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Fantasy ALL MIGHT EMPEROR. (SIFI WITH PICS)
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ALL MIGHTY EMPEROR

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Hamare galaxy me lakho karodo satrs hay anek planet hay aur eas Tarah ki kitni aur galexy hey Jo ajj tak ham log ko pata Nahi science bohat taraki Kar chuka hay par firvi ham mars tak phochane ke liye badi taklif hoti hay.

        Dur Kisi galexy me ek earth jesa hi grah hay uspar insna jese log rahte hay unki science bohat taraki karchuki hay unke grah Ka natural resources almost khatam hochuka hay wo Apne galexy ke sabhi grah pe kabja Karke unki resources vi khatam karchuke the. ab unko talash thi naye grah ki unka agla target hay milky way galaxy kya Hoga age kya milky way galaxy tabha hojayega ya fir koi chamatkar iss duniya ko bacayega.

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Introduction

YE STORY PURITARAH SE IMAGINARY HAY ISS ME APKO SUPERPOWER, ROMANCE, SUSPENSION, ACTION, THRILLER SAB KUCH MILEGA AGAR KUCH NEW IDEA HAY TO JARUR SHARE KARE ME STORY KO IMPROVE KARNE KI HAMESA KOSIS KARUNGA.

IMPORTANT: YE STORY SPACE FIGHT AND SIFI RELATED HAY.

HERO: AKASH 

BAKI SAB STORY ME AGE PATA CHALEGA.

Note ye story me dusre site pe SILENT READER ke nam se post Kar Raha hu so please Bina puche dusre site pe copy paste na kare
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Lagta hay yaha pe ISS story ko koi response Nahi milega me 10 updates dunga agar koi response Nahi Mila to story band Sad
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UPDATE 1

YEAR 2050 Ajj se thik 10 sal pahle aliens (other life from space) ne earth pe attack kiyatha war ko suru hua pure 10 sal hogaye hay earth ke side ko iss war me jayada nuksan hua hay.

Earth ka population Jo 9 billions 2040 me tha ab wo aliens ke attack Karne ke bad sirf 2.5 billions ke aspas rahgaya hay.

Insan ke nukeclear wepon aliens ke space ship ke forcefield ko age bekar hogaya hay esliye insan disadvantage per hay.

Ye sab suru hua 2030 me jab pahla alien dharti pe pakda Gaya aliens sayad isse pahle bi dharti pe achuke the, ye sab attack se phale spy mission pe dharti pe aye the taki insan ki takat aur kamjori ke bare me pata kar sake.

First alian pakda Jane ke bad hamra science ne new development Kiya 2035 me scientists ne insan ke DNA ke sath dusre prani ke DNA Milne me saflata hasil kiya.

Uske bad science ne kafi taraki ki sare desh milke Earth defence alliance ka start Kiya jisme sare desh milke alien ke khilaf earth defence me samil hua the.

Aliens Ke attack thik 1 sal bad insan ko aliens ke asli plan ke bare me pata Chala par tab tak bohat Der hochuki thi ab insan ko do taraf ke attack jehlna pada ek aliens ka dusra purtvi per Jo animals and plants he unka.

Scientists ke research se pata Chala aliens ne  2020 me ek esa viruses ka earth per release Kiya tha jise earth ke sare lifeforms sibaye insan ko chod ke mutate ho gaye they jinse wo dihre dhire intelligent hone lage sath hi sath kuch plant vi mutations ka sikar hogaye.

Jab tak insan ko iss bare me pata Chalta tab tak bohat Der ho chuki thi ab(2041) insan ko do taraf ka attack jehlna pad raha tha ek aliens ka dusra kud ke ghrah ka other lifeforms ka.

Insan ab tak Apne DNA ke sath dusre lifeforms ka DNA milakar apni kamjori ko dur Karne me kamyab hochuka tha jab animals evolve hone lage tab insan ko dohra hamla jhelna pada par ye insan ke liye apni ghrah bachane ka opportunity tha.

Current year 2050
Earth population 2.5 billions
Enemies reinforcement will arrive in 10 year
Aliens mother ship(power source currently)


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Special mission
Ajj insan ek secret mission pe kam kar Raha hay agar ye mission kamyab ho Jaye to insan ko pure 10 sal Apne defence upgrade aur reorganization ke liye milega.

Mission head: Major AKASH
Target: aliens mother ship
Time limit: 1 month

Soldier 1: sir hame iss mother ship pe aye hue pure 10 din hogaya hay per ab tak hame power source ka koi pata Nahi Chala.
Soldier 2 : sir ye ship purtvi ke do state jitna bada hay isme power source dhund ne me mahion lag jayenge.
Major AKASH: hamre pass utna time Nahi hay hame in 20 din me hi power source dhund ke destroy Karna hay barna 21 din ye log earth pe attack kar denge.
Tabhi ek aur soldier Bhar se dod kar hamare meeting ke place ke traf aye major ko salute kareke.

(Note: app soch rahe honge ye ke alien ship me Bina pakde ghus Gaye to me apko bata du aliens aur insan dekhne ek jese dkhite hay agar guars na Dekha Jaye to pata Nahi chalega)

(inhone Jo spy pakde unke ship Uske Kar ke mother ship me alien ke ves me gushe the)

(AKASH current age 50yr)

Soldier 3 : sir ek buri khabar hay inlogo ne apna attack plan time se 10din age karliya hay hamre pass ab sirf 10 din Bache hay mission Pura Karne ke liye.
Major A : in salo haramkhor aliens ko aur kuch kam Nahi hay kya Jo har 10 15 din me attack Karne lagte hay. Boys hamere pass time kam hay hame jald hi power source dhundna Hoga.

Tabhi Bhar se ek aur soldier Jo akash se 2/3yr bada tha unke aur ata hay.

Captain S : sir ek good news hay hame power source ka location milgaya hey.
Major akash : ye to badi hi khus khabr hay soldier 1 tum Jake BAKI do Captain ko ye news dedo aur unhne 2 din bad uss location per Milne keliye khedena unko battle plan in 2 din me miljayega.

Sabhi major aur Captain ko salute kareke Apne order ke mutabik kam pe lag jate hay
Akash : are yar tujhe kese pata Chala location ke bare me.
S : ese hi kisi se pata Kiya.
Akash : agar ye trap hua to.
S : me uss jagah per Jake check Kiya information Pure trah se real hay.
Akash : thik hay yar agar Tu bolta hay to Sahi Hoga.

(Akash aur S dono army join Karne ke bad dost bane S dono ek sath hi captain bane S ke pass akash se jayda DNA points they fir vi akash S se pahle major ban Gaya)

(DNA points DNA integration ke bad wo Kitna successful hua aur Kitna power badha ye janne keliye ye DNA point scientists use karte thay in kah shakte hay ye ek measurement hay DNA integration ka)

NOTE*
Army ranks(low to high)
Second Lieutenant(16 to 44 soldier)
First Lieutenant(110 to 140 personal)
Captain(62 to 190 soldier)
Major(task force commander, logistics, operational mission)
Lieutenant Colonel(300 to 1000 soldier)
Colonel(3000 to 5000 soldiers)

Generals in rank(low to high)
Brigadier General
Major General
Lieutenant General
General
General of the Army


Regiment[2] (2 or more Battalions)(1000 to 2000)
Battalion (4 or more Companies )(400 to 1000)
Company (2 or more Platoons)(100 to 250)
Platoon (Troop)(2 or more Squads)(16 to 50)

For detail information you can search on internet*
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Nice start...tum bta skte ho tum dusre kis site pe ye story post kr rhe ho...agar yha close kroge to mae vha jake padhunga..
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Nice plot dear
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(16-08-2019, 12:09 PM)jakelg44 Wrote: Nice start...tum bta skte ho tum dusre kis site pe ye story post kr rhe ho...agar yha close kroge to mae vha jake padhunga..

(16-08-2019, 06:11 PM)Samrattttt Wrote: Nice plot dear

Thanks for supporting
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Update 2

Pichle update me app ne padha major akash ek special mission per aliens ke ship me apna ves badal Kar unki power source destroy Karne keliye Gaye the.

Unka ek dost Captain S ko kiss trah power source ka location mill jata hay aur wo 2 din ke bad uspar attack Karne ki plan banate hay.

Abb age

Meeting for attack plan
Akash : dusre Captain se jese app tino ko pata hay Captain S ne power source ka location pata kr liya hay.

Captain 1 : han sir hum ne ye vi pata Kiya hay ki waha ke security 4 sift me kam Karti hay.

Captain 2 : jab 3rd sift ke guards apni jagah badlte hay to wo sab se lambe time lete hay ku ki uss wakt commander DRAKO kudh squad ki inspection karte hay.

