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Adultery Biwi Mein Badlaav
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Shocked 
Inspired by aurelius1982
Hello everybody, 'bade ghar ki bahu betiyan' ka continuation likhne k baad mai ab ek nayi kahaani lekar aaya hu... Hope you guys enjoy...
          BIWI MEIN BADLAAV
'Aaahh aahhh aahhh yes give me more yess yess yessssss!' 
Ek zor ke cheek ke saath vo dher ho gayi... Aur phir kuch hi der mein phir aane ka vada krke vo chali gayi... 
Mera naam hai Sameer... Mai 30 saal ka hu... Meri biwi aur mera baccha dono Delhi mein rehte hai... Aur mai yaha London mein kaam ke vajah se akela rehta hu.. 
London mein aapko to pata hi hai ki haseeno ka mela hai... Isliye jisme ki aag bujhne koi na koi mil hi jaata hai... Abhi jo ladki ghar se nikli uske saath ek mahine se chal raha hai... Soch rha hu usko chodke kisi aur ko pakad lu.. 
Lekin aap ye mat sochiye ki mai meri biwi ko dhoka de rha hu... sach to ye hai ki meri bholi biwi Sneha ko sab pata hai aur use koi diktat nhi... Maine to kai baar use kaha hai ki tum bhi vaha kisi se apni pyaas bujha lo, muje koi dikkat nhi... Lekin vo har baar mana kar deti thi... 
Sneha ki yaad aa hi gayi to maine socha chalo ek baar usse aur mere bete Chendu se baat kr lete hai... Kafi din hue unse baat krke... Aisa sochke maine skype pe face-call laga diya... 
Thodi der mein meri biwi ka pyara sa chehra saamne aa gaya... Bollywood actress Aditi Rao Hydari ko to aap sab jaante honge... Sneha bhi usi ki tarah khubsurat thi... Bholi si surat, aankhon me masti... aaye haye... Sach kahu to agar mai ghar par hi hota to kisi aur ki taraf aakh utha k bhi nhi dekhta... Sneha ka madmast jism hi mere liye kaafi hoti... 
Sneha ek halki si muskaan k saath- kaise hai... 
Mai- thik hu... tumlog kaise ho
Tabhi mera 5 saal ka beta Chendu bhagkar camera k saamne aata hai... 
Chendu- papaaaaaa!!! 
M- are kaisa hai mera Chendu! 
C- maje me hu papa! 
Mai sochne laga maje me to hoga hi kha kha k sand jaisa ho gaya hai... 
Sneha- Chendu jao apna homework karo
C- thik hai lekin pehle cake kahunga! 
Aisa kehke bhaag gaya
S- aur kaam kaisa chal rha hai... 
M- badhiya
S- meri yaad aati hai ki nhi... 
M- bohot aati hai
Sneha roni si surat banakar kehti hai- jhut mat bolo tum to vaha ki goriyo k saath khush hoge... mera to yaha haal hi bura hai tumhari yaad me... apni aag to bujha lete ho lekin muje sirf saal me ek hi baar milne aate ho... 
Mai kuch keh na saka... Maine Sneha ko aise mood Mein pehle kabhi nhi dekha... Kuch alag lag rhi thi vo... 
M- maine to tumse kaha tha ki tum bhi apni pyaas kisi se bujha lo lekin tum to maanti hi nhi... 
Is baat par Sneha ne koi jawab nhi diya... Ye dekhkar mujhe aur bhi hairani hui... Jo hamesha is baat par bhadakti thi aaj vo chup kaise hai... 
Sneha hichkichate hue kehti hai- lekin... ye... ye galat hai... mai apki patni hu... aur apse pyaar karti hu... 
Ye sunkar mai andar hi ander khush ho gaya... mai jaan gaya ki agar ise thik se samjhaya to ye vakai me kisi aur k sath maze le sakti hai... Aur yahi to mai chahta tha... Meri haseen biwi k karnaame sunne me ek alag hi maza hai... 
M- mail bhi to tumse hi pyaar karta hu, un goriyo se nhi... lekin hame hamare sharir ki pyaas bujhana bhi to zaroori hai... agar sharir ki pyas nhi bujhaogi to baki kaam me dhyan kaise lagega... meri fikar mat karo... muje koi dikkat nhi hai... 
Aise hi dus minute tak samjha samjha k maine kaise to Sneha ko mana liya... phir usne kaha- thik hai... mai dekhti hu... 
M- tum koi galat kaam nhi kr rhi ho Sneha... yaad rakhna tum jo bhi karogi mai hamesha tumhara sath dunga... aur ha roz roz to mai call nhi kr sakta to tum mujhe mail pe update deti rehna... 
Sneha ne haa kaha aur call band kr diya... mai to jaise khushi se kudne laga... akhir meri man ki ichcha puri hone jaa rhi thi... meri biwi kisi aur se chudne vali thi! 
To be continued... 
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#2
Story to bahut acchi lag rahi hai bhai....
Hopefully Bade Ghar ki Bahu Betiyan jitni hot jarur ho...
Waiting for the next update..
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#3
All the best brother.
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#4
aurelius is a gem, uski likhi hui story ka hindi roopantar jo aap kar rahe ho, karne se pehle, ek baar pooch lo, inhi vajah se usne Xossip pe likhna chod diya tha.
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(02-11-2019, 10:40 PM)rajeshsarhadi Wrote: aurelius is a gem, uski likhi hui story ka hindi roopantar jo aap kar rahe ho, karne se pehle, ek baar pooch lo, inhi vajah se usne Xossip pe likhna chod diya tha.

I'm not copying anything... Meri story alag hai... Bas uski story se prerit hai... Aage k updates me pata chalega
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#6
wah shuruaat to mast h
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#7
Nice start
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#8
Nice wonderful
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#9
Welcome back bonerventura
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Inspired by aurelius1982
Hello everybody, 'bade ghar ki bahu betiyan' ka continuation likhne k baad mai ab ek nayi kahaani lekar aaya hu... Hope you guys enjoy...
BIWI MEIN BADLAAV



welcome back brother. And congrats for the new thread. I humbly request you, please continue bade ghar ki bahu betiyan along with your new story. You are always one of my favorite writers.
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#11
congrats for new story.feel very happy to see you again. Hope you will also continue   bade ghar ki bahu aur betiyon. Thanks a lot brother.
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#12
wow! what a great news! I have become very much happy brother, Thanks a lot for this new thread. I have another request to you, please continue your another hot story bade ghar ki ...........
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#13
wow! what a fantastic start! ! thanks a lot brother for coming back.
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#14
bahut kush khabar hai bhai, bahut achee start!
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#15
Fantastic start! thanks a lot for writing again. hope bade ghar ki bahu aur betiyen also continue.
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#16
super excellent start! welcome back brother.
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#17
Update-2
Us din ke baad Sneha ka na phone aaya aur na mail... Aur mai bhi apne kaam me busy tha... Lekin teesre din  maine hi use face-call kar diya...
Sneha- Hi sameer...
Mai- kya baat hai do din se tumhara na koi call na koi mail... Mujhe laga ki jis bare me hamari baat hui uska update tum mail me dogi...
Sneha sharmati hai lekin kuch kehti nhi...
M- Chendu kaha hai...
S- school main
M- thik hai phir batao koi update hai ki nhi...
Sneha thodi der chup rehti hai... Mano jaise apna man bana rhi ho...
S- kuch khaas nhi hua... Lekin ek baat hai... Ab tak sirf sare mard mujh par dhyaan dete the... Lekin mai unhe nazarandaz karti thi... Ab jab maine dhyan diya to pata chala ki mujh par kafi logon ki nazar hai...
Maine haste hue kaha- isme koi badi baat nhi... Tum ho hi itni khubsurat...
