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ਘਰ ਦੀਆਂ‌ ਫੁੱਦੀਆਂ
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saware othe te assi School jan lai tiyar hoi te school wal chal pae. par aaj ik gal alag c oh ih ki aaj jo koi v kudi ya aunty dekh nu mil rahi c bas dil kar da c is nu ithe lami pa ke chod dava. par ida hona ni c is lai assi thark phorde hoe school puj gai. sara din school ch bas kal jo film dekhi c oh hi akha samne aa rahi c. ise tara din lang gia te assi phir to aaj robin de room te jake film dekhi te muth mari te soun gae. 

din bas ise tara lang rahe c assi har 2-3 din koi na koi film lake auni te os nu dekh ke swad laina te muth marni. hun dil kise na kise di fuddi maran nu karda c. lun ta har vale hi khada rehda c. ase tar din langde rahe te sade papar aage te assi apna thiyan padai te laga ta kio ki hun sade 10th de papar c. te sade papar suru hoe assi pure dil nal papar dite te. 

ajj sada last papar c te kal nu assi apne-2 ghar nu jana c is lai main robin nu kiha ki bai aaj kio na masti kiti jave oh v man gia te assi sam nu os de room ikathe hoe te navi filma la ke dekhan lage par aaj film kuch alag c. filam ch ik munda te kudi san. phila ta dove apna tv dekh rahe c. par phir dove ik dusre de nade ho ke ik dusre te bul cusan lage. ih dekh di sar hi sade lun khade ho gae. kuch chir bad dove alag hoe te lame-2 saah lain lag pae. phir ik dosre val dekhan lage ta munda kihda didi ajj ta tare bul cuaas ke swad aa gia ( jo assi film de dekh rahe c oh English ch par main ithe os nu punjabi ch likh reha kio ki English ch oh swad ni c ouna likhan da) os de ine gal sun ke mera muh khula hi reh gia te main robin val akha pad-2 ke dekhan laga.

main robin nu puchea ih ki aa oh kihda pihla film puri dekh lai phir puchli jo puchna aa. main chup kar ke tv te chal rahi film dekhan laga. hun munde ne kudi nu sofe te lami pake us de bul chus reha c te apne dova hatha nal os de mumme put reha c. kudi v pura swad lai rahi c te oh de wala ch hath pher rahi c. munde ne kudi T-shirt utari te os de mumme nage ho gae. oh hun kudi de mumme chupan laga te apna ik hat kudi di lower ch pata. 

kudi us nal ho chimbed gai te os da sir apne mummiyan te daban lagi. munde ne outh ke kudi de lower otar diti te os di fuddi te apna muh lja ke fuddi nu chusan laga. kudi nu bhut swad aa reha c te os da pani nikal gia. kudi ne munde nu baha to phad ke upar chuk ke os de bul chusan lagi. phir ik ik kar ke os ne munde de sare kapde khol dite.

kapre kholan to bad kudi ne munde da lun hath ch phadiya. te niche beth ke lun nu apne muh ch pa ke us nu chugan lai. kuch der bad jad munde to na bardast hoiya ta us ne kodi nu phar ke sofe te lami pake os diya lata khol ke. lata vich aake apne lun de tope te thuk laiya te topa fuddi te rakh ik jor nal ghasa maria te lun kudi de fudi ch vadta kudi ne us nu apne nal ghut lia. kuch der bad munde ne kudi diyan lata apne modiyan te rakh ke taz-2 ghase maran laga te kudi v niche to apni bund hila ke swad lai rahi c. munda hun full tez-2 ghase marda hoiya kihda didi main chutan laga aa te kudi kahdi pade mari fuddi ch hi paxