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Veero teh Veera di bhaino..Navi story likhan lagga.. 
Last story vaang eh vi chhoti 30-40 updates di hou.. 
Kunki story di ending jarrori aa.. es layi Lambi story likhan toh gurez hi aa mainu.. prefix kuch nahi ditta story nu kyunki erotica incst adultey sabh da tadka laggu.. story hi teh hai kehda asal life naal laina Dena ehda kuch..
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(30-08-2022, 07:56 PM)Jatt_yaar_arab_jatti_da Wrote: Veero teh Veera di bhaino..Navi story likhan lagga.. 
Last story vaang eh vi chhoti 30-40 updates di hou.. 
Kunki story di ending jarrori aa.. es layi Lambi story likhan toh gurez hi aa mainu.. prefix kuch nahi ditta story nu kyunki erotica incst adultey sabh da tadka laggu.. story hi teh hai kehda asal life naal laina Dena ehda kuch..

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Introduction

Eh Kahani hai ik Arab jatti di. Kirdar aunde jande rehangay. Par kehda Kirdar end Tak rahu oh hai Lovleren Kaur.
 Lovleen Kaur di Umar es vele 26 saal di hain teh ohde naam vaang hi husan di bhari payi hai. Jean Top payi hove teh poori model lagdi eh teh kado suit paundi eh teh ambran toh utari hoyi hoor lagdi eh teh apde naam Lovleen nu sach Kar dindi eh..
Lovleen deh Ghar vich ohdi mummy Sukhjot kaur teh daddy dildar Singh hunde. Lovleen Ghar Diya di ikali dhee hundi. Par incest toh tad bit bach nah saki. Lovleen deh sehar vaare kuch nahi likhana, jehda jitho da oh apne sehar di hi kahani smajh lave, teh pinda wale apde nere wale sehar di Kahani smajh sakde neh.
 Lovleen da rang pakki hoyi kanak varga eh teh momme 34-35 deh vichale teh donali vaang tane hoye, lakk 27 ku inch da, teh chittar 36 deh jehde ke gol teh sohal hunde teh patt teh rann deh motte motte gol matol si ke vekhan Wala ohna di golayi vich hi kho jave..teh sehje hi oh gaana "lakk patla patta di bhari, rann botal vargi" mann vich aa janda..
 Eh teh si Kahani deh mukh kirdaar di thodi jaan-pehchaan.. Hun karde kahani start.

Update 1
3 ku saal pehlay
Lovleen Mcom final year vich hundi eh. 
Tyaar ho apne room vicho Bahar aundi hoyi "mummy main chali aa, college layi ajj fer late ho rahi ah"
Osdi mummy Sukhjot kaur kitchen vicho awaz dindi hoyi "kure ruk Jah, roti teh kha ke jayi" 
"Nahi mummy, mainu bhukh nahi teh Dil kita canteen toh kha Lau kuch" Lovleen apne bag vich Activa di chabi kad di hoyi, bahar nu jandi hoyi boldi.
"Tu baharo kabad kha liya kar roz hi, Ghar da baniya teh jehar lagda tainu"
lovlee Ghar deh Bahar Wala darwaza kholdi hoyi "had hogayi, pata tuhanu teh kyun savere savere tokde rehnde oh" boldi hoyi Ghar toh Bahar aa ke scooty start Kar apde college val chal paindi eh

University puj scooty stand teh lah apne mobile toh apni pakki saheli Preeti da number dial Kar dindi.
Jidda hi Preeti call chukdi teh Lovleen osnu boldi, "Kithe marr gayi kuttiye, kinna time di stand teh khadi aa"
"Stand teh kharhi da nahi, beh jayi da, wahla hi swad aunda stand teh beh ke teh reen" Preeti hassdi hoyi jawab dindi
Lovleen gusse hundi hoyi "ah kanjarkhana hi aunda bass tainu, Hun dass kithe reh gayi"
"Guess kyun hundi aa, main vi aa gayi, college deh gate teh hi aa" kehndi hoyi Preeti call cut dindi.
Apni scooty nu stand teh lah Preeti Lovleen kole aundi hoyi ohnu cherdi hoyi"ajj kehde apde peo deh viah teh ayi jehda enna saji thaji payi aa"
"Kuttiye 35 vaar ah Jean Top paa laye, par tu nah chherh-noh hati" Lovleen Preeti nu gal milde hoye boldi teh dove college di building val turn paindiya.
"Main teh hatt jau chherno, par ah 33 deh momme jehde topa vaang kharhe kite, teh ah pichhio jehri jiyada hi matakundi aa, ehna nu dekh mundiya neh nahi hatna tainu chherno" Preeti hass di hoyi boldi.
"Mere pichhe payi rehndi aa, apde saman nu vi dekh lah, thale hi digaan Wala Hoya piya, koi Hatha vich boch hi nah lave kuttiye" Lovleen vi Preeti nu chherdi hoyi palt vaar kardi.
"Bochan naal ki hou, Hatha vich leh noch lave, Maja hi aa jau" Preeti vi tichar naal jawab dindi hoyi boldi.
College vich apni class val turde hoye Preeti di nigah Bahar bane ramp val paindi jithe Rajdeep baitha hunda.  Lovleen teh bahut line marda si, kayi vaar purpose vi Kar Chuka si, par Lovleen bahut Arab si, es layi sidhe mooh is naal gal vi nahi kardi si.
"Oh vekh Tera ranjha baitha, edar hi dekh riha" Preeti Lovleen val nu vekhde hoye
"Edar ki ohdi maa baithi jehda edar vekhda" Lovleen vi jawab dindi
"Maa da pata nahi, tere gubariya nu bahut dhiyaan naal vekh riha" Preeti fer cheerde hoyi.
"Chal vekh lain deh, kutte Hadi val vekhde hi hunde aa" lovleen gusse jihe ch boldi.
Preeti "oh teh edar hi lagda aun lagga"
Lovleen vi ramp val dekhdi aa teh Osdi Nazar ik pal layi Raj naal mildi teh Raj muskra dinda teh akh Marr dinda,  Lovleen mann vich "kutta kise than da" sochdi hoyi apna mooh sahmane val Kar "chal apna time ho gaya class da, late nah ho jayiye" keh ke thoda tez turan lagdi eh jis naal osdi bund vi thoda jiyada doldi eh
Raj ohdi bund nu vekh "saali gadar mall eh, ek vaar laut aa gayi teh fer aish aa apni"
Lovleen teh Preeti class vich enter hundiya teh baitha munday sabh uhna val hi  vekh rah si, lovleen ik vaar class vich nigah guhma ke vekhdi teh class deh sabh toh last bench jehda ke Khali hunda val tur paindi eh teh Preeti naal bench teh beh jandi.
Preeti "lagda kuttiya di ginti vadh gayi, jehda dekho tere val hi dekhda"
"Kuttiye mainu lagda sabh tere val vekh deh si tik-tiki lah ke" Lovleen Preeti deh kohni Mardi hoyi boldi.
"Vekhi jaan, Hun main hai hi enni sohni, utto jive tu kehndi ke saman thale digaan wala eh, Hun eh vi ki karan vichare, vekh ke khade hi kar sakde" Preeti vi tharak bhor di boldi
"Ahoo eh teh vekh ke hi khade Kar sakde, tu teh bass Vickey deh naal hi Karna, ehna nu ki pata jehnu Shareef smajhde, oh har raat apne yaar agay" boldi hoyi akha matka lovleen hass paindi.
"Poora bol, ki yaar agay?" Preeti puchdi
"Hor ki kuttiye, tainu ni pata yaar agay nangi ho shareefi kile tang dindi eh" lovleen cherdi hoyi boldi
"Hayee nah chete karwa, kanjar Roz hi khada Kar ke aa janda, fer kithe Shareef riha janda, jad garam lulla yaar da, akha sahmne salamiya dinda, laado teh appe hi pani chhad dindi eh. Kash hune Vickey naal hundi, Maja aa janda" Preeti tharak jahi naal boldi
"Kuttiye raati teh haale karwa ke ayi Kam apna, Hun fer sex çharh gaya tainu," lovleen vi swad laindi boldi
"Ni tainu ki pata, ki milda jad yaar neh lambe paya hunda, yaar bana ke vekh, lag jau pata, bathere halke firde tere pichhe tah, teh oh Raj kado da piche piya tere, Hun teh Mcom vi ho chali, Kar leh kuch, apni jawani vaare vi soch leh,. Maja leh lah thoda bahut teh" Preeti Lovleen di chuski laindi boldi
"Chup Kar Jah kuttiye, mainu nahi make Laine, sun Lau koi" lovleen boldi
Preeti "Tu sunan di gal kardi, munday tainu vekh lulla garam Kari firde"
Ese time economics da Prof class vich aa janda teh dove chup ho jandiya.
2 lecture laun toh baad lovleen "yaar, chal canteen chaliye kuch kha ke aunde aa"
"Lecture tere peo neh launa, meri teh lagda udda vi attendance ghat Jani es saal" Preeti sirr nu nah vich hilaunde hoye boldi
"Eh kehdi navi gal aa, picchlay 4 saal vich kade poori hoyi teri attendance, jehda es vaar poori ho jani" kehnde hoye lovleen Preeti nu khich ke class toh Bahar nu tur paindi

