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Fantasy Ron~the dragon holder (Sgp2009) - ( Completed)
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"maine kaha tha na lisa ki mujhe us din bahut dukh hoga jab main tumhe marunga"
lisa ne Ron ki taraf dekha,Ron ki ankhe bhi nam thi lekin gussa kahi jyada tha...Lisa chahti to Ron ko sach bata sakti thi lekin wo aage kuch nahi boli usne socha ki yadi Ron ko wo sab sach bata deti hain to Ron zindagi bhar khud ko maaf nahi karega...isliye wo chup rahi...lisa ne apne dono hatho se Ron ka chehra thama...
"Martin zindagi me chahe kitani bhi pareshani aaye jeena mat chhodna..."
"ab ye meharbani kyun kar rahi ho..."
"mujhe maaf kar dena Ro....."lisa ke shabd wahi rook gaye uska sharir thanda pad chuka tha...Aditya waha daudta hua aaya aur lisa ko mara hua pakar use bahut dukh hua...
"Ron ye nahi hona chahiye tha..."
"kya nahi hona chahiye tha...aur ye tujhe lisa ke prati hamdardi kyun paida ho gayi..."
Aditya kuch nahi bol paya aur waha se dusari taraf chala gaya...Ron ne lisa ke sharir ko samundar me phenk diya...
"bilandar-oye hum jeet gaye...lekin mujhe ab bhi ek baat khatak rahi hain aur wo ye ki yadi Ron hee Martin hain to phhir wo abhi tak zinda kaise hain..."
"Ron-chhodo yar ab kaise zinda hoon ye puchh raha hain...kuch der baad puchhega ki main kyun zinda hoon...tum log apne hisse ka khazana lo aur baki ki zindagi shan se guzaro..."
sabhi ki is baat par sahmati ban gayi ki koyi Ron se kuch bhi nahi puchhega...spiritual ship ab pallora ki taraf badh raha tha...Ron spiritual ship ke ek hisse me kakele khada spiritual se takra kar wapas jati hui lahro ko dekh raha tha...dusari taraf bilandar aur Aditya khazane ke batware ke baare me baat kar rahe the...
"sun be Aditya...tujhe aaj Ron badla badla kyun lag raha hain...."
"kyunki usne lisa ko apne hatho se maar diya...."
"to kya galat kiya yadi Ron use nahi marta to lisa use mar deti..."
"lisa use ab nahi marti...Ron ne lisa ko markar bahut badi galti kar di...."
"tujhe lisa se pyar ho gaya tha kya be "
"lisa ko Gabriel ne apne vash me karke rakha tha is baat ki khabar Ron ko nahi thi usne anjane me hee lisa ko maar diya..."
"Ron ko tune abhi tak bataya kyun nahi ki sach kya tha..."
"main jab spiritual [ar pahuncha tab tak lisa mar chuki thi...aur uske baad batane ka koyi fayda nahi tha..."
"to kab tak chhupayega usse..."
"kuch baate Ron ko bhi maloom na chale ye hee uske liye behtar hoga..."
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Riya ab puri tarah thik thi..ladayi me usko bahut chot aayi thi lekin ab wo bilkul thik thi...Riya ki bhi halat kuch Ron ke hee tarah thi...wo bhi akele khadi samundar ko tak rahi thi...
"Ron-yaha kya kar rahi ho..."
"Ron kabhi kabhi hum jise chahte hain use hee kyun khona padta hain..."
"tum Raaj ki baat kar rahi ho..."
"haan main Raaj ki hee baat kar rahi hoon...ab dekho na Raaj mere samne hain lekin phhir bhi main use mahsoos nahi kar sakti...usse baat nahi kar sakti..."
"mujhe maaf kar do Riya..."
"isme tumhari koyi galti nahi..."
"mujhe tumhe pahle hee bata dena chahiye tha..."
lisa waha se chali gayi...Ron use jate hue dekhta raha...Ron ne ab dragon ko alag kar diya Raaj dragon ke roop me udta hua chala gaya...sabhi use jate hue dekhte rahe...
"seth-Ron kya wo wapas insan ban payega..."
"mujhe nahi maloom..."
dekhte -dekhte dragon aankho se door chala gaya...
"bilandar pallora pahunchne wale hain,kitna maal chahiye tujhe..."
"main soch raha tha ki main bhi ek baar bahar ki duniya ko dekhu aur waise bhi tu Riya ,Aditya aur seth ko chhodne to jayega hee..."
"tujhe bhi hawa lag gayi chal phhir..."
2 DAYS LATER...................
"hum pahunch gaye kya..."spiritual ke rukne par seth ne Ron se puchha...
"calcutta se abhi thodi doori par hain...yaha se hum koyi chhoti naav lenge aur phhir chalenge ...."
"yaha naav kahkar mangega to kuch nahi milne wala boat bolna warna dehati samajh kar bhaga denge..."
"yadi tum logo ki itani hee akat hoti to aaj tak devils traingle ki mystery khul chuki hoti...ab chale mujhe mere sharabkhane me bhi jana hain"
sabhi waha se do boat me nikle ek me Riya ,Ron aur seth the aur dusare me bilandar aur Aditya...
"Aditya-abey tu itane sare paiso ka kya karega...kahi tu yahi rahne ka vichar to nahi kar raha hain..."
