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Kahani ik PUNJABAN di ( ਕਹਾਣੀ ਇਕ ਪੰਜਾਬਣ ਦੀ )
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Phichli vaar kise problem karke delete karni pe gayi si story is karke dobara start kar rhea 

Disclaimer - eh story bilkul imaginative hai story vich use kite gaye characters de name vi imaginary ne

INTRODUCTION OF CHARACTERS

1 - Tejinder kaur - umar 43 saal figure 42 - 30 - 40 , shayad hi kisi jnani da ehda da figure hoyega jis tra da Tejinder kaur da hai .. mote te wadde mumme Tejinder di khoobsurti nu chaar chand lah dinde si , asal vich jadon jnanian 35 saal toh uppar ho jaandian ne tan ohna de mumme te chittad kudarti wadde ho jaande ne , par tejinder kaur naal tan alag hi hoya mummeyan te jarroat nallon jyada maas chad gya te , te kudarti usde mumme khade - khade rhende si , hamesha Tejinder bra jarror paa ke rakh di si , motia baavan usde bhaare shareer da saboot dindia si , par usde tid te jyada maas nhi si , jithe hona chahida si uthe raj ke si 

Tejinder apne shareer karke apne te apne aale dwaale de pinda vich charcha da hamesha visha bani rhendi si , jwaan mundeyan toh leke budheyan tak kaiyan di jaan ban chuki si ohh 

Tejinder da lakk bhotha bhara si , pata nhi kine killo vich chittada te maas chadeua hoya si , jadon turdi si tan usde chitad kade right nu hullara khaande si te kadi left nu .. chittada da maas hilda vekh ke tan maano jive lun baith da hi nhi si hunda , chittada toh thalle aagaye usde mote mote pat jo ki usdiyan lattan di khoobsurti di sab toh eham vajah si , 

Tejinder apne ehna saare shareer de hiseyan toh anjaan si , par pind dian jnanian nu Tejinder da shareer vekh ke both alag mehsoos hunda si .. kyu ki ohna vichon kise da vi figure Tejinder warga nhi si , kehdi jnani hai jo wadde mumme nhi chaundi ? Kedi jnani hai jo bahar nu nikli hui bund nhi chaundi ? Par afsos ehdan da figure sirf te sirf tejinder da hi si 

" Ik vaar ik pind di jnani Tejinder de ghare gayi si kise kam vaaste , ohthe usde naal usdian aam gallan baatan hundian rhian us time Tejinder apne ghare kam kar rahi si te usne chunni nhi si liti hoyi , us time us jnani di nazar tejinder di waddi hik te gayi 1 min laiye tan oh shayad kithe kho hi gayi si ... Pher oh dobara gallan karan lag payi te usde gharon chali gayi .... Apne ghar de nhede dian jnanian nu oh dass di hai ki ajj oh tejinder de ghare gayi si kise kam vaaste te hathan di acting naal dass di hai dusriya jnanian nu ki tejinder de mumme EHNE wadde ne bhoth motte te wadde sacchi .... Eh sun ke tan dusriya jnanian de jive hosh ud gaye " 

Tejinder ik bhoth shaant , shareef subah di janai hai oh kade vi jyada gallan nhi kardi te jyada tar aurtan naal hi gal kardi hai bamdeyan nall gjat .. bhoth simole suit paandi hai , oh ehoje kapde paandi hai ki jisde naal jyada toh jyada usda shareer dhakeya rahe

Tejinder ik school vich kam kardi hai  , Tejinder da husband phichle 4 saal toh videsh gya hoya si te har mahine paise bhej dinda si ghar de kharche laiye , phichle 3 mahine pehlan usde 2 bacche vi videsh chale gaye apne daddy kol , hun bass usdi vaari si usda visa vi lagan wala si ....

2 - Kamlesh - eh vi tejinder de school vich rasoi vich kam karda si , badi mushkil naal usnu eh naukri mili si , vaise Kamlesh bhoth tharki kisam da insaan si ...