Canteen vich aa 2 Pattis teh coke da order deh, ik corner vi h beh jandiya neh
"Sade layi vi kuch mangwa leo" Preeti deh kole beh vickey muskraunda Hoya bolda, 
teh naal hi Raj vi lovleen deh kole behnde hoye "hello lovleen, jidda yaar"
Lovleen Raj nu koi jawani nahi dindi teh Vickey val vekhde hoye "Vickey jidda, bade Dina baad miliya"
Vickey "main theek aa ji, tuc kive"
"Tuc ethe ki karde" Preeti Vickey nu vekh ke thoda hairan hunde hoye boldi
"Bass Kam si thoda tere college deh nere, sochiya Raj nu milde hoye Chala Jana, teh fer college andar aa apni jaan nu bina mile kive Jah sakda si" Vickey Preeti deh modhe nu farh apne val khich jaffi jayi paunde bolda
"Eh ki karde, sabh edar hi vekh rahe" Preeti Vickey toh dur hunde hoye boldi
"Gussa kyun hundi,. Vekh lain deh hor 6 machine Tak apna viah ho Jana, ki gal ethe teh ni koi chhakar chalayi firdi Jann meri" Vickey Preeti deh modhe toh hath chukda Hoya osnu cherda Hoya bolda.
Preeti ik pal layi Vickey deh mooh val vekhdi teh fer app Vickey nu jaffi paunde hoye "tuc nah meri latt khichan toh hatiya karo" kehndi hoyi hass paindi.
(Vickey teh Preeti da rishta ho Chuka si, viah di haale koi date fix nahi si hoyi)
Vickey Raj teh Lovleen val dekhde hoye "yaar, bahut Dina toh movie da program bana rahe si main teh preeti, par Mera Kam karke time hi ni lagda, ajj vi Kam teh hai par dekhi jau, Chalo chalde aa movie dekhan, tuc vi Chalo dove Sade naal" Vickey khada ho Preeti nu bah toh farh khada karde hoye bolda.(Raj teh Vickey neh eh plan canteen toh aun toh pehlay hi baniya Hoya si)
"theek aa yaar, Chalo chalde aa" Raj vi khada hunde hoye bolda
"Main ni Jana Preeti tuc Jah Ayo" lovleen nah karde hoye Raj teh fer Preeti val dekhdi hoyi boldi
Preeti "chal Pai hun, nahi teh main vi nahi Jana fer"
"Mere karke kyun apna mood off kardi, Jah aoo tuc please" lovleen nah karde hoye boldi 
"Hun uth pao, kyun meri jaan toh mints karwande oh" Vickey tala jiha karda bolda
Teh fer thoda nah nukar Karan toh baad lovleen mande hoye "ok Chalo chalde aa" kehndi hoyi khadi ho jandi eh 
Teh charo college toh Bahar aa jande neh. Raj Vickey naal osdi gaddi vich teh preeti teh lovleen apni apni scooty teh beh nere maal val tur painde neh.
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Bhut achi story aa pr continue rkhna ta hi esda craze rahuga nhi te tusi v khna k koi repky ta krda nhi vich na shdna story nu baki bhut sohni start kri h story tusi keep it up
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Update 2

Vickey teh Raj Hindi movie 'hate story 4' di ticketa leh lainde neh teh Lovleen teh Preeti di wait Karan lag painde neh.

Preeti teh lovleen naal ohna kole aa "kinne time nu suru honi aa movie"

"Start ho chuki aa 5 ku minta toh, appa pehlay hi late aa, jaldi Chalo andar" kehnda Hoya Vickey agay tur painda

"Kehdi movie dekhan lagay appa" Preeti vi osde magar turdi hoyi puchhadi.

Vickey "Hate story4"

Preeti Lovleen val vekh teh fer Vickey nu "hor koi ni vekh sakde si, enniya movies teh laggiya"

"Yaar timing hi nahi si kise hor movie di es vele, ehdi si eh vi 10 ki mint di lang chuki aa" Vickey kahli jahe ch turda Hoya bolda

Lovleen Preeti deh pichhe turde hoye Mann vich "kithe fasa ditta kutti neh"

Raj es vele lovleen deh naal turda Hoya Mann vich "Chalo Preeti karke hi sahi, lovleen naal movie dekhan nu teh mili, nahi teh bhainchod 2 saal ho chuke gal Karan layi vi taras gaya si, ghatto ghat movie bahane kuch time ehde naal behan nu teh milu"

Andar hall lag-bhag Khali hi hunda, teh Vickey seat number check karda Hoya last wali duji teeji katar vich varh janda teh akir vich diwar deh naal wali seat teh beh janda

Preeti Vickey deh naal wali seat utte beh jandi teh fer lovleen teh last vich lovleen kole Raj beh janda.

Movie start hoye 15 mint ho chuke si, teh Raj screen val ghat teh lovleen val jiyada vekh riha si.