Captain S : 18:00 in space time, per 3rd squad apni sift change karte hay hame total 15min milenge surprise attack ke liye.

Akash : to thik hay hum iss waqt hi attack karenge sare Captains Apne Apne soldier ko stand by mode pe rekh dijiye hum next day 18:00 pe power source pe attack karenge.

(Note akash ko milake ye total 16 log the 4 commanding officers 12 soldiers)

(Space time earth ke time se bohat fark hay space me time earth ke time se slow flow hota hay ex: hum sun se jitna dur hote jayenge hamara time earth ke time se utna slow hota Jayega)

(Time har jagah same flow hota hay lekin hame alag mehsus hota hay 
TIME NEVER STOPS FOR ANYONE)

17:55 sab log operation ke liye ready the jese hi time 18:00 Hoga jab guard sift change Kar rahe honge hum apni chupi hue jagah se uss location per attack kar denge.

Ham jub apni chupi hue jagah se ader ke aur gay to hame waha ek vi soldier Nahi Mila ye Dekh ke mujhe Kuch Kuch doubts hone lage.

Captain 1 : sir mujhe Kuch gadbad lag rahi hay hame Ander ate hue ek vi guards najar Nahi aye.

Captain 2 : Lagta ajj aliens ke Kuch problem hogaya hay iss liye sayad guards kum hay.

Akash : ase Nahi hoskata agar problem Hoga to vi wo apni sabse important Jaga ko ese hi Bina guards ke Nahi chod ke jayenge.

Captain S : sir wase vi hame guards se kya Karna hame jald se jald power source tabh Karke yaha se Nikal Jana chaye. Ye to Acha hua ki guards Nahi hay yah par.

Fir Captain 2 aur S milke jaldi mission complete Karke yaha Nikal ne ke liye bolte hay

Akash : Kuch kahna chata tha par mission complete Karne keliye usne aur jayda Kuch socha Nahi aur age badhne lage.

Hum power source ke pass pahuch ne par Captain 2 aur S ke sath aye soldier power source per nuckclear bomb lagane lage aur Captain 1 ke soldiers protective shield hatane lage taki jayada se jayda damage Kar sake unke power source ko.

Akash: apni soldier ke sath wo apni pur guards pe tha ku ki use ye situation Kuch ajib lag Raha tha itne salo ka battle experience use chila chila Kar kah rahe ta ajj to Teri gand fatne Bali hay.

Captain 1: sir hamne code decode kardiya hay force field 1 min me disable ho jayega.

Tabhi uss room me ek sath 50 gurads Ander ate hay.

Ye Dekh ke akash sochta hay lagi re lagi ajj to ye gand fad denge.

Akash : sab log cover lelo aur open fire Karo samne darko ko Dekh ke sochta hay ye squad inspection chod ke yaha kya kr Raha hay.

Tabhi dusre aur se.
(Aliens ka language hamare language se alag hay wo universal translator use karte hay jiss se hum unki bat samajh sake)

Alien leader : Tum sab cuho ki itni himat mere DARKO ke ship me gus Gaye.

Akash : himat to Tumne hamre Dekhi kaha hay himat wo thi jab ham tumhare queen ki Lene ki socha tha wo vi tumhare ghrah per.

Darko : Abe sale kute ki aulad apna jaban hilana band kr Nahi to Teri jaban kich Lunga.

Akash sochne Lagta kese vi Karke ye 1 min darko ko roko na hay taki force field disable hojaye

Akash : abe 50 admi Apne sath lake kya mardangi dikhata hay himat hay to mujh se akle me mukabila kr tere gand fad ke rakh dunga.

Drako Apne admio ko issra karta hay aur khud akele age bad jata akash se vidne.

Akash to kab se ise moke ka talash me tha akash ke najre bohat tej hochuki body Pura foulad ka DNA integration se.

Akash suddenly drako ke uper jump Kar ke ek rakh ke seta hay Uske muh per drako 2,3 kadam piche hat jata hay par use jayda koi chot Nahi lagi thi 

Ye Dekh ke akash chok jata hay Uske attak se ek kharoch tak Nahi aya tha drako ko fir drako apna ek pair utha ke akash ko ek lat Marta hay jise wo durjake piche ek diwar pe takrata hay isse akash ko kafi chot lagti hay

Akash us jagah se khada hoke Apne app ko saval Kar drako ke face pe apni kick ki barsat Kar deta hay ek kick pe dusre kick first kick se jayada takatwar dusra kick pichle kick ke force use Karke dusre kick yese pure 12 kick Marne ke bad wo ruk jata hay.

