaise kah sakti ho ki Ron zinda bach sakta hain.."
"Ron itni jaldi haar nahi manega..wo hamesha koyi kaam apne makshad se karta hain..yadi wo us din balladonna se Aditya ko lekar bhag gaya toh iska bhi koyi karan raha hoga..aur yadi pallora me uski aane pe gaur kiya jaye toh ye Naksha usi ke pass tha..wo jaroor pallora aur death iceland jayega..lekin wo chahata kya hain ye kisi ko nahi maloom..."
"yadi abhi Ron pallora me hain toh kyun na use dhoond kar balladonna ke bandiyo ke kamre me band kar diya jaye"
"don't worry Raaj..Ron hume khud dhoondega..bina Nakshe aur bandook ke wo kuch bhi nahi kar sakta.. "
Riya aur Raaj wahi baithe bahut der tak baate karte rahe..udhar Captain Nair balladonna ko raat ko sone se pahle check kar raha tha..seth bhi usi ke sath tha..
"Seth-Captain, Riya mam aur Raaj kahi nahi hain..
"Nair-lagta hain wo abhi tak wahi baith ke us faltu Nakshe par apna dimak ghusa raha hain..jaroor use brain damage ki bimari ho jayegi...
"Seth-Captain,brain damage ke liye brain bhi hona chahiye..
"bad joke..ab ja tu Riya ji ko dhoond main us fale ko kutte ki mafik ghasit kar lata hoon..pata nahi kaise kaise logo ko Riya apne sath layi hain.."
Nair usi taraf chal pada jaha kuch der pahle usne Raaj ko dekha tha..Raaj toh wahi tha..lekin Riya ko raaj ke sath dekhkar Nair ko thoda ajib laga..
"ye dono yaha kya khichadi paka rahe hain..kahi is sale ne Riya ko pata na liya ho..aur phhir balladonna ka captain ban baithe..yadi aisa hua toh aaj raat hi balladonna ko samundar me duba dunga.."
apne par control karke Nair unke taraf gaya.."mam,aap yaha hain..ship me kaam karne wale puchh rahe hain ki hum kitne samay tak yaha rukne wale hain.."
"Riya-hum kal subah hi yaha se nikal jayenge..
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""ye wali naav kaisi rahegi..Ron"bilandar apne banayi hui naav me se ek ki taraf ishara karte hue bola..
Ron ,us naav ke pass aaya..aur naav ko dekhne laga..
"isse achchha toh main tair kar chala jau..dusari dikha.. "
bilandar ne Ron ko ek aur naav dikhayi.."Ron ye dekho ,is ye aage se tej nukeeli hain..hum par samundar ki ulti hawao ka bhi koyi fark nahi padega..iska nukeela akar un khatarnak hawao ko cheer dega.."
"hawa se hi dar gaya..ye bhi mere kisi kaam ke nahi..dusari..."Ron ruk gaya..uski nazar kuch doori par rakhi hui naav par padi,.jo sabse alag dikh rahi thi..Ron us naav ki taraf badhne laga..us naav ke pass pahunch kar Ron ne us naav ko dekhne laga...
"Ron-kamal hain..ye naav tere pass kaise aayi be..
"bilandar-kya kamal hain..ise ek shaks bech gaya tha..usne bola tha ki use ye pallora ke kinare par mili thi..lekin ye naav akeli thi.iska navik kahi doob gaya tha...lekin aisi kya khas baat hain is naav me jo tum ise kamal kah rahe ho..
"ye nichan dekh ,aisi naav kayi saalo pahle keval Martin ki saltanat me banti thi..ab hum aisi naav se jayenge..."
Aditya ,apne hath me sharab ki botal lekar aaya..
"ye naav..sala satak gaya hain tu..behuda chiz hain ye.."
"khud ko behuda bolta toh jyada achchha rahta..hum isi naav se jayenge..bilandar 6 patwar ka intezam karo.."
"bilandar-6 patwardekho shayad tujhe chadh gayi hain..
"abey raste me yadi Morgan ke dragons ke ne hamla kar diya toh kya apne in hatho se ladega..sath me barood ki ek bori bhi rakh lena...aur mujhe neend aa rahi hain..dono me se kisi ne yadi mujhe jara bhi jagaya toh bandook na hote hue bhi bhoon dunga.."
Ron seedhe upar ke kamre ki taraf chal pada..bilandar aur Aditya neeche hi khade the...
"bilandar-ye apne ko tees maar khan samjhta hain kya..
"usse bhi bada ,ye apne aapko hunter of the ocean kahta hain..."
"kya bola ,.main kuch samjha nahi.."
"abey ye khud ko samundar ka shikari kahta hain..."
Aditya ki baat sunkar bilandar jor jor se hasne laga...
"lagta hain Ron ka asar tujhe bhi ho gaya.."
"abey samundar ka Shikari aur ye ...use mare hue toh 200 saal se bhi jyada time ho gaya hain.."
"kya..matlab ye behrupiya hain..."
"aur nahi toh kya ...King Martin ko Samundar ka Shikari kaha jata tha..kyunki wo samudar ke darindo ko aag se bhoon deta tha..par ek din sab khatam ho gaya..."
Ron ,kisi kaam se neeche aaya ytha lekin Aditya aur bilandar ki gappe sunkar wahi rook gaya..
"Aditya-le aa gaya humara The Ron...samundar ka Shikari..jhoote kahi ke..Martin tha Real samundar ka shikari..
"Ron-aur yadi main kahu ki main Hi MARTIN hoon toh..
Aditya aur Bilandar ektak Ron ko dekhne lage..
"Ron-majak kar raha tha..aur tum dono apne kaam se kaam rakho..warna agli baar dono ko dragon ke samne paros dunga....................continued..............,
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Pahle Chalti goliya,
Baat me hoti baat
Dafa- teen sau saat

Update-15
"Ron-majak kar raha tha..aur tum dono apne kaam se kaam rakho..warna agli baar dono ko dragon ke samne paros dunga..
teeno naav lekar pallora ke kinare ke liye ravana ho gaye..abhi wo kinare par pahunche bhi nahi the ki unhone balladonna ko kinare par dekha..
"Aditya-ye sale yaha kaise pahunch gaye..kahi hum dono ke peechhe toh nahi aaye hain..
"Ron-phhir toh Riya janeman bhi yahi hogi..chal usse mil ke aate hain..
"pagal ho gaya hain ..kya hume pakad lenge..'aur kaidi bana denge..'
"kinare par jana hain toh unka samna toh karna hi padega.."
Bilandar balladonna jaise vishal ship ko aaj tak nahi dekha tha..wo Ron aur Aditya ki baat par dhyan na dekar balladonna ki taraf seedhe badh chala..idhar Ron aur Aditya me bahas jari thi...
"Aditya-dekh Ron,tu koyi na koyi khurapat kar ke bhag jata hain..lekin main phas gaya toh phhir mera kya hoga...
"Morgan ki tarah ye khatarnak nahi hain..inhe toh main yun masal dunga.."
"ye kaun hain tu..aur yaha kya kar raha hain"bilandar jab balladonna ke karib pahunch gaya toh..uske kandhe ko pakadkar Captain Nair bola...
""abey jawab de jungali...warna yahi tera..."
"wo main apne kuch dosto ke sath aaya hoon..hume ek khatarnak yatra par nikalna hain..."
Nair ne bilandar ko upar se neeche tak dekha.."kaha hain tere baki sathi.." bilandar peechhe muda lekin Ron aur Aditya gayab the..bilandar ne usi taraf ishara karke kaha"abhi toh yahi the..maloom nahi kaha chale gaye.."
"he..he..mujhse jhoot bolta hain..yaha chori karne aaya tha tu aur jab maine tujhe pakad liya toh kahta hain yatra par nikla tha..kabhi bike par bhi baitha hain.."
"bike ,wo kya hota hain..."
"sab maloom chalega.."Nair ne kuch aadmiyo ko awaj di ,aur kaha ki ise balladonna me le jao aur jee tod kaam lo isse..bilandar ki saans atak gayi..wo phhir peechhe ki taraf muda.."sale kaha gaye..mujhe fasa kar aana hi nahi chahiye tha mujhe yaha.."
"Ron,ab kya kare ,bilandar ko toh wo apne sath le gaya.."Ron aur Aditya ek ped ke peechhe chhupe hue the.."tu kitno ko sambhal lega.."
"kya matlab kahi tu inse bhidne ki toh nahi soch raha.."
"kafi tej dimak paya hain..chale sambha.."
Aditya ,kuch der Sochta raha..phhir patwar ko apne hath me lekar bola.."chal inko dikha dete hain..hum do hi inpar bhari hain... "
"do nahi sirf ek..aur patwar yadi tooti toh bilandar ke ghar se tu hi leke aayega..."
dono jhadiyo aur ped ke peechhe chhupte chhupte balladonna ke karib aa gaye.."Ron,sabse pahle kise niptaye.." 
"pahle main Riya jaan se milkar aata hoon..bahut yaad aa rahi hain.."
Ron waha se chhup kar nikal gaya..Aditya ko balladonna ke pass hi Captain Nair dikha..."is sale ko sabse pahle narak me bhejunga.." Aditya dheere dheere aage badha..andhera hone ki vajah se koyi Aditya ko Nair ke karib aate hue nahi dekh paya..
"captain Nair..aap toh hume bhool hi gaye..''
Nair Aditya ki awaj sunkar jaise peechhe muda..Aditya ne apne hath me rakhi hui bhari bharkam patwar se Nair ke sar par war kiya.."dhokebaj..namurad kahi ke..."Nair wahi behosh ho gaya..
lagta hain ye tapak gaya..aur Aditya ne apni patwar ko kandhe me rakha aur aage badh gaya..dusari taraf Riya apne kamre me baithi hui aane wale kal ke baare me soch rahe thi..achanak uske darwaje par knock hui..
"is vaqt kaun ho sakta hain..Nair toh kuch der pahle aaya tha..kahi Raaj toh nahi.."
Riya ne apne kapde thik kiya,aur darwaje ki taraf badhi..jaise hi Riya ne darwaja khola samne wale shaks ne Riya ke hontho ko apne hontho me kaskar jakad liya,.aur room ke andar aa gaya..Riya ke dil me dar aur gussa dono ek sath aaya..usne us shaks ke honth par kat liya..
"Ron,tum ...tumhari himmat kaisi hui yaha aane ki.."
"mujhe dekhkar khusi nahi hui.."
"bhad me jao tum...abhi Nair ko bulati hoon." 
"bhad me toh tum sab jaoge..mujhse gaddari karke..yadi chahu toh abhi isi vaqt tujhe maut ki neend sula sakta hoon...lekin main aisa nahi karunga,,main yaha keval apni bandook aur Naksha lene zaya hoon..."
Ron ne riya ke Room me pada chaku uthaya.,aur Riya ke gale se sata diya.."jaldi bol kaha hain bandook.''
"teri bandook us drawn me hain..aur Naksha Raaj ke pass hain.."
Ron ne jaldi se drawn kholkar apni bandook uthayi..aur Riya ko ek baar phhir kiss lekar waha se nikal gaya..Ron ke jane ke baad Riya ne security alarm on kar diya,,,balladonna me bhag daud shuru ho gayi...
"Ron yaha aaya tha..apni bandook bhi le gaya,,.pakdo use ''Riya ne apne honth saaf karte hue kaha..
sabhi balladonna me Ron ko khojne lage..bilandar ko ek room me band kar diya gaya tha..
"bilandar-ye kaha fasa diya ,in dono ne..ab zindagi bhar isi jahaj me kaam karna padega..
"zindagi bhar se yadi tera matlab agle kuch seconds tak hain toh tu bilkul sahi hain..."Ron ne darwaja kholte hue kaha...
"Ron..kaha bhag gaya tha be,ab jaldi se aazad kar mujhe.."
Aditya bhi balladonna me ghus chuka tha..alarm bajne par wo bhi usi taraf bhaga tha jis taraf Ron gaya tha..Aditya ko samne se Ron aur bilandar aate hue dikhayi diye..
"bilandar-aa gaya tu bhi..aur ye kau-kau ki aawaj kyun gunj rahi hain...
"tum teeno ki maut ka paigam lekar aayi hain ye awaj..."
teeno awaj ki taraf mude..saamne Raaj,seth aur bhi kayi log unki taraf gun taane hue khade the...
"Ron-tum logo ka sapna bahut achchha hain..par afsos hain ki ye sapna rah jayega...
Raaj Ron ki taraf badha.."mujhe sapne ko haqiqat ke sanche me dhalna aata hain Ron...''
"koshish karke dekh le"Ron ne apni bandook Raaj ki taraf taante hue kaha.."bandook ke dam par khud ko Samundar ka Shikari kahta hain.."
"hmmm....shayad haan..lekin uske pahle mujhe wo Naksha wapas kar jo tum choro ne mujhse chheen liya.."
Raaj itni tej gati se Ron par jhapta ki Ron ko bhi iska pata nahi chala..Ron ke hath se bandook chhut kar neeche gir gayi..dono neeche gir pade..Ron ne apne dono hatho se Raaj ko uthaya aur jor se patak diya,,."mujhe gussa mat dilana kabhi ..."lekin Raaj phhir se uth gaya,,aur apna mukka bandh kar Ron ke upar chhodna chana lekin Ron ne uske mukke ko apne hath se Rok liya..."tu abhi bachha hain...ja kuch din aur jee le apni zindagi.."Ron ne is baar Raaj ko door jhadak diya..Raaj ka sar ship ki deewar se takra gaya..Ron ne bakiyo ki taraf dekha lekin koyi bhi Ron se ladne ki himmat nahi kar pa raha tha..
"tum dono kyun khade ho be..jao naav ko pani me utaro.."
Teeno teji se bahar aane lage..Ron ne apni jeb se barood nikal kar bandook me bhara..aur engine ki taraf fyre kar diya..engine wala room tahas-nahas ho gaya..Teeno neeche aakar naav ko pani me utara..Aditya peechhe mud kar chillaya..."balladonna ka captain neeche gira hain..use utha lena..warna pakad ke hilaoge''
Sabhi teeno ko jaate hue dekhte rahe...
"Riya-seth balladonna ka engine kab tak thik ho jayega..
"Seth-mam kuch ghanto me engine ko hum log sudhar denge..aag ko bhujha di hain..
"us Ron ko main zinda dafan kar dungi yadi agali baar mujhe mila toh..Captain Nair ko hosh aaya..."
"nahi mam...wo abhi bhi behosh hain..lagta hain us kamine ne bahut gahra war kiya hain..."
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Pahle Chalti goliya,
Baat me hoti baat
Dafa- teen sau saat

[Mahii rathore]

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[LoveStar]

Update-16
"ye kashti bahut tej chalti hain..mujhe maloom nahi tha,aaj tak jab ki ye itne salo se mere pass hi padi thi.."Bilandar ,patwar chalata hua bola..Aditya bhi bilandar ke sath patwar chala raha tha,,Aur Ron naav me khade hokar samundar me aage ki disha me door dekhe ja raha tha..
"Ron-meri bandook toh dena be,.jara dekh loon kahi un namoono ne kharab toh nahi kar diya,,"Aditya ne bandook Ron ko di..Ron bandook ko dekhne laga..''ye thik hain,,abhi bahut logo ko uda sakti hain.."
"Ron ye bandook tujhe mili kaha se.."Aditya bola..
"ye mujhe murdo ke shahar se mili.."
"kya bewkoof kyun bana raha hain.. Death iceland me tu kab chala gaya.."Aditya ne apne chehre ke expression ko thik karte hue kaha
"death iceland main sapne me gaya tha..aur waha ke king Martin se ye bandook chheen kar le aaya..."
Ron ka itna kahna tha ki Aditya aur bilandar jor jor se hasne lage..Aditya apna pet pakadkar haste hue bola"ye dekho samundar ke shikari ka ek aur karnama..fekne ki bhi had hoti hain be.."
Bilandar bhi apni hasi ko control karta hua bola.."rahne de Aditya , is viran samundar me samay gujarne ke liye bhi toh kuch chahiye,,iski baate sunkar hi apna samay kat lenge.."
"Ron-yadi tum dono ko apna samay hi gujarna hain toh phhir main tumhe Martin ki prem kahani sunata hoon..
Bilandar-Martin ki prem kahani ke baare me toh maine bhi suna hain..lekin us kahani me sabhi apne vichar jod dete hain..sabki kahani alag alag hain..
"Ron-phhir main sunata hoon..lekin yaad rakhna yadi is baar bola ki phek raha hain toh dono ko kashti ke neeche phenk dunga...
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"Captain Nair ko hosh aa gaya"balladonna se ek shaks chillaya..Sabhi ka dhyan us chillate hue shaks ki taraf gaya..
''kaise ho Captain"Riya ne room me ghuste hi puchha..
"thik hoon ,bas sar me thoda dard hain..us Aditya kamine ne bahut kas kar mara tha.."Nair apne sar ko sahlata hua bola..phhir usne Seth ki taraf dekh..seth chup chap khada tha,."Ron aaya tha kya yaha,."
"Seth-wo aaya tha..aur apni gun bhi sath le gaya..
"Nair-kya baat kar rahe ho..tum logo ne roka nahi us namurad ko..
Riya Nair ke kandhe par hath rakh kar boli.."relax Captain wo bahut chalak nikla..na jane kab se uske dimak me ye sab chal raha tha.."
"abhi kaha hain Ron.."
"wo ek chhoti si kashti me nikal gaye hain.."
"phhir kya humne unka pichha kiya.."
"Nair..Ron ne jate jate engine ko tabah kar diya hain,.par jald hi engine thik ho jayega.."
"Nair-ab bahut ho gaya...is samundar ke Shikari ka shikar ab main karunga...
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"Ron-toh suno tum dono death iceland ke king Martin ki kahani..par yaad rakhna yadi kisi ne beech me toka toh use Morgan ke hawale kar dunga..."Martin..jiske baare me kaha jata tha ki Martin ko uparwale ne kisi khas makshad ne is duniya me bheja..Martin anath tha..death iceland tak wo kaise pahuncha ye koyi nahi janta tha..jab wo bahut chhota tha...tab gulamo ke dal me shamil hokar wo waha ke raja ke yaha kaam karta tha..death iceland ke baare me ek bahut rochak aur majedar baat thi waha ke logo aisa mante the ki us iceland me marne wale shaks ki rooh wahi dafan ho jati hain,.aur samundar ki shan kahne wale Spritiual ship ki raksha karti hain..isliye kayi salo tak spiritual ship samundar par raaj karta raha..lekin ek din aisa bhi aaya jab spiritual ship bhi doob gaya......"Ron bolte bolte chup ho gaya....
"Ron-la sharab ki ek botal la..aur naav aage badhate rah warna spiritual ship ki tarah hum bhi doob jayenge...
Bilandar ne bagal me rakhi hui sharab ki botal Ron ki taraf fek di..
"haan toh main kaha tha...Martin jab chhota tha tab wo waha ke raja ke yaha kaam karta tha..lekin use us samay khud nahi maloom tha ki wo ek din khud raja banega..raja ki ek beti bhi thi Lica..bachpan me Martin aur Lica dono aksar khela karte the death iceland ka raja ke kayi dushman the ,,jo har pal isi death iceland ki khushal saltanat ko tabah karne ki socha karte the..unka sabse bada dushman tha Morgan...Morgan ne samundar ke kinare base hue kayi saltanat ko tabah kiya tha..ab uski nazar death iceland par thi..death iceland ka raja ye baat janta tha...musibat uske sar ke upar hain ,Morgan ki sabse badi taqat thi prachin jamane me paye jane wale dragons ,jo ki Morgan ke har jung ke hathiyar the..death iceland ka raja ye baat janta tha..isiliye usne dragon se nipatne ke liye ek aisi bandook banwayi jo hamla karne par goli nahi aag ka vishal bhandar phenkti ho..dusari taraf Martin aur raja ki beti Lisa ke beech karibi badh rah rahi thi ,dono jawani ke dahliz par bhi kadam rakh chuke the..dono ki dosti pyar me kab badal gayi dono ko iski khabar tak nahi lagi... "
"Ye sala bavandar kaha se aa gaya..ab toh seedhe jahannum me jayenge..ye uparwale ye hain kya,.."bilandar ka dil bhay aur dar se bhar gaya...
"Ron-100 saal jiyega Morgan..nam liya shaitan hazir..par iske 100 saal toh kabke pure ho chuke hain.............................continue...............


