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Kahani ik PUNJABAN di ( ਕਹਾਣੀ ਇਕ ਪੰਜਾਬਣ ਦੀ )
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Phichli vaar kise problem karke delete karni pe gayi si story is karke dobara start kar rhea 

Disclaimer - eh story bilkul imaginative hai story vich use kite gaye characters de name vi imaginary ne

INTRODUCTION OF CHARACTERS

1 - Tejinder kaur - umar 43 saal figure 42 - 30 - 40 , shayad hi kisi jnani da ehda da figure hoyega jis tra da Tejinder kaur da hai .. mote te wadde mumme Tejinder di khoobsurti nu chaar chand lah dinde si , asal vich jadon jnanian 35 saal toh uppar ho jaandian ne tan ohna de mumme te chittad kudarti wadde ho jaande ne , par tejinder kaur naal tan alag hi hoya mummeyan te jarroat nallon jyada maas chad gya te , te kudarti usde mumme khade - khade rhende si , hamesha Tejinder bra jarror paa ke rakh di si , motia baavan usde bhaare shareer da saboot dindia si , par usde tid te jyada maas nhi si , jithe hona chahida si uthe raj ke si 

Tejinder apne shareer karke apne te apne aale dwaale de pinda vich charcha da hamesha visha bani rhendi si , jwaan mundeyan toh leke budheyan tak kaiyan di jaan ban chuki si ohh 

Tejinder da lakk bhotha bhara si , pata nhi kine killo vich chittada te maas chadeua hoya si , jadon turdi si tan usde chitad kade right nu hullara khaande si te kadi left nu .. chittada da maas hilda vekh ke tan maano jive lun baith da hi nhi si hunda , chittada toh thalle aagaye usde mote mote pat jo ki usdiyan lattan di khoobsurti di sab toh eham vajah si , 

Tejinder apne ehna saare shareer de hiseyan toh anjaan si , par pind dian jnanian nu Tejinder da shareer vekh ke both alag mehsoos hunda si .. kyu ki ohna vichon kise da vi figure Tejinder warga nhi si , kehdi jnani hai jo wadde mumme nhi chaundi ? Kedi jnani hai jo bahar nu nikli hui bund nhi chaundi ? Par afsos ehdan da figure sirf te sirf tejinder da hi si 

" Ik vaar ik pind di jnani Tejinder de ghare gayi si kise kam vaaste , ohthe usde naal usdian aam gallan baatan hundian rhian us time Tejinder apne ghare kam kar rahi si te usne chunni nhi si liti hoyi , us time us jnani di nazar tejinder di waddi hik te gayi 1 min laiye tan oh shayad kithe kho hi gayi si ... Pher oh dobara gallan karan lag payi te usde gharon chali gayi .... Apne ghar de nhede dian jnanian nu oh dass di hai ki ajj oh tejinder de ghare gayi si kise kam vaaste te hathan di acting naal dass di hai dusriya jnanian nu ki tejinder de mumme EHNE wadde ne bhoth motte te wadde sacchi .... Eh sun ke tan dusriya jnanian de jive hosh ud gaye " 

Tejinder ik bhoth shaant , shareef subah di janai hai oh kade vi jyada gallan nhi kardi te jyada tar aurtan naal hi gal kardi hai bamdeyan nall gjat .. bhoth simole suit paandi hai , oh ehoje kapde paandi hai ki jisde naal jyada toh jyada usda shareer dhakeya rahe

Tejinder ik school vich kam kardi hai  , Tejinder da husband phichle 4 saal toh videsh gya hoya si te har mahine paise bhej dinda si ghar de kharche laiye , phichle 3 mahine pehlan usde 2 bacche vi videsh chale gaye apne daddy kol , hun bass usdi vaari si usda visa vi lagan wala si ....

2 - Kamlesh - eh vi tejinder de school vich rasoi vich kam karda si , badi mushkil naal usnu eh naukri mili si , vaise Kamlesh bhoth tharki kisam da insaan si ...