"yaha hain hee kya aisa...apun to pallora me jakar aish karega...tujhe maloom hain pallora me apun ne ek item pata ke rakhi hain...jake usi ke sath zindagi gujarunga..."
"chal beta teri to life ban gayi apun to abhi bhi talash me hoon ki koyi achchhi si maal mil jaye ..."
"meri ek baat manega..."
"chal bak..."
"tu mere sath pallora kyun nahi chalta jise main pyar karta hoon uski ek chhoti bahan hain...ekdum tanatan hain..."
"ek ladki ke liye main pallora jau.."
"chal ek baar chal ke dekh waha ki sharab aur ladki ka kahna hee kya..."
"chal tu itna bolta hain to ek baar chal ke dekhta hoon..."
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"janeman tum ab bhi udas ho..."
"rang me aa gaye tum ..."
"ab kya karu janeman jo hua so hua ab jab mere pass mera jahaj hain wo bhi khazane se bhara hua...aur duniya me ladkiyo ki kami nahi hain..."
sabhi boat se neeche utar gaye...seth ne apne hath hawa me uthate hue bola.."chalo sala sab khatam ho gaya..khazana bhi mil gaya aur jaan bhi salamat hain...problem bas ek hee hain ab meri life me..."
"Ron-kya"
"sala jis ladki ko pasand karta hoon uska baap bhav kha raha hain..."
"to chhod usko aur pakad le dusari ko ..."
"haan ab to aisa hee karna padega..."
Ron seth ko pakad kar kinare le gaya aur dheere se bola...
"Nair ke ghar ka pata janta hain tu..."
"haan lekin tu kyun puchh raha hain..."
"aaj raat ko tere ghar me jo bhi main bhejunga uska aadha hissa Nair ko de dena..."
seth ne apna address likhkar Ron ko de diya...Riya bhi kal milne ke liye kahkar waha se chali gayi...aur Ron ,bilandar aur Aditya ek chhote se bar ki araf mud gaye.....
NEXT DAY ON MORNING................
seth abhi abhi utha tha aur usne jaise hee apne flat ka gate khola use samne do box rakkhe dikhayi pade...seth ne waha kaam karne wale guard ko aawaj lagayi...
"ji sahab aapne bulaya..."
"ye box kaun rakh ke gaya..."
"wo koyi aaya tha maine jab aapko uthana chaha to unhone mana kar diya aur ye aapko dene ke liye kah kar chale gaye..."
"thik hain tum jao..."
seth dono box ko andar laya tabhi use dhyan aaya ki Ron ne use kuch dene ke liye kaha tha...Seth ne utsukta purvak ek box ko khola uski ankho me chamak aa gayi wo box pura khazane se bhara pada tha usme beshumar sona bhara pada tha...seth ne dusare box ko bhi jaldi se khola usme bhi wahi tha jo pahale me the lekin us box me ek letter bhi tha...seth us letter ko padhne laga...
"""ye box nair ke yaha bhejwa dena main nahi chahta ki uske ghar walo ko koyi pareshani uthani pade....aur tu yahi soch raha hoga ki mujhe likhna padhna kab se aa gaya lekin ye letter maine nahi Aditya ne likha hain...apni zindagi shan se jeena...kismat me hoga to phhir milenge ALVIDA..."
"sala ye Ron to nekdil insan nikla..."
Riya ko Aditya aur seth ne kal jo mobile number diya tha uspe wo lagatar call kar rahi thi lekin koyi bhi call ka jawab nahi de raha tha...
"ye sale kaha bhag gaye.."
tabhi uska mobile baj utha...usne screen par number dekha call Aditya ki thi...
"hello Aditya ,kaha ho tum..."
"janeman main Ron hoon tumhare ghar ke pichhale hisse me kuch rakhha hain tumhare liye aur haan ab dobaa phone mat karna...."
"kyun..."
"phone lagega hee nahi...ALVIDA"
Riya teji se pichhe ki taraf gayi...waha bhi waisa hee box rakhha tha jaisa Ron ne seth ke ghar bheja tha..Riya ne jaldi se box khola usme bhi ek letter tha...
"Riya janeman ,ye tumhare hisse ka maal ab kya hain ki mehnat maine ki aur khazana barabar hisso me bate ye thik nahi laga mujhe...aur ek sawal tumhare dimak me ghoom raha hoga ki mujhe likhna padhna kaise aata hain to main bata doon ki ye letter Aditya ne likha hain...ALVIDA..."
"sala kameena kahi ka..."
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PALLORA ICELAND..........
Ron spiritual ship par khada tha..bilandar aur Aditya pallora ke kinare par khade the...
"Aditya-Ron ab tu kaha jayega..."
"jitna maal diya hain utne me aisa kar jyada sawal jawab mat kar aur haan us mote ko jaroor marna jisne hum dono ko pareshan kiya tha..."
"abey main to jate hee wo sharabkhana khrid lunga aur us mote sand ko naukar bana kar rakhunga..."
"mujhe tujhse aisi hee ummid thi..."
"Ron ab sab sahi ho gaya...ab tu bhi apni zindagi jee le tera jahaj jo mil gaya hain ja aish kar..."
"ek baat yaad rakhna sab sahi nahi hua hain abhi ye to sirf shuruat hain ant isse bhi bura hoga...Alvida

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RE: Ron~the dragon holder(Sgp2009) - by LoveStar - 03-12-2018, 03:28 PM
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