Update-17
"Balladonna ki speed ko aur tej karo..hume jald hi aage badhna hain..."Seth ne apne logo ko instruction dete hue kaha..Captain Nair balladonna ke ek chhor par khada hokar samundar me uth rahi tej lahro ko dekh raha tha...
"captain..ab aap kaise ho..."seth bhi Nair ke pass khada ho gaya...
"jante ho seth zindagi me maine itni haar kabhi nahi jheli...Ron ke hatho lagatar mili shikast ne mujhe andar tak hila diya hain...main kisi bhi halat me balladonna ka captain kahlane layak nahi hoon..."Nair ki awaaj me udas jhalak rahi thi..."Captain hum navy se hain,.,humne isse bhi badi ladayi jeeti hain,hum itni jaldi haar nahi maan sakte.."
"tumne thik kaha Seth..humne isse bade bade jung jeeti hain..lekin kabhi socha nahi tha ki ek jungali ,jo khud ko shikari kahta hain..us bedhange se haar jaunga...."
seth abki baar chup raha...Raaj apne room se bahar nikalkar balladonna ke khule vatavaran meaa gaya..uske sar par nishan the..jo ki Ron ke sath hui ladayi ka nateeza tha..Raaj ne seth aur Nair ko balladonna par dekhkar unki taraf badh gaya..
"Raaj-balladonna ka engine kharab ho gaya tha..ab thik hain..
"Seth-puri tarah se toh thik nahi hua hain..lekin ye kaam kar raha hain..tum kaise ho..
"Raaj-mujhe hua hi kya tha..aisi muthbedh toh hoti rahti hain,,,ab main bilkul thik hoon...aur Ron ke sath agali mulakat ka besabri se intezar kar raha hoon...
"Nair-kya karoge usse mulakat karke ..is baar bhi wo chakma de jayega..hum kuch nahi kar payenge...
"befikra raho captain..yuddh me jab tak samne wala zinda ho..ladayi khatam nahi hoti..aur abhi toh hum sab thik hain..,jaroorat hain toh milkar kaam karne ki...phhir wo Chahe Ron ho ya Morgan ki darindi sena..koyi humare aage kuch nahi kar payega..."
"Nair-tum sahi kahte ho Raaj..aaj se hum teeno ka ek maksad hain ,..Ron ki tabahi...
"waise hum teen nahi char hain..aur Ron ki tabahi ke alawa bhi hum charo ka ek maksad hain..."
Nair,Seth aur Raaj ka dhyan Aawaj ki taraf gaya...Riya saamne se aa rahi thi...
"Riya-Raaj,tumne sahi kaha..hume milkar kaam karna hain....aur humare is nek kaam me balladonna bhi sath dega...
"Seth-balladonna ki speed badho namurado...itni tej kar do ki ek baar samundar bhi kaanp jaye....ab hume na toh Morgan rok sakta hain,..aur na hi The Ron....
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"hum inka mukabla kaise karenge..inki tadad bahut jyada hain...aaj uparwala hi bachayega hume in darindo se..."Aditya ki aawaj me dar saaf jhalak raha tha..
"Ron-baat toh sahi hain..par inke liye main akela hi kafi hoon...
Morgan ke dragons bhayankar aawaj nikalte hue teji se Unki taraf aa rahe the..pichhali baar mili shikast ka gussa saaf jhalak raha tha...
"Ron-ye kallu nahi dikh raha kahi..chupa hoga peechhe...
"Ronnnnnn........"tej awaaj me bolte hue Morgan dragon par baitha hua saamne aaya..
"Ron-ek toh teri awaaj itni bekar hain..upar se Ronnn chillakar kaan phad raha hain..kuch kaam tha kya..ya phhir aise hi meri yaad aa gayi..jo mujhse milne aa gaya..
"Morgan-tu bahut badi galti kar raha hain..tujhe atlantic samundar ki raksha kavach ko paar nahi karna chahiye tha....is baar tujhe yaha se zinda nahi jane dunga...
"Ron-aaja ladayi karte hain..mera baat karne ka mood nahi hain...
"bilandar-abey pagal hain kya..kyun Morgan ko uksa raha hain,,,tu shayad use nahi janta..
"ye Morgan kaun hain..main toh ise kallu bulata hoon...aur ye sab toh ek war me hi khatam hain..."
Ron ne naav me padi barood ki bori ko uthakar dragons ki taraf phenk diya..aur apni bandook se us barood par nishana laga diya...sabhi dragon teji se aage badh gaye...Barood hawa me jalne laga..
"Ron-ab toh gaye kaam se...chal apne priyajano ko yaad kar lete...
hain 
Morgan-Ron..abhi tujhe marne ka waqt nahi aaya hain,,tere liye humne kuch aur hi soch rakha hain..pahle balladonna ko tabah karna padega..yadi dragon holder ka adesh hain...Morgan apne dragons ko lekar aage badh chala...Teeno dragons ko balladonna ki disha me jate hue dekhne lage...
"Ron-chalo Martin ka iceland jyada door nahi hain..
"Aditya-ghanta aag badhe..phad ke nikal gaya kallu..jab maine dekha ki tera war khali gaya hain...dekh ke goli nahi chala sakta tha..
"ek baar spiritual ship ko hath aane de..phhir in sabki....... "
Ron ko beech me hi Rokkar Aditya bol pada..."Captain mujhe banana..dekh kitna achchha lagega jab log kahenge..Captain Aditya..."
"isse thik toh Captain bilandar lagta hain...jahaj ka keval ek Captain hoga..wo hain The Ron.."
bilandar hasne laga..."kya sapne hain tum dono ke..lekin spiritual ship ka pata maloom hain..."
"pahle hum teeno ko Martin ke iceland me jana hain...ab mujhe iceland ka maloom karne do..."
Ron kuch samay ke charo taraf dekhta raha..phhir usne ek disha me kashti ko chalane ka adesh diya....
******************************Raaj-ab hum Martin ke shahar se jyada door nahi hain..abey ye kya Morgan ke dragon phhir aa rahe hain...
"Seth-daro mat..is baar Morgan ko sabak sikhane ka plan maine taiyar kar rakha hain...barood unki taraf phenko aur goli chala do..dragon kya dragon ki jaat tak nahi bachegi..
"Seth-sabhi barood lekar upar aayo..inko dikha de ki ,hum army hain...
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Pahle Chalti goliya,
Baat me hoti baat
Dafa- teen sau saat


Update-18
"sabhi barood ke dibbo ko upar lao..yadi aaj susti dikhayi toh yaad rakhna ek-ek ki maut tay hain..kambakhto jaldi kaam karo.."Nair dragons ki aati hui awaaj me chillakar balladonna me maujood sabhi ko hukum de raha tha...Riya bhi apne hath mw gun liye aayi..
"Nair-mam,aap andar jaye..ye dragons bahut khatarnak hain...main,seth aur raaj in dragons ki dhajjiya udane ke liye kafi hain..
"Riya-captain..teen se bhale char..aane do in dragons ko...
dragons ka kafila teji se balladonna par attack karta hain..aag ki lapte pure balladonna ko tahas -nahas kar rahi thi...Nair ne barood se bhari hui ek bakse ko dragon ki taraf phenka..dragon ne us barood ko apne vishal nukile wale daanto me pakad liya..
"Nair-abey ye toh mere taraf aa raha hain...goli chalao be ispe..
Raaj turant apni gun lekar Nair ke samne aa gaya..aur bina der kiye fure kar diya..dragon wahi jalne laga..girte girte wo dragon balladonna ship se ja takraya..balladonna ek taraf jhukne lagi...
"Raaj-hamla jari rakho ...in dragons ko chun chun bhoon denge..Morgan apne dragon par baitha hua teji se hamla kiye ja raha tha..Morgan ka dragon bahut tej tha..palak jhapkate hi wo balladonna par maujood kayi logo ko ya toh apne mu me daboch leta..ya phhir apne aag ki lapto se jala deta tha..
"Seth-captain ..aap is chhor se dragon ke hamle ko roko main Morgan ke peechhe jata hoon..
seth apne hath me apni bandook liye Morgan ki taraf chal pada.."Morgan..himmat hain toh mujhse mukabla kar,."
Raaj bhi seth ki taraf aaya..."Seth main tumhare sath hoon.."Morgan apne hath me rakhe hue farse ko pakad kar balladonna me kud gaya..
"Morgan-aa jao bachhe aaj tum dono ko morgan ke hatho marne ka mauka mila hain..
"Raaj-baat na karke yadi mukabala kare toh..kallu...
Morgan apne hath me apne farse ko majbooti se pakad kar Raaj ki taraf dauda..Raaj ne Morgan ki taraf fyre kiya..lekin Morgan ne goli ko apne farse se rok liya..
"bas bachhe itna hi dam hain..."Morgan dahad marte hue bola...
"aaja kallu narak me tera intezar ho raha hain.."
Raaj ne apni gun ko lekar Morgan ki taraf badha..aur apni gun se Morgan par hamla karne laga..lekin Morgan Raaj ke har war ko badi asani se rok raha tha....Raaj ke hath chhutne lage..Morgan ke agle hi war me Raaj Raaj ki gun uske hath se chhut gayi..Morgan ne apni puri taqat lagakar apne farse ko hawa me uthaya,,lekin agle hi pal Morgan ko aisa laga ki uske peeth me kisi ne garam lohe ki rod ghusa di ho,,wo jor se chillata hua peechhe muda..Riya apne hath me gun liye hue khadi thi..Morgan Raaj ko chhodkar Riya ki taraf bhaga...Riya ka dil joro se thadak raha tha..tabhi Morgan ke pairo par seth ne kuch de mara ,Morgan ladkhada kar gir gaya..jaise hi Morgan gira seth ne apne hath me pakde hue hathiyar se Morgan ko marne laga..lekin jyada der nahi Morgan ne seth ke hatn ko pakad kar jor se uske pet me ek laat mari..seth balladonna ke neeche girte hue bacha..usne kinaro par lagi rod ko pakad liya..
"Morgan-ab tera kya hoga gulabi kali..phhir Morgan apne farse par hath phhirane laga.."ab tujhe is khooni farse se kaun bacha payega..pahle tere pet ke do tukde karunga..phhir sar ko alag kar dunga..aur main tujhe yakin dilata hoon..ye sab main do baar me hi kar dunga.."
Morgan dheere dheere Riya ki taraf badh raha tha..lekin Riya ke kadam wahi par ruk gaye the..kayi log Morgan ko rokne bhi aaye lekin Morgan ke farse ne un sab ka kaam tamam kar diya..aur ant me Morgan ne ek tej dahad laga kar Riya ki taraf farsa phenk diya..farsa Riya ko lagta isse pahle hi Raaj teji se daudta hua..farse ko pakad liya....
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"abey ye iceland hain,...itna andhera me dooba hua hain..lagta hain kayi salo se yaha koyi nahi aaya..fala yaha ke ped bhi darawane hain..meri toh andar jane se pahle hi phhat rahi hain..."Aditya ne apne ankho se doorbin ko hatate hue kaha..
death iceland,Martin ke saltanat ke kinare teeno abhi bhi apni kashti me hi sawar the..din ka samay hone ke bawjood bhi death iceland ek ghane andhere se dooba hua tha,,
"bilandar-iske andar bhi jana hain kya..ki bahar se hi kaam ho jayega...bahut darawani jagah hain..
"Ron-isi liye ise death iceland kahte hain..aur tune kya socha tha ki jannat hoga yaha,,jaha 4-5 ladkiya apni kamar matkate hue tera swagat karengi..
sabse pahle Ron kashti se utar gaya..uske chehre par muskurahat jhalak rahi thi..
Ron ke baad Aditya aur bilanadar bhi death iceland ke zamini bhag me utar gaye...
"Aditya-Ron ,yaha ke toh ped bhi darawane haim..maloom nahi kitne salo se ye death iceland banjar pada hain..
"mashal ka intejam karo..ye ice.and bahut hi pyara lagta hain yadi ispar roshni pade.,lekin ye iceland shrapit hain.."
"Aditya-shrapit ,meri toh waise hi phhati padi hain..upar se tu aur dara raha hoon..
"Ron-fala khud ko captain bolta hain..chidiyaghar ka guard hona chahiye tujhe ....
Ron ne apni bandook ko kholkar uska barood nikal liya..aur usi barood se mashal jalayi..ek usne khud apne hath me li..aur dusari mashal Aditya ki taraf phenk di..
"Ron-lo be..aur jaha jaha main chalu wahi chalna..warna yaha bahut se jeev aise rahte hain.,jo tum dono ko kachcha chaba jayenge..tum dono ko ek khubsurat chiz bhi dikhaunga,,..
"Aditya-fala khud ko death iceland ka raja samajh raha hain.."
Aditya aur bilandar Ron ke nakshekadam par chalne lage..andhere se dhake hue death iceland me ek sannata pasra hua tha,,waha ke ped ,zameen death iceland ki situation bata rahe the ki ,yaha se jeevan kayi salo pahle hi samapt ho chuka hain...
"Ron-toh main raja Martin ki kahani suna raha tha..kaha tak pahuncha tha main....,Ron chalte chalte ruk gaya..aur apne mu me hatho ke nakhun chaba kar yaad karne laga...
Aditya aur bilandar abhi aage ki kahani nahi sunna chahte the..isiliye un dono ne talne ke liye kaha..
"bilandar-shayad kahani khatam ho chuki thi..hain na,..Aditya...
"Aditya-ha..haan Ron,kahani khatam ho chuki thi...
"Ron-chalo phhir tum dono hi suna do,,itni door paidal chal ke jana hain rasta jaldi kat jayega...
Aditya aur bilandar ek dusare ka chehra dekhne lage..
"Aditya-Ron is bilandar ne pahle haan bola..toh kahani ye sunayega,...
Aditya ne bilandar ki taraf ishara kiya..
"Ron-toh shuru ho ja billu..
Ron ashal lekar aage badh chala...bilandar peechhe mudkar Aditya se bola.."kyun be mujhe kyun fasa diya.."
"tune hi use bola tha pahle..."
"kaha rah gaye be dono..yadi bhatak gaye toh main dhoondne nahi aaunga..."
Aditya aur bilandar Ron ki taraf teji se chalne lage...
"Ron-ek baar phhir se suno...Martin jab chhota tha..toh wo ek naav banane wale ke yaha bhi kaam karta tha..us samay raja ki beti lisa aur Martin aksar iceland ke kinare chori chhupe baith kar ghanto baat kiya karte the..raat ko kinare ki ret me letkar dono ghanto asman ke taaro aur chand ko dekha karte the..dono ka ye pyar dheere dheere sabhi ko pata chalne laga..lekin riyasat me kisi ke pass itni himmat nahi thi ki wo raja se is baare me baat kare.....
Aditya ne Ron ko beech me toka..
"Ron maafi chahta hoon..lekin ek sawal puchh sakta hoon kya.."
"kaun sa sawal.."Ron ne chalte hue puchha..
"ye drahon holder kaun si bala hain ,jiska jikra Morgan ne kiya tha.."
"kallu fala kuch bhi bol deta hain,,aisi koyi chiz ka astitva nahi hain.."
itna bolkar Ron aage badh gaya..
"inko dragon holder ke baare me bata diya toh,,puri kahani jan kar hi dam lenge..ek baar mera dragon mil jaye.,phhir us kallu aur dragon holder ko isi samundar me dafan kar dunga,,.....
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"Captain Nair ,main yaha neeche latka hoon..mujhe upar khincho.."seth ne Nair ko awaaj di..
Morgan khada hua,,ajib si bhasa me usne kuch kaha..jisse sabhi dragons ne balladonna ko charo taraf se gher liya...Nair ki madad se seth upar aa gaya..sabhi charo taraf dekhne lage,...
"Riya-ab kya karenge..aur ye dragons kya karne wale hain....
Raaj daudkar Riya ke pass aaya.."mam,ye ek sath hamla karne wale hain..hume jald hi neeche ,udna hoga.."
"Raaj tum pagal ho gaye ho ,.,yadi hum neeche kud bhi gaye toh kaha bachenge,..."
"aap chinta mat kijiye..death iceland ,Nakshe ke mutabik kuch hi doori par hain..yadi abhi kud gaye toh ho sakta hain ki humari jaan bach jaye..warna yaha ruk kar apni jaan gawana bewkoofi hain..."
Riya ko lekar Raaj neeche kud gaya.....
"Nair-ye phhattu raaj ,riya ko lekar kud gaya,,lekin hum dono mukabla karenge..,
Morgan apne dragon par baith gaya,.aur dragon ko kuch kaha,.sabhi dragons ne ek sath balladonna ko aag ki lapto se dhak diya...
"Seth-captain..ab hum yaha nahi ruk sakte waise bhi kuch hi log bache hain..chalo neeche kud jate hain...
Seth,aur Nair Morgan ne najro se bach kar neeche jhalang diya.........

Update-19
Ron,bilandar aur Aditya..abhi bhi death iceland ke andar chale ja rahe the..
"Bilandar-Aditya kahi ye rasta toh nahi bhool gaya..kab se ghumaye ja raha hain,.
"Aditya-chup rah,kahi usne sun liya toh lafda kar dega phhir se...
"Ron-ssshhhhh...lagta hain koyi khatarnak janwar aas pass hain..
Aditya aur bilandar chup ho gaye,,.
Ron dono ko wahi khada rahne ke liye kahkar thodi door tak aage gaya...
"Aditya-is bhayanak jungle me bhi koyi rahta hoga..billu..
"bilandar-sun be billu mat bola kar..aur rahi baat yaha kisi ke rahne ki toh Ron jaise prani jaroor rahte honge..
Ron -lagta hain tum dono meri tareef kar rahe ho..ho gaya yaro mana ki main great hoon..lekin itni tareef bhi mat karo..
Ron aage badh gaya..Aditya aur bilandar bhi uske kadam pe kadam milate hue chal diye...
"Aditya-Ron hum ja kaha rahe hain...aur yadi tujhe rasta nahu maloom toh hum dono ko yaha laya kyun...
Ron chalte hue rook gaya..aur peechhe mudkar bola.."maine toh tum dono ko keval itna kaha tha ki mere sath chalna hain ki nahi..jabarjasti toh dono ko utha nahi laya,."
Ron ki baat khatam hoti usse pahle hi Aditya bol pada"sun be..tune keval apne sath chalne ko nahi bola tha..tune ye bhi bola tha ki tu mujhe spiritual ship me sair karayega..."
Ron ne bilanadar ki taraf dekha"hum toh keval teri naav lekar bhag jate..lekin tu sath kyun aaya.."
bilandar kuch der chup raha,
"haqiqat ye hain ki maine bachpan se hi spiritual ship ke kisse sune hain..toh mera man karta tha ki ek din main bhi samundar ki shan kahe jani wali us murdo ki jahaj me safar karu..jiski rooh raksha karti hain.."
"Ron-phhir tum dono sahi bande aur us bande ne yani maine tum dono ko sahi jagah par laya hoon..Martin ki kabra se mujhe ek Naksha milega..dusara Morgan ke pass hain..jo main use markar hasil kar lunga,isme koyi badi baat nahi..aur teesara naksha hain Raaj ke pass....
"bilandar-tu chahta toh us din balladonna me jab tune Raaj ko jakhmi kar diya tha,toh badi asani se Raaj ke pass wo naksha le sakta tha..lekin tune aisa nahi kiya kyun...
"kyunki main chahta tha ki Raaj bhi waha aaye..jaha jaha main jaunga.."
"bilandar-iski vajah jaan sakta hoon main..
"Ron-iski vajah toh tujhe Martin ka bhoot hi bata sakta hain..usi se puchh lenaRon hasne laga...
"abhi tum dono keval itna jaan lo ki jald hi murdo ka jahaj humare kabje me hoga..aur tum dono Captain The Ron ke under me safar karoge..hain na majedar baat.."
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Riya...riya utho..lagta hain Riya behosh ho gayi.."Raaj apna sar pakad kar bola-ab kya kiya jaye..balladonna bhi hath se nikal gaya..aur is death iceland me hum dono akele..tabhi riya khanste hue apni ankh kholi..
"Raaj-uparwale ka shukra hain..tum uthi toh sahi..
Riya apne bheege hontho pe hath phhirate hue boli"hum kaha hain Raaj.."
"Martin ke iceland me aa chuke hain hum.."
Riya ne ek nazar death iceland pe daudayi.."kitna darawana hain Raaj..kahi koyi bhayanak jaanwar hua toh.."
"jab samundar ka Shikari tumhare sath hain toh phhir kyun darna.."
Raaj ne apna hath Riya ki taraf badhaya..aur riya ka hath pakadkar iceland ke andar chala gaya..jaha kuch der pahle Ron ,Aditya aur bilandar gaye the...Seth aur Nair bhi kinare par pahunche..
"Seth-Captain lagta hain,yahi death iceland hain..
"Nair-ab Captain mat bol,balladonna ko Morgan ne puri tarah tabah kar diya hoga..
"Seth-balladonna ke nahi hone se aap ke captain ka kad phhir bhi barkarar rahega..khas taur par mere liye..
"thank u Seth..ab is iceland ke andar chale.."
seth aur Nair bhi iceland ke andar ghus gaye..dusari taraf Morgan apne sathi Dragons ko lekar apne rahwas ki taraf chal diya..aaj Morgan bahut khush tha..pichhali do haar ka badla usne le liya tha..Morgan ne apne khooni farse ko hawa me upar ki taraf uthaya..
"aaj sabko maine narak me bhej diya..ab keval ek hain The Ron.. "
Morgan ne khusi ke maare ek jordar dahad mari..uske sathi dragons bhi chillane lage..bahut jald hi Moegan aur uska dal gayab ho gaya..is baat se bekhabar ki Raaj,Riya,seth aur Nair bach gaye hain...
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Ron ke hath me jal rahi mashal ki roshani kam ho rahi thi..
"Ron-aaj aag ne bhi apni khunnas nikal rahi hain..
Ron ka itna kahna tha ki uske hath me rakhi hui mashal bujh gayi..Ron Aditya ke hath se mashal lekar aage ki taraf muda..samne gahri khayi thi..achanak apne samne vishal khayi dekhkar Ron ke hath se mashal chhut gaya,.aur khayi me ja gira..Ron ne apne danto se apni jeebh ko daba liya.."ab in dono ko kya bolu..kuch sochna padega..warna dono kahenge ki main ek khayi se dar gaya.."
Ron peechhe muda"hum teeno bahut bahadur hain..isliye is mashal ki koyi jaroorat nahi.."
Aditya aur bilandar ko maloom nahi tha ki samne vishal khayi hain..
"Aditya-chal phhir aage badh..ruk kyun gaya,,.
Ron ,bilandar ki taraf dekhkar bola..
"billu..main chahta hoon ki aage ka rasta tu hume dikhaye..tu bahut hoshiyar aur kabil hain..aaj se nahi abhi se tu leader hain.."
bilandar Ron ki chal ko nahi samajh paya..aur Ron se apni tareef sunkar apna seena chauda karta hua..aage badha..bilandar ki cheenk puri vatavaran me gunj uthi..
"Aditya-Ron,bilandar cheenkha kyun..fala yaha itna andhera hain ki kuch dikhayi hi nahi de raha hain..
"Ron-bilandar khayi me gir gaya..
"kyaaur tune use aage badhne se roka kyun nahi.."
"main khayi ki gahrayi naap raha tha..dekhna chahta tha ki ye khayi Martin ke tehkhane wali toh nahi.."
Aditya ko Ron ke upar bahut gussa aa raha tha,.."abey yadi tujhe khayi ki gahrayi hi maloom karni thi toh khud kud jata..dhokebaaj.."
"dhokebaaj..mera naya nam..par mujhe pasand nahi.."
"abey teri aisi ki taisi..main ja raha hoon wapas..tu mujhe bhi kisi musibat me daal kar nikal lega.."
Aditya wapas jaane laga..Ron apne shatir dimak me kuch sochne laga..
"Ron-Aditya ,rook ja,,
"ghanta nahi ruk, raha main.."
"soch le kahi raste me Morgan mil gaya toh,."
Morgan ka nam sunte hi Aditya ke kadam apne aap rook gaye,..Ron teji se Aditya ki taraf badha..
"Aditya maine bilandar ke sath aisa kyun kiya iski sahi vajah main tujhe bata sakta hoon.."
"bak jaldi..varna main abhi nikal lunga.."
"bilandar..Morgan ka sath de raha tha..aur chhup chhup ke hum dono ki jasoosi kar raha tha.."
"kya saboot hain tere pass.."
"itne andhere me tujhe saboot dikh jayega..lekin main tujhe bata deta hoon..Morgan ke gardan par ek nishan tha..aur maine usi tarah ka nishan bilandar ke gardan me bhi dekha tha..usi samay main samajh gaya tha ki ye billu hum dono ko apne jaal me phansa raha hain..aur jab Morgan hume death iceland ke bahar mila toh usne hum par hamla bhi isiliye nahi kiya..kyunki usne bilandar ko humare sath jo bhej rakha tha.."
Aditya soch me pad gaya..aur apne dimak par jor dene laga ki usne bhi bilandar ke gardan me koyi nishan dekha hain ya nahi..lekin use kuch yaad nahi aaya...
"Aditya-mujhe yaad nahi ki maine bilandar ke gardan par koyi nishan bhi dekha hain..lekin ek ajeeb kism ka nishan maine do jagah jaroor dekha hain..ek Raaj ke peeth par..aur dusara tere gardan ke peechhe wale hisse me..
Ron ek baar phhir se soch me pad gaya.."ab is namurad ko kya jawab du,."
"Ron tere sharir par bane nishan ke baare me kya bolega.."
"wo toh maine ladkiyo ko apni taraf akarsit karne ke liye gudwaya hain.."
"Aditya-ab chale..dusare raste se..
Ron,andaja lagate hue dusare raste ki taraf chal pada..
"jhoot bolna kitna saral kaam hain..billu wale mamle ko maine kitni safayi se suljha diya..sach me Ron tere mukabale is samundar me koyi nahi..keval ek ko chhodkar...

UPDATE-20
"Riya idhar se aao ,aaram se aana andhere me kuch dikhayi nahi de raha.."Raaj ne ,Riya ke hath ko kaskar pakad liya...
"ofo Raaj,yaha itna andhera kyun hain.."Riya ki awaj me jh,.'at jhalak rahi thi..
Raaj ,Riya ka hath thame hue aage badh raha tha..uske kadam death iceland ke zameen ko naap-taul kar hi aage badh rahe the..lekin Riya in sab mamlo me tej nahi thi..chalte hue Riya ka pair ek patthar se takra gaya..
"oouch.."Riya ne apna hath jhatak kar apne pairo sahlane lagi..
"kya hua Riya.."
"dekh ke chalna chahiye tha..mera pair patthar se takra gaya.."
Raaj bhi wahi baith gaya..aur apne hath ko Riya ke pair ke taraf badhaya..
"ab kaisa lag raha hain Riya"Raaj apne hatho se Riya ke pair ko sahla raha tha..lekin Riya ne Raaj ka hath jhatak diya..
"yadi sahi pair ko sahlate toh main kuch nahi bolti..khud ko aur apne hath ko control me rakho.."
Raaj ne apne hath ko hata liya..
"yadi tumhe meri madad nahi chahiye toh phhir utho..abhi bahut chalna hain.."
Riya ka hath tham kar Raaj phhir aage badhne laga..
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Seth aur Nair aage badh rahe the,,un dono ki bhi wahi condition thi jo Riya aur Raaj ki thi..seth aur Nair bhi andhere me apne anuman ke mutabik chale ja rahe the..death iceland me maujood kayi ped ki shakhaye zameen tak faili hui thi..aur bahut majboot bhi thi,..Nair ka pair usi me phans gaya..aur Nair ladkhada kar gir gaya..
"abey utha mujhe..kisi ne mujhe gira diya.."
Seth ne jaldi se Nair ko uthaya..
"Nair-koyi hain yaha par..samne aa jaye toh aisi laat marunga uske pichhwade me ki uska pichhwada hi alag ho jayega uske shareer se..
"Seth-captain,hume chalte rahna hain..yaha rukna khatre se khali nahi hain..
Dono aage aage kadam badhane lage..Nair ko apne pairo par kuch chipchipa sa mahsoos hua..
"Nair-seth tune apne pairo me kuch mahsoos kiya..kuch chipchipa sa..
"haan..kichad jaisa lag raha hain..lekin ye kuch aur hi hain.,"
"Captain kuch awaj bhi aa rahi hain..."
Nair ne jhuk kar apne pairo ke pass hath phhiraya.."seth bahut hi chipchipa material hain..ye kuch aur hi chiz hain..jaise kisi ande ke andar ka material..thik usi tarah ka hain.."
"seth-Captain ye iceland kahi Morgan aur uske dragons ka ilaka toh nahi..aur ye dragon ka anda ho...
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"Aditya tu rook main abhi aaya.."
"main bhi sath aaunga..tera bharosa nahi.."
"chal phhir yahi shuru ho ja.."
"main sar ke upar se gayi ye baat.."
Ron ne apna hath apne paint ki zib ki taraf le gaya.."halka hona hain mujhe.."
"phhir ja..pahle bata deni chahiye thi.."
Ron kuch der baad aaya..
'Ron-ab kaha chale..Martin ke kabra ki taraf ya phhir is iceland ki sabse khubsurat jagah..jaha Martin aur lisa mila karte the..
"abey ghonchu waha bhi andhera hoga.."
"keval wahi aisi jagah hain,,jaha Morgan ka kahar nahi hain..aur Martin ka kabra bhi usi raste me hain.."
Aditya kuch sochne ke baad bola"mere sawal ka jawab dega.."
"main kabhi school bhi nahi gaya..tere sawal ka jawab kya dunga.."
"Ron,jab tu kabhi school nahi gaya toh phhir tujhe raja Martin ki history kaise maloom.."
"Martin mera langotia yaar tha..ab tu bata direct Martin ki kabra me chale ya ...."
"ek aur sawal..lisa kaisi dikhti thi.."
"lisa..lisa apne ankho me bholi si masoomiyat liye rahti thi..uske gulab ki kali ke tarah honth se toh kudrat bhi sharma jaye..aur uske chehre ka rang ujale ka prateek tha.."
"Aditya-chal ab aage chalte hain,..
Ron aur Aditya aage badh chale..kuch der toh Aditya chup raha..lekin apni adat se majboor usne apna mu khol hi diya..aur Ron ke samne naya prashn dag diya..
"Aditya-Ron..ye Mogan aur dragon holder ka thikana bhi hoga na..
"mujhe kabhi us kallu ne bulakar dawat nahi di jo mujhe uska thikana maloom hoga..kuch der me Morgan yaha aa jayega..usi se puchh lena.."
"Morgan yaha aayega kya bak raha hain.."
"Shayad Morgan yaha aa chuka hain..asal me Morgan ka thikana yahi hain..isi iceland me Morgan rahta hain.."
"bad joke..mujhe hansi nahi aayi.."
"dhyan se sun kuch awaaj aa rahi hain.."
Ron ke kahne par Aditya ne khud ko shant karke aas pass ho rahi halchal ko sunne ki koshish karne laga..lekin Aditya kuch bhi nahi sun paya..
"Aditya-kuch sunayi nahi de raha hain..Ron tu mujhe dara raha hain kya..
"Ron-mujhe toh Morgan ki yaha hone ki aahat bahut pahle sd mil chuki thi..lekin yaad rakhna death iceland me dragons har samay maujood rahte hain..
"ab meri sahi me phhat rahi hain..band kar apni bakwas.."
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"ab keval Ron hi bacha hain..aur mujhe maloom hain ki tu yahi chhupa hain Ron..nam badalne se teri shaksiyat nahi badal jayegi,,aaj tune mere saltanat me aaya hain,,tujhe koyi nahi bacha payega,."Morgan death iceland ke kinare khada hans raha tha,,use yakin tha ki aaj Ron uske shikange se nahi bach payega..apne farse ko neeche jhulata hua Morgan bhi death iceland ke andar ghus gaya,,.
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Pahle Chalti goliya,
Baat me hoti baat
Dafa- teen sau saat

[LoveStar]