EPISODE - 1 

( apne mann vich tejinder apne naal gallan kardi hai ) oh hoo kadon mera visa aayega te mai vi bahar jaaongi apneyan kol , pata nhi eh ehna time kyu lga dinde ne ... Bass jaldi ho jaaye sara kam eh soch di soch di nu Tejinder nu pata hi nhi lageya kadon usda school da time hogya 

Oh jaldi naal tyaar ho ke school val nu nikal gayi ... Scootery te , Tejinder ehne simple suit paande si ki ohde suita de rang jyada te tar chite rang de hi hunde si ... Pata nhi ehni simple kyu si tejinder 

School phonch ke ohne apni scootery park kiti te school de kama vich busy hogayi .... Kamlesh di shuru toh Tejinder te akh si oh usnu apni biwi bnana chaunda si par oh ustoh bhoth darr da vi si kamlesh jadon vi Tejinder nu vekh da tan usdian akhan nu aaram mehsoos hunda , usda lun usdi hullare khaandi bund nu vekh ke aape khada ho jaya karda si 


Kamlesh koi na koi bhaane naal tejinder naal gallan maaran aajaya karda si te aggon tejinder vi usde naal bass matlab di gal hi kardi si jyada nhi , ehthon kamlesh andaja lahnda si ki ehsnu fsana mushkil wala kam hai 

Kamlesh sab toh end vich school toh bahar jaanda si , ajj usde dimaag vich khuch alag hi chal rhea si oh school de office vich gya te records vich oh tejinder da address labh da hai ..... Jadon usnu address mil jaanda hai tan usde chehre te alag hi hassi hundi hai 

( Shaam nu 5 vje ) 

Tejinder apne ghare vaapas aajandi hai te ghare de kama vich lag jaandi hai jive rasoi vich kam hor saaf sfaai de .... 

Doosre passe 

Kamlesh apne kamre vich baitha soch rhea si ki tejinder nu jaldi toh jaldi apna bnana pavega kyu ki ajj usnu pata lag gya si ki tejinder khuch mahineyan baad videsh jaa rahi hai , eh usnu ohdon oata lageya jadon oh bhoth jassosi naal tejinder te ik hor madam di gal sun rhea si , oh don tejinder ne apne baare dasseya ki oh jaan vali hai 

( Raat 10 vje ) 

Kamlesh eh soch ke hi pagal hoyi jaa rhea si ki oh scene kida da hovega jadon oh apne hathan naal tejinder de nange chittada nu kuttega eh soch soch ke hi usda bura haal ho rhea si... 

Kamlesh soch da hai ki sirf sochan naal khuch nhi hona usnu khuch karna paavega isliye oh ik paper te khuch likh da hai te badi himmat nall oh tejinder de ghar wal nu tur painda hai ..... Tejinder da ghar pind toh thoda bahar si ... Isda usnu thoda nuksaan si , kamlesh nu darr tan bhoth lag rhea si par oh tejinder nu paan laiye khuch vi kar sakda si ......

( Doosre paase raat nu 10:20 te ) 

Tejinder saun di tyaari kar hi rahi si ki usnu bell di awaz suni oh sovh di hai ki pata nhi kaun aagya is time sab sukh tan hai ? Sheeshe vich chunni set karke bahar nikal di hai tejinder thoda tension vich te gate kol phonch jaandi hai , gate khol ke bahar vekh di hai ki koi vi nhi hai ........

Tejinder bhoth ajeeb mehsoos hunda hai ohnu lagda hai ki kise bacche ne bell karti honi pher bhaj gya hona .. par ehthe kon te kyu aavega bell karan eh swaal oh apne aap toh phuch di hai ...

Istime te oh gbhraayi hundi hai te aachanak usdi nazar thalle jaandi hai te dekh di hai ik paper pya si .. oh paper nu chuk ke andar aajandi hai 

Kamlesh ik jagah te luk ( chup ) ke sab dekh rhea hunda hai naale tan usdi dil diyan dhadkna tez ho rhia hundia ne nalle usda lun khada hoyi janda hai , jadon oh vekh da hai ki tejinder ne paper chuk leya ... 