Lovleen nu vi pata hunda Raj ose val vekh riha, teh kayi vaar akha ghuma Raj val vekhdi jehda kade osde momme teh kade Patt vekh riha si, teh sochdi "kutta idda vekh riha jive kha hi jau, Sala besharm kise than da, ehdi maa movie edar laggi aa ke sahmane"

Raj di vi Nazar ik vaar lovleen naal mildi teh hasde hoye lovleen nu akh Marr dinda, jis naal lovleen nu thoda gussa aa janda, par oh bina kuch bole sahmane screen val vekhan lagdi. Jado vi Movie vich sex scene aunda teh lovleen di Nazar kole baithe Raj nal mildii teh sharam teh guess nal Lal ho jandi kyunki Raj os nu vekh kade akh Marr dinda si, teh kade bulla teh jeeb fer dinda, teh pehli vaar apne naal Edda hunda vekh kite nah kite lovleen nu vi Maja aa riha hunda.

Enne nu half time ho janda teh charo alap vich gal kar uthe hi baithe rehnde, kyunki kise da kuch khan da Dil nahi si.

Raj es time mauka dekh holi jihe lovleen nu "bahut sohni lag rahi yaar ajj teh"

Lovleen Raj nu vekh "main sohni hi aa, tu apne vich reh, tamasha nah banva lavi apna ethe" teh Preeti val mooh karke galla Karan lag paindi.

Movie dubara start ho jandi teh thode time baad lovleen Preeti val vekhdi, jehdi es vele Vickey deh hath nu apne patta toh hataunde hoye holi jahi boli c "Rehan deo jaan, lovleen kole baithi aa"

Vickey Preeti deh Patt toh hath chuk osda mooh nu hath naal fad apne val guma "bhencho chup chap baithi reh, mera swad nah kharab Kar, smajh gayi, sali toh galla jinni Marzi sun lao, Edda Karo ah ho jau, udda Karo, oh ho jau bhainchoo" kehnde hoye ik pal layi Preeti deh bull Chum lainde, teh fer sidha baith deh hoye apna hath Preeti deh patta vichkar fasa lainda

Lovleen kade ohna val vekhdi teh kade screen val. Raj da Sara dhiyaan lovleen val hunda

Vickey apne duje hath naal Preeti da momma farh gutt dinda jis naal Preeti di sisak nikal jandi, teh Vickey apne hath naal poora momma farh ploasde hoye "saali naale swaad layi jandi, teh naale nakhre kardi" jisnu lovleen vi sun laindi teh hass paindi

"Hayee Holi jaan, nakhre kado kardi, bass thoda Holi guttan nu nahi keh sakdi, lovleen neh sun liya fer, raati vi teh ghutt deh oh zor naal, kade rokiya tuhanu, haaye Holi Karo, ik teh sunde ni tuc kade meri"

"Tu bahute drame nah Kar, chup karke lann farh leh Mera, thoda ploas bhincho akadiya piya," Vickey apne  ik hath naal momme ploasde hoye  teh duje naal Preeti di salwar utto osdi fuddi nu maslada hoya bolda

"Farhh laini aa jaan, lulla udda akad da kado nahi, har vele teh sirr chuki rakhda eh" teh lannn deh hath rakh pant utto fardan di koshish kardi hoyi "sachii eh teh poora khada, hayee Ghar hundi teh leh laindi andar ehnu"

Lovleen vi ehna di harkata vekh garam hundi hoyi sochdi "kutti, luchhi aa poori, kive swaad laindi, ehnu vekh teh lagda es Kam naalo jiyada swaad hi nahi kite, mainu vi pata nahi kinhoyi janda, Sachi kehndi Preeti, lulla agay hove teh shareefi da bhoot app hi utar janda" teh sochdi hoyi mooh ghuma Raj val vekhdi, teh Raj jehda edar hi vekh riha si, has deh hoye dubara lovleen nu akh marr dinda, teh lovleen es vaar thoda muskra ke screen val vekhan lagdi, par ohda dhiyaan Vickey teh Preeti val hi hunda, teh vich vich Raj val vi vekhdi jehda osde sareer val hi vekh riha hunda teh dove thodi bahut vaar muskra chuke si, ik duje nu vekh.

Teh Jad lovleen Preeti hora val vekhdi jehde apni masti vich mast di, uddo Raj himmat Kar apna hath lovleen deh Patt teh rakh dinda, lovleen nu ehsaas hunda par boldi kuch nahi, teh jad Raj Patt plosan lagda, lovleen os val vekh apne hath naal osda hath hataunde hoye "ki karda, dur reh mere toh" bhave lavleen nu vi change lagga si

Raj lovleen deh man kole mooh Kar "kujh nahi malko, bass swaad dinda si tuhanu thoda"

"Kutta nah hove, movie dekh chup karke, aya vadda swad den wala" keh lovleen guess da natak kar, screen val vekhan lagdi, teh thoda muskra dindi jisnu Raj vi vekh lainda

Udar Preeti da yaar dove Hatha vich Preeti deh dove mommiya nu fad ghutn lagda teh Preeti sisakde hoye "ahh, thoda Aram naal, agg lah ditti tuc, ahi Kam Karna si, teh movie dekhan jarrori auna si"

"Bhencho, kehndi teh chhad dinda, vekh leh movie" Vickey swad lainda Hoya bolda

Teh edar  Raj dubara lovleen deh Patt teh hath rakh plosan lagda, teh es vaar lovleen ik vaar os val vekhdi par boldi kuch nahi

Raj lovleen deh poore Patt teh hath ghumnde teh plosada hoye bolda "bahut naram neh yaar Patt tere, kinne Maja aa riha ehna nu fad ke, kashh chumban nu mil jaan teh "

Lovleen Raj val vekhdi jis neh last line osde mommiya nu vekh boli si, "chup karke movie dekhi Jah, bahuta bolan di lod nahi" teh mud screen val vekhan lagdi par Raj deh hath nu hataundi nahi kyunki osnu vi Raj da hath Patt teh gumda change lag riha si

Udar Preeti Vickey deh hath teh hath rakh ke mommiya teh dabundi hoyi ,"agg lagay movie nu, bass tuc jo karde, karde raho, hayee ajj teh raati chhad di nahi tuhanu, nichod davangi" teh duje hath naal lann nu ghutde hoye "ehdi vi akad Kad dau"

Raj lovleen deh Patt deh gumde hath nu osde lakk teh lija lakk nu ploasde hoye ohde kann kole bolda "jattiye tere jinni sohni rann ni koi hor, sach kehnda bahut sohni eh teh" es vele osda hath lovleen deh lakk toh upar nu janda Hoya ohde top nu utte nu chuk lovleen deh nangay tidd nah kheh janda teh Raj tidd nu thoda hath nal ghut dinda

Lovleen deh sareer andar lehar jahi uthdai teh oh naangay tidd teh pehli vaar kise dah hath lagan naal mast jahi hunde  hoye "pata mainu, dasan di lod nahi  ke main ki aa teh ki nahi"

Raj lovleen deh tidd nu ploasde hoye apna hath osdi nabhi kole lija ohde dubale ghumaunde hoye "nahi, tainu ki pata tu ki cheez aa, Edda hi teh nahi Sara college tere pichhe lagga, ik teh sohni utto Tera ah bomb figure" kehnde hoye lovleen di nabhi vich ungal paa dinda

Lovleen di, pehli vaar mile is ajeeb jihe swaad nal, akha band ho jandiya teh Raj deh val mooh kar kambdi awaz vich "gallan bahut aundiya tainu, college da teh pata nahi, par tera pata kive halkiya firda kutte vaang, besharma vaang kade agayio teh kade picchio turi jandi nu akha fad fad vekhda"  teh mooh dubara screen val Kar Raj di ungal jehdi osdi nabhi nal chedkhani Kar rahi si, da maja lain lagdi