UPDATE-21
Morgan tej kadmo ke sath aage badh raha tha,,use koyi kauf nahi tha..na hi Ron ke death iceland me maujood hone ka aur na hi waha faile hue gahre andhere ka..Morgan ke chalne ki speed itni tej thi ki uske kadmo ki awaaj saaf suni ja sakti thi..
"le be yahi hain wo jagah jaha Martin aur lisa ek dusare se pyar ,mohahbbat ki baate karte the.."Ron ne apne apne hatho se ishara karte hue kaha..Aditya ka mu khula rah gaya ,use yakin nahi ho raha tha ki bahar se itna bhayankar aur darawana dikhne wale iceland me itni khoobsurat jagah ho sakti hain..samne samundar ka pani jheel ke roop me bah raha tha..safed dhundh ne waha ke aas-pas ke sare vatavaran ko dhak rakha tha..kayi tarah ke khoobsurat flowers bhi lage the..jisme se kuch chamak bhi rahe the..Aditya waha ki khubsurati par mohit ho gaya..bahut der tak Aditya bina apni palke jhukaye niharta raha...
"Ron-sharab ka ek pyala yadi mu me ho toh aur bhi jyada maja aata..
"Ron,ye toh swarg ki tarah lag raha hain..pakka lisa ki khubsurati bhi aisi hi rahi hogi..."
Ron ko kisi ke aane ki ahat hui..koyi tej aawaj ke sath unki taraf aa raha tha..achanak hi kisi ne unpe jhapatta mara..Ron ko hamle ki bhanak lag chuki thi..Aditya ka sar pakad kar Ron neeche zameen par let gaya..
"Aditya-hat be main us tarah ka nahi hoon..jo ladko ke sath hi shuru ho jaye... 
"Ron-dragon ke sath kaisa rahega..dragon ne hamla kar diya hain..
Aditya ke rongate khade ho gaye..dragon ka nam sunte hi,.
Ron khada hua..aur dragon ki taraf dheere dheere badha..aur us dragon ki ankho me ankhe daal kar ghurne laga..Aditya abhi bhi neeche pada tha..uthne ki himmat nahi thi usme "fala ye Ron toh bahut bahadur nikla..khali hath dragon se bhhid raha hain..."
Dragon bhi phunkar maarte hue Ron ki taraf badh raha tha..Ron apni ungali dragon ki taraf karte hue bola.."tu mujhse mukabala karne aaya hain..aaja.."
"Aditya-thok de Ron is jaanwar ko ,isko paka ke khane ka intezam karenge..waise bhi bahut bhook lagi hain..do teen din ho gaye khaye hue..
Ron gusse se peechhe muda.."ye dragon salo se bhooka hain..chup kar warna iske mu ka nivala banne me jyada vaqt nahi lagega.."
"Ron-tu kya sochata hain kallu ke chamchu..tu mujhe hara dega..dekh abhi..dekh abhi main kaise..kaise.....itna bolkar Ron bhag nikla..Aditya ke toh hosh hi ud gaye,.dragon ne dahad mari..aur zameen par lete hue Aditya ko dekha..
"Aditya-dekho,dragon bhai..aap mahan ho,dayalu ho..maine kuch nahi kiya..Ron hi mujhe yaha lekar aaya hain...
lekin dragon par koyi asar na hota dekh Aditya bhi khada hokar Ron ki taraf bhag nikla..dragon ne apne aag ki lapto se Aditya par hamla kiya..jisse Aditya ke kapde jalne lage the..Aditya aag ki lapto ko apne hatho se bhujate hue bhag raha tha
"fala Ron dhoka de ke bhag nikla,,aur ye gand se aag phenkane wala bhi mere peechhe pada hain..''
Tabhi Aditya ko Ron ne pakad kar jhadiyo ke andar khinch liya..
"Aditya-dhokebaaj chhodunga nahi tujhe main..
"chup be..dragon yahi par bhatak raha hain.."
Aditya ki majboori thi chup hona..lekin wo Ron ko ghoor kar dekh raha tha...
"Ron-main us tarah ka ladka nahi hoon.."Aditya ka dialog usi pe chipkate hue Ron bola...
Dragon dahad marte hue waha pahuncha..aur jis jhadi me Ron aur Aditya chhupe the wahi khada ho gaya..aur dono ko dhoondane laga..gusse se us dragon ne aag ki lapte charo taraf phenki..aur aage badh gaya...jis jhadi me dono chhupe the wo puri tarah jal chuki thi..
"Ron-chal..aaj raat thandi nahi lagegi..lekin tu itna hil kyun raha hain...
"Aditya-abey main nahi hil raha..jis patthar ke neeche main baitha hoon..wo hil raha hain...
"lagta hain tera motu shareer se patthar ko bhi dard hone laga hain..."
"abey ye patthar nahi kuch aur hain.."Aditya cheenkha..
jisko patthar samajh kar dono baithe the..wo asal me halke kale rang ka dragon tha,.uski daant baki dragon ki tarah bahar nahi balki andar thi..aur ankhe laal..us dragon ne apni ankhe kholi...aur apne gardan ko jhaddka..Aditya aur Ron dono ulte mu zameen par gir pade...us dragon ka aadha shareer zameen me dhansa tha..jaise kitne salo se wo so raha ho...
"Ron-tere is bhari bharkam ke shareer ke vajan se ye danav jaag gaya..
Aditya kuch nahi bol paya..keval ek shabd ke "ab uparwala bachaye''
dragon apne shareer ke zameen me dhanse bhag ko nikalne laga...lekin uska baya pair nahi nikal raha tha..usne ek tej aawaj nikali..us dragon ki aawaj pahle wale dragon ko sunayi di..wo bhi tej aawaj me hunkar bharne laga..
"Ron-aaj tu ek dragon khana..aur main ek khaunga,,ye wala mujhe pasand nahi..pahle wale ka mans naram hain...
"lekin haqiqat iska ulta hoga..ye dono dragon hum dono ko mil kar khayenge..wo bhi ek baar me.."
pahle wala dragon teji se bhagta hua..us halke kale wale dragon ki taraf badh raha tha...
Pahle wale dragone ne baad wale dragon ko apne sar se jordar dhakka diya..kale rang wala dragon..zameen ki lambi parat ko ukhadte hue door ja gira..uska pair ab aazad tha,.apne shareer ko jhatakate hue kala dragon khada hua..
"Ron-dekh tera wala udhar hain"Ron ne black dragon ko dekhkar Aditya se kaha...
"Ron tujhe aisa nahi lagta ki hum dono ko bahut jald hi yaha se khisak lena chahiye isse pahle ki ye dono hum dono ka kachumar banaye..."
"thik hain..lekin dekh lena main tujhe peedhhe kar dunga,''itna bolte hi Ron bhag nikla...Aditya bhi bina vaqt gavaye Ron ke sath bhagne..aur un dono ke peechhe dragons...
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"kamine ne dhoke se mujhe gira diya..yaha toh kuch dikh hi nahi raha hain..lagta hain khayi jyada gahri nahi thi.."bilandar apne kamar ko pakad ka utha..aur kuch dhoondne laga,,.
"do nukeele patthar mil jaye toh aag jalane ka jugad ho jaye..."
Lekin uske hath me nukeele patthar ki bajay Ron ke hath se giri hui mashal aa gayi...
"kaam ho gaya..ek chingari ki jaroorat hain bas..phhir yaha se bahar nikalne ka rasta dhoonda jaye.."
apne hatho ko andhere me bahut der tak idhar udhar phhirane ke baad use patthar mil hi gaye..
"chalo koshish ki jaye.."bilandar ne uparwale ka nam liya..aur dono patthar ko ko ragadne laga..lekin chingari nahi nikali..jab bahut der tak patthar ko ragadne ke baad bhi chingari nahi paida hui toh gusse me usne un pattho ko phenk diya...aur badbadane laga..lekin achanak uske dhyan me kuch aaya,,.
"is khayi ke deewaro se pattharo ke takrane ki aawaje aani chahiye thi..kyunki jaha tak mujhe maloom hain..iceland ki khayi jyada chaudi nahi hoti...iska matlab jis taraf maine pattharo ko phenka..us taraf se rasta ho sakta hain.."
bilandar abdhere me apne hatho ko aage karke usi disha me chalne laga...bilandar ne mahsoos kiya ki uske paire tale ki zameen pahle jaise khurdari,ubad khabad na hokar ekdum chikani ho gayi hain..aur use chalne me bhi koyi mushkil nahi ho rahi thi...apne andaje se bilandar aage badhe ja raha tha..aur use koyi mushkil bhi nahi ho rahi thi...tabhi uska pair fisal gaya..wo wahi gir gaya..ek toh pahle se hi uske shareer me dard tha upar se is jhatke ne uske mu se gali nikalne ko majboor kar di...
"m*******d yaha pani kaise aa gaya..gand pe seedha asar hua hain..."bilandar apne pichhwade ko sahalate hue bola..aur apne hatho ko zameen pe tika kar uthne ki koshish karne laga,.lekin use kisi ki aawaj sunayi di..wo shant ho gaya..uska dil joro se dhadakane laga..ji bnu waha tha,,wo do log the jisme ek ladki bhi thi...bulandar chup chap un dono ki aawaj sunne laga..
"martin wapas aa raha hain..hum apna badla jaroor lenge.."
"jaroor meri jaan lisa..is baar samundar ke SHIKARI ka shikar main karunga...Martin humara intekam ab pura hoga..."itna bolkar wo hasne laga...





Update-22
Bilandar ko do logo ki baat karne ki aawaj abhi bhi aa rahi thi..bilandar ne socha ki "lagta hain ye dono bhi us nakshe ki talash me hain...lekin ye dono Martin ke aane ki baat kyun kar rahe hain..Martin toh kayi saal pahle hi is samundar me dafan ho chuka hain..."
dono ko koyi shak na ho ki waha unke aalawa bhi koyi teesara hain..isliye bilandar andhere ka sahara lekar hi chup raha..bilandar nahi chahta tha ki wo pakda jaye..aur use pakad kar koyi peete...ek to waise bhi uski halat abhi kuch thik nahi thi...
jo do log baat kar rahe the..unki charcha abhi bhi chal rahi thi..bilandar ke pass unki baate sunne ke aalawa koyi dusara rasta nahi tha..jab tak dono yaha se chale na jaye..
"dewan,ab wo samay aa gaya hain..jab hum yaha se bahar nikal payenge..kitne salo se hum yaha kaid hain.."
"ye sab tumhare kameene Martin ki vajah se hua hain..usne pahle apne marne ka dhong kiya..hum dono kitna khus hue the ye jaankar ki Martin,Morgan ke hatho jung ke maidan me shaheed ho gaya..lekin us dhokebaaj ne is kbro ke tehkhane me apne us jadui nakshe se kaid kar diya tha..us din ke baad aaj tak hum dono yaha kaid hain.."
Dewan ne lisa ko beech me hi rokkar apni taraf kheench liya.."hum dono apne jadu aur ek dusare ke shareer ki garmi se hi zinda hain..." 
dewan ne lisa ke kamar par hath phhirate hue uske chutarro par ek chapat laga di..aur sahlane laga..lisa ne bhi apne dono hatho se Dewan ko jakad liya..aur apni kamar ko hila-hila kar apni chut ko dewan ke lohe pe ragadane lagi...dewan ne lisa ko alag kiya..aur uske sar ke baal pakad kar kheench diya..aaaaannnhhhhh dewannnn...dusare hath se dewan ne apne lund ko bahar nikala..aur kuch der uspe hath phhiraya..phhir lisa ka chehra kheench kar apne lund ke saamne la diya..aur lisa ke galo ko hontho ko ,sar ko apne lund se sahalane laga..dewan puri dheere dheere puri rangat me aa chuka tha..lisa ke galo par apne lund ko ragadte hue lisa ke gulab ki kali ki tarah mulayam hontho pe rakh diya..aur ragadne laga...
Uuuuuufffffff...lisa ....kya haseen hain tera ye roop..jisme kho jane ka dil karta hain..aur phhir lisa ne apne hatho se dewan ke lund ko aage peechhe karne lagi...dewan apne kapde utar raha tha..jaha lisa apne hatho se dewan ke lund ko aage peechhe kar rahi thi wahi dusari taraf dewan apne hatho se lisa ki badi badi chuchiya masal raha tha..
bilandar ki phhati padi thi...lekin apne saamne hote hue is drishya me wo sab kuch bhoolne laga tha..tehkhane me ek mashal jal rahi thi jiski roshani jyada tej toh nahi thi..lekin itni prayapt thi ki lisa aur dewan ki ek-ek harkate wo dekh sakta tha..lisa aur dewan ke sharee ko pura nanga wo dekh sakta tha..
........lisa ne ab dewan ke lund ki topi ko thoda peechhe kiya..aur apne hontho ko hawa me lahrate hue..lund ke aage ke hisse par apni garam garam jeebh phhirane lagi..uske baad dewan ke pure lund ko lisa ne apne mu me bhar liya...aur jamkar chusane lagi..tab tak deewan ne lisa ke kamar ke upar ke saare kapde nikal diye the..lisa ke sar ko pakad kar usne lisa ko roka..aur khada karke use ulta khada kar diya..aur kamar ke neeche wale kapde bhi ek-ek karke utarne laga..thodi der baad dono ekdum nange the..
bilandar ka dhyan toota..."mujhe yaha se bahar nikalne ke baare me sochna chahiye..inke lafdo me to main bhi kayi saalo tak yaha kaid rahunga..aur mere pass lisa jaisa item bhi nahi..lekin ye dono itne salo se jinda kaise hain..."bilandar soch hi tehkhane ko dekhte hue soch raha tha...dusari taraf se lisa aur dewan ki siskariya dono ko barabar sunayi de rahi thi..jo uski sochane ki shakti ko thoda romanchak bana raha tha..bilandar ne dhyan se charo taraf dekha..kuch doori par ek bahut bada darwaja tha...lekin yadi kabra yahi rahti hain to phhir dikh kyun nahi rahi..bilandar apne hi soch me magan tha ki lisa ne ek baar chinkha..aaaaaannnhhhhhhhhh......yyyyyhhhhaaaaaa aaaaayyyyiiiiiii dono ki chudai ki aawaj ne bilandar ko pareshan karke rakha tha.. 
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Riya aur Raaj death iceland ke jungle me abhi bhi bhatak rahe the..chalte chalte riya rook gayi..apne ghutano par hath rakh kar riya hanfane lagi..jaise hi riya jhuki Raaj ko uske chhati me samaye do santaro ki jhalak mil gayi...
"Raaj-kya hua ,riya..tum rook kyun gayi...
"main thak chuki hoon... pyas bhi bahut lag rahi hain.."riya ne hanfate hue kaha..
"pani kaha se lau..haan..is viran se iceland me ek jagah hain jaha paani mil sakta hain.."
"kaha" Riya abhi bhi usi postion me thi jhuki hui thi...
"yaha ek aisi jagah hain..jaha kabhi andhera nahi hota..waha saundar ka paani jheel ke roop me bahta rahta hain..."
"kaha hain wo jagah..."Raaj ke kahne par Riya me kuch himmat aayi toh wo wapas khade hokar boli...
"dhoondana padega..fikar mat karo chalte chalte hum dono waha pahunch jayenge..aur humari madad karega..Ron ka Naksha.."
Raaj ne apne jeb se Naksha nikala..."yaha death iceland hain..death iceland ke beecho beech uttari disha me usko dikhaya gaya gaya hain..abhi hum jyada door nahi aaye hain..kuch der chalne ke baad jab hum is iceland ke beech me pahunch jayenge to wo jagah jyada door nahi hogi.."
Raaj, Riya ke karib aaya.."riya..mere rahte tumhe kuch nahi hoga....is bharam me mat rahna..ab chalo jaldi se.."
"kaha ja rahe ho namurado..jane se pahle mujhse nahi miloge.."
Riya aur Raaj chounk gaye..
"oh my god !Raaj ab hum kya karenge..."Raaj ke peechhe chhupte hue Riya ne kaha..
"Morgan..tu apni maut ke pass aaya hain.."
"tum dono bach kaise gaye..maine toh balladonna ko tabah kar diya tha.."
Raaj ne Morgan ki baat ka jawab dene ki bajay khanjar nikal kar Morgan ki taraf dauda...Lekin Morgan ne uske war ko rok liya..
"tu bahut bahadur hain..lekin shaktishali nahi.."Raaj ke hath ko pakad kar Morgan bola...aur apne patthar jaise majboot sar ko Raaj ke sar par de mara...Raaj ka sar ghoom gaya...wo apne hosh laga tha...
"aaj mujhe jeetana hi hain..chahe kuch bhi ho jaye.."Raaj ne khud se kaha,.aur apni puri taqat laha kar Morgan ke upar kud gaya..aur Morgan ko apne hatho se mukke jadne laga...lekin Kuch der baad Morgan ne Raaj ke sar ko apne hatho se pakad kar door phenk diya..Raaj door ja gira..Morgan khada hokar Raaj ki taraf teji se dauda..aur apni laat uski pet par mari...Raaj chilla pada..Raaj ke sath sath Riya ki bhi cheenk nikal gayi..
"tere sar ka bheja main apne dragons ko dunga.."Morgan ne apna farsa uthaya..Raaj ko apna ant saamane najar aaya..usne farse ko Rokane ke liye apne sono hatho ko aagw badhaya..Raaj ki peeth par jalan shuru ho gaya,..Raaj ne apne hath Morgan ke farse ko rokane ke liye aagw badhaya tha..Morgan ka farsa hawa me hi rook kar rah gaya..ye ek chamatkar se kam nahi tha Raaj ke liye..usne apni puri taqat lagakar uthne ki koshish ki..uski peeth jalne lagi thi..lekin abhi Raaj ko Morgan ka samna karna tha..apne hamle ko nakam dekhkar Morgan ne gusse se ek baar phhir apna farsa uthaya..lekin Raaj ne jaise hi apna hath Morgan ki taraf kiya..Raaj ke hath se itani energy vibrate hui ki Morgan kayi kadam peechhe hat gaya...
"Morgan-ye kaise mumkin hain..kaun ho tum..
"aaj tak main peeth par bane nishan ko dosh deta tha..lekin aaj main samajh gaya ki ye mere liye shrap nahi vardan hain....m"ujhe apne andar ek aseem taqat ka anubhav ho raha hain...ab tera kya hoga kallu"kahte hue Raaj ne ek mukka Morgan ke thobade pe de mara...
"kallu,abhi mujhe Martin ki kabra dhoondani hain..isliye tujhe zinda chhod raha hoon..dobara mere raste me aane ki ghatiya koshish ki toh jaan se maar dunga..."
Raaj ,Riya ke pass gaya..Riya apna mu khole Raaj ko apni taraf aate hue dekh rahi thi....
"mu to band kar lo janeman..pyas bujh jayegi kuch der me.. Agali baari The Ron ki.............."





