24-08-2019, 12:38 PM
chapter 1 bohot fast tha. aur yehi sahi hai. choti choti story ho to likhne ka momentum achha hota hai. otherwise story lambi khich jaye to writer fatigue ki wajah se likhna hi band kar deta hai.
all the best bro. Also waiting for raja rani story.!!!!!
all the best bro. Also waiting for raja rani story.!!!!!
(24-08-2019, 11:43 AM)Baban Wrote: Friends Naya chapter shuru karne se pehle ekbar last time aap logon ka chapter1 ka last feedback chahta hoon.
Chapter one kitna mast laga doston?
Agar accha laga to comments karna and pls mujhe rate dena.