Raj lovleen di nabhi toh ungal Kad, tidd nu ploasde hoye osde mommiya val vadan lagda teh bra da cup jitho suru hunda, uthe momme deh thale hath ferde hoye "halkiya teh app hi firna, jad sahmne Tere vargi hoor hove, Mera teh Dil karda har vele tainu pyar karda Raha"

Lovleen Raj deh hath nu jehda ke osde mommiya nu thale toh touch ho riha si, naal sihar jandi teh ik vaar Raj val vekhdi jehda osde bolla val vekh riha, teh sharam naal akha neeviya Kar "mainu ni Tere pyar di lod, kite hor try Marr"

Raj hath nu lovleen deh tidd teh ferde hoye teh ungla naal osde momme nu ungla naal Holi Holi touch karde hoye "jattiye karana teh Tere naal hi aa pyar, kade apne app nu sheeshe vich meri Nazar naal vekhi, teri akha, Tere bull, Tere dove" kehnde hoye ik-dum mome nu hath vich fad dbaunde hoye "ah pakke amb, Dil karda, tainu pyar Kari java"

Momma daban naal osnu thoda mitha jiha dard teh swad naalo naal aunda teh nal hi hosh jihe vich aa Raj da hath fardi hoyi "pata kehde pyar di galla karda, lovleen naam eh Mera, sabh smajhdi, tere hath nahi aundi eh jatti" kehnde hoye Raj di val vekh apne hath nal osda hath hataun di koshish kardi

Raj duje hath naal lovleen deh hath nu fad teh momme utte rakhe hath nal osde momme nu 4 5 vaar tez tez ghutde hoye "haayee, saaliyee kinne koole momme Tere, ehna vich teh swarg aa, ik vaar saaliyee chuswa deh apde momme" kehnde hoye lovleen deh fade hath nu ungal teh angoothe vicho apne bulla naal choose lainda

Lovleen momme nu Edda ghute jaan naal siskari bhardi hoyi "haaayee" teh Raj deh hath Cho hath chhuda ke teh dove Hatha naal momme teh laggay hath nu hataundi hoyi, "bass bahut ho gaya" kehnde hoye screen val vekhan lagdi jithe ke movie di ending ho rahi si , teh sharam naal horbkuch os kolo boliya nahi gaya, teh ese vele ik dum lights on ho jandiya neh.

Lovleen apne app nu shambdi hoye,  khadi hundi hoyi " utho hun ki ethe hi Dere layi rakhne" kehndi hoyi Raj deh godiya naal khendi hoyi Bahar val turn lagdi.

Raj vi khada ho osde pichhe turda hoyiya "malko number teh deh deo"

Lovleen pichhe mud Raj val vekhde hoye "kyun deh dava, apni aukat vich reh, jiyada banan di lod nahi, kutta nah hove kise than da, number bhalda" kehndi hoyi mooh agay nu Kar muskra dindi

Teh fer dova vich koi gal nahi hundi, kyunki Preeti lag gayi lovleen naal galla karan.

Fer sare pizza khande jis duran bahut vaar Raj teh Lovleen di akha çhar hundiya neh, teh fer sare apne apne Ghar nu chal painde neh.
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Bahut vadhiya shuruaat waiting for next
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(13-09-2022, 10:06 PM)The Devil Lucifer Wrote: Bahut vadhiya shuruaat waiting for next

Bhut sahi ja rhi aa story bs es  hi continue rkho
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Vickey teh Raj Hindi movie 'hate story 4' di ticketa leh lainde neh teh Lovleen teh Preeti di wait Karan lag painde neh.



Preeti teh lovleen naal ohna kole aa "kinne time nu suru honi aa movie"



"Start ho chuki aa 5 ku minta toh, appa pehlay hi late aa, jaldi Chalo andar" kehnda Hoya Vickey agay tur painda



"Kehdi movie dekhan lagay appa" Preeti vi osde magar turdi hoyi puchhadi.



Vickey "Hate story4"



Preeti Lovleen val vekh teh fer Vickey nu "hor koi ni vekh sakde si, enniya movies teh laggiya"



"Yaar timing hi nahi si kise hor movie di es vele, ehdi si eh vi 10 ki mint di lang chuki aa" Vickey kahli jahe ch turda Hoya bolda



Lovleen Preeti deh pichhe turde hoye Mann vich "kithe fasa ditta kutti neh"



Raj es vele lovleen deh naal turda Hoya Mann vich "Chalo Preeti karke hi sahi, lovleen naal movie dekhan nu teh mili, nahi teh bhainchod 2 saal ho chuke gal Karan layi vi taras gaya si, ghatto ghat movie bahane kuch time ehde naal behan nu teh milu"



Andar hall lag-bhag Khali hi hunda, teh Vickey seat number check karda Hoya last wali duji teeji katar vich varh janda teh akir vich diwar deh naal wali seat teh beh janda



Preeti Vickey deh naal wali seat utte beh jandi teh fer lovleen teh last vich lovleen kole Raj beh janda.



Movie start hoye 15 mint ho chuke si, teh Raj screen val ghat teh lovleen val jiyada vekh riha si.



Lovleen nu vi pata hunda Raj ose val vekh riha, teh kayi vaar akha ghuma Raj val vekhdi jehda kade osde momme teh kade Patt vekh riha si, teh sochdi "kutta idda vekh riha jive kha hi jau, Sala besharm kise than da, ehdi maa movie edar laggi aa ke sahmane"



Raj di vi Nazar ik vaar lovleen naal mildi teh hasde hoye lovleen nu akh Marr dinda, jis naal lovleen nu thoda gussa aa janda, par oh bina kuch bole sahmane screen val vekhan lagdi. Jado vi Movie vich sex scene aunda teh lovleen di Nazar kole baithe Raj nal mildii teh sharam teh guess nal Lal ho jandi kyunki Raj os nu vekh kade akh Marr dinda si, teh kade bulla teh jeeb fer dinda, teh pehli vaar apne naal Edda hunda vekh kite nah kite lovleen nu vi Maja aa riha hunda.



Enne nu half time ho janda teh charo alap vich gal kar uthe hi baithe rehnde, kyunki kise da kuch khan da Dil nahi si.



Raj es time mauka dekh holi jihe lovleen nu "bahut sohni lag rahi yaar ajj teh"



Lovleen Raj nu vekh "main sohni hi aa, tu apne vich reh, tamasha nah banva lavi apna ethe" teh Preeti val mooh karke galla Karan lag paindi.



Movie dubara start ho jandi teh thode time baad lovleen Preeti val vekhdi, jehdi es vele Vickey deh hath nu apne patta toh hataunde hoye holi jahi boli c "Rehan deo jaan, lovleen kole baithi aa"



Vickey Preeti deh Patt toh hath chuk osda mooh nu hath naal fad apne val guma "bhencho chup chap baithi reh, mera swad nah kharab Kar, smajh gayi, sali toh galla jinni Marzi sun lao, Edda Karo ah ho jau, udda Karo, oh ho jau bhainchoo" kehnde hoye ik pal layi Preeti deh bull Chum lainde, teh fer sidha baith deh hoye apna hath Preeti deh patta vichkar fasa lainda



Lovleen kade ohna val vekhdi teh kade screen val. Raj da Sara dhiyaan lovleen val hunda



Vickey apne duje hath naal Preeti da momma farh gutt dinda jis naal Preeti di sisak nikal jandi, teh Vickey apne hath naal poora momma farh ploasde hoye "saali naale swaad layi jandi, teh naale nakhre kardi" jisnu lovleen vi sun laindi teh hass paindi



"Hayee Holi jaan, nakhre kado kardi, bass thoda Holi guttan nu nahi keh sakdi, lovleen neh sun liya fer, raati vi teh ghutt deh oh zor naal, kade rokiya tuhanu, haaye Holi Karo, ik teh sunde ni tuc kade meri"



"Tu bahute drame nah Kar, chup karke lann farh leh Mera, thoda ploas bhincho akadiya piya," Vickey apne ik hath naal momme ploasde hoye teh duje naal Preeti di salwar utto osdi fuddi nu maslada hoya bolda



"Farhh laini aa jaan, lulla udda akad da kado nahi, har vele teh sirr chuki rakhda eh" teh lannn deh hath rakh pant utto fardan di koshish kardi hoyi "sachii eh teh poora khada, hayee Ghar hundi teh leh laindi andar ehnu"



Lovleen vi ehna di harkata vekh garam hundi hoyi sochdi "kutti, luchhi aa poori, kive swaad laindi, ehnu vekh teh lagda es Kam naalo jiyada swaad hi nahi kite, mainu vi pata nahi kinhoyi janda, Sachi kehndi Preeti, lulla agay hove teh shareefi da bhoot app hi utar janda" teh sochdi hoyi mooh ghuma Raj val vekhdi, teh Raj jehda edar hi vekh riha si, has deh hoye dubara lovleen nu akh marr dinda, teh lovleen es vaar thoda muskra ke screen val vekhan lagdi, par ohda dhiyaan Vickey teh Preeti val hi hunda, teh vich vich Raj val vi vekhdi jehda osde sareer val hi vekh riha hunda teh dove thodi bahut vaar muskra chuke si, ik duje nu vekh.



Teh Jad lovleen Preeti hora val vekhdi jehde apni masti vich mast di, uddo Raj himmat Kar apna hath lovleen deh Patt teh rakh dinda, lovleen nu ehsaas hunda par boldi kuch nahi, teh jad Raj Patt plosan lagda, lovleen os val vekh apne hath naal osda hath hataunde hoye "ki karda, dur reh mere toh" bhave lavleen nu vi change lagga si



Raj lovleen deh man kole mooh Kar "kujh nahi malko, bass swaad dinda si tuhanu thoda"



"Kutta nah hove, movie dekh chup karke, aya vadda swad den wala" keh lovleen guess da natak kar, screen val vekhan lagdi, teh thoda muskra dindi jisnu Raj vi vekh lainda



Udar Preeti da yaar dove Hatha vich Preeti deh dove mommiya nu fad ghutn lagda teh Preeti sisakde hoye "ahh, thoda Aram naal, agg lah ditti tuc, ahi Kam Karna si, teh movie dekhan jarrori auna si"



"Bhencho, kehndi teh chhad dinda, vekh leh movie" Vickey swad lainda Hoya bolda



Teh edar Raj dubara lovleen deh Patt teh hath rakh plosan lagda, teh es vaar lovleen ik vaar os val vekhdi par boldi kuch nahi



Raj lovleen deh poore Patt teh hath ghumnde teh plosada hoye bolda "bahut naram neh yaar Patt tere, kinne Maja aa riha ehna nu fad ke, kashh chumban nu mil jaan teh "



Lovleen Raj val vekhdi jis neh last line osde mommiya nu vekh boli si, "chup karke movie dekhi Jah, bahuta bolan di lod nahi" teh mud screen val vekhan lagdi par Raj deh hath nu hataundi nahi kyunki osnu vi Raj da hath Patt teh gumda change lag riha si



Udar Preeti Vickey deh hath teh hath rakh ke mommiya teh dabundi hoyi ,"agg lagay movie nu, bass tuc jo karde, karde raho, hayee ajj teh raati chhad di nahi tuhanu, nichod davangi" teh duje hath naal lann nu ghutde hoye "ehdi vi akad Kad dau"



Raj lovleen deh Patt deh gumde hath nu osde lakk teh lija lakk nu ploasde hoye ohde kann kole bolda "jattiye tere jinni sohni rann ni koi hor, sach kehnda bahut sohni eh teh" es vele osda hath lovleen deh lakk toh upar nu janda Hoya ohde top nu utte nu chuk lovleen deh nangay tidd nah kheh janda teh Raj tidd nu thoda hath nal ghut dinda



Lovleen deh sareer andar lehar jahi uthdai teh oh naangay tidd teh pehli vaar kise dah hath lagan naal mast jahi hunde hoye "pata mainu, dasan di lod nahi ke main ki aa teh ki nahi"



Raj lovleen deh tidd nu ploasde hoye apna hath osdi nabhi kole lija ohde dubale ghumaunde hoye "nahi, tainu ki pata tu ki cheez aa, Edda hi teh nahi Sara college tere pichhe lagga, ik teh sohni utto Tera ah bomb figure" kehnde hoye lovleen di nabhi vich ungal paa dinda



Lovleen di, pehli vaar mile is ajeeb jihe swaad nal, akha band ho jandiya teh Raj deh val mooh kar kambdi awaz vich "gallan bahut aundiya tainu, college da teh pata nahi, par tera pata kive halkiya firda kutte vaang, besharma vaang kade agayio teh kade picchio turi jandi nu akha fad fad vekhda" teh mooh dubara screen val Kar Raj di ungal jehdi osdi nabhi nal chedkhani Kar rahi si, da maja lain lagdi



Raj lovleen di nabhi toh ungal Kad, tidd nu ploasde hoye osde mommiya val vadan lagda teh bra da cup jitho suru hunda, uthe momme deh thale hath ferde hoye "halkiya teh app hi firna, jad sahmne Tere vargi hoor hove, Mera teh Dil karda har vele tainu pyar karda Raha"



Lovleen Raj deh hath nu jehda ke osde mommiya nu thale toh touch ho riha si, naal sihar jandi teh ik vaar Raj val vekhdi jehda osde bolla val vekh riha, teh sharam naal akha neeviya Kar "mainu ni Tere pyar di lod, kite hor try Marr"



Raj hath nu lovleen deh tidd teh ferde hoye teh ungla naal osde momme nu ungla naal Holi Holi touch karde hoye "jattiye karana teh Tere naal hi aa pyar, kade apne app nu sheeshe vich meri Nazar naal vekhi, teri akha, Tere bull, Tere dove" kehnde hoye ik-dum mome nu hath vich fad dbaunde hoye "ah pakke amb, Dil karda, tainu pyar Kari java"



Momma daban naal osnu thoda mitha jiha dard teh swad naalo naal aunda teh nal hi hosh jihe vich aa Raj da hath fardi hoyi "pata kehde pyar di galla karda, lovleen naam eh Mera, sabh smajhdi, tere hath nahi aundi eh jatti" kehnde hoye Raj di val vekh apne hath nal osda hath hataun di koshish kardi



Raj duje hath naal lovleen deh hath nu fad teh momme utte rakhe hath nal osde momme nu 4 5 vaar tez tez ghutde hoye "haayee, saaliyee kinne koole momme Tere, ehna vich teh swarg aa, ik vaar saaliyee chuswa deh apde momme" kehnde hoye lovleen deh fade hath nu ungal teh angoothe vicho apne bulla naal choose lainda



Lovleen momme nu Edda ghute jaan naal siskari bhardi hoyi "haaayee" teh Raj deh hath Cho hath chhuda ke teh dove Hatha naal momme teh laggay hath nu hataundi hoyi, "bass bahut ho gaya" kehnde hoye screen val vekhan lagdi jithe ke movie di ending ho rahi si , teh sharam naal horbkuch os kolo boliya nahi gaya, teh ese vele ik dum lights on ho jandiya neh.



Lovleen apne app nu shambdi hoye, khadi hundi hoyi " utho hun ki ethe hi Dere layi rakhne" kehndi hoyi Raj deh godiya naal khendi hoyi Bahar val turn lagdi.



Raj vi khada ho osde pichhe turda hoyiya "malko number teh deh deo"



Lovleen pichhe mud Raj val vekhde hoye "kyun deh dava, apni aukat vich reh, jiyada banan di lod nahi, kutta nah hove kise than da, number bhalda" kehndi hoyi mooh agay nu Kar muskra dindi



Teh fer dova vich koi gal nahi hundi, kyunki Preeti lag gayi lovleen naal galla karan.



Fer sare pizza khande jis duran bahut vaar Raj teh Lovleen di akha çhar hundiya neh, teh fer sare apne apne Ghar nu chal painde neh.
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Update 3 (Kahani deh ik hor patar di entery)







Lovleen scooty ghar deh gate kole lah andar aa apni mummy jehdi tv vekh rahi si nu boldi "main son laggi mom, thank gayi bahut"







"Ni beh Jah kole 10 mint, apdi maa kole vi beh Jaya Kar kade" Sukhjot lovleen nu kole paye sofe val ishara kardi boldi







"Ki aa mom, Chalo dasso ki kehnde oh" lovleen vi sofe teh behndi boldi







"Kehna ki aa, udda ni baha sakdi tainu kole" lovleen di maa osnu gussa jiha hundi boldi "nale dasna si tainu Rupi aa riha apne kol kuch Dina layi"







Rupinder Singh lovleen deh dadkiya vicho si, lovleen deh dade deh bhara da pota, hune BA karke hatiya si. Teh pind rehnda si, (ehde vaare detail khani vich agay naal di naal milu)







"Sachi mom, bahut time ho gaya ohnu mile teh, kado aa riha" lovleen khush hunde hoye boldi







"Pata ni, 1-2 Dina vich auna sayad, eh angrezi da koi paper dena ohne, ohde karke aa riha" Sukhjot lovleen nu dekhdi hoyi boldi "kehnda si thoda time ethe hi rahu"







Lovleen khush hunde hoye "oh haan, dass riha so jad asi last year pind Gaye si ke IELTS karni ohne, BA toh baad, Canada Jana chaunda oh paradan layi"







"Pata nahi, enni gal nahi hoyi meri, udda kinne Dina da hunda eh angrezi da paper" Sukhjot lovleen val vekhdi hoyi boli







"Mom, exam teh ik din da hi hunda, Baki classes neh, oh pata nahi kinne din di launiya neh ohne" lovleen kuch soch ke "sayad 1 mahine di Lau, udda English wadea ohdi, sayad 2 hafte hi lave"







Sukhjot "chal 2 hafte ki 2 mahine, bahane naal munda reh teh jau Sade kole, nahi teh aunda Kad aa oh, eid da Chand hi aa"







"Hanji mom, eh gal teh hai, Asi kinni vaar pind Jah aye, Chacha ji vi kinni vaar aye ethe, par oh nahi kade Aya, aunda vi teh ghante-do ghante vich murh janda, hun IELTS karke fass gaya, rehna hi Paina hun teh" lovleen hasdi hoyi boldi







"Acha mom, main thoda rest Karan laggi, main chali apne room vich" khadi ho paudiya val turdi hoyi lovleen boldi teh upar duji manzil teh bane apne room val tur paindi.







Room vich aa ke bina kapde badle hi bed teh lami paindi hoyi, ajj joh movie hall vich Hoya si os vaare sochan lagdi "kive kutta putt riha si mere mommiya nu" mommiya teh hath rakh ohna nu ploasde jihe hoye "kidda ghutt riha si, mere teh saah hi ruk chale si, par Maja vi kinna Aya jad osda hath mere tidd, lakk teh mommiya teh si" apne momme nu thoda ghutdi hoyi "kutta kehnda pyar Karna mainu, jive main bachi aa, smajh nu aunda kehde pyar Diya galla karda" sochde hoye hass paindi "kutta number bhalda si, dass main koi Edda di kuri aa, kuri teh main bathere rohb teh akad wali aa, ajj pata ni kutte deh hath kive Pai gayi" akha band Kar Raj vaare sochdi hoyi "kutta kado da magar piya, Hain teh sohna, ucha lamba, bass dekhda bahut Ganda, pata ni vekh ke ki ki gand mand sochda hou" lamba jiha saah leh "hor ki sochana kutte neh, jatti deh husan di nighh maran vaare sochda hou, kutta kehnda mere vargi rann ni kade vekhi" teh apne app di tareef kardi hoyi boldi "jatti vargi dekhani kitho, iko I'm teh Jami mapiya neh" teh fer Edda sochde sochde osdi akh lag jandi







Ghante ku baad osdi akh osde mobile di ghanti vajan naal khuldi, mobile labhdi hoyi "Masa akh laggi si, eh mobile vi nah" sochde hoye apni Jean di pocket vicho mobile Kad di teh number vekh ik-dum khush hunde hoye , call chukdi hoyi "Kive kaka, kitho yaad aa gayi meri"







Udaro Rupi hasde hoye "ki yaar Didi tuc vi Edda bolde jive app har Roz hi call karde"







Lovleen vi hasde hoye "bandara, ajj number kive mil gaya mobile toh, mainu hi call karni si, Jah galti naal lag gaya"







"Nahi di, tuhanu hi karni si call teh,chhado sabh eh dasso kive oh tuc" Rupi gal badalde hoye bolda







Lovleen "main teh theek aa, tu apna dass, kive yaad aa gayi meri"







Rupi "main vi wadea, main puchhana si tuhanu ke Kal ki karde, ese layi call kiti"







"Main ki Karna, ohi college Jana bass, tu dass Kam si ki koi" lovleen thoda serious hundi hoyi boldi







"Hanji, Kal main auna tuhade kole, teh jeh tuc free hunde teh ah IELTS di coaching layi puchh lainde asi kise center toh" Rupi jawab dinda







"Oh sach mom dass rahe si ajj ke 1-2 Dina vich tu auna angrezi da paper den layi, mainu cheta hi bhul gaya, Kal savere aa auna ki tu" lovleen sochde hoye boldi







"Nahi nahi, savere nahi, main 12 ki vaje pujj jana bus stand teh, savere 10 vaje di bus aa" Rupi bus da time table dasde hoye bolda







"Theek aa fer, main Edda kardi savere giyarah, Sade giyarah vaje Tak jehdi class lagdi lah ke tainu bus stand teh mildi aa, utho ikathe pehlay Ghar avangay, tu mom nu mil layi, nale smaan Ghar rakh dayi,teh fer lunch karke Chala gay appa coaching center teh gal Karan layi, kyun theek aa nah" lovleen Rupi toh puchhadi







"Theek aa di, fer main bus adde teh milda tuhanu" Rupi vi hami bharda bolda







"Bus adda ki hunda, bus stand hunda, edda teh ho gayi Teri IELTS" Lovleen hasde hoye Rupi nu chherde hoye boldi







"Ahoo pata mainu di, nale tuc thode Mera exam laina, jehda Lau ohde sahmane bus stand hi boluga" hasde hoye Rupi jawab dinda







"Chal theek aa bandra, main mom nu dass deva, Kal milde fer bus adde teh" hasde hoye boli







"Ok di, see you tomorrow" angrezi bolde hoye jawab dinda







"Jaldi hi akal aa gayi lagda, ok see you then" kehnde hoye lovleen call cut Kar dindi teh fer apni mom nu os teh Rupi vich Jo gal hoyi dass dindi







Sukhjot "Edda kar Kal tu college da Rehan dayi, appa mil ke thoda saaf safayi Kar lavangi, teh naale thoda smaan leh me aun wala, oh leh avangay"







Lovleen "Nahi mom, meri classes bahut jarrori neh" shami leh avangai jehda smaan leh ke auna main, Rupi naal coaching center toh baad Ghar aunde hoye"







"Chal theek aa, gusse kyun hundi aa, list deh dau, tu leh Avi aunde hoye" Sukhjot lovleen nu gusse hundi vekh boldi







"Main cha bna ke liyanui aa, tuc baithi" kehnde hoye kitchen val jandi hoyi sochdi "Sachi gussa aa gaya si ki mainu, main teh college Jah ke bass Raj nu thoda chidauna chaundi si, ajj da badla laina chaundi si kutte toh, mom naal udda hi gusse ho gayi, ki Sochi Jani main vi, college nahi jandi Kal, eh vi badla hi aa, machda rahu Sara din kutta" sochde hoye kitchen vich varde hoye "Theek aa mom, main chali tuhade naal savere, Rupi deh aun toh pehlay leh avangay Jo leh auna"

Kehndi hoyi kitchen vich vardh jandi
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Story vadhiya hai, regular update rakhin
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Vadhiya Ba Kamaal
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Dhanbaad veero next update soon
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Nice story
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Update 4



Duje din apni mummy naal shopping toh baad lovleen bus-adde teh pujj apni scooty stand teh laundi hoyi sochdi "time teh ho hi gaya, pata ni kinna time wait karni Pau, call teh teh Rupi kehnda si ke 10 mint vich aa javegi bus" scooty stand teh lah bus-adde andar jandi hoyi "ajj college jandi teh, Raj di khichayi kardi, bahut akha marniya aundiya nah kutte nu, ajj dasdi ki hunda kuri jado badla laindi, bahut tang kita, Hun meri vaari"

Bus adde teh khade sabh munday ki buddhe vi lovleen nu hi taad rahe si, akha fad fad Eve dekh rahe so jive akha naal hi nangi Kar dengay. Lovleen neh ghutwa chitta top paya Hoya si jis vicho goorhe rang di Kali bra di chhalak vi dis rahi si teh Kali  Kasi hoyi legging vich osde Patt teh chittar apni poori shape dikha rahe si. Lovleen nu vi adde teh khade loka di Nazar da ehsaas si teh turdi hoyi bus adde teh edar udar Nazar ghumandi hoyi sochdi "kutte kive dekh rahe neh, kive deh gande Loki neh, saale apni shakal nahi vekhde, laggay neh ghooran, Preeti sahi kehndi dekh hi teh sakde neh vichaare, hath teh auni nahi, ethe kehda koi janda mainu" sochdi hoyi apni chaal nu thoda Holi kardi hoyi lakk mataka ke cat walk Karan lagdi, teh high heels karke osda lakk kuch jiyada hi madak da, teh sahmne vekhdi hoyi "lao kuttiyo, tarso jatti di matakdi gagar vargi vekh, hayee Sach kehndi Preeti bada swaad aunda mundiya nu tarsaun vich, par ethe teh munday ki buddhe, kutte sare hi maran wale hoye paye neh"

Teh lovleen Jado turdi hoyi side toh vekhdi teh bus vicho ik munda utar riha si, lovleen ik pal os munday nu vekhdi jehda clean shave si, 6 foot teh Bob cut karwiya si, halki halki dahdi si, bahut sohna lag riha si, jisnu vekh lovleen di chaal thorha slow ho jandi teh jidda hi munda os val vekhan lagda teh lovleen thoda hor lachak naal turdi hoyi agay mooh Kardi hoyi "kinna sohna munda ah, poora hero lagda, kade dhiyaan hi nahi ditta, enne sohne munday vi hunde, Kal da ki ho gaya mainu, jatti di chaal vekhda hou, hayee pichhe mud ke vekh vi nahi sakdi, jatti di akad aa, par expression teh vekh lava ik vaar munday da"

Oh munda  koi hor nahi, Rupi hunda jis neh hune hune vaal katwaye si, teh clean shave Hoya si teh jive hi osdi Nazar sahmne turi jandi lovleen teh paindi jisdi ke back hi dis rahi si nu vekhde hoye sochda "kiddi att rann aa, bhainchod Edda di fass jave, bund saali di kinni vaddi aa, vakhiya deh cut, khule lame vaal, teh tor teh saali di, lann khada karwa ditta, kinna nazaara au ehdi nangi bund teh hath feran vich" sochda Hoya apne mobile toh lovleen nu call Mila dinda par Nazar osdi haale vi sahmane turi jandi kuri di bund teh hi hundi

Lovleen deh hath vich farhe mobile vich jive hi Rupi di call aundi oh call chukan toh pehlay nah chaunde hoye ik vaar pichhe mud ke vekhdi teh oh munda osde chittara val hi Jah fer poori back val vekh riha si, munday nu vekh apna mooh agay Kar khad jandi teh mobile teh call chukdi hoyi "haan, Rupi kithe aa, main bus adde teh wait kardi kado di"

Rupi neh, jado lovleen neh pichhe vekhiya si, uddo pachhan lainda teh sochda "bhainchod eh teh lovleen di aa, ki ki Sochi janda si, bhainchod hi aa main, di neh vekh teh nahi liya mainu ohna di back dekhde hoye" teh lovleen di awz mobile Cho sun apni pith lovleen val kar "di main, ethe stop 5 teh khada, tuc kithe oh"

Lovleen vekhdi ke oh stop number 12-13 kole si, teh sahmne number vadh rahe si, teh pichhe murh stop number 5 val turdi hoyi "ruk, main udar hi aa rahi, Par tu dis teh riha ni kite"

Rupi vi ale dwale vekhan da natak karda Hoya apne app nu piche nu ghumaunde hoye "main teh stop 5 teh hi aa" teh lovleen nu sahmane toh vekhde hour "oh vekh liya main tuhanu" kehnde hoye call cut dinda teh lovleen val jande hoye osde sareer nu agio vekhde hoye "di teh bahut sohni aa, kidda kaim figure aa di da, bhainchod fer ohi sochan lagga, teh mooh teh muskaan liyaunde hoye lovleen jehdi bilkul ohde kole aa gayi si, nu bulaunde hoye "di, good noon, kive oh"

Lovleen jehdi ke os munday nu hi ture aunde chori chori vekh rahi si sahmne toh aunde hoye, soch rahi si "haye sachii eh teh bahut hi sohna, kinne munday college vich Edda da teh koi vi nahi, Kash Sade college hi parda hunda, kutte nu vekh ki ki Sochi Jani aa, mainu ki jithe Marzi pard da hove"

Teh sahmne munday val vekhdi hoyi "rupi tu aa" teh ik dum chup ho jandi, smajh nahi aa riha si ki bole, sharaminda vi si ke apde bhara nu hi apne chittar matka matka ke dikha rahi si

Rupi hasde hoye "main hi aa, ki di pachaniya ni mainu"

Lovleen vi apne app teh kabu kardi hoyi "kidda pachhan di", osde vaala vich hath Mardi hoyi "vaal kithe Gaye, pachhandi kive pehli vaar teh vekhiya Edda tainu"

Rupi "Chalo Hun teh pachhan liya, Chalo Hun Ghar chalde"

Lovleen vi guri nu vekhdi hoyi "ahoo Ghar hi Jana, eddi ki kahal payi tainu" kehndi hoyi guri deh agay ho turdi hoyi side val nu murdi hoyi "scooty Bahar hi khadi aa, chal chaliye"

Lovleen jive hi agay turdi Rupi di Nazar fer ohdi hildi bund teh paindi par es vele os vich madak ghat si teh sochda "di di bund teh Sachi bahut sohni aa, nere toh teh kehar hi dhaa rahi aa"

Sahmane aunde munde jehre lovleen nu ghoor rahe si nu vekhde hoye lovleen ik dum sochdi "jad Rupi di call ayi si, main pichhe mud ke vekhiya si, Rupi meri back hi vekh riha si, ki Rupi vi mainu vekh galat hi soch riha si" teh ik dum pichhe mud ke vekhdi teh rupi fer osdi bund hi vekh riha si teh ik dum mooh agay Kar "soch hi riha hona, kutta nu pata bhain aa fer vi kive nigah tikayi hoyi"

Teh dove bina bole scooty kole aa jande neh (dass deva pehlay vi dove galbaat ghatt hi karde si, Jah keh lavo Kade swabh ni baniya jiyada ik duje naal jiyada bolan da par mobile teh gall kafi Kar lainde si)

Lovleen scooty di chhabi Rupi nu fadaunde hoye "eh leh chabi, chala"

Rupi chabi farde hoye "ki di, hune hune teh Aya, aunde hi Kam teh lah deo"

Lovleen vi hasdi hoyi "ethe kehda khet neh Jo kanaka nu pani laun nu kiha, chup karke scooty Chala"

Rupi scooty start karda teh lovleen osde piche dove pase latta Kar behndi hoyi "chal"

Rupi scooty chalde hoye Ghar val nu chal painde teh vich vich lovleen naal gall Kar riha si ke achaanak sahmne gaddi rukdi jis karke oh vi brake launda teh pichhe baithi lovleen os naal Jud jandi teh ohde momme Rupi di pith naal lag jande neh teh ehda ehsaas dova nu hunda teh Rupi sochda "kinne soft momme lag rahe di deh, bhainchod bhain aa meri, ki gand  Sochi Jana"

Lovleen sochdi "kutte gaddiwale neh vi hune brake launi so, poora zor di vajji Rupi vich, mere momme teh poorer dabb Gaye si, Rupi pata ni ki sochda hou" teh Rupi nu gusse jihe vich "Holi ni Chala hundi, eddi ki train chutt chali Teri, Ghar hi teh Jah rahe"

"Di oh agay brake layi ohne gaddiwale neh ik dum, main teh Holi hi aa" Rupi bolda

Teh fer dove bina gal Kare toh Ghar pujj jande neh

Lovleen Ghar pujj scooty toh thale utardi hoyi rupi nu vekhdi hoyi "chal lah stand teh Jana ni Hun andar, uddo di teh kahal payi so tainu"

Rupi vi scooty khada smaan chuk andar jande hoye "ki aa di, kyu Khan nu Pai rahe oh"

Kehnda Hoya lovleen toh agay lang Ghar andar varh janda

Lovleen magar magar turdi hoyi "main gussa ho rahi, par kyun" sochdi hoyi Ghar andar aa jandi

Rupi apni tayi Sukhjot nu milde hoye pairi hath laundey hoye "Chachi ji, kive oh"

"Aa gaya mera putt, beh main kuch leh ke aundi Tere layi" kehndi hoyi khadi ho kitchen val jandi

"Ahoo bahut thakk gaya putt tera, scooty Chala ke aya" kehndi hoyi lovleen hass Paindi

Sukhjot "tu kise time chup ni reh sakdi, Sara din jubaan chaldi hi rehndi Teri" kehnde hoye kitchen val tur paindi

"Main chali room vich, lunch vele bula Leo mainu, lunch karke Rupi naal jana fer main" kehndi hoyi paindiya val tur paindi

Rupi lovleen nu paudiya charge hoye dekhde hoye "haye paudiya chardi hoyi didi di back poori matakdi, kinni sexy aa di, Patt teh hayee, bhainchod di teh poori gadar rann aa, ehne teh socha vich mainu bhainchod neh bhainchod hi bana ditta"

Lovleen paudiya chardi jad last wali paudi chardan lagdi teh ik pal layi thale mooh ghuma vekhdi, jithe Rupi ohdi turdi deh lakk di minti Kar riha si, teh fer apne room vich chale jandi

Room vich bed teh puthi lami paindi hoyi "Rupi kinna sohna, main teh bus-adde teh soch rahi si ke eh munda mere college parda hove, par eh teh mere hi Ghar Rehan aa gaya, ki ki Sochan lagaa dita kutte neh, par app kehda ghatt aa luchha aa poora, mauka milda nahi (teh apne chittar teh hath ferdi hoyi) ke meri piyari back nu ghooran lagda, meri gagar neh teh mere pra nu vi mera deewana bana ditta, ki Sochi Jani, Rupi neh bhave Edda da kuch nah sochiya hove, sochiya kyun nahi, oh kutta teh Hun paudiya chardi deh vi lakk di ginti minti Karan lagga si, kutta aa poora, Suniya si munday bhainchod hunde apni hi bhaina teh akh rakhde neh, ajj mehsoos vi Kar liya. Par koi nahi bhain eddi sohni sanukhi hove, akh rakh sakda pra, akh hi rakhe kite bhain nu lami paa bhainchod nah banan di sochda hove"

Teh fer bed teh behndi hoyi "kinni gandi bana ditta mainu, kutta hai vi teh enna sohna, jeh Mera bhara nah hunda teh" teh fer apni gardan chatkdi hoyi "ki bhara nah hunda teh ki lami Pai jandi, main Shareef jatti aa, Edda da kuch nahi" teh fer Preeti di gal yaad kardi hoyi "lull khada salamiya dinda hove teh shareefi kile tangi jandi" sochdi hoyi hass paindi, fer kuch soch bathroom val tur paindi
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#19
Amazing story tunn tunn ke kaam bharya love it
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#20
Nice story speechleds
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