Update-23
"mu to band kar lo janeman..pyas bujh jayegi kuch der me.. Agali baari The Ron ki"
Riya-ye kaise possible hain...tumne kiya kaise...
"kar ke batau kya..samay barbaad karne ke koyi fayada nahi..Ron us Nakshe tak pahunche uske pahale hume pahunchana hain.."
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Aditya aur Ron dragons se khud ko bachane ke liye ek bade se ped ke pichhe abhi bhi chhupe hue the...Aditya ped ke pichhe se dragon ko dekhne ki koshish karta hain...
"Ron- pagal hain kya..kachcha chaa jayenge..hum dono ko...seedhe se khada Rah...aur jab main bolu to zameen par let kar chalenge...
dragons ko Aditya aur Ron ki ka abhash ho chuka tha ki dono yahi kahi chhupe hue hain...wo dheere dheere usi ped ki taraf badh rahe the jis ped ke pichhe Ron aur Aditya chhupe hue the...Aditya ne dragon kaha hain ye pata karne ke liye ,ek baar phhir ped ke pichhe se jhanka..dragon pass me hi thi..Aditya ki ankh dragon se mil gayi...
"Ron...bhag le us kaliye dragon ne dekh liya..."
"sach me usne dekh liya..."
"abey wo dekh wo idhar hi aa raha hain..."
"to bhag na ...."Ron itna kahkar phhir bhag liya..Aditya bhi Ron ke peechhe ho liya...
daudte waqt Ron ne pichhe mud kar dekha...dragon teji se un dono ki taraf badh rahe the...
"Ron- bhag jitna dum hain..nahi to aaj dragon ke pet me pada hoga..."Ron bhagte hue bola..
"ghanta ka dum..kayi din se pani nahi piya...aur aaj ye sale badsurat jaanwar ne dauda diya,,mujhe apna ant karib dikhayi de raha hain..."
''Ron-waise hum dono jis taraf bhag rahe hain..tehkhana bhi usi taraf hain...
"gand me gaya tehkhana aur tera Martin..apni jaan ki lagi hain abhi.."
"yaha se bahar kaise jayega...kuch socha hain.."
"hawa md ud ke jaunga..nahi to Morgan ke dragon par baithkar jaunga:mad: ab baat mat kar.."
dono bahut teji se bhag rahe the...achanak ek jagah par aakar Ron Ruk gaya...aur us jagah ko thik tarah se dekhane laga...dono dragon pass aa rahe the..
"Ron..bhag jaldi khada kyun ho gaya.."
"yaha ke zameen ke andar se ek surang hain..jo seedha Martin ke kabra tak jayegi..."
"apni jaan latak lari hain..aur tujhe us samundar ke khajane ki padi hain..."
Ron jawab deta isse pahle hi drogon kareeb aa gaye..Red dragon ne apne mu se aag ki lapto nikali..Ron dusari taraf kud kar bach gaya..,aur khada ho gaya..
"yadi hath me ek sharab ki botal hoti to is laal mu wale ko marne me aur bhi maja aata..."
"fala tharki..''
Ron seedhe khada tha..apne bachav ke liye na hi wo bhag raha tha..aur na hi dragon par war kar raha tha..dragon waha ki zameen par apna sar ragadane laga...aur wapas chala gaya..Aditya jo thodi door me khada tha,hairan tha..akhir dragon ne Ron par hamla kyun nahi kiya..dragon dahad marte hue jab kafi door chala gaya to Ron ki taraf Aditya aaya...
"yar ,Ron ye bata..ye dragon ne sharab pee rakhi thi ya phhir uski khoyi hui item wapas aa gayi..jo ye ulte pair bhag gaya..."
"us laal bandar ko maloom chal gaya tha ki yadi wo yaha aata to seedha tehkhane me girta.."
"ab hume kya karna chahiye..."
Ron ne agale hi pal,Aditya ko uthaya aur baho me jakad liya..
"fale..chhod,ye sab main nahi karta.."
"jab se tujhe dekha hain.,teri in haseen si ankho me doob sa gaya hoon main..sari duniya ek taraf tujhme kho sa gaya hoon main.."
"Ron tere irade nek nahi lag rahe utar mujhe neeche..."
"main tujhse bahut pyar karta hoon.."kahte hue Ron ne Aditya ko dono hatho se upar uthaya..aur neeche zameen me jor se patak diya...Waha ki zameen dhans gayi,..Aditya zameen dhans jane ke karan seedhe tehkhane me jakar gira...Ron dhansi hui zameen ke pas aaya..aur aawaj di"zinda hain Janeman,.,"
''tu aa neeche fale..dhokebaj..''
"side chal..nahi to upar hi girunga.."
Aditya dusari taraf ludhak gaya...Ron upae se kudkar Tehkhane me aa gaya...aur Aditya ko hath dekar uthaya.."tera mera pyar khatam.."Ron ne Uthate hue Aditya se kaha..
"Ron-bilkul bhi aawaj mat karna..chup chap mere peechhe chalna..
Ron aage aage chalne laga..aur Aditya peeche...
"Aditya-tujhe kaise pata chala ki yaha se Rasta hain...
"bola na aawaj mat kar..."
Aditya buri shakal banakar chup ho gaya.....
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Nair aur seth dheere dheere apna anuman laga kar aage badh rahe the..aur Martin ke mahal ke kareeb pahunch rahe the...kismat ne dono ka bakhoobi sath diya..unke raste me na to dragon aaya..aur na hi Morgan...dono bahut der se chal rahe the..jisse dono ko thakan mahsoos ho raha thi,,
"Seth-Captain..thoda aaram kar lete hain..kahi baithkar,,
Nair apne kamar par hath rakhkar jhuka,,.aur khud ko fit rakhne wale kuch exersice karne laga...
"seth..tumhari baat sahi hain,.lekin yaha ka mahol kuch thik nahi lagta..aage chalte hain.."
kuch door aage jakar dono ped ke neeche baith gaye..,tabhi Nair ko andhere me kuch pada hua dikhayi diya,,
"seth wo kya chiz hain.."
seth ko bhi aisa laga ki kuch pada hua hain..lekin kya,,,seth ne uske kareeb gaya...aur us padi hui chiz ko uthaya...wo kisi kapde ki tarah tha..
"captain..ye to kisi ka kapda lagta hain...lekin is viran si jagah par kiska kapda hoga..."
Nair ne seth ke hath se us kapde ko liya..wo ek Naksha tha..
"Nair-abey ye Naksha to Raaj wale Nakshe se milta hain..iska matlab Raaj aur Riya isi Raste se aage badhe hain..,aur Raaj ne ye Naksha gira diya..."
"Nair ,dono jyada door nahi gaye honge..hum teji se chalte hain.."
Nair ko seth ki baat sahi lagi..wo dono seedhe jis raste par Naksha pada hua tha usi taraf badh gaye...
"Nair- seth ye to kamal ho gaya..death iceland par Roshani aa rahi hain..dekh waha se mujhe uski jhalak dikh rahi hain...
"seth-lekin ye sambhav kaise hain...
Nair aur seth me nayi energy ne dastak de di..us roshani ke pichhe ke rahasya ko janne ki utsukta ne dono me ek nayi taqat bhar di...
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"Riya- wow...kitani haseen jagah hain..Raaj, thanks itni khubsurat jagah par lane ke liye..Riya ki khusi ke maare jhoom rahi thi..
Raaj,kuch bolta usse pahle hi waha seth aur Nair aa pahunche...
"Raaj- tum dono abhi tak zinda ho...
"seth- Navy ke bande hain..maut ko kaise roka jata hain..ye hume bakhoobi aata hain..
Raaj,ne Seth ke hath me pakde hue Nakshe ko dekhkar thoda hairan hua.."seth..tere hath me kya hain..."
"Nair-abey apni jeb kar tera Naksha pichhe gir gaya tha..wo to meri tej nazar is Nakshe par pad gayi...
Raaj ne apne sabhi jeb ko check kiya..uska Naksha uske jeb tha..jise bahar nikal kar Raaj bola.."mera Naksha to mere pass hain.."sabko Raaj ne apne hath me pakda hua Naksha dikhaya...
"Nair-phhir ye kiska Naksha hain..ye Naksha hi hain ya phhir aur kuch.......





Update-24
"Nair-phhir ye kiska Naksha hain..ye Naksha hi hain ya phhir aur kuch......
"Raaj-ek min. ruko..."Raaj kuch der sochata raha...uske chehare par muskan aa gayi..."ye naksha Morgan ka hai..humari bhidat me shayad ye naksha gir gaya..ab Spiritual Ship humari pahunch se door nahi..bas wo nakshe ka teesara part mil jaye..jo martin ke kabra me dafan hain.."
"Nair-iska matlab ye hua ki Morgan yaha aa chuka hain..aur teri uske sath bhidat bhi ho chuki hain..."
"meri shakal dekh...ye nishan mujhe aise hi nahi mile hain"Raaj ne apne chehare ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha..
nair hanste hue bola.."tu phhir maar kha gaya kya..kitano se pitega..lekin main shocked hoon ki Morgan ne tujhe zinda kaise chhod diya.."
"Baji ab apne hath me hain..Ron ho ya Morgan..ab humare samane ya phhir yun kahe mere samane kuch nahi...ab Spiritual Ship aur samundar ke bheetar dafan wo beshumar khajana humara hoga.."
"abey tu to aise bol raha hain jaise tere pass Ron aur Morgan ki kamjori aa gayi ho..bhool gaya kaise dono hume ko hara chuke hain.."
"abhi dikhata hoon..ye dekh.."Raaj kahte hue apne dono hatho ko Nair ki taraf kiya..aur pura dum lagakar Nair ki taraf apne hath ko dhakela..waha itni tej hawa chalne lagi ki Nair khud ko control nahi kar paya aur hawa udd gaya..aur door ja gira...
"fale main hi mila tha tujhe.."Nair karahate hue bola..
Sabhi Nair ke pass gaye..
"ab hua yakin..aur tu ab samajh gaya hoga ki main kyun bol raha tha ki Ron aur Morgan mere samane ab kuch nahi hain.."Raaj ne apna ek hath neeche gire hue Nair ki taraf badhaya aur apne hath ke sahare se uthaya..
nair apne kamar ko pakad kar bola.."ye baat to sahi hain..lekin ye sab tune kiya kaise..."
"ye tum logo ko samajh me nahi aayega..ab Ron us Nakshe tak pahunche uske pahale hi hume Martin ka teesara Naksha lena hoga.."
"Riya-lekin ab aage ka rasta kaise maloom chalega..mera matlab Martin ki kabra ko hum kaise dhoondenge..
"Raaj-tum fikar mat karo janeman..ab aage ka rasta Morgan ka Naksha dikhayega..aur is Nakshe ke mutabik hume..yaha se us bade se ped ki taraf chalna hain..aur is Nakshe ke anusar aage ek maidan hain..
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Ron aur Aditya tehkhane me pahunchane ke baad aage badh rahe the..Ron ne Aditya ko kisi bhi prakar ki aawaj nahi karne ke bola tha..jo ki Aditya ke bheje me nahi ghus rahi thi..aur apni aadat se majboor Aditya khud se baat karne laga..
"ye kitna bada chodu hain..jab is andhere se tehkhane me koyi hain hi nahi to mujhe chup rahne ke liye kyun bola hain..ek to itane din se kuch khaya nahi..aur saans lene ke liye ab mu bhi na kholu.."
"abey tujhe chup rahne ke liye bola na..koyi sun lega to.."
Aditya ka dimak kharab ho gaya.."fale yaha kya Martin ka bhoot baitha hoga..jo sun lega.."
"marne ke baad Martin bhoot ban gaya tha..aur yadi usne humari baate sun li to kachcha chaba jayega..ab chup rah.."Ron gussa karte hue bola..
"main itna bhi bewkoof nahi hoon Ron..sahi baat bata warna main aur tej tej aawaj karunga.."
"abey bhool gaya humare peechhe Riya aur uski fauj bhi aayi hogi yaha Nakshe ki khoj me..ab yadi unhoone teri beshuri aawaj ko sun liya to satark ho jayenge.."
Aditya chup ho gaya..Ron ki baat me use dum laga..aur usne hamesha ki tarah Ron ki baat maan li..lekin wo kab tak uske dimak me koyi na koyi prashan uth hi jata hain..
"Aditya-Ron ye akhiri baar puchh raha hoon..ek akhiri sawal ,iska jawab de de main phhir kuch nahi bolunga...
ron chalte hue ruk gaya"fala kitna bak-bak karta hain..sabse pahle ise hi un dragon ke hawale karunga.."
"Ron-jaldi se bak..apna wo akhiri behuda sawal..
"Ron..mera akhiri sawal ye hain ki..yadi Riya aur uske gang yani..Nair,Seth aur Raaj ne humse pahle wo Naksha Martin ki kabra se le liya to..phhir hum kya karenge.."
Aditya ke prashn ne Ron ko kuch sochane par majboor kar diya..
"Ron-tere is bhoose se bhare dimak me pahali baar koyi kaam ki baat sochi hain..lekin tu befikar rah yadi un logo ko teeno Nakshe bhi mil jate hain to Murdo ke jahaj tak wo nahi pahunch payenge..Spiritual Ship kisi kinare par khada nahi hain..jo Naksha leke gaye aur jahaj ko apne kabje me le liya..Spiritual ship Martin ki maut ke sath hi samundar ki gahrayi me gum ho gaya tha..sath me usme maujood wo beshumar khajana.."
Ron aur Aditya phhir aage badh rahe the..kuch der chalne ke baad Ron ruk gaya..aur apne kamar ki jeb se ek kapda nikal kar peeth se apni bandook nikali...
Aditya-ab kya kar raha hain be...
"Ron-aage ka rasta kharab ho sakta hain..isiliye mashal ka intejaam kar raha hoon..
"abey barood kaha hain apne pass"
"meri is bandook me kuch to barood hoga..kuch der tak ka rasta dekh loon aage ka anuman main khud laga lunga.."Ron ne itna kahte hue..us kapde par bandook me bachi hui thodi si barood gira di..aur Aditya se machis manga..
"ab dekhana tu..Ron ka karnama..kaise ye mashal jali aur Martin ke kabra se hum wo naksha lekar yaha se turant raffuchakkar..."kahte hue Ron ne kapde ko jala diya..aur us jalte hue kapde ko apni bandook ki nok me tangkar Aditya ko chalne ka ishara kiya..Roshani me Aditya Tehkhane ko dekhkar darne laga..kitane hi admiyo ke kankal waha pade hue the..kuch kankal deewar par bhi tange hue the...Aditya dekh kar chal raha tha ,lekin phhir bhi uske pair ke neeche ek kankal aa gaya..aur Aditya jor se cheenkha...Ron ne jaldi se uske mu pe apna hath rakh kar use shant kiya..
"abey pagal..chillaya kyun mana kiya tha na..."
"neeche dekh ,kisi ka dhancha hain"Aditya ne apne pairo ki taraf ishara kiya..Ron ne Aditya ke pair ki taraf dekha..ek kankal Aditya ke pair ke neeche daba hua tha..Ron us kankal ko apne hath me uthakar bola.."abey ghonchu isse dar raha hain..phhir yadi sach me Yaha Martin ka bhoot hua to kya halat hogi teri be...waise kafi khubsurat kankal hain..apne jahaj ke samne ise latka denge.."
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bilandar ,Martin ki kabra ko khojane me laga hua tha..sath me use lisa aur dewan ka dar bhi lag raha tha..zameen me lete hue bilandar aage badh raha tha..uski nazar lisa aur dewan par thi..dono abhi bhi chudai me vyast the..
"sala kitni der se kar rahe hain..insan hain jaanwar..karte raho apun to Naksha lekar khishka..."
bilandar aage badhte gaya..use apne se kuch doori par seedhiya dikhayi di..jo upar ki taraf ja rahi thi..
"ye shayad upar ki taraf jaye..abhi in dono se door rahne me hi bhalayi hain.."khud se kahta hua bilandar seedhiyo ke taraf badhne laga..aur kuch der baad seedhiyo ke sahare wo upar ke tehkhane me pahunch gaya..khada hokar apne kapde ko jhadne laga..
"ab is sale Martin ki kabar kaha hain..jaldi se Naksha mile aur phhir main yaha se bahae nikalne ki sochu.."
tabhi bilandar ko kisi ke hasne ki aawaj sunayi di..jo dheere dheere tej hoti ja rahi thi..iska matlab saaf tha ki lisa aur dewan upar ki taraf aa rahe hain.....