EPISODE - 1 

( apne mann vich tejinder apne naal gallan kardi hai ) oh hoo kadon mera visa aayega te mai vi bahar jaaongi apneyan kol , pata nhi eh ehna time kyu lga dinde ne ... Bass jaldi ho jaaye sara kam eh soch di soch di nu Tejinder nu pata hi nhi lageya kadon usda school da time hogya 

Oh jaldi naal tyaar ho ke school val nu nikal gayi ... Scootery te , Tejinder ehne simple suit paande si ki ohde suita de rang jyada te tar chite rang de hi hunde si ... Pata nhi ehni simple kyu si tejinder 

School phonch ke ohne apni scootery park kiti te school de kama vich busy hogayi .... Kamlesh di shuru toh Tejinder te akh si oh usnu apni biwi bnana chaunda si par oh ustoh bhoth darr da vi si kamlesh jadon vi Tejinder nu vekh da tan usdian akhan nu aaram mehsoos hunda , usda lun usdi hullare khaandi bund nu vekh ke aape khada ho jaya karda si 


Kamlesh koi na koi bhaane naal tejinder naal gallan maaran aajaya karda si te aggon tejinder vi usde naal bass matlab di gal hi kardi si jyada nhi , ehthon kamlesh andaja lahnda si ki ehsnu fsana mushkil wala kam hai 

Kamlesh sab toh end vich school toh bahar jaanda si , ajj usde dimaag vich khuch alag hi chal rhea si oh school de office vich gya te records vich oh tejinder da address labh da hai ..... Jadon usnu address mil jaanda hai tan usde chehre te alag hi hassi hundi hai 

( Shaam nu 5 vje ) 

Tejinder apne ghare vaapas aajandi hai te ghare de kama vich lag jaandi hai jive rasoi vich kam hor saaf sfaai de .... 

Doosre passe 

Kamlesh apne kamre vich baitha soch rhea si ki tejinder nu jaldi toh jaldi apna bnana pavega kyu ki ajj usnu pata lag gya si ki tejinder khuch mahineyan baad videsh jaa rahi hai , eh usnu ohdon oata lageya jadon oh bhoth jassosi naal tejinder te ik hor madam di gal sun rhea si , oh don tejinder ne apne baare dasseya ki oh jaan vali hai 

( Raat 10 vje ) 

Kamlesh eh soch ke hi pagal hoyi jaa rhea si ki oh scene kida da hovega jadon oh apne hathan naal tejinder de nange chittada nu kuttega eh soch soch ke hi usda bura haal ho rhea si... 

Kamlesh soch da hai ki sirf sochan naal khuch nhi hona usnu khuch karna paavega isliye oh ik paper te khuch likh da hai te badi himmat nall oh tejinder de ghar wal nu tur painda hai ..... Tejinder da ghar pind toh thoda bahar si ... Isda usnu thoda nuksaan si , kamlesh nu darr tan bhoth lag rhea si par oh tejinder nu paan laiye khuch vi kar sakda si ......

( Doosre paase raat nu 10:20 te ) 

Tejinder saun di tyaari kar hi rahi si ki usnu bell di awaz suni oh sovh di hai ki pata nhi kaun aagya is time sab sukh tan hai ? Sheeshe vich chunni set karke bahar nikal di hai tejinder thoda tension vich te gate kol phonch jaandi hai , gate khol ke bahar vekh di hai ki koi vi nhi hai ........

Tejinder bhoth ajeeb mehsoos hunda hai ohnu lagda hai ki kise bacche ne bell karti honi pher bhaj gya hona .. par ehthe kon te kyu aavega bell karan eh swaal oh apne aap toh phuch di hai ...

Istime te oh gbhraayi hundi hai te aachanak usdi nazar thalle jaandi hai te dekh di hai ik paper pya si .. oh paper nu chuk ke andar aajandi hai 

Kamlesh ik jagah te luk ( chup ) ke sab dekh rhea hunda hai naale tan usdi dil diyan dhadkna tez ho rhia hundia ne nalle usda lun khada hoyi janda hai , jadon oh vekh da hai ki tejinder ne paper chuk leya ... 

Andar jaake tejinder soch di hai ki eh paper kis da hai kis ne ehthe chadta te kyu ? Eh saare swaal usnu bhoth tang kar rahe si .. jadon oh bed te baith ke apne kamre vich oh paper padh di hai tan usdian akhan nu yakeen nhi aanda ki jo oh pad rahi hai ki oh sach hai ?? Usnu ehdan lagda hai ki usde pairan thallon zameen hi nikal gayi hove ... Dil ehni zor di dhak dhak kar rhea si jiven bahar hi aajayega , Tejinder tan poora paper vi nhi padh payi te usde hathan toh oh thalle gir gya te usne ik hath apne muh te rakh leya .....

To be continued
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Kahani ik PUNJABAN di ( ਕਹਾਣੀ ਇਕ ਪੰਜਾਬਣ ਦੀ ) - by Rupinder - 09-07-2019, 10:22 PM



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