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Incest Bhen Da Yaar..
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Ssa Readers. Me Sahildeep tuhade lai ik Punjabi Incest Kahani likhan ja reha. Asal vich eh kahani angreji vich likhi kahani to prerit hovegi, but me is vich punjabi taste te rang dhang paun di koshish karunga. Is vich kinna ku safal hunda haan, eh tuhade sab de comments de nal hi pta lagega. Hope tuhanu sab nu eh kahani pasand aaegi ate tusi menu kahani nu agge wadaun vich help karoge. Me eh kahani is layi chuni hai kyuki isda visha baki kahaniya nalo bahut alag hai ate eh bas 3 patran de duale ghumdi hai. Agar tuhanu eh kahani ja kahani da visha pasand aave ya na aave, tusi jarur dasna. Kyuki os to bina eh kahani agge vadhauni aukhi hai. 

Me ik gal hor dasna chahunga ki main koi writer nai haan ate me kade koi story nai likhi. Is layi menu is dian bareekiyan da nai pta. Isse layi ik angreji story da adhaar le ke story likh reha haan. Tuhadi isde bare jo vi rai hove, dasna jarur.Hun jyada der na launde hoye story shuru karn ja reha haan. 
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#2
Ok g best of luck. Shuru kro
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#3
Thanks very much for encouraging bro. 1st update post kar reha haan.
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Update 1: 