Andar jaake tejinder soch di hai ki eh paper kis da hai kis ne ehthe chadta te kyu ? Eh saare swaal usnu bhoth tang kar rahe si .. jadon oh bed te baith ke apne kamre vich oh paper padh di hai tan usdian akhan nu yakeen nhi aanda ki jo oh pad rahi hai ki oh sach hai ?? Usnu ehdan lagda hai ki usde pairan thallon zameen hi nikal gayi hove ... Dil ehni zor di dhak dhak kar rhea si jiven bahar hi aajayega , Tejinder tan poora paper vi nhi padh payi te usde hathan toh oh thalle gir gya te usne ik hath apne muh te rakh leya .....

To be continued
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#2
waitingggg .... plzz continue rakho
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#3
very good
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#4
Thank you for replying and agli update ajj aajayegi keep supporting
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#5
nice start ....
keep going........
thank u for sharing for ur story.......
pta nhi punjabi writers nu ki ho gya......sare hi apni apni story chad ke chale gye......
appreciate ur effort ....
keep writing
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(10-07-2019, 07:32 PM)doonknightz Wrote: nice start ....
keep going........
thank u for sharing for ur story.......
pta nhi punjabi writers nu ki ho gya......sare hi apni apni story chad ke chale gye......
appreciate ur effort ....
keep writing

Thank you for replying and supporting bass ehdan di support di hi zaroorat hai , te request hai baki readers nu vi ki oh vi review den reply karan story da , kiddan di lagi story ?
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#7
waiting
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#8
Tejinder tan poora paper vi nhi padh payi te usde hathan toh oh thalle gir gya te usne ik hath apne muh te rakh leya .....

EPISODE - 2 

Haaye mai maarja eh kine likeya hai ? Te aah ki likheya hai ? Jis kise ne vi likheya hai ki usnu koi sharam hai nhi ? Eh swaal tejinder kaur apne aap toh kardi hai ....akhir us paper vich likheya ki si ? Jis karke tejinder ehni pareshaan hogaayi ? 

Eh likheya si paper vich jheda kamlesh ne tejinder de ghar de aage chad ta si - " ki haal ne meri mote mummeyan waliye ? Mai tera nya gharwala bol raha hu ...mai tujhe bhoth chaatha hu dil se ...teri waddi bund ne mainu patt leya hai ...sach mai jab tu chal ti hai toh tere bade chittad bhoth aachi tarah se hilte hai , ek doosre mai bakte hai 
               Mai ehna naram chittada nu mehsoos karna chanda han... Jaldi toh jaldi tenu apni gharwali bnana chanda han , tere wadde dudh de bhare hoye mummeyan nundekh ke mere toh rheya nhi jaamda dil tan karda hai ki bass ehna nu choosla raj ke ... " 

Hun tejinder kaur bhoth pareshaan si aaj tak kise ne vi us naal ehdan di ghatiya gal nhi si kiti , oh tan apna hosh hi kho baithi si , Tejinder kaur de hath kamb de paaye si usnu kuj samaj nhi aareya si ki oh ki kare ? 

Gusse vich aake tejinder kaur ne oh paper jo Kamlesh ne likheya si oh faad dita te khea " salla pata nhi kon harami hai jo kisi di gharwaliyan nu ehdan di gandi gandi gallan karda hai " Tejinder kaur ne rajj ke usnu gallan kadiyan ... Par aje vi oh gbhraayi hoyi si kyu ki oh ghare apne ikali si usnu bhoth darr lag rhea si 

Oh soch rahi si ki je koi ehdan di parchi te likh sakda hai te ki pata oh mere ghare aake mere naal khuch vi kar sakda hai ? Is gall toh tejinder bhith darr gayi si .... 

Par ik gal jo tejinder kaur nu pata lagi si oh eh si ki jis kise ne vi eh harkat kiti hai matlab eh paper te jo kuj bi likheya hai ... Oh banda pind da nhi hai kyu ki isde vich dono hindi te punjabi da istemaal kita gya si .... Hun oh sochi baith gayi si ki ehdan da kon ho sakda hai ? Usde sochdeyan hi usde mobile di bell hoyi TRING - TRING 

jo thoda bhotha tejinder pehlan toh hi darri si hun oh apni phone di ghanti sun ke hor darr gayi ... Usmu laheya ki shaya eh ohsi bamde da phone ho sakda hai ..... TRING - TRING ... hundi rahi hun Tejinder kaur nu phone tan chakna hi phena si tan usne phone chakk hi leya 

Tejinder - hello ( darri hoyi awaz vich )

( Tejinder da husband ) - hello tejinder ki haal ne tere ? 