Drako ko sirf choti Moti chot aye thi use se Apne mu se khon thoke ke bad wo akash ko ek jor dar punch Marta hay jiss se akash block Karne ki kosish karta hay par na kamyab hojata hay.

Akash ab apni jeb se ek siram Nikal ke pijata hay ye siram DNA ko jagane ke liye use hota hay fir wo pahle se jayada takatwar hojata hay

Iss bar akash drako per direct hamla Nahi karta Uske attack ke intejar Karne laga jab drako ne running smash(dod Kar apni body se dusre ko take marna) use Kiya tab akash toda piche hat ke Apne sari takt apne right hand me lakar ek upper jab laga Diya, drako Ka momentum se jatka bohat jor se laga drako ko aur ek filp ke sath wo piche ja gira.

Ab tak force field disable hocuki thi

Akash : sorry dost tumhara time khatm hua fir milenge in next life ye khete hua akash ne bomb Ka switch on kr Diya fir kkkkkaaaaabbbbooommmmm............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Esa Kuch Nahi hua bomb phata hi Nahi

Piche se lessor gun firing ki abaj aye jab akash piche muda to piche Ka najara Dekh ke wo hairan hogaya.

Piche Captain 2 aur S ke soldier ne Captain 1 aur uski soldier aur akash ki soldiers ko lesser gun se upar phocha chuke the.

Captain S : tujhe kya laga hum yaha par tere sath sahid hone aye hay Nahi Mr akash tum ek dum galat ho.

Akash : ese ku kya ye sirf mere sath Nahi pure manab jati ke sath dhoka hay aur Captain 2 tum vi iss plan me samil ho!!!!

Captain 2 : Tsk tsk sir app kitne vole hay kisko apni Jan payri Nahi Hoti hay aur fir insan to wese vi har Raha hay me agar aliens ki thodi madad Kar Diya to meri jindegi sabar Jayega.

Captain S : Dhoka hahahaha ye sabd tumhre mu se shoba Nahi deta major akash Mera DNA score tum se adhik tha fir vi un salo budho ne tumhe major Bana Diya me usi din soch liya tum sab per varosa Karna hi bekar hay.

Akash : dkhoke baj kamine me tujhe jinda Nahi chodunga ye khete hue Captain S ke aur vagne laga.

Captain S : lesser gun se akash ke dono pair per fir ker deta hay itni vi kya jaldi hay Marne ki thoda sabra Karo tumhe vi baki sab members ke pass vej dunga fir Teri masuka ke sath me ayse karunga.

Akash ye sunke bohat guse me ajata hay aur vag Kar Captain S ki gala pad leta hay

Akash : me tujhe Uske liye jinda Nahi chodunga kamine.

Tabhi piche se ek power beem ake akash ke Hart ko Lagta hay aur wo age Jake girta hay.

Captain S : sukriya drako meri Jan bacha ne ke liye.

Drako : isme konsi badi bat hey Tumne to hamra itna bar madad Kiya hay warna purtvi per attack itni jaldi khatm Nahi hota.

Akash ye sun ke chok jata hay iss se ye pata Chalta hay ki ye pahli bar Nahi hay jab Captain S ne pure manab jati ko dhoka Diya hay par ab wo Kuch Kar Nahi shakta wo kud mot ke mu me tha.

Captain S : Sahi suna Tumne akash wo me hi tha Jo hamare sare mission ke detail aliens ko deta Raha marte marte ye vi Jan le wo me hi tha jisne Dr. Arjun ko mara tha warna wo DNA Ka second evolution me successful hojata hahahaha

Ye Dr. arjun ek scientists tha jisne ek bar akash ki aur uski gf ki Jan bachaya tha.

Captain S : kese lagraha hay apni sari umid kho Kar ab Tu vi bohat jald upar wale ke pass pohach Jayega itna keh ker wo apna lesser gun akash ke aur tan deta hay.

Akash : ek kamina smile de Kar sale mujhe ajj pata chale Tujhe ku Nahi major banya gya ku ki tere Iman me hi khot hay me to marunga hi sath me tum sab ko lejunga.

Ise pahle koi Kuch Kar pata akash power source ke aur kud jata hay akash lete lete kafi samay se apni sari power ektha Kar Raha tha taki wo power source me self destroy ho sake.

Akash jab power source me gira to uski sari skin rapid speed me galne lagi tabi akash apni energy compress Karke power source me hi self destroy hojata hay.