Update-25
"ab main gaya kaam se..in dono ko shayad mere yaha hone ka abhash ho gaya hain.."bilandar badbadaya..
Kadmo ki aawaj tej hoti ja rahi thi..sath me hasne ki aawaj bhi..
"lisa chalo humare raja Martin ki kabra ko kholkar dekha jaye..."Dewan apni hansi rok kar bola..aur uske kadam bilandar ki taraf badhne lage..
"Dewan...kitani baar kaha hain ki us dhokebaj ke nam ke samane raja mat lagao..nafrat hain mujhe us behrupiye se.."lisa ki aawaj me gussa aur nafrat saaf jhalak rahi thi..
"are jaan..behrupiya to wo itna bada hain ki usne khud ki nakali kabra bana di..aur dhoke se hum dono ko yaha phansa diya aur sab yahi samajhane lage ki Martin ke sath sath Lisa aur uska senapati Dewan jung me maare gaye..lekin aisa nahi hua tha..hum dono Morgan se mile hue hain ye baat kisi ne jakar Martin ko bata di..aur us dhokebaj ne apni maut ka dhong racha..."dewan ko beech me hi Lisa ne rokate hue kaha.."ab un purani yaadon ko taja karne ka koyi matlab nahi..Martin apne jahaj aur jahaj ke us Nakshe se door ho gaya ...yahi humare liye khusi ki baat hain..chalo Martin ki jhooti kabra me wo Naksha dekh kar sukoon liya jaye..."
itna bolkar lisa ,tehkhane ke us room me ek taraf chalne lagi..aur uske sath me dewan bhi...dono ko door jata dekh bilandar ne chain ki saans li..
"salo ne phad di thi..lekin ye kya baat kar rahe the ki Martin jung me mara nahi gaya..sale chutiya kahi ke.."
tabhi bilandar ko andhere se bhare us tehkhane ke kamre me aag jalti hui dikhayi di..wo mashal ki aag thi ,jise lisa ne apne hath me pakad rakha tha..aur dono mashal ki roshani me chale ja rahe the..
"ye dono Martin ki kabra ke pass ja rahe the..kyun na chupke chupke inke sath hi chala jaye..."bilandar ne socha..
"Dewan-lisa..us din Martin ko main maar deta ,yadi Morgan ke namurad dragons ne hamla nahi kiya hota..
"lisa-Morgan sirf humari madad kar raha tha..par afsoos sirf is baat ka hain ki Morgan ko bhi ye nahi pata ki Martin ne hum dono ko is tehkhane me kaid kar diya tha..warna wo hume kab ka yaha se le ja chuka hota...
Lisa bolte hue achanak ruk gayi..usne apne hath me rakhi mashal ko samane ki taraf ghumaya...aur mashal dewan ke hatho me pakda di.."yahi hain wo kabra"kahte hue lisa ne Martin ki kabra ki taraf ishara kiya..dewan ne ek hath me mashal pakade hue apne dusare hath se Martin ki kabra ko kholne laga..kabra bahut purani ho chuki thi..isliye jab dewan use khol raha tha ,to aawaj bhi aa rahi thi..dewan ne kabra ko khol diya..andar kisi ka kankal tha..aur us kankal ke seene par rakha hua ek Naksha..jise lisa ne apne ek hath me uthakar jhada..."yahi hain samundar ke Shikari ,murdo ke jahaj ke captain Martin ka adhbhudh naksha..jise lene ke liye Martin khud yaha aa raha hain..."
"lisa..chhodo bhi us kayar ki baate...agar wo sach me Shikari hota to yun jung chhod ke nahi jata..balki mujhse ,Morgan aur Dragon holder se mukabala karta..lekin wo kayar tha..apne shatir dimak ke bal par us din to bach gaya..lekin ab nahi..."dewan jor jor se hansne laga..bilandar chupke chupke dono ki baate sun raha tha..aur sath me lisa ke hath me rakha hua naksha bhi..jo ki baki naksho se milta julta tha..lisa ne naksha wapas kabra me rakha..aur dewan ko lekar tehkhane ke us kamre se bahar aa gayi...
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Raaj ,Riya ,Seth aur Nair nakshe ke mutabik aage badh rahe the..nakshe me death iceland bhi tha..jisme kayi tarah ke dragons ke map the..lekin Martin ki kabra ka koyi astitva us nakshe me maujood nahi tha..
"Raaj-ye Naksha ,Hume us teesare nakshe ke baare me koyi jaankari nahi deta..sivay iske ki yaha se thodi door me safed mitti ki zameen hain...
"seth-kahi us zameen me hi to aage ka rasta nahi hain..shayad ye bhi ho sakta hain ki waha pahunchkar hume aage ka rasta maloom chale..
riya ne seth ki baat ka samathan karte hue boli"seth sahi kah raha hain..aage jakar hi hume shayad kuch maloom chale...
"Raaj-jaisa tum kaho ,janeman..ye lo aa gayi wo safed zameen..."Raaj ne samne ki taraf ishara kiya...
Sabhi us safed zameen ki taraf chalne lage..
"jagah kafi khubsurat hain..."Nair ne kaha..
"haan..is andhere jungle me koyi to chiz safed dikhi..kuch der yahi aaram karte hain.."Raaj Nakshe ko jeb me rakhte hue bola..aur waha se kuch doori par tahalne laga..uske dil-o-dimak me kayi vakaye ghoom rahe the..jisme sabse dilchashp use adhbhut shakti ka milna tha..
"ab mujhe koyi nahi rok sakta..na hi drgon ki shakal se bhi bekar dikhane wala Morgan..aur na hi wo behrupiya Ron.."kahte hue Raaj apne dono hatho ko dekhane laga.."mere hath kamal ke hain..main badi si badi chiz ko hawa me uda sakta hoon.."....Raaj ne apne hath ki disha samane lage hue ek ped ki taraf ki..aur ped ko hawa me uthane ki koshish karne laga..lekin ped ki tahniya sirf hili..
"shayad abhi tumhe kuch aur practice ki jaroorat hain.." ...Raaj ka dhyan ped se hat gaya..Riya hawa me udte hue apne balo ko sawar rahi thi...
"kya kaha tumne ..."Raaj apne chehare par ek muskan lata hua bola...
"yahi ki abhi tumhe kuch aur samay chahiye.."
"mujhe aisa nahi lagta..."kahte hue Raaj ne Riya ko upar utha liya..
"Raaj ,neeche lao mujhe.."
"ye lo abhi ..."Raaj ne Riya ko neeche utar diya.."ab bhi kuch kahna baki hain.."
Riya jawab deti isse pahale hi seth chillaya jo kuch doori par Nair ke sath khada tha.."oye hawa wale..garmi lag rahi hain..thoda hath ka dum dikhayo.."
Raaj-dekho riya..in dono main kaise thandak pahuchata hoon..Raaj ne apne dono hatho par apna pura dum laga diya..waha hawa ka bawandar uth gaya..sath me reetili toofan bhi..jiske karan Seth aur Nair ko apni ankhe band karni padi..Riya aur Raaj hanskar dono ke maje le rahe the...tabhi Raaj dwara machaye gaye toofan se zameen ka ek hissa dhans gaya..sabhi ki ankhe phhati rah gayi..
"Nair-ye kya hain be..
"seth-ye to iske andar jakar hi maloom chalega...
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"Ron..tujhe nahi lagta ki humare jahaj ka nam badal dena chahiye.."
"kyun..tujhe murdo ka jahaj wala nam sunkar dar lagta hain.."
"sach kahu to haan..nam sunkar aisa lagta hain..jaise tera wo jahaj..bahut bada kala sa bhadde ki tarah dikhta hoga..jispe samne ki taraf maut ka nishan bana hoga...lekin mujhe maloom hain..haqiqat me spiritual ship aisa nahi hoga..."
"waise kamal ka andaja lagaya hain..spiritual ship haqiqat me aisa hain..ab chup hoja kisi ke aane ki aawaj aa rahi..aur jab tak na bolu apna ye sada hua mu mat khol dena.."
Aditya ko bhi kisi ke aane ki kadmo ki aawaj sunayi di..Ron ,Aditya ko lekar ek kone me chhup gaya..Aditya hairan tha ki yaha mashal kaise jal rahi hain..aur kisne jalayi wo mashal..lekin wo Ron se puchh nahi sakta tha..andhere me dono ko upar se aate hue do saye dikhayi diye..jab mashal ki roshani me dono aaye to Aditya ko yakin nahi hua ki..yaha do insan bhi hain..usme bhi ek khubsurat haseena...lisa aur dewan ko dekhkar Ron ki ankho me gussa bhar gaya..usne apni muthi bhar li..Aditya ne Ron ke kandhe par hath rakha..aur jab lisa aur dewan kuch doori par chale gaye to dheere se Aditya bola.."Ron ye dono kaun hain..."
"ye abhi tak zinda hain..."Ron ki aawaj gusse se bharpur thi..Aditya ne pahali baar Ron ko is tarah dekha...
"Ron tujhe kya hua.."
Ron ko apni galti ka ahsas hua..aur apne andaj me bola.."dono ko maine kayi saal pahle yaha bhooka marne ke liye chhod diya tha..lagta hain dono samundar ka khara pani peekar abhi tak zinda hain..."





Update-26
apne andaj me bola.."dono ko maine kayi saal pahle yaha bhooka marne ke liye chhod diya tha..lagta hain dono samundar ka khara pani peekar abhi tak zinda hain..." Ron apne hath ki kalayi ko bandhkar aage badhne laga..
"ye kya kar raha hain..kahi us khubsurat ladki par iska dil to nahi aa gaya.."Aditya ne Ron ko aawaj di.."abey uske sath koyi aur bhi hain.."
Aditya ki aawaj Ron ke sath-sath Lisa aur Dewan ne bhi sun li..dono ka dhyan Ron aur Aditya ki taraf gaya..lisa ke chehare par ek katil muskan aa gayi..aur wo dewan ke jism se sat gayi...dewan ne lisa ke peeth ko sahlate hue bola.."kaise ho mahan samundar ke Shikari king Martin..."
dewan ki hansi pure tehkhane me gunj uthi...Ron ke chehare par laal hua ja raha tha..aur Aditya ki samajh se sab kuch bahar tha..Aditya un teeno ki taraf sawaliya nigah se badha aur Ron ke pass jakar bola"ye dono tujhe Martin ke nam se kyun bula rahe hain Ron..lagta hain in dono ke dimak ki band baj chuki hain.."
lisa ne khud ko dewan ki baho se aazad karke ,Ron ki taraf badhne lagi.."Mere pyare Martin..tumne apne sath kis namune ko laya hain..oh mujhe maaf karna tumhara naya nam mujhe nahi maloom tha The Ron..."
"Aditya-apni jawani par jyada ghamand hain kya..ek baar apun ke sath so ke dekh sari garmi utar jayegi..."
"Lisa-chup ho ja bewkoof..mere jism ki garmi jab itne salo se shant nahi hui..to tere jaise langoor ki kya hasiyat hain..Martin..oh nahi Ron apne dost ko tumne apne baare me nahi bataya..
lisa ko beech me hi rok kar Dewan bol pada"lagta hain Ron yani Martin ne sabki tarah ise bhi dhoka diya..lekin abhi der nahi hui..ye mare isse pahale main ise sab kuch sach bata deta hoon.."dewan ,Aditya ki taraf ghooma aur uske kandhe par apne hath rakh kar bola.."tumne kabhi King Martin ka nam suna hain..."
"haan bahut baar..kahte hain ki wo is death iceland ka raja tha..."
"tum to bahut samajhdar ho..lekin kya tumhe ye nahi maloom ki jis Ron ke sath tum yaha tak aaye ho..wo hi Raja Martin hain..."
"majak achchha kar leta hain tu.."Aditya apna pet pakad kar hansne laga.."abey maine socha tha..koyi sach baat mujhe tu batayega.."
"dewan-mujhpe hasne se pahale ,tum Ron se khud kyun nahi puchh lete..puchh kyun nahi lete ki wo itna khamosh kyun hain..usse ye kyun nahi puchh lete ki use is death iceland ke baare me itna kaise maloom..
"Ron-sun be chaparganju..apni ye behuda baate kisi aur ke sath karna..abhi main tujhe jahannum ki sair karata hoon..."kahte hue Ron ne apni talwar nikal li..aur Dewan ki taraf badha..Ron ne apni talwar ki nok ko dewan ke pet par nishana lagakar chalaya..lekin dewan ne talwar ko hath se pakad liya.."Martin..tumhara junoon abhi tak khatam nahi hua.."
"haan ye sach hain ki maine death iceland se jane ke baad apne puri shaksiyat ko badal diya..lekin mere andar ka gussa..tum dono ke liye nafrat ab bhi barkarar hain.."
Ron ne apne sar se dewan ke sar par thokar mari..dewan peechhe khisak gaya..ron ki baate sunkar Aditya ko yakin nahi hua..
"Ron..ye tum kya kah rahe ho...tum aur death iceland ke raja..ye kaise ho sakta hain.."
"Aditya ,tujhe bahut kuch batana hain..par sahi samay aane ke baad..abhi hume Naksha lekar yaha se jald hi nikalna hain..."
lisa ne pass ke myan me latki hui talwar ko kheench liya..aur Ron ki taraf badhi.."itni bhi kya jaldi hain mere Pyare Raja..purana hisab to chukta kar jao..."
tab tak dewan bhi khada ho chuka tha..aur uske hath me bhi ek talwar thi..dono Ron ki taraf badh rahe the..
"ye sale Dono Ron par hamla karne wale hain..mujhe Ron ka sath dena padega..lekin kaise apna lund lekar inka mukabala karu kya.."
"Ron-Aditya tujhe bhook lagi hain na..is sand ka mans khayega.."dewan ki taraf ishara karte hue Ron ne kaha..
"abey ye behad ganda hain..pahle ise nahlana padega.."
"khoon se nahla dunga is gaddar ko..bas tu aag ka intejam kar "
dewan aur lisa ne Ron par ek sath hamla kar diya..
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bilandar us Martin ki kabra ke najdeek pahunch raha tha..use neeche tehkhane se aawaj sunayi de rahi thi..lekin bilandar ne gaur nahi kiya..aur akhirkar wo Martin ki kabra ke pass pahunch gaya..
"Martin ki koyi ijjat nahi ki in dono ne ..iski kabra par kitni dhool jami hui hain.."
bilandar ne kabra ko khola..aur Naksha apne jeb me rakh liya..
"ab beta bilandar chupke se khisak le yaha se.."
bilandar dabe paanv neeche aane laga..jaise hi bilandar seedhiyo se neeche aaya,,uske hosh ud gaye..Ron ,lisa aur dewan se talwarbaji kar raha tha..aur Aditya kuch doori par ek patthar liye dewan par nishana sadh raha tha..
"bilandar-bahut khoob..ladte raho marte raho..apun to khiska yaha se..
Bilandar chupke se tehkhane ke darwaje ki taraf badhne laga..lekin Aditya ki nazar bilandar par pad gayi..
"abey billu..ruk main bhi hoon..."Aditya ne patthar ko wahi giraya ..aur bilandar ki taraf bhaga...
ron bahaduri se lisa aur dewan ka mukabala kar raha tha..usne jab Aditya ko jate hue dekha to jor se Aditya ko aawaj di.."abey akela chhodkar kyun ja raha hain..mujhe teri madad ki jaroorat hain.."
Aditya ek pal ke liye ruka..usne palatkar Ron ki taraf dekha..Ron joonjh raha tha..lekin uska paksha abhi kamjor nahi hua tha.."sorry Ron..par tujhe ek baat samajh leni chahiye ki dusaro ko dhoka dene wala ,kabhi khud bhi dhoka kha jata hain..yadi tu zinda raha to phhir mulakat hogi..apun chala.."
Aditya ,bilandar ke sath ho liya..
"ab to tera sathi bhi gaya..Martin ab tu kya karega.."dewan ne apni talwar ko Ron ke seene ke aar paar utarni chahi..lekin Ron jhook gaya..aur dewan ke pair me apni talwar ghusa di..dewan chilla utha..
"Ron-tune wo kahawat to suni hogi..Shikari kabhi bhi kisi ke madad ka mohtaj nahi hota..aaaahhhhhhhh..Ron ki juban bolte bolte achanak ladkhada gayi..uske pet me bahut tej dard mahsoos hua..Ron ne apne hath se apne pet ko chhua..pet khoon ki tej dhara bah rahi thi..jisse uska hath khoon se puri tarah san gaya tha..Ron peechhe muda lisa muskura rahi thi..
"mere talwar ka maksad pura hua Martin.."
Ron abhi is dard ubhar nahi paya tha ki dewan ne bhi apni talwar Ron ke peeth me khonp di..
"meri talwar ka bhi maksad pura hua mere bahadur Raja..ab alwida kahne ka vaqt aa gaya hain.."
dewan ne Ron ko thokar dekar gira diya....
"lisa-dewan wo dono naksha lekar bhag rahe hain..
"jane do,,hum dono shrap ki vajah se tehkhane ka darwaja nahi khol sakte..lekin wo dono aisa kar sakte hain..aaj samay aa gaya hain lisa jab hum aazad honge..aur pure samundar par humari hukumat ki shuruat aaj se hogi..."
dewan aur lisa Ron ko tadapta chhodkar tehkhane ke darwaje ki taraf badh gaye....
ron apne pet par hath rakhe hue bahut der tak khoon bahne se rokta raha..wo uthane ki koshish kar raha tha..lekin uska dard use aisa karne nahi de raha tha..aaj samundar ke Shikari ki shayad pahali haar hui thi..ya phhir kahe ke wo usi din haar gaya tha..jab lisa ,use chhodkar dewan ke pass gayi thi..Ron tehkhane ke us zameen par pade hue apne ateet ke vajood samet raha tha..lekin use maloom tha ki ye uska ant nahi ho sakta...