Tejinder - ( nu saah vich saah aaya pehlan tan oh darr hi gayi si ki shayad ohsi bande da ohone aagya hai ) hanji hello sab theek thaak tussi dasso 

Husband - sab theek hai na ? Teri awaz toh nhi lagda 

Tejinder - nhi oh vaise hi tuhanu lag rhea hai ( tejinder kaur ne jaan buj ke khuch nhi dasseya oh nhi chaamdi si ki usde gharwale nu pata lage .. tan oher agge jaake visa milan vich problem ho sakdi hai ... Oh nhi chaandi si ki oh kise pange karke apne family members nu milan toh reh je jo ki videsh vich ne ) 

Husband - aacha aacha , oh mai yan is karke phone kita si ki tenu dassan laoye ki visa da kam thoda delay hogya ehthe koi problem aagayi hai par tu tension na leh chethi sab theek ho jaayega 

Tejinder - eh khabar sun ke tejinder bhoth udaas ho jaandi hai te khendi hai oh hoo bhoth mada hoya chalo tussi dekh leyo chethi toh chethi kaam karvaan di koshish kareyo ... ( Tejinder apne gharwale nu dassna tan chaundi si ki ajj us naal ki hoya par ik darr usde mann de andar baitha si jis karke oh dass na paayi ) 

Husband - chal theek hai mai koshish karunga ok bye 

Tejinder - ok bye ( tejinder apne gharwale naal hor gall tan karni chaundi si oar usda gharwala sirf us naal matlab di hi gal karda si eh subaah Tejinder nu thoda pasand nhi si apne gharwale da ) 

Gbhraayi te darri hoyi tejinder oher us bande bare sochan lag jaandi hai par usnu khuch samaj nhi si aaundi shayad usde darr karke 

Jadon usdi nazar thalle us page te paindi hai jo ohne hi faadeya si tan oh soch di hai ki lok dusreyan di jnanian bare ki ki soch de ne usnu bhoth bura lagda hai kyu ki oh bhoth shareef jnani si ... Par jad usnu ik line jo us paper vich likhi si yaad aandi hai jo usde wadde mummeyan te bahar nu nikli hoyi bund bare dass di hai tan usi time oh sheeshe vich apne aap nu dekh di hai 

Te apne aap nu phuch di hai ki sacchi mere mumme matlab meri breast bhoth waddi hogayi hai ? Ki sacchi mere chittad jyada gol te mote te hamesha bahar nu nikle rhende ne ? Is soch vich tejinder 1 min laiye kho jaandi hai ..... Pher aachanak oh bol di hai AAYE HAAYE na na na na eh mai ki sochi jaani han ehdan da kuj nhi hai 

Is soch vichaar , darr , ghbraat vich oh bed ge oai jaamdi hai saun laoye te usnu aap nu hi nhi oata lagda ki kad oh so gayi ? 

( AGLE DIN SWERE ) 

Tejinder kaur uth di hai te ... Ajj plan kardi hai ki ajj oh school nhi jaayegi kyu ki kal raat toh hi oh bhoth pareshaan si ....

Naah dooh ke fresh ho ke sab toh oehlan tan ghar de jhede chote mote kam si oh khatam kardi hai tejinder kaur ...pher kal raat de scene bare sochan hi lagdi hai ki usde phone di bell pher toh hundi hai TRING - TRING 

Tejinder soch di hai ohh foo hun kis da phone aagya ? 

Tejinder - hello ? 

Paramjit kaur ( tejinder di aachi saheli ) - hello Tejinder kaur ki haal ne ? Phechanya ? 

Tejinder - oohh oo paramjit kaur wadiya sab wadiya tu dass tere ki haal ne ? 