Usse esa dhamaka hota hay ki sari ki sari mother ship tabah hojata hay.......
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Update 3

Pichle update me Apne padha tha fir vi me app ko yad dila du Captain S Jo ki akash Ka dost aur mission partner tha usne pure manab jati ko dhoka dediya last moment pe.

Akash bichara aur jayada Kuch Kar Nahi saka dusman ki plan fail Kane aur manav jati ko bachane ke liye wo khud Apne app ko power source ke sath tabah kr deta hay.

Ab age
( Abe hero margaya ab kya age padhoge chal hat ye kya DBZ hay kya Jo wish Kiya aur hero fir se jinda hogaya)

Ab se story akash ki jubani

Jab me Apne apko self destroy Kiya to mere Charo aur andhera cha Gaya me Apne body hilane ki kosish Kiya par koi fayada Nahi hua mene Apne Charo aur dekhne ki kosish Kiya par meri Charo taf sirf andhera hi andhera rosni Ka koi namo nishan Nahi tha.

Me sochne laga sala Kahi ye yumlok to Nahi Lagta hay yum ji ne apna electricity Ka bill Nahi Diya hay iss liye electric department balo ne yaha ki bati Gul kardiya hay.

Me Apne soch me hi duba tha ki mujhe ek abaj suni Diya Host detected system binding to host tabhi mujhe laga are ye to wohi novel Bala legendary system he jiske madad se hero log pure universe me sabse takatwar banjate hay fir kisiki Nahi sunte aur apni manki karte rahte hay.

Ali re ali apna time ali me bas yahi sab soch Raha tha tabhi mujhe fir se system ke abaj ati hay Binding success now host can enter to his own body

Ye sunke me chok Gaya Abe me to mrgaya tha ye fir kiske body me gusne ke liye bol rahi hay tabhi mujhe ek jhatka Lagta hay aur me kisi chij ke kicha chla jata hu me jitni vi kosish karta hu par me Apne app ko uss chij ke aur kichne se rok Nahi saka aur ise bich me apna hosh kho deta hu.

Jab mujhe hoss ata hay to me apne akh dhire dhire kholta hu isbar me ek room me tha pass me ek nurse bethi hue thi jise Dekh ke mujhe samaj me aya ki me hospital me hu.

Fir mere dimag ke ghode pure teji se dodne lage kya me uss blast se Bach Gaya to fir uss mother ship Ka hua aur wo gadar haram khor "S" Kaha pe hay me soch ki rail nurse ke abaj se tuti.

Nurse : Tumhe ab kesa lag Raha hay.
Me : me thik hu mujhe yaha pe kisne laya aur mujhe kya hua hay.
Nurse : Tumhe yaha pe ek ladki leke aye tumhara accident hogaya tha.
Me accident Ka sunka chok Gaya Abe ye kya majra hay me to space me tha ye accident aur ye ladki kon hay.
Nurse : mujhe iss Tarah sochte hue Dekh kr Tumhe Kahi pe derd ho Raha hay kya me abhi doctor ko bulake lati hu.
Wo itna keh ker us room se Nikal jati hay.

Tabhi fir mujhe system ki abaj sunai deti hay host body scanning, scanning completed, compactbility with host body 50%, integrating with host body, integration will complete in 1hr.

Kuch lagatar badbadne ke bad system fir khamos hojata hay jiki abaj sunke me chonk jata hu ooo Teri ye to hakikat hay me soch Raha tha wo Mera waham hay iska matlad system sach me hay mene kafi novel padh rakhe the jinme iss Tarah ke system main character ko milta hay fir hero sab ki maa Behan ek Kar deta hay.