Sneha ek sharmili muskan dekar kehti hai- building mein, bazaar mein, mall mein, yaha tak Chendu k school kal gayi parents meeting k liye vaha bhi... Sab jagah sare mard muje aise ghurte hai jaise ki muje kha hi jaenge...
Mai sochne laga ki lagta hai meri biwi ko koi ek nhi kafi log chodne k liye utsuk hai... Sawaal ye hai ki vo kisse karwaegi... Ya ye pucho ki kisse nhi kitno se karwaegi... Ye sochkr hi mera lund tan gaya...
M- to phir tumhari nazar kisi par gayi ki nhi...
Sneha ka chehra sharm se laal pad gaya tha...
S- h..haa...
Ye sunkar mai andar se behad khush ho gaya...
M- kon hai vo zara hame bhi batao...
S- ek hai hamare building k Mr. Shekhawat...
Ye naam sunkar mai chauk gaya... Shekhawat ek 60 saal k bohot namchin businessman hai... Uska hamare area me bohot rubab hai... Neta se lekar gundo tak sabki pehchaan hai use... Sab usse darte the... Uske baare me ye bhi suna hai ki vo us area k kai aurto ko phasa chuka hai...
S- aur dusre hai Chendu k school me jo mile the... Wasimji... Chendu k dost k papa hai... Aur...
M- ha aur?
Sneha to ab tamatar jaisi laal ho gayi thi...
S- aur bazaar me ek dukaandaar hai... Lacchu ram...
Ye sunke mai sunn ho gaya... Matlab Sneha low class aadmi se bhi aakarshit hui hai...
S- lekin maine inme se kisi se bhi ab tak koi baat nhi ki hai... Ek baar inki or thik se dekha tak nhi... Mujhe to ye samaj nhi aa rha ki mai chunu kise... aur kisiko mai chun bhi lu to phir aage kya karna hai iska bhi mujhe koi idea nhi hai...
Sharam se laal hui Sneha ab pareshan dikh rahi thi... mai jaan gaya ki ise ab sahi margdarshan dena hoga... Tab jake meri man ki ichcha puri hogi...
M- ab aage kya krna hai ye mai batata hu... Dhyan se suno...
Sneha meri ore dekhti hai...
M- to suno... Ab se aunty jaise kapde pehn ne band kr do... Tum 28 saal ki ho... 40 saal ki aurat jaise kapde mat pehno...
Sneha gusse vali shakal banati hai...
M- market me kafi sexy sariyan miti hai... Use kharido... Sexy kapde pehnna shuru karo... Choti, backless blouse pehno... Aisi sariya pehno jisme tumhara ye gora badan zyada dikhe...
Ye sab sunkr Sneha sharma jati hai lekin kuch bolti nhi...
M- aur vo tumhe jab ghurte hai to unki ore ek kamuk muskan dedo... vo samaj jaenge ki tum bhi unki ore aakarshit ho... Phir jab vo flirt karenge to tum bhi karo...
Sneha sharma to rahi thi par phir bhi sab dhyan se sun rahi thi... Aise hi aur kai chiz maine use bataya...
M- samaj gayi na?
S- ha... Lekin mai ek baat soch rhi hu... Teeno me se koi bhi dikhne me kuch khaas nhi hai... Phir bhi mai unse itni aakarshit kaise ho gai?
M- koi aur chiz hogi unme jisse tum aakarshit hui ho...
Sneha sharma kr bolti hai- ha teeno ekdum takatvar sharir vale hai... Shayad yahi baat unki muje pasand aayi...
Sneha kuch sochti hai phir achanak bolti hai...
S- chalo mai rakhti hu muje bohot kaam hai...
M- thik hai update deti rehna...
Vo muskurakr call band kr deti hai... Ab mai besabri se intezar kr rha tha meri pyari biwi ki agli update ka!
To be continued...
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#18
super excellent update! Awesome writing
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#19
Wahhh....aage bhut mja aane wala hai...jada update dete rhna bhai...
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#20
Hmm nice start
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