Paramjit kaur - mai vi wadiya tenu eh puchan nu phone kita hai ki tu ajj ghare hi hai na ? Ajj main tere pindo langna hai iskarke socheya kyu na tenu mildi jaava ? 

Tejinder kaur - jaroor ji jaroor Aooo main ghare hi haan 

( SWERE 11 VJE ) 

Tejinder de ghar de bahar bell hundi hai TING - TONG 

Tejinder samaj jaandi hai ki paramjit kaur aagayi hai , oh jaldi naal jaake ghar da gate khol di hai 

Tejinder - aao ji aaao 

Paramjit kaur - thank you ji 
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Tejinder kaur - usnu ghar de ik room vich baitha dindi hai te aap kitchen vich juice te khuch biscuit leke aajandi hai 

Paramjit kaur - ooh leh isdi ki jaroorat si tejimder mai tan siraf tenu milan aayi han 

Tejinder - leh khuch vi tan nhi hai juice te biscuits hi tan ne .... ( Dono hass paindiyan ne ) 

Paramjit kaur - hor suna ki haal chaal sab theek thaak ? 

Tejinder - ( jhoot hi bol di hai , asal sachayi tan oh dassna nhi chaundi ki kal raat ki hoya mere naal ? ) Han sab theek tu dass 

Paramjit kaur - sab theek thaak , hor tera gharwala te bacche theek ne ? 

Tejinder kaur - han oh vi sab wadiya .... ( Tejinder kaur paramjit kaur nu apni aachi saheli samaj di si Tejinder ne oehlan vi paramjit naal kaiye gallan share kitian si usnu ohste vishvaas si bhoth ...ajj tejinder kaur soch di hai ki kise na kise tareeke naal oh apni is problem tan koi hal kadvalaye paramjit naal gal Karke ) 

Tejinder - ( soch rahi si ki us bande ne mere shareer bare bhoth khuch ajeeb likheya jo Tejinder kise vi haalat te manan nu tyaar nhi si .... Is laiye oh badi chalaki naal phuch di hai paramjit kaur toh ) 
 - hor dass ki tenu mai moti tan nhi nazar aandi , ki mai weight tan nhi wadha leya hass ke phuch di hai 

Paramjit kaur - nhi tan tu tan pehlan toh hi ehdan di hai mainu tan koi farak nhi lageya 

Tejinder kaur - ki matlab pehlan toh hi ? 

Paramjit kaur - matlab college toh hi shareer tera bhara hona shuru hogya si ... Hun par 

Tejinder kaur - ( di dil di dhadkan tez honi shuru ho jaandi hai eh sun ke ... Pher oh sochan lagdi hai ki jo kal us bande ne likheya kithe oh sach tan nhi ) par ki ? Saaf saaf dass na 

Paramjit kaur - ohh ho sun hun jadon toh tu maa bani hai ohs toh baad kuj shareer jyada bhaara hogya jive ki .... ( Hun paramjit thoda sharma jaandi hai oh poori gal dasssna nhi chaundi ) 

Tejinder - jiven ki ? Oohh oo sharma kyu rahi hai sadde vich keda koi banda baitha hai jis karke appa sharmaiye dass na ( tejinder kaur wargi shareef jnani vi kuj nhi dekh di jadon usde husan , usde figure te gal aajandi hai ) 

Paramjit kaur - yaar chal theek hai sun tu pher chup karke .. teri breast ( mumme ) bhoth waddi te moti hai ehdan lagda hai jiven do maas de pahad ekhate jud gaye hon ... Koi vi trre mummeyan nu dekh ke ehi sochu ga ki pata nhi kina k dudh da rass bhareya hai ehna vich ..... Teri bhar nu nikli hoyi chaudi bund , jadon tu turdi hai tan ehdan lagda hai ki tu jaan buj ke tu apne chittada nu hullara marvandi jaaa rahi hai ...par mainu pata hai tu ehdan jaan buj ke chittad hila ke nhi turdi ... Tere chittad rabb wallon hi ehne wadde hogaye ne ki jadon tu turdi hai tan ehdan lagda hai ki vibration mode lag gya hai chittada te 