Update-27
"captain yaha bahut sardi hain..."seth apne hatho ko ragadte hue bola..
"mujhe dar hain kahi is thandak me hum sab tanduri chiken na ban jaye..jise baad me yaha ke bhadde dragon maje se khaye.."
"Raaj-tum dono apni ye behuda bakwas band karoge..mujhe sochane ke liye shanti chahiye..
"seth-dimak hain tere pass..abey ab sochna kya hain,jaldi se Martin ki kbra se wo teesara Naksha lena hain..phhir spiritual ship ki talash karni hain..so simple.."
"Raaj-so simple..kamine Naksha milne ke baad spiritual ship kya khud ba khud teri godi me aa jayega..akhir wo jahaj hain kaha jiske liye hum itna jokhim utha rahe hain..
"Seth-ye baat to mere bheje me aayi hi nahi..
"Raaj-isiliye bol raha hoon...chup raho..
Sabhi aage badh rahe the..Riya ko tehkhane me seedhiya dikhi..
"ye seedhiya kis liye yaha lagi hui hain.."Riya ne un seedhiyo ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha..
"Nair-kahi is tehkhane me koyi khajana to nahi chhupa hain..aur ye seedhiya hume wahi pahuncha de..kya boolte ho dosto..ja ke dekha jaye..ho sakta hain ki yaha bahut khajana chhupa ho..aur hume aage jane ki jaroorat hi pade..
"Raaj-ye iceland hain..heere ki khan nahi jo yaha khajana hoga..aur jaha tak mujhe maloom hain..death iceland ke raja yani Martin ne apna sara khajane ko hathiyar ke liye kharch kar diya tha..
"Nair-aisa kya..phhir samane ki taraf jo darwaja dikh raha hain..waha se bahar nikal lete hain..
"Riya-ek min. Ruko..ye seedhiya jaroor tehkhane ke kisi anjaan kamre me jati hongi..kyun na waha ja ke dekha jaye..
Riya ki baat sabko sahi lagi..sabhi seedhiyo ki taraf jane lage..lekin waha andhere me pade Ron par kisi ki najar nahi gayi...sabhi seedhiyo ke raste upar chale gaye..
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bilandar aur Aditya tehkhane se bahar aa chuke the..bilandar khuli hawa ko mahsoos karne laga.."bahut din baad us bhayanak tehkhane se bahar nikla hoon.."
"abey main bhi sath me hoon.."Aditya ne bilandar ko aawaj di..
"ab kyun mere pass aa raha hain..ja us dhokebaj ke pass.."bilandar ne Nakshe ko jeb me rakhte hue kaha..
"meri koyi galti nahi hain yar billu..Ron ne kaha tha ki tu Morgan ke sath mila hua hain.."Aditya apni safayi dete hue bola..
"kya us kameene ne ye kaha tha.."
"ab kya patthar par likhun tab tujhe yakin hoga.."
Aditya, bilandar ke pass gaya aur apne ek hath bilandar ki taraf badhaya.."billu..ye iceland bahut khatarnak hain..yadi sath rahe to yaha se bahar nikal sakte hain wo bhi zinda..."
bilandar ne kuch socha aur phhir Aditya ki taraf dekha.."ab to Ron bhi hum dono ki jaan ka dushman ban chuka hain..usse kaise niptenge.."
"abey baat to sahi hain..lekin Ron ka kya hua..aur wo dono kaun the ,jinse Ron lad raha tha.."
"mujhe kya maloom..pata nahi sale kaisi baat kar rahe the..meri to sar ke upar se sab nikal gaya.."
"billu lekin wo ladki kya maal thi..andhere me itni mast dikh rahi thi to soch ujale me kaisi dikhegi.."
Aditya apni baat puri bhi nahi kar paya tha ki lisa ki aawaj dono ko sunayi di..
"aa gayi main ujale me..dekh lo akhiri baar"
Aditya aur bilandar dono chaunk gaye..lisa aur dewan unki taraf aa rahe the...Aditya aur bilandar dono ki najare lisa par tik gayi..
"Dewan- tum dono ke pass jo Naksha hain..wo tum dono khud mujhe de do..taki main pyar se apni ye khoon ki pyasi talwar ko tum dono ke shareer me utar dun..ya phhir tum dono mujhse ladne ki nakam koshish karo..aur jaise Ron ko mara hain waise hi tumhara haal karu..
Ron mar gaya..ye sunkar Aditya aur bilandar ko yakin nahi hua..
"Aditya-Ron ko tune maar diya..ye ho hi nahi sakta..bahut chalak hain Ron kisi na kisi tarah wo bach ke nikal jata hain..abey billu isko samjha..
Bilandar kuch bolta isse pahle hi dewan bol pada.."Ron ki kabiliyat par mujhe koyi shak nahi bachche..par afsoos hain is baar wo nahi bach payega..kyunki maine aur lisa ne khud apni-apni talware uski pet me ghusa di thi..aur yadi tum dono ko yakin nahi ho raha ho to meri ye Ron ke khoon se sani talwar dekh lo..ya phhir tehkhane me khoon se lathpath uska shareer.."kahte hue dewan ne apni talwar Aditya aur bilandar ko dikhayi..jo khoon se sani hui thi..
"bilandar-Aditya..mujhe to iski baat sahi lag rahi hain..
"Aditya-mujhe bhi..lekin isne mujhe bachcha bola..dekh tu kaise iski talwar isi ke pet ke aar-paar karta hoon..
"abey Ron ke sath rahkar pagal ho gaya hain kya..mare jayenge dono.."
bilandar ki baat par Aditya ne koyi dhyan nahi diya..aur dewan ki taraf badhne laga..
"sun be badbodar insan..Ron ko tune hara diya..lekin main ek Captain hoon..tu mujhe nahi hara sakta.."kahte hi Aditya teji se ulte paanv bhag khada hua..dewan aue lisa ek pal ke liye wahi khade Aditya ko bhagte hue dekhte rahe..bilandar ne bhi bina samay bekar kiye bhag khada hua...
"dewan-lisa lagta hain..dono ko dauda dauda kar marna padega..
"lisa-phhir der kis baat ki..is kaam ko abhi anjaam diya jaye..
Lisa aur dewan..dono ka peechha karne lage..bilandar ,Aditya se peechhe tha..usne daudte hue Aditya se kaha.."kamine seedhi tarah nahi bol sakta tha ki bhag..un dono ke samne dinge hankane ki kya jaroorat thi.."
"Ron aise hi karta hain..sorry karta tha..aur har baar bach bhi jata tha..bas maine wahi kiya.."
"lekin kitani der tak bhagenge ye dono bahut tej daud rahe hain..maloom nahi sale kya khate hain.."
Aditya samane ek gaddha dikha..wo usi me kud gaya..bilandar ne bhi Aditya ke peeche peeche usi gaddhe me chhalang maar di..
"Aditya-billu..aawaj mat karna,un dono ko maloom nahi hona chahiye ki hum dono yaha chhupe hue hain..
"ab tu mujhe mat samjha..mujhe maloom hain kya karna hain.."
dewan aur lisa ne Aditya aur bilandar ko nahi dekha..aur aage daudte rahe..jab dono us gaddhe se kuch door aage nikal gaye to lisa ne dewan ko rukne ke liye kaha..
"dewan..lagta hain dono kahi chhup gaye hain..kahi dikh nahi rahe hain.."
"kab tak chhupenge..bahut jald hi unhe hum dhoond lenge.."
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raaj,Riya ,Nair aur Seth seedhiyo ke raste tehkhane ke us kamre me pahunch gaye the..jaha Martin ki kabra rakhi hui thi..
"Riya-yaha ghutan si ho rahi hain.."Riya ne lambi saans lete hue kaha..
"Seth-yaha oxygen level kam hain..jald hi yaha se nikalna hoga..aur mujhe nahi lagta ki yaha humare kaam ki koyi chiz hain..
"Riya-Raaj, ye sahi kah raha hain..ab mujhe bhi yahi lag raha hain ki yaha kuch nahi milne wala..
"Raaj-Martin ki kabra is tehkhane me hi kahi hain..yadi wo teesara Naksha chahiye to hume Martin ki kabra ko dhoondana hi padega.."kahte hue raaj ne apna hath Anjane me Martin ki kabra par rakha..aur turant hata liya..
"ye kis chiz ki aawaj hain.."
"Riya-kaun si aawaj..
"yaha kuch rakha hua hain.."
Raaj ne wapas apna hath Martin ki kabra me rakha..aur use kholne ki koshish karne laga..lekin nakam raha..
"tum sab yahi rukna ..main neeche jal rahi mashal lekar aata hoon.."Raaj mashal lene neeche aa gaya..raaj ke jane ke baad seth ,Riya se bola.."mam aap ye kis ko utha layi hain..ye humara samay barbaad kar raha hain.."
Raaj ke khilaf seth ki aawaj sunkar Riya bhadak gayi.."tum dono chup hi raho..Morgan ne jab balladonna me hamla kiya tha to tum dono ki tarah Raaj mujhe chhod kar nahi bhaga..usne meri jaan bachayi hain..aage se kuch soch kar bolna seth.."
seth aur Nair me se kisi ki bhi aage bolne ki himmat nahi hui..tabhi mashal lekar Raaj waha pahunch gaya..seth ko mashal pakdate hue apne peechhe aane ke liye bola..mashal ki Roshani me kabra ko Raaj ne khol diya..phhir seth ke hath se mashal lekar Raaj kabra me dekhne laga..lekin waha siway kankal ke kuch nahi tha..Raaj ne kankal ko kabra se bahar phenk diya..lekin phhir bhi use kuch nahi mila..Raaj ne kabra me jami dhool ko apne hath se saaf karte hue dekhane laga..seth aur Nair ko Raaj ki harakat bewkoofi bhari lag rahi thi..lekin dono me se kisi ki bhi himmat nahi ho rahi thi koyi kuch bole..Raaj ko kuch shabd kabra me ukere hue mile jise wo padhne laga.."Death iceland ke Mahan Raja Martin ki Kabra..jinki mirtu jung me bahaduri se ladte hue hui.."
Raaj ke hath se mashal chhut gayi..uske chehare me gussa utarne laga..Raaj jor se chillaya.."Ron Naksha lekar bhag gaya..kameena kahi ka ek baar mujhe mil ja bas Ron.....






Update-28
lisa aur dewan death iceland ke kinare ki taraf aa rahe the...bilandar aur Aditya abhi bhi lisa aur dewan ke dar se wahi chhupe hue the..
"Aditya-tujhe kya lagta hain billu..sach me Ron ko un dono ne maar diya hoga..
Bilandar apne jeb se teesara naksha nikal kar dekh raha tha..usne Aditya ki taraf koyi dhyan nahi diya..
"abey sunayi nahi diya kya..."
bilandar nakshe ko dekhte hue hi bola.."abhi main vyast hoon..kisi ghatiya aadami ki baat karni ho to kisi ghatiya ko hi dhoond..mera bheja mat kha.."
Aditya ne buri shakal banate hue bilandar ko dekha..aur uthkar khada ho gaya..
"bilandar yaha se bahar nikalna chahiye.."
bilandar ne is baar bhi koyi jawab nahi diya..aur nakshe ki taraf hi dekhta raha..
"naksha to aise dekh raha hain..jaise ise hi spiritual ship mil jayega.."kahte hue Aditya ne chupke se gaddhe se bahar jhanka..bahar door door tak Aditya ko lisa aur dewan dikhayi nahi diye..Aditya apne hatho ko zameen par tek kar bahar jhalang mari..aur gaddhe ki deewaro par apne pair ragadte hue bahar nikal aaya..bahar aakar Aditya apne kapdo par apne phhirate hue bilandar se ek bar phhir bola.."chalega kya ya phhir raat bhar yahi baith kar naksha dekhta rahega.."
bilandar ne nakshe ko modkar apne jeb me rakha..aur gaddhe se bahar aa gaya..
"billandar-ab bol kya bol raha tha.."
"aage kaha chalna hain..tehkhane se bahar to aa gaye..lekin is iceland se kaise bahar jaye.."
"mujhe kuch gadbad lagti hain jo kuch der pahle hua.."
"main samjha nahi be "
"ye Naksha pura nahi hain..iska ek bhag shayad kahi chhut gaya hain..ya phhir aisa bhi ho sakta hain nakshe ka baki hissa iske sath rakha hi na gaya ho..."
"dekh billu..jab tak Ron zinda tha,koyi dar nahi tha..lekin ab wo humare sath nahi hain..isliye main chahta hoon ki main yaha se seedhe apne ghar ke liye nikal jaun aur tu meri madad kare.."
Aditya ke irade bilandar ko pasand nahi aaye.."main tujhe tere ghar le jane itani door nahi aaya tha..Ron sath ho ya na ho main aage badhunga..agar sath chalna ho to chup chap mere peechhe tehkhane me chal aur nakshe ka bacha hua hissa dhoondane me meri sahayata kar..."bilandar tehkhane ki taraf chal pada..Aditya waha khada khada bilandar ko tehkhane ki taraf jate hue dekhte raha...
"sala bhasad deta hain..aise logo ko main apne L par lekar ghumta hoon..apun chala apne raste..."Aditya kinare ki talash me chalne laga...Bilandar lagatar tehkhane ki taraf badhta ja raha th is baat se bekhabar ki Raaj aur baki sabhi bhi usi taraf se aa rahe hain..
"nakshe to teen the..phhir ye naksha adhura kaise hain..Fala kahi Ron to kuch karke nahi mar gaya.."
raaj aur baki sabhi bilandar ke karib aate ja rahe the..aur bilandar apne hath me naksha liye Ron ko galiya bakta hua tehkhane ki taraf badhta ja raha tha..seth ki najar apne taraf aate hue bilandar par padi..
"abey ye to Ron ke sath tha..ise hi pakad kar andar kiya tha hum logo ne.."
sabki nazar bilandar ki taraf padi..
"Riya-jab ye yaha hain..iska matlab Ron aur wo Aditya bhi yahi hoga..
"Raaj-oye teri ki..iske hath me kahi Naksha to nahi hain..
"seth-mujhe bhi yahi lag raha hain..iske hath me naksha hain..
Bilandar ne naksha apne jeb me rakha..aur jaise hi samane dekha..Raaj,Riya ,seth aur Nair use samane dikhe...sabko samane dekhkar bilandar ek baar dar gaya..bilandar ne socha ki in logo ko shayad nahi maloom hain ki naksha mere pass hain..kyun na inke sath shamil hokar nakshe ka baki hissa bhi dhoond liya jaye..Lekin bilandar ke saare irade us samay nakam ho gaye jab Raaj ne usse kaha ki"jaan bachani hain to wo naksha mujhe de de.."
bilandar chaunk gaya..aur haklate hue bola,.."kaun sa naksha..mere pass to kuch bhi nahi hain.."
"aise nahi manega tu.."kahte hue Raaj ne apne hath ko bilandar ki taraf kiya..
"abey bheek mang raha hain ya naksha..hath kyun faila raha hain.."
"abhi maloom chal jayega.."
Raaj ne apne hatho ko tight kiya aur agle hi pal bilandar dur ja gira..bilandar ko samajh hi nahi aaya ki kya hua ,wo uuthkar bola"kamal hain kayi dino se maine sharab ka ek ghoot tak nahi piya ..phhir bhi mujhe itna nasha chadh gaya hain ki main gir gaya.."
sabhi hasne lage..bilandar ko ajib laga..aur riya ki taraf dekhkar bola.."tum mast maal ho..kaha se utha ke laye ye log..mere sath chalo naav me samundar ki sair karaunga.."
bilandar ka itna kahna tha ki Raaj uski taraf badha aur ek mukka bilandar ke mu me jad diya..Bilandar ko bhi gussa aaya usne bhi ek mukka Raaj ke thobade par jad diya.."sala maal usko bola to tujhe jalan ho rahi hain..bemurad kahi ka..mujhse dubara panga liya yahi dafan kar dunga.."
Riya ,seth aur Nair ne kuch nahi bola..teeno chup chap khade hokar dekhna chahte the ki Raaj aage kya karta hain..
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lisa aur dewan death iceland ke kinare par pahunch chuke the..unke thodi door par Aditya bhi tha..dono ko kinare par khada dekhkar Aditya wahi chhup gaya..
"ye dono yaha kya kar rahe hain..kahi dekh liya to Ron ki tarah main bhi upar pahunch jaunga.."
tabhi lisa aur dewan ki baate Aditya ko sunayi di..
"dewan..tumhe koyi aawaj sunayi di.."
"haan..dragons ki aawaj hain ye..iska matlab Morgan apni sena lekar yaha aa raha hain..lekin use kya maloom ki uska dushman Ron ko humne hi narak bhej diya hain ..."
"kitane salo ke baad aaj Morgan se mulakat hogi.."
lisa ne aasman ki taraf ishara kiya.."wo dekho dewan wo raha Morgan.."
Morgan ke sath bahut saare dragons bhi the..Morgan ko kinare par khade lisa aur dewan dikh gaye..Morgan ne socha ki wo Raaj aue Riya honge..isliye wo usi taraf aaya..dragon se utar kar Morgan seedhe lisa aur dewan ki taraf aaya..Jaise hi uske nazar lisa aur dewan par padi use apni ankho par yakin nahi hua..
"lisa-ye hum hi hain Morgan..itane salo se tehkhane me kaid the hum dono..aaj Ron ki maut ke sath hi hum aaza...lisa aage bolti ek tej dahad unhe sunayi di..
"ye kiski dahad thi Morgan itani bhyankar.."
"hum sabke malik dragon holder aaj Ron se mulakat karne khud aa rahe hain.....

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Too good bro.. But hero kon hy ron or raj..

[sarit11]

