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Hello felllow readers and writers,
I would like to request if i can continue the following story
Ammi ke secret: https://xossipy.com/thread-30460.html
The writer has moved onto his antoher story and has not updated for a long time....and hasnt come online either for 2 monthhs now
Note: i do not intend to continue where he left off, i will be flash forwarding....to leave space for him for his orignal continuation whatever that be.
Do give feedback
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29-09-2023, 05:16 PM
(This post was last modified: 22-10-2023, 05:32 PM by Ramukakalegend. Edited 3 times in total. Edited 3 times in total.)
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Update 1: Shaila ki kashmakash
Update 2: "Kahan hain Hariya"
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Great idea! It is really a fantastic story.Please continue
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What a great news! Please start
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This story is extremely hot and erotic. Please start as soon as possible.
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30-09-2023, 01:15 AM
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agar koi madat chaiye ho to story buildup mein to msg kardena ;;
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Thanks all
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(30-09-2023, 01:15 AM)Cheekku Wrote: agar koi madat chaiye ho to story buildup mein to msg kardena ;;
Drop me ur ideas on inbox..... but i do have a roadmap
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(30-09-2023, 02:25 AM)Ramukakalegend Wrote: Drop me ur ideas on inbox..... but i do have a roadmap
check pm
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Reintroducing the characters
Salim Khan - 50 years (businessman - construction company ceo)
Shaila Khan - 44 years (housewife of salim/dancer)
Sahil khan - 18 (son)
Hariya - 52 years (servant / dance guru/ bodyguard / driver)
Raju - 34 years (autowala)
Raghu - 39 years (streetrat/ flower shop attendant)
Ruksana - 49 years (tailor)
Naila - 37 years (sister of shaila)
Rohan - 42 years (husband of naila / batchmate of shaila)
Rohit - 28 years (hotel attendant)
Lallan
Qureshi
Ramachandran
SubInspctor Bulla
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30-09-2023, 01:34 PM
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Jin readers ne pehla part nahi padha hai...PLEASE READ before you come here
Because chracters will be returning and carry forward motivations from original story. (Link in first post of this thread)
Quick re intro of story:
Yeh kahaani hai shaila khan ki..... jo ki ek middle class background se hai lekin inki shaadi ek high class businessman se hui..... jo pehlay tou simple aur conservative thay.... lekkn waqt ke saath inka interest sirf business mein rehgaya....
Kaise shaila ek seedhi sadi housewife se ek hawasi chuddakad rakhail ban gayi .... ek dance competition ki aar mein...... jisko anjaam diya hariya naam ke ek buddhay naukar nay..
Hariya salim khan ke ghar ka pehlay naukar nahi tha..... salim ke ek dost ke ghar kaam karta tha driver aur helper ki haisiyat se.... aur salim ki company mein bhi kabhi kabhi godaam aur warehouse mein haath batata tha....salim aisay uaay jaanta tha.... phir ek samay jab baat ayi ke ghar pe ek fulltime naukar ajaye.... wahan se hariya ne ghar mein pravesh kiya.... jahan uski gandi nazar padi shaila par.... aur wahin se uska mann ban gaya.... usay na paisa chahiye na ruthba....na shauhrat... usay sirf shaila ka poora jism chahiye......
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(30-09-2023, 05:37 PM)Rohit Wrote: Brother, this is really an extraordinary interfaith adult story. I am very happy to see you have decided to continue the story.You have introduced a lot of new male characters. I don't know what rules they will be played in the story. But if you let other male members except Hariya to fuck the female members, then the story will not be popular among the readers I sure of that. So please don't let other male members to seduce and fuck the female members except Hariya.Thanks again for starting this great story anew. 
Thank you bro for your suggestion.
I dont want to reveal how things will.unfold so stay tuned....
But i would hint you to focus on the title of the original story and mine.
Thanks
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(30-09-2023, 01:34 PM)Ramukakalegend Wrote: Jin readers ne pehla part nahi padha hai...PLEASE READ before you come here
Because chracters will be returning and carry forward motivations from original story. (Link in first post of this thread)
Quick re intro of story:
Yeh kahaani hai shaila khan ki..... jo ki ek middle class background se hai lekin inki shaadi ek high class businessman se hui..... jo pehlay tou simple aur conservative thay.... lekkn waqt ke saath inka interest sirf business mein rehgaya....
Kaise shaila ek seedhi sadi housewife se ek hawasi chuddakad rakhail ban gayi .... ek dance competition ki aar mein...... jisko anjaam diya hariya naam ke ek buddhay naukar nay..
Hariya salim khan ke ghar ka pehlay naukar nahi tha..... salim ke ek dost ke ghar kaam karta tha driver aur helper ki haisiyat se.... aur salim ki company mein bhi kabhi kabhi godaam aur warehouse mein haath batata tha....salim aisay uaay jaanta tha.... phir ek samay jab baat ayi ke ghar pe ek fulltime naukar ajaye.... wahan se hariya ne ghar mein pravesh kiya.... jahan uski gandi nazar padi shaila par.... aur wahin se uska mann ban gaya.... usay na paisa chahiye na ruthba....na shauhrat... usay sirf shaila ka poora jism chahiye......
Great going buddy. Please let only Hariya to rock female members of this aristocratic khan family.
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One of my most favourite interfaith adult stories. Thanks for writing
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