In short tu ik pure te pakki PUNJABAN hai , kyu ki asal Punjaban da shareer bhaara tere warga hi hunda hai .... Eh hai asal gal 

Tejinder - eh sun ke tan jiven hil hi jaandi hai usnu samaj hi nhi aandi ki oh ki bole ? Aacha saachi oh god 

Paramjit - hanji eh gal hai , aacha gallan bhoth kar liyan time hogya hai jaan da mai phone te gall karungi ok 

Tejinder - tan aje vi maano paramjit di gallan toh bahar nhi aa paa rahi si ..... Thodi der tan ruk jaa hor 

Paramjit - na yaar time bhoth hogya hai 
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Tejinder - chal theek hai ok bye 

TBC 

please apne comment jarror karo , eh meri pehli story hai , tuhaade comment naal hi pata lagega ki story theek hai ki nhi
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#9
Bhut wadia g
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#10
bahut hi vadia .... waiting for next
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#11
Nice update ..carry on
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#12
(10-07-2019, 11:57 PM)Loverboyjassi Wrote: Bhut wadia g

Thank you
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#13
(11-07-2019, 08:40 AM)manpreetaj Wrote: bahut hi vadia .... waiting for next

Thank you for replying and next update will come today most probably
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(11-07-2019, 01:54 PM)Dhana amli Wrote: Nice update ..carry on

Thank you for replying
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#15
Kaim story aa ptolea
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waiting
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(11-07-2019, 05:06 PM)Kudichod Wrote: Kaim story aa ptolea

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(11-07-2019, 07:15 PM)manpreetaj Wrote: waiting

Ajj aajayegi update
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waiting
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Tejinder - tan aje vi maano paramjit di gallan toh bahar nhi aa paa rahi si ..... Thodi der tan ruk jaa hor 

Paramjit - na yaar time bhoth hogya hai 
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Tejinder - chal theek hai ok bye 


EPISODE - 3 

Paramjit kaur de jaan toh baad , tejinder kaur tan jiven apne khyalan vich kho hi gayi si ... Usde utte paramjit kaur dian gallan da bhoth asar hogya si ... Jo kuj paramjit kaur ne usne khea oh bilkul sach lag rhea si Tejinder kaur nu , oh sheeshe vich apne aap nu dekh di hai dobara te pehli nazar apne mummeyan te maardi hai 

 apne aap toh sawaal kardi hai " ajj tan paramjit kaur ne vi mere bare ohi kuj boleya jo us bande ne bolya si paper de raahi , oh apne mummeyan nu jadon jee bhar ke vekh di hai te eh soch laindi hai ki aale dwaale de pinda vich kise jnani de vi ehne wadde mumme nhi hai ... Mummeyan de side te ehna maas usnu Khush kar rhea si 

Ajj tejinder kaur nu pehli vaari apne wadde mummeyan te maan mehsoos hoya , oh tan ehni khush hogayi si ki eh sochan lag payi ki jnanian de  jina dono mummeyan da size hai na ohna ta mera iko hai , eh soch di ne oh kise hor hi duniya vich chalegi ... Hairaani wali gal tan eh hai ki tejinder kaur wargi sahreef jnani vi jadon apne sundar shareer bare hora kollon tareef sundi hai tan oh apna sahreefpuna chad dindi hai , te apne shareer de nashe vich ghum jaandi hai 

Jadon Tejinder kaur sheeshe agge ghum di hai te pher apnian akhan naal apne wadde chittada nu dekh di hai , apna ik hath chittad de ik passe rakh ke oh eh mehsoos kardi hai ki sacchi usde chittada te bhoth maas chadeya , te eh hi karan kai jis karke usde chittada dusriya jnanian nallon jyada wadde te sohne lagde ne 

Oh apnian akhan naal apne wadde chittada di khoobsurti nu apne dil de andar baithayi jaa rahi si ..... Tejinder kaur eh vi mehsoos kardi hai ki asal Zindagi da tan ohnu ajj pata lageya jadon toh us bande ne tejinder kaur nu us paper te usde shareer di tareef karke tejinder kaur nu dasseya ki oh kehde shareer di malkin hai ....