Update-29

"hum sabke malik dragon holder aaj Ron semulakat karne khud aa rahe hain.....
morgan ko dekh kar lisa aur dewan jor jor se hasne lage..Morgan ne sawaliya nazaro se un dono ki taraf dekha..
"lisa-dragon holder ko ab khali hath jana padega yaha se..kyunki Ron to kab ka upar pahunch chuka hain..
"asambhav ye kaise ho sakta hain.."
"bhoolo mat morgan ,akhiri baar Ron mujhse dar kar bhag gaya tha..mujhse yuddh karne ki kshamta uske pass kabhi nahi thi.."dewan ne apni talwar me lage hue khoon ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha..Morgan ke chehare par khusi saaf jhalak rahi thi ye khabar sunkar ki ron ko lisa aur dewan ne maar diya hain..
"Morgan-lekin kuch aur bhi yaha maujood hain..unko bhi maut ke ghat utarna hain..
"lisa-uske liye tumne dragon holder ko kyun bulaya..kahi aisa to nahi hain ki tum ab kamjor padne lage ho..
morgan kamjor wali baat sunkar gussa aa gaya..aur usne apna farsa Lisa ke gardan par rakh diya..lekin Lisa dari nahi wo farse ko hatate hue boli.."chhodo bhi Morgan..jab tak dragon holder yaha aaye kyun na in baki bache namuno ko khatma kar diya jaye.."
"hun.."morgan gurraya..aur farse ko lekar aage badh gaya..lisa aur dewan ne dragon holder ko kabhi nahi dekha tha..dono ke man dragon holder ko dekhane ki bahut ichchha thi..
"dewan-Morgan..hum sabke malik mera matlab dragon holder dikhte kaise hain..
"jab malik samne aayenge tab khud dekh lena.."
"jaha tak mujhe maloom hain..dragon holder koyi padvi hain na ki name..dragon holder ka name kya hain.."
Morgan chalte hue ruk gaya..usne apne farse ko kandhe se neeche utara aur dewan aur lisa ki ankho me dekhte hue bola.."Gabriel..nam hain malik ka..lekin unhe kabhi nam se mat pukarna.."
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Raaj apne gaal par hath phhirata hua ,bilandar ki taraf dekha.."tujhe main abhi batata hoon kamine.."kahte hue Raaj ne apne dono hatho se toofan khada kar diya..aur apne hatho ko bilandar ki taraf jhatak diya..bilandar hawa me udta hua ek ped se ja takraya.aur wahi pada raha...Raaj uske karib gaya aur jaise Raaj bilandar ke jeb se naksha nikalne ke liye apna hath dala..hawa ko cheerti hui talwar Raaj ke hath ke upar se gujarti hui ped me ja dhansi..bilandar aur Raaj ek pal ke liye chaunk gaye..Raaj ne ped me dhansi hui talwar ko nikala aur peechhe mud kar dekha..Aditya door khada tha..
"Aditya-shukar maan..mera nishana chook gaya..nahi to jis hath se tu naksha nikalne wala tha..wo abhi kat kar chhatpata raha hota..
raaj ne talwar ko wapas Aditya ki taraf phenka..lekin Aditya ne talwar ko pakad liya..
"bhool gaya Raaj..main ek Captain bhi hoon.."
Riya ,Aditya ke taraf badhi.."dhokebaaj..bhool gaya Captain maine tujhe banaya tha.."
"meri kabiliyat thi Captain banne ki...aur dhokebaaj main nahi tum sab ho ,yadi tum sab dhokebaj na hote to Ron ko kabhi bhi Balladonna se bahar nahi karte.."
"Kaha hain Ron..use kaho ki samane aaye..purana hisab barabar karne ka vaqt aa gaya hain.."Raaj ,bilandar ko wahi chhod Aditya ki taraf badhne laga..Aditya ek baar sabki taraf dekha..aur phhir Raaj ki taraf dekh kar bola.."phhir to tujhe marna padega..kyunki Ron mar chuka hain.."
"kya..."sabki aawaj ek sath gunji..
"Raaj-ye nahi ho sakta..mujhe Ron se hisab barabar karna hain..
"tere bolne se Ron wapas nahi aa jayega..Ron ab is duniya me nahi hain man lo..."
tabhi ek kadakdar aawaj pure vatavaran me gunji..
"seth-ye aawaj dragons ki lag rahi hain..lagta hain Morgan wapas aa gaya hain..hume taiyar rahna hoga..
"ab kisi ko bhi darne ki jaroorat nahi..ab mere pass adhbudh shaktiya hain.."Raaj aasman ki taraf dekhne laga..Riya kuch soch rahi thi..Raaj ne jab Riya ki taraf sawaliya nazaro se dekha to Riya ke hontho par muskan aa gayi...Riya Aditya ki taraf dekhi..aur uske karib jane lagi.."Aditya..ab Ron nahi hain..to kyun na hum sab ek sath ho jaye..aapas me ladne ka koyi fayda nahi..sath rahe to hum kisi ka bhi mukabla kar sakte hain.."
Riya ki baat sunkar bilandar ne apna hath hawa me uthaya aur bola"mujhe manjoor hain..lekin khajane me mera bhi hissa hoga.."
Aditya sochane par majboor ho gaya..use bhi Riya ki baat sahi lagi..Aditya ne apna hath Raaj ki taraf kiya.."aaj se hum sab ek ho gaye hain..aane do in dragons ko inhe shayad maloom nahi hain ki inka mukabala kisse hone wala hain..."
Raaj ne bhi apne hath Aditya ki taraf badhaya..aur Bilandar ko uthane ke liye Aditya uski taraf gaya...
"abey tu to wapas jane wala tha..phhir wapas kyun aaya.."
"sahi baat batau..lisa aur dewan kinare par khade the..waha Morgan bhi tapak gaya..aur jaisa maine unhe baat karte hue suna uske anusar un sabka baap dragon holder aa raha hain..meri buri tarah phhat gayi thi..."
"kya dragon holder aa raha hain..tab to gaye kaam se.."dragon holder ka nam sunte hi bilandar ka sara dard khatam ho gaya..wo bahut dar gaya tha..
"abey teri shakal itani kharab kyun ho gayi..kahi teri gand to nahi mari thi dragon holder ne.."
"dragon holder yadi yaha aa gaya to hum sabko uparwala hi bachayega..wo insan nahi hain rakshas hain.."
"kya haal hain kamino.."
sabne aawaj ki taraf dhyan diya..dewan,lisa aur morgan unki taraf aate hue dikhayi diye...
"Raaj-Morgan..aa gaya phhir ,is baar tu gaya kaam se..aur tu ye kin namuno ko sath laya hain..
Dewan se Raaj ki ye pahali mulakat thi..aur khud ko namuna sunkar dewan ne gusse se apni talwar nikali..aur Raaj ki taraf badha..
"Raaj-itna josh thik nahi ...taiyar ho jao dosto.."kahte hue Raaj khali hath dewan ki taraf dauda..jaise hi dewan ,Raaj ke pass aaya Raaj ne apne hatho ka kartab dikhate hue dewan ke upar reteli hawa khadi kar di..dewan ki ankhe band hone lagi..wo wahi khada ho gaya..
"Morgan-dewan..jara sambhal kar iske pass kuch shaktiya hain..tu ise sambhal bakiyo ka kaam tamam main aur lisa karte hain.."
Morgan ne apna farsa aur lisa ne apni talwar nikali...Riya ,seth aur Nair ke pass koyi hathiyar nahi tha jisse wo dono mukabala karte..Tabhi seth ko Aditya ki talwar zameen me padi hui dikhayi di..seth talwar lekar khada ho gaya.."is laundiya ko main dekh lunga..tum sab milkar Morgan se nipto.."
lisa ne seth ki iksha jaan kar usi par toot padi..Ab Aditya,bilandar,Nair aur Riya bach gaye the..charo Morgan ko apni taraf aate hue dekh rahe the..
"Aditya-billu..kya bolta hain khisak le..warna maare jayenge..
"bilandar-bhag kar kaha jayega..charo milkar mukabala karte hain..
"lund pakad kar ladega is chutiye se..iska farsa dekha hain"
Riya ne Aditya ki taraf ghoor kar dekha..Tab Aditya ko dhyan aaya ki usne kya bol diya..Morgan charo ke karib aa kar rook gaya.."yadi apni jaan ki salamati chahte ho to teeno nakshe mujhe de do..aur humare sath shamil ho jao.."
"Bilandar-ladayi kare..wo jyada achchha rahega..
morgan ne gusse se apna farsa bilandar ki taraf kiya..lekin bilandar neeche baith gaya..Morgan ne ek laat bilandar ke pet me jad diya..Morgan ka war itna majboot tha ki bilandar hawa me uchhalte hue wapas ped se takra gaya..Aditya apna sar jhukaye Morgan ke pet ko nishana banakar dauda..lekin morgan ne Aditya ke gardan ko pakad kar door jhatak diya..
Dewan ne apne ankho me kapde ka tukda bandh liya..aur talwar lekar Raaj par tut pada..Raaj har baar dewan ke hamle se bach gaya..ant me Raaj ne apni puri taqat se bawandar utha diya..jiske sampark me aate hi dewan ki talwar uske hath se chhut gayi..Raaj aur dewan ab nihatthe the..Raaj ne apne hath ko majbooti se jakda aur dewan ki taraf badha..
"dewan-ab hoga barabari ka mukabala...aaja sale.."
dusari taraf seth aur lisa lad rahe the..lekin dono ki ladayi ...ladayi kam comedy jyada lag rahi thi..lisa ne apni talwar ko seth ki khopadi par nishana sadh kar chalaya to seth ke kuch baal kat kar zameen me gir gaye..
"tumhara nam kya hain ladki..tum bahut khubsurat ho..."
"achchha..phhir is khubsurat ladki ka kamal dekh.."lisa ne apne talwar se seth par hamla kiya..jise rokate samay seth ke hath se talwar chhut gayi..
morgan dheere dheere Riya ki taraf badhne laga..Riya ka gala soonkh gaya..jab usne Morgan ko apni taraf aate hue dekha..usne Raaj ko madad ke liye pukara..lekin Raaj ko dewan ne jakad kar rakha tha..majboori me Riya ne Aditya ko pukara..lekin Aditya ne keval itna kaha.."bhago Riya mam..warna tumhara sar kahi aur rahega.."
Riya bhag khadi hui..Morgan ne Aditya ki taraf gusse se dekha..Aditya ladkhadate hue khada hua..Morgan ko apni taraf aate hue dekh Aditya ki phhat gayi.."are Morgan ji..naksha to riya lekar bhag gayi..uska peechha karo yadi teeno nakshe chahiye to.."
Morgan ne gusse se dahad mari aur Jis taraf Riya bhagi thi usi taraf bhag khada hua...
dewan..jaan chuka tha ki Raaj ke hatho me shaktiya hain..isliye usne Raaj ko peechhe se daboch liya..nair Raaj ko dewan ke changul se chhudane ke liye dewan par laat guso barsat karne laga..gusse me aakar Dewan ne Raaj ko door jhatka aur palatkar seedha ek laat Nair ke main point pe de mara..Nair chillata hua neeche gir gaya..tabhi kisi ke aane ki ahat hui..hawa me laharata hua laal rang ka ek farsa Nair ke sar ko uske sharir se ukhadta hua zameen me dhans gaya..sabki ankhe phhati rah gayi..nair ka sharir jhatpatane laga...tabhi dewan apne ghutno ke bal zameen par baith gaya.."humare malik dragon holder ka swagat hain.."
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riya daudti daudti thak chuki thi...aur tabhi uska pair ek patthar se ja takraya..Riya gir padi..Morgan bhi waha pahunch chuka tha..Riya ke pair me usne apne pair rakh diye..aaaahhhhhhhh riya dard se chilla uthi..
morgan ne apna farsa hawa me uthaya lekin wo farsa Riya ke sharir ko chhuta isse pahale hi ek talwar Morgan ke peeth me kisi ne ghused di..Morgan ke hath se uska farsa chhut gaya..aur riya ke upar girne laga..dar ke mare Riya ne apni ankhe band kar li..lekin kisi ne Morgan ke farse ko pakad liya tha..Riya dheere dheere apni ankhe kholni lagi..use yakin hi nahi hua..samane Ron khada tha..
"Ron tum zinda ho..."
"nahi main Ron ka bhoot hoon.."

[sarit11]

posted upto page no 55

[sarit11]

Update-30
"Ron tum zinda ho..."


"nahi main Ron ka bhoot hoon.."
"thank u...thanku very much Ron..i will never forgot ur this help..thank u..thanku.."
"janeman..meri hindi thodi kamjor hain..aasan hindi ka istemal karo.."
"kya..aasan hindi.."Riya ke kuch der pahale maut ke dar se jo khauf tha..wo puri tarah hat chuka hain..
"janeman..jaan bachane ka shukriyada to kar do.."
"abhi maine wahi kiya tha Ron.."
"aisa kya..mujhe samajh nahi aaya shayad..koyi baat nahi.."
Ron ne Morgan dekha..aur Morgan ko dekhate hi Ron ko hansi aa gayi..usne Morgan ke pet me ghusi hui talwar ko pakad kar aur andar ghusa diya..Morgan ashay hokar chillane laga..
"chub be..teri aawaj utani bhi surili nahi hain.."
"Ron..tujhe dragon holder se kaun bachayega.."Morgan ne apne pet se Ron ki talwar nikalte hue bola..Morgan aadhi talwar apne pet se nikal chuka tha..Ron aur Riya Morgan ki is halat ka maza utha rahe the..
"tumhe kya lagta hain Riya,..ye kallu talwar nikal lega.."
"shayad haan.."Riya ne apne kandhe uthate hue jawab diya..
ron ki nazar neeche pade Morgan ke farse par padi..bina samay gavaye Ron ne Morgan ka farsa utha liya..
"kallu..jaise tere chehare aur is farse ka rang bahut milta hain ..dono nihayat hi bahut kale hain.."
"Ron..hume baki sabki madad karni hogi...Morgan ke sath do aur bhi the.."
"chalo meri jaan..sabki karte hain..mera matlab madad.."kahte hue Ron ,Morgan ki taraf badha aur Morgan ke ghutano par usi ke farse se hamla kiya..lekin farse tej dhar bhi Morgan ke sharir se khoon ka ek katra bhi nahi nikal payi..lekin Morgan ke ghutano par dard hua..dard itna tej tha ki Morgan khada nahi rah paya..aur ghutano ke bal wahi ludhak gaya...Ron ne Morgan ke pet me dhansi hui talwar par apni laat rakh kar andar daba diya..Morgan ek baar phhir dard se chilla utha.."Dhokebaaj..yadi apni taqat par itna hi ghumar tha to peechhe se kyun hamla kiya.."
"shukar man ..talwar pet me ghusayi..yadi kahi aur ghusa di hoti to...."lotpot" tu talwar nikal main tera farsa lekar jata hoon..meri talwar ka achchhe se khayal rakhna.."
Ron ke ishare se Riya teji se daudane lagi...peechhe peechhe Ron bhi daudane laga..
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"gabriel ke nam se jante hain mujhe...main hoon dragon holder.."Gabriel ne Nair ka kata hua sar apne hatho me pakda..aur pass me maujood bade se patthar me de mara...aisa ghinona drishya koyi nahi dekh paya..sabne apni ankhe band kar li..
"Aditya-abey Raaj...kuch kar toofan utha nahi to sabka yahi hoga.."Aditya ne khaufnak nazaro se Gabriel ki taraf dekha..Gabriel ka sharir dragon se juda hua tha..uske kandho me pankh the..jo use hawa me udne me sahayata karte the..Gabriel ke kamar ke neeche ka sharir puri tarah dragon ki tarah tha..farak sirf itna tha ki pairo ki banawat insan ki tarah thi..lekin rang aur mans kisi dragon ka tha..Dragon ke hatho ko dekh kar aisa lagta raha tha jaise usne dragon ke sharir ko katkar uska tukda apne hatho me chipka liya ho...Gabriel ki nazar Aditya par padi..
"kya haal hain dost..tum itane dare hue kyun ho.."kahte hue Gabriel ne apne farse ko Aditya ke gale par rakha..aur dheere dheere apne farse ko Aditya ke seene ke taraf laya..jaha jaha Aditya ke sharir me Gabriel ke farse ne Aditya ko chhua..waha ek gahra jakhm ban gaya..aur khoon ki tej dhar nikalne lagi...dar ke karan Aditya ne apni ankhe band kar li...Raaj se ye sab dekha nahi gaya...wo dewan se ladte hue bahut thak chuka tha...lekin phhir bhi usne apne hatho ko Gabriel ki taraf kiya aur apne hath ko jhatka diya..Gabriel ko iski khabar tak nahi hui..aur girte padte Gabriel ka sar usi patthar se ja takraya..jaha kuch der pahle Nair ka kata hua sar gira tha..jab patthar se Gabriel ka sar takraya to waha ek jordar visfot hua..patthar ke kayi tukade ho gaye..lekin Gabriel ke sar se khoon ki ek boond bhi nahi bahi...
"tere pass to adhbudh shakti hain..par afsoos ki tu mera mukabala nahi kar sakta.."
Gabriel ab Aditya ko chhod Raaj ki taraf badhne laga...
"meri shaktiyo ko tune dekha kaha hain abhi...ye dekh.."
Raaj ne apni puri takat se ek toofani bawandar khada karne laga..aur us bawandar ko Gabriel ki taraf mod diya..Is baar Gabriel taiyar tha..usne apne ko do kadam peechhe kiya..aur jordar hunkar maari jaise dragons marte hain...aag ki vishal lapte Gabriel ke mu se nikalne lagi..jisne uske taraf aate hue Raaj ke toofani bawandar ko rok diya..sabke dimak sun ho gaye...
"Gabriel-ab shayad yaha par maujood har shaks samajh jayega ki mujhe dragon holder kyun kahte hain..."
Raaj ka hamla nakam hua ye dekh kar bilandar,Aditya aur Seth ka dil ki dhadkane band hone ko aa gayi...
Tabhi waha daudte hue Riya aur Ron aa pahunche.."yaaakkkkkk...Riya ne jaise hi Nair ke khoon se lathpath sharir ko dekha uske mu se yahi aawaj bahar nikli..usne apne hatho se khud ke chehare ko thak liya...
"lo ek aur aa gayi marne.."lisa ,Riya ke taraf badhi..."ise main sambhal lungi malik...aap fikar na kare..."kahte hue lisa ne apni talwar kheench li...lekin uske hath me tabhi Ron ne Morgan ke farse ke peechhe wale hisse se de mara..lisa ki pakad talwar se chhut gayi...
"kya haal hain janeman..mujhe to tum sab bhool gaye.."
"Ron.."
"itane saal tehkhane me rahne ke baad bhi tumhare daant safed hain.."
sabki nazare Ron ki taraf ghoom gayi..ek taraf jaha Seth, bilandar aur Raaj khush the..wahi dusari taraf lisa,dewan ...Ron ko zinda dekhkar buri tarah chaunk gaye the...
"dewan-tujhe to maine apne hatho se mara tha..tu zinda kaise bach gaya..
"wo sab chhod dewan..main tujhse puchhna bhool gaya tha ki tum dono ko mera naya nam kaisa laga...The Ron...samundar ka Shikari..achchha hain na.."
Gabriel apne chehare par muskan late hue shant lahaze me apne ek hath me farsa thame Ron ki taraf badha...
"kaise ho..samundar ke Shikari..main aaj khas tumhare liye hi yaha aaya hoon.."
Gabriel ko dekh kar Ron ne apne farse ko majbooti se pakad liya...
"Gabriel tu yaha dragon ke liye khane ka intejam karne aaya hain kya.."
"kamal hain Ron tum kitane badal gaye ho...lekin tumhara hunar abhi tak tumhare pass hain.."
Raaj ke dimak me ye prashn uth raha tha ki Ron aur Gabriel ek dusare ko kaise jante hain...ek aur karan tha jo Raaj ko dil hi dil me khaye ja raha tha ki Ron ,jise wo apna dushman manta hain wo usse jyada famous tha...akhirkar jhalla kar Raaj bol pada...
"Ron tu is dragon mu wale bandar ko kaise janta hain..."
"bandar...mujhe bandar kaha.."khud se baat karte hue Gabriel ne apna farsa Raaj ki taraf de mara..jo seedhe uske pair me ja ghusa..lekin Raaj ke kandhe me maujood nishan ki vajah se Gabriel ka farsa Raaj ke pair ko kaat nahi paya...
"narah nahi hote Gabriel...wo to bas puchh raha tha.."Ron ne apne hath ,Gabriel ke kandhe par rakh diya..."Raaj jise tune bandar kaha wo mere karnamo ka bahut bada fan hain..aur mujhe apna guru manta hain.."
Ron aage kuch bol deta...Gabriel ne Ron ko majbooti se pakad liya..Gabriel ke kandhe se jude pankh satark ho gaye...Gabriel ,Ron ko lekar upar uda..aur uchayi par jakar Ron ko chhod diya..na chahate hue bhi Raaj ne Riya ke ishare par Ron ko neeche girne se bacha liya...
"Ron-isne sahi kaha ...tu bandar hi hain...

[sarit11]

The Immortals

finally reading complete,
yaha tak ki kahani ekdam jhakkas thi boss!
Dragon holder aa gaya,
sabhi log fir se eK ho gaye
nair ji swargiya ho gaye
Ron bhi zinda hai
lekin ye Raaz ki powers ka raaj kya hai??
lisa aue dewan bhi Zinda hai
Morgan sach me mar gaya kya??
lagta ek masst ladai hone wali hai,
waise ek kami is kahani me kaafi suspense ka sambhavnye thi
lekin aapne jabran comedy dali hai isliye kahani me wo maja nahi raha
kahani achhi hai ,
Aur ye bahut achchi ho sakti thi, agar aap language aur suspense par dhyan dete
Ron ,lisa, morgan aur dewan in sab ki language se lagta hai jaise ye koi tapori ho
khair chodo ab to kahani finish hone ko aa gayi.
All the best buddy
Btw waiting for next update

Sgp2009

itna bada review
thanks bro...
Aur Ron,dewan lisa abhi tak zinda kaise hain...uska bhi ek funda hain jo vaqt aane par maloom chalega story ke -- points batane ke liye shukriya aur jaha tak language ki baat hain to maine khud feel kiya hain ki thik nahi hain par koshish jaari hain
again thanks bhai