Raat 10 ku vaje da time si te me apne ghar vich computer table de saamne wali kursi te kitaab fadi betha si te nal laptop vi on kita hoya si, jis vich chal rhe songs main nal nal sun reha si. Nal main mere sajje hath vich pen nu adh vichkar to anguthe te pehli ungal nal fad ke hila reha si. Mera dhyan kitaab vich ghat te Alfaaz de gaane 'Tera yaar ta wadda shounki aa Chamkile da, tu ta Justin Beiber sundi ae mutiyaare' val jyada si. Achanak phone te message di tone wajji te notification wali lite jagan bujhan lag pai. Me jyada dhyan na dita te gaana sunda reha. 1 minute to baad 3-4 ikathe message aa gaye. Menu lagya koi bahla kahla lagda, me phone chukea te msg padhan lagga. Msg bhejan wale da naa padh ke mere muh te shararat bhari muskaan aa gai. Eh msg meri waddi bhen Pawandeep da si, jinna nu me pyaar nal Pawan didi kehnda si. Waise menu msg padh ke thodi hairani vi hoi, kyuki aj kafi dina baad ohna da msg aaya si. Me socheya sab sukh hove sahi. Pehle message vich likheya si 'Deep jaagda peya tu?' Duje message vich 'Padhaku suta hain ki jaagda?' Teeje vich 'Ainkoo kithe aa, reply kyu ni karda?'. Waise ta mera na Sahildeep hai, par didi te mere gharde menu pyar nal Deep hi kehnde ne. Mere ainak lagi hon karke kai var didi menu chidaun layi padhaku ya ainkoo vi keh dinde ne.
Didi de ikatthe idda de message padh ke meri taangh hor vadh gayi ki didi aj mere reply layi inne kahle kyu ne? Par jyada soch ke time waste na karde hoye me reply kardeya likheya 'Ssa didi, me jaagda peya. Padh reha si. Ki gal ho gayi? Sab thik hai na? Inni raat nu message kita ate kahli vi bahut hai? Call kara me?' Didi vi whatsapp te mere hi message da wait kar rhe si, mera message milde hi Didi di whatsap call aa gayi. Me nal hi call pick kiti te aggo didi bole,' Me bas kuch puchna si, is lai kita si message. Nale tu ta kehnda padhai kar reha si, ah kehde singer da akhaada laya hoya is time?' Menu didi di gal sun ke haasa ha gea, par me apna haasa rokde hoye keha,'Nai didi, eh ta mere laptop ch beth ke ga reha hai. Tuhanu pta hi hai ki me gaane la ke padhai karda, bas osse tarah hun vi kar reha si. Hun tusi daso tusi kida yaad kita? Kehda jaruri kam hai jehda tuhanu inni raat nu vi jagai betha hai?'
Is vaar didi da reply aun to pehlan thoda time lag geya, shayad oh kujh puchan to jijhak rhe si. Par aakhir ohna ne puch hi lea,' Asal vich main ik video file email karn di koshish kar rahi han, ho nai rahi. Tu das sakda ki gal ho sakdi?'
Menu mazak sujhea te me jawab dita,' Lagda email waleyan nu tuhadi video pasand nai aayi, ta karke oh video upload karn to inkaar karde paye ne.'
Didi mera mazak samjh gaye te bole,' Bahla syana na banya kar ainkoo, pta hai na padhakuan di koi gf nai hundi.'
Didi aksar hi menu taana maran layi eh gal kehnde hunde si.
'Bina dimag di gf ton ta me kalla hi changa', didi di gal da jawab dinde hoye me keha.
'Pta hai na kudian piche ki karde firde aa munde, nale jinni ghat ginti kudian di aa koi viah layi vi nai labni tere layi,' aggo didi da jawab si.
Me vi jawab dinde hoye keha,'Har Sardar nu kudi ta mil jandi, par har kudi nu sardar nai milda.' Didi nu vi pta si ki main gallan da jawab deno ni htna. Is layi ohna ne apni gal kehnde hoye keha, 'Changa changa vadeya sardara, hun meri problem da hal das koi.'
Me puchea, 'Accha ta tusi kisdi video email karan di koshish kar rahe ho?'
Ohna ne meri gal da jawab na dinde hoye puchea, 'Email vich message aayi ja reha hai The file is too large, eh kyu ho reha?'
Me sajhaunde hoye keha, 'Email vich file upload kar layi video file size di ik limit hundi hai, os to waddi file upload nai hundi.' Nal hi main sochan laga ki idda dian basic gallan pta na hon de bavjood didi English Lecturer kida ban gaye? Mere varge 20 saal de har ik college jan wale nu pta hou ki video file kida email karidi hai. Fir me didi to dobara puchea, 'Idda karde aa, me kal aa ke tuhadi video file nu compress kar dina, thik aa?'
'Na na na', Didi ne inni jaldi eh jawab dita, meri taangh wadh gayi ki eho jeha ki bhej rahi hai didi. 'Main aape kar lau, tu dasde menu kida karni hai', Didi ne keha. Shayad didi nu vi pta lag gea si ki mere dimag vi ki chal reha. 'Menu kade na kade ta sikhna pena', didi ne mera jawab na milan te keha. Hun meri taanhg hor vi jyada ho gayi. Mere jija ji Army vich engineer ne te hun ohna di posting Ladakh vich si, so menu lagya didi ne ohna nu koi video bhejni honi hai. Hun agar didi eh nai chahundi ki me oh video dekha, isda matlab ta ik hi hoya, menu oh video dekhni hi peni hai.'
Meri didi di age 25 saal hai te ohna da viah pichle saal hi Rajvir, jo ki mere jijaji ne, nal hoya si. Viah ton mahine baad hi ohna nu Ladakh vich jana pai gea si. Mere didi hona da ghar saade ghar to 15 ku minutes de faasle te hai te main aksar college ton aa ke ohna de ghar ruk janda haan. Mostly apne college dian assignments ate project vagaira nipta lenda haan. Kade kade asi dono raat di roti vi ikathe hi khaande haan. Mere kol ohna de ghar di spare key hai, jo mere kol hamesha hundi hai. Mere jijaji de Ladakh jaan ton baad ohna de ghar plumbing ya lakkad vagaira da koi kam karvaun di lod hundi si tan me karva lenda si, isse layi alag key rakhi hoyi si. Hun tan main kal pakka hi didi de ghar jana si te didi di dasi hoyi video dekhni si, par main hun ohna nu ajeha kujh nai dasya.
'Tusi kehde software nal apni video camera cho computer vich pa rahe ho?' Main didi nu puchea. 'Main kado keha me video record kiti aa.' didi ne ekdum jawab dita. Main safai dinde hoye keha, 'mera matlab si tusi kehde software di help nal video compress kar rahe ho?' Didi ne kam na banda dekh ke thanda hauka bhardi ne keha,' windows media player di help nal, par menu sure nai main thik tarah nal kar rahi haan ki nai.' Main vi video nu dekhe bagair didi di video compress karke upload karn vich help karn da tarika sochan lag peya.
Fir menu kujh sujhea te main keha, 'Je main kal college ton baad tuhade kol ghar aa java, aapa koi new video shoot kar sakde haan te main das daunga video nu kida compress te hor settings karnia ne?' Eh sab kehnde hoye soch reha si ki main ta kal tuhade job ton ghar wapis aur ton pehla hi eh wali video dekh chuke hona. Didi meri gal sun ke bade khush hoye te keha, 'Eh thik rahu. Kade kade ta main sochdi aa ki eh sab gallan menu kyu nai aundian.' Main vi didi nu majak kardeya ne keha, 'Eh kamm masterniya de vass de nai haige.'
Is ton baad assi doven hassan lag paye. Thodi der hor asi idher odher dian gallan karde rahe, fir ek duje nu Gud Nite kar diti. Mere dimag vich aje vi ehi gal ghum rahi si ki idda di kehdi video hai jehdi didi menu dekhan nai dena chahundi. Na chahunde hoye vi mere mann vich iko hi khayal aa reha si te hun main os video nu dekhan lai bahut utavla ho reha si.
Meri didi dekhan vich jawa Jasmine Sandlas wargi hai. Bahut sunakha te lamba chehra, rang gora, lambi surahidaar gardan, vaal vi bahut lambe te range hoye. Didi de mumme ta bahut hi att ne, dekhdeya hi kise da vi khade khade pani kadva den. Chote kharbujeyan de size de kamiz vich kasse hoye idda lagde jida jail cho bahar aun layi kaidi chatpta rahe hon. Lakk ta sachi gadve warga ekdum patla, hor thale aunde hoye chittdan da ubhaar ta dil vich ajjeb jehi khich paunda te na chahunde hoye vi nigah othe tik jave. Jado didi ne jeans ate tshirt payi hove ta kolo langde sabde khade kardi jandi hai.
Menu ikdum hosh aaya ki eh main ki soch reha, oh ta meri bhen hai. Par jida ki usne keha si ki padhakuan di koi gf nai bandi, jado viah ton pehla didi ghar hundi si ta main hamesha osnu nangi dekhan di jhaak vich rehnda si. Ohna dina vich kise kudi nu nangi dekh sakan di ohi meri ik aas si. Ehna sochan vich gvache hoye nu pta hi na lagya kado raat de 1 vaj gaye. Main kahli nal apnia kitaba sametian, laptop band kita te bed te chaal maar ke soun lai pai geya. Saver jaldi hon di aas vich apne hi khayala vich gvache hoye nu pta hi na lagya kado meri akh lag gayi te saver de 7 vaje de alarm naal hi meri jaag khuli.

.... baki next update vich.
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ghaint
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#6
Ghaint bro
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#7
Babut hi wadia start bro ...Punjabi tadka ta ghaint laga reha story nu ummeed karde agge v jari raho..keep it up??
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#8
Vadhian shuruvat aai ji
Sohna likhia
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#9
Great start....gud luck and carry on
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#10
Wow great concept
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#11
Nice start
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#12
Great start. Good luck bro...
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#13
(06-02-2020, 09:33 PM)Anmol Sidhu Wrote: ghaint

Thanks very much bro like karn layi.
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(06-02-2020, 10:11 PM)Bsjatt98 Wrote: Ghaint bro

Bahut shukriya bai ji pasand kar layi.
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(06-02-2020, 10:25 PM)Harrysinghbajwa Wrote: Babut hi wadia start bro ...Punjabi tadka ta ghaint laga reha story nu ummeed karde agge v jari raho..keep it up??

Hanji story bilkul jari rahegi bro. Koshish rahegi week vich 2-3 updates den di, may be more. Thanks for liking.
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(06-02-2020, 10:33 PM)Bhullar Wrote: Vadhian shuruvat aai ji
Sohna likhia

Like karn te maan bakshan layi shukriya bai ji.
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(06-02-2020, 10:42 PM)AussieJatt Wrote: Great start....gud luck and carry on

Thanks for luck and liking bro, will keep updating.
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#18
(07-02-2020, 07:53 AM)Sarpanch004 Wrote: Wow great concept

Thanks bai ji. Concept wadia te different lagya, isse layi select kita si. Thanks for appreciating.
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#19
(07-02-2020, 09:38 AM)Ilovesinghni Wrote: Nice start

Thanks bro. More to come.
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#20
(07-02-2020, 01:40 PM)Neo_ Wrote: Great start. Good luck bro...

Thanks for luck and appreciation bro.
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