Pher tejinder kaur apne gharwale nu yaad karke khendi hai ki " Ik oh hai jisnu meri parwah nhi mere koi haal di fikar nhi " te ehthe mainu loki gandiyan - gandiyan gallan karde ne , ki mere gharwale nu koi fikar nhi mere ehne wadde shareer di jisne loka nu patt leya hai ? Eh sawaal oh apne app toh phuch di hai ? 

Tejinder kaur hun phir toh us bande bare sochan lagdi hai jisne usnu oh paper te oh sab kuj likh ke bhejya si .. oh soch ke bhoth hairaan hundi hai ki " meri parwah tan dusreyan bandeyan nu hai jhede ehton tak ki mere hilde chittada nu vi bhoth dhyan nall vekh de ne " eh sab kuj sochan nall usde andar kaafi change aani shuru ho jaandi hai 

( DUSRE PASSE )

kamlesh eh soch da rhenda si ki kadon oh din aayega jadon oh apne hathan naal tejinder sardarni nu nangi karega te uste saari Raat chadeya rahega jina ho sakuga ohna oh usnu chode ga , Kamlesh soch da hai ki tejinder te aje vi poori jwaani chadi hoyi hai oh tan ustoh bacche paida karan baare vi soch rhea si 

Par oh eh vi soch da hai ki .... Pehlan usnu tejinder nu pattna payega par kive ? Oh kadi kadi eh soch ke dukhi ho jaya kardi si ki " ki pata tejinder kaur warfw ehni takdi Punjaban sardarni usde kolo fasugi ki nhi ? " 

Par Kamlesh nu eh nhi si pata ki tejinder de dil de andar vi hal chal honi shuru hogayi si 

( SHAAM NU 5 VJE ) 

Tejinder nu eh tan pata lag gya si ki usda shareer sach vich bhoth bhaara te sundar hai jisnu lok bhoth pasand karde ne , par oh eh faisla nhi si kar paa rahi ki oh us bande da pata kive lgaaye jo usde wadde mummeyan te chittada naal pyaar kar baitha hai ? 

Ik dum usnu idea aanda hai ki usnu apni saheli paramjit kaur naal gall karni chaidi hai , oh usnu phone milandi hai 

Tejinder kaur - hello paramjit 

Paramjit kaur - han tejinder kaur 

Tejinder kaur - oh mai phuchna si ki tu theek thaak ghare phonch gayi si na ? 

Paramjit kaur - han han mai phonch gayi si 

Tejinder kaur - aacha ( oh soch di hai ki oh kiven paramjit kaur toh phuche ki " ik banda usde magar lag gya hai " pher oh ik tareeke naal phuch di hai ) ik gall dass

Paramjit kaur - han phuch 

Tejinder kaur - je koi tuhaade vich bhoth interest vkhaaye tan ki karna chaida hai ? 

Paramjit kaur - ( samaj gayi si ki eh shareef Punjaban jo hamesha simple suit paandi hundi si , jyada kise naal gal nhi si kardi hundi .. oh lagda patti gayi hai ) eh ki phuch rahi hai ? Ki matlab 

Tejinder kaur - oh vaise hi tu dass na ? 

Paramjit kaur - msinu lagda hai " je koi kise vich interest vkhaaye tan ohna dono gal baat jarror karni chahidi hai " ( paramjit kaur soch ke bhoth excited ho jaandi hai ki pata nhi kaun hoyega kismat wala jo tejinder wargi jnani di bund maarega ) 

Tejinder kaur - oh aacha theek hai , mai kardi han tenu phone vehli hoke pher 

Paramjit kaur - theek hai 


Tejinder kaur nu hun lagda hai ki usnu us bande naal gal baat jaroor karni chaidi hai par kadi - kadinoh eh vi soch di hai ki ki oh theek kar rahi hai ? Hun usnu ik pakka faisla karna hi paina si .....

( DOOJE PASSE ) 

Kamlesh da ta sara din hi tejinder de khyalan vich guzarda hai , hun kamlesh plan bna rhea hunda hai ki usnu pher toh tejinder de ghar paper chad ke aana chaida hai ? Ki pata tejinder te koi asar ho jaaye ? Oh soch lainda hai ki oh baar baar paper te apne khyaal tejinder de laiye likhega te har roj usde ghar agge chad ke aavega jadon tak oh nhi mann di .