Tabhi wo nurse ek Dr ko leke Ander ati hay.
Dr : to abb tumhara tabiyat kese hay Tumhe Kahi pe dard mehsus horaha hay.
Me : Nahi doctor me bilkul thik hu bus ser me todha sa derd hay.
Dr : Mr apka iss accident se sahisalamat bacjana ek miracle hay medical science ke liye.
Me : esa ku??
Dr : Mr sayad apko pata Nahi apki sir me kafi jayda chot lagi thi hame dar tha Kahi dimag me na chotlagi ho ye to miracle hi tha apka sir itna buri Tarah jakmi hone ke bawojut apki dimag sahisalamat hay.
Me : me Dr ke bat sunke todha chok to Gaya fir vi himmat Kar ke Dr se wese ye accident kese hua Mera.
Dr : hame detail me to pata Nahi par itna pata hay ki tumko kisi car ne thokar mardiya tha aur tumhara sir ek pathar se ja takraya, wo to vala ho uss ladki Ka jisne Tumhe Sahi time pe hospital pohca diya barna Tumhe bacha Pana namunkin tha.
Me : Dr ke ye bat sunke confusion me pd Gaya sala me to space me tha ye car accident kese hogaya fir mene socha chalo iss ke bare me bad me sochenge abhi ke liye mujhe relax rahna chaiye, fir me Dr se kya me us ladki se mil Sakta hu mujhe unka sukriya ada karna hay.
Dr : ku Nahi per iss waqt wo Apne Ghar gayi hue hay jab wo lotegi to tum use mil Lena.

Fir Dr aur nurse waha se chale Gaye uss room me akela reh gaya me ab vi iss confusion me tha ke ye mere sath kya horaha hay kya wo sab Mera Sapna tha allien ke attack wagera!!!!!!

Me apni uljhan suljahe laga time kese gujar Gaya pata vi Nahi Chala me dhyan tab tuta jab mene system ki abaj suni integration with host body fully completed system function fully available.
Fir mujhe Apne samne ek digital screen najar aya jisme likha tha

Quote:Host Name :  Akash
Quote:
Quote:Species : Human
Quote:Healt condition : little weak
Quote:Fitness : 1.5(2.0 originally)
Quote:Strength : 1.3(1.6 originally)
Quote:Special abilities : none
Quote:Skill : none
Quote:DNA points : 0
Quote:System level : 1
Quote:Compactbility : 50%

Quote:Remarks : nothing special weaker then a regular human and little stronger than an ant.

Ye Dekh ke chok jata hu aur last wala remark padkar to mere kan se dhuan nikale laga fir mene system se bat Karne ki kosish Kiya.

Me : system tum Kaha se aye ho.
System : host system level is not high enough to answer this question.
Me : to fir mujhe ye bata do ki me Kaha per hu.
System : host app iss waqt hospital me hay.
Me : Abe gandu wo to mujhe vi pata hay ki me hospital me hu. System meri bat bich me Kar ke bolti hay
System : host please work hard to improve system level. Fir wo chup hojati hay me jitna vi kossi karta hu system se koi reply Nahi ata.

Fir mujhe jor se pressure ata hay to me bathroom me jakar halka hone Lagta hu jab me bathroom se lot raha tha waha pe lage mirror pe Apne chera Dekh ke chok jata hu ku ki me mirrio me 19/20 sal ka jaban londa ki tarah dikh Raha tha chera to Mera hi tha par 50yr ki gaha 19/20 sal ka lag Raha tha

Fir me Bhar ake dibar pe lagi calendar per date chek karta hu to me ek dum chok jata hu ku ki aj Ka date calendar ke hisab se 16 aug 2019 aliens ke attack ke thik 20yr 4month pahle

Fir mujhe Kuch Kuch samaj me ane Lagta hay jab me uss power source ke sat self destroy hue to Kuch esa hua jisse me time me piche Chala gya aur mere sath ek system uss time se Chala aya 

Fir mujhe iss time ki sari bate yad ane lagi jab me 19yr ka tha tab Mera bohat bada car accident hua ta fir mujhe dhire dhire use accident se Judi sari yade taja hone lagi.

Fir me Apne bistar lete ye sochne laga ki sayad ye vagban Ka Diya hua second chance hay mere liye me iss bar purtvi ko tabah hone se bachanunga aur gadar S ko me iss bar Nahi chodunga aur Apne logo ko Kuch Nahi hone dunga ise Josh ke sath kab me nind ke agosh me Chala Gaya pata hi Nahi Chala.

Current year 2019

Aliens will attack in 2040
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bahut badiya bhai aage kya huya
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(17-08-2019, 01:26 PM)shailu12345 Wrote: bahut badiya bhai aage kya huya

Bhai age to bahot Kuch hua wo apko dihre dhire pata chal jayega
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#13
Nice Story Bro.....
First se sab thik Laga but last update thoda samajh nahi aaya..
Is it a time travel or travel of consciousness.
Aur ye hero k andar kya hai..
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Waiting For next update Bro
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#15
sandar story hai bro,,,,
waiting for next
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#16
nice start
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#17
Waiting For next update Bro
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#18
excellent
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#19
Bhot badhia
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#20
nice story. please post updates
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