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hello dosto
main ik nwi kahani start krn ja rhi aa. jo aam kahaniyaa to thodi vakhri hai. tuhanu sab nu pta hai ke har ik insan de andar ik janwar hunda hai. us janwar de gun aogun sanu aam hi dekhn nu milde han. jiwe kise bahader insan nu sher vrga kehnde hn. je koi shareef howe ta vichara gau vrga. chalak nu loombarh vrga te bewkoof nu khote vrga keha janda hai. matlab ke insan de andar luke janwar de subhaw da asr insan si jindgi vich dekhn nu milda.
meri kahani ik esi mutiyar di kahani hai jis de andar ik kutti(bitch) hundi hai. jado oh jawan ho jandi hai ta kiwe usde andarli kutti bahr aundi hai te oh ki ki krdi hai eh sb kahani vich padn nu milega. umeed aa ke tuc menu full suport kronge & cmnts kr ke eh v dsso kahani pinglish vch aawe ta punjabi fonts vch.
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Hnn g rpindr aaun do punjabi ch hove nd plzz req aa update tym go tym hove or vich na shdyo story plzz
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waiting but plz continues rakheo te ha plz update regular rakheo
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eh kahani hai punjaban mutiyar kamal di jo pind vich jammi pali hai. +2 pind de school to krn to bad graduation krn lyi city vch aa gyi. usda bapu Jasdev singh jassa usnu kise PG shad gya c. kamal hun tk first division vch pas hundi aayi c. es lyi usde bapu nu umeed c ke kamal pad likh ke khandan da naam roshan krugi. es lyi oh usdi study upr bht kharch kr reha c. jasse de 2 bache hi han. kudi kamal munda jot. kamal suru to hi padayi vch tez c par jot usto bilkul ulat c. jot nu niki umar to kutte rkhn da shonk c. oh v khunkhaar te ladai vale. jasse ne keha hoya c ke je kutte rkhne han ta vaade vch rkh. ghare kutta nhi auna chahida. kamal nu v kutte wdiaa lgde sn oh jd v koi nwa kutta aunda ta ohnu changi trah dekh k aundi. usnu aap nu v koi pta nhi c ke oh eh kyu dekhn jndi aa. bss nwe aaye kutte da pta lgde hi oh ghar te vaade de vichkarla gate kholdi te bhjj k kuta dekhn chli jndi. jdo kamal 10th class vch c ta jot ik nikka jeha katura leke aaya. jis diya aje akha v nhi khulliaa sn. kamal nu us kature da bda moh aaya. oh usnu chuk ke ghar le aayi. jasse ne v kamal nu kutta rakhn di manzoori de diti.kamal ne usda naam jackkie rkhya. jackkie v kamal da bda moh krda c. kyi vr oh laad krda kamal de bulla te v jeeb fer jnda. kamal de srir vch ik taar jehi fir jndi. 2 saal bd kamal ne +2 pas kr lyi. oh agge pdna chahundi c. jasse ne dhee di reejh puri krn lyi bathinde collage vch dakhil krwa dita. collage de nede hi ik PG vch usde rehn da intjam kr dita. us pg vch 3 kudia jassi, meenu te neha vi sn. jo kafi modren sn te holi holi kamal v una vch ghul mil gyi. kamal diya room mate chalu hi sn te una 2 mahine de vch hi kamal di seal v apne ashiqa tu tudwa diti. kamal sb to sohni te gundwe sarir di malik c. 3na vcho koi v jdo apne bf nu miln jandi ta nl kamal nu hi leke jandi. una de bf de nal koi hor munda c jrur hunda. kyi vr ta 2-2 munde v hunde. kamal di room mate apne bf nal lg jandi te usde bf de nal aaye munde kamal nu thokde. kamal da apna koi pkka bf nhi c. pr apniaa 3no room mate de bf te una de sare yaara kolo chud chuki c. kyi vr ta kamal meenu hora nu aap kehndi ke yrrrr mangwa lo kise nu. sukhi meenu jdo usnu kehndiaa sali bhut kutti aa tu. sara din lun bhaaldi rehni a. kamal nu apne bare kutti sun ke bdi ajeeb jehi feeling aundi. ik din sham nu achanak pind to usda chacha chachi aaye te usnu jldi nal pind challn lyi keha. kamal ikdum hairan hoyi ta una ne dssya ke teri mummy de digg ke satt lg gyi hai. kamal jldi vch apne kpde wala bag leke una nl car vch beth gyi. raste vch chachi ne kamal nu ronde hoye dsya ke teri mummy sanu shad gyi. kamal sun k sunn ho gyi. pind aake mummy se sanskaar to bhog tk kamal da ro ro ke bura haal ho giya c. bhog to 15 din bad tk kamal di bhua una kol rhi. oh sari raat kamal nu apni hikk nl lake sondi. kamal holi holi smbhl gyi. kamal ne apne bapu nu keha k main hun ghr reh k private hi padungi. jassa aap v tutt chuka c. usne v dhee nu door krna thik na smjhya. jot nal jake kamal de pg vcho usda saman chukwa liyaya. pind aake kamal ghar de kamma vch rujh gayi. kamal de jan to bd jot ne usda jackkie v kise nu de dita c. eh pta lggn te oh myus jehi ho gyi. jot nu apni galti da ehsas hoya. usne jldi hi usnu jackkie vrga kutta liya k den da vaada kita.
english font vich pehli koshish hai.
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Nice
Tuse instagram uper v post karo
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Bhut sohni story aa please update kro
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Very good start
Writing skills
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Bahut hi vadiya shuruwaat... animal instict nu bakhubi varteya kahani vich. Ek vadiya kahani da mudh banneya hai tusi ehnu eda hi agge vadhaonde reho. Dhanwad.
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sat sri akal
story english font vich hi rkhiye ya punjabi font vich shuru kriye. jldi comments kar ke dsso.
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for your ease english font hi theek rahu
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Good luck for the story. Quite different plot...
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Continue in English
Or if u feel easy in punjabi than welcomed
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Bahut khoob, waiting for next update
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28-07-2020, 07:31 AM
(This post was last modified: 28-07-2020, 10:28 AM by Gillsaab13. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
First of all congo dear for your new story
Jithe tk mainu lgda tuc ohi rupinder ni jihna di ik story hr aa punjaban jattiya
Bki bht diffrnt plot le k aaye o
Eda e likhde rho bhtt sohna likh rhe o
Tuc bht vdia way nl likhde o ho ske ta dialog jyada rkheyo i mean during sex jini gl baat howe ohna maza aaunda
Bki tuc writer o jo likhoge vdia likhoge
Hun dkhde aa pind de ghr ch ki ki dkhn nu mildaa kamal wlo
Kamal da hun ki roop hou apni maa di death toh bdd lets see
Waiting for next dear
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