Kamlesh bhoth panning naal chal rhea si , oh nhi chaanda si ki oh fadeya jaave , usds iko maksad hai tejinder kaur nu apni gharwali bnana , dekho hun oh is te kamyaab hunda hai ki nhi ? Ajj jo paper usne pher toh tejinder kaur de ghar agge chad ke aana hai oh usdi tyaari matlab kamlesh paper likhan baith jaanda hai .... 

( RAATI 9 VJE )

Tejinder kaur apne ghare apne aap nu ikali mehsoos kardi hai jadon oh time val dekhdi hai tan oh yaad kardi hai ki kal raat 10-10:30 vaje oh banda paper chad ke gya si .... Oh soch di hai ki ajj vi oh ehdan karega ? 

Usde mann vich hor vi vichaar chal rahe hunde ne , jiven ki ... " Ki us bande nu darr nhi lagda kise vyaahi 2 baacheyan di maa nu eh sab kuj likh ke bhejna " 

Oh eh vi soch di hai ki je oh banda asal vich mere phiche lag gya hai tan oh ajj vi koi harkat jaroor karega ....hun tan tejinder de laiye time kadna vi mushkil ho gya si ... Tejinder kaur wargi Punjaban jo jyada bandeyan naal gal baat nhi si kardi hundi ajj oh bandeyan duwara likhe apne wadde mumme te chittada di tareef sunan te padhan laiye excited hai 

( RAAT 10:30 VJE ) 

Kamlesh ajj thoda late hojanda hai apne room toh niklan toh , te ik chadar di bukal maar ke Tejinder kaur de ghar wal nu tur painda hai , usde hath vich ik paper hunda hai 

Tejinder vaar vaar time dekh di hai , usnu lagda hai ki kal jo hoya oh ehven hi si kise da koi interest nhi mere vich ... Je hunda tan hun tak oh aake bell maar ke chala jaanda , dukhi te niraash ho ke tejinder kaur saun chali jaandi hai 

( RAAT 11 VJE ) 

TING - TONG 

di awaz sun ke tejinder kaur hil jaandi hai oh pher toh gbhraajandi hai te is waari oh thoda khush vi si par ik alag andaaz vich , oh chunni le ke bahar wal nu nikal di hai 

Kamlesh is vaari kuj alag karda hai oh paper ghar de andar nhi balki bilkul gate de bahar chad dinda hai tan ki oh dhoor khada ik wadde paed ( tree ) de phiche tejinder nu dekh sake 

Tejinder apne vehde vich aandi hai te paper labhan di koshish kardi hai , par usnu lab da nhi oh thoda udass ho jaandi hai te bahar gate khol ke jaandi hai te dekh di hai 

Ik paper bilkul gate de bahar peya hoya si , is time te Tejinder kaur ne apna sir chunni naal dhakeya hoya si , oh pehlan left vekhdi hai te phir right jadon oh dekh di hai ki koi vi nhi hai tan oh bade aaaram naal oh paper ( parchi ) chuk ke apni kameez de vich apne wadde 2 mummeyan vich wali line de vich chupa lhendi hai te andar aajandi hai 

Eh sab kuj Kamlesh dhoor toh dekh rhea si eh dekh ke tan usde hosh hi udd gaye hun tan Kamlesh khushi de maare pagal ho rhea si , oh sochan lag peya ki oh din dhoor nhi jad oh Tejinder nu kaudi karke usdi bund PATAK - PATAK maarega 

Tejinder jaldi naal apne kamre de andar aake apne mummeyan vichon oh parchi kadan di koshis kardi hai , tejinder kaur nu thoda time jyada lag da hai parchi kadan vich apne mummeyan vicho kyu ki parchi thalle challe jaandi hai te tuhanu tan pata hi hai ki tejinder de mumme kinne wadde ne ? Oh parchi kad ke usnu padhna shuru kar dindi hai 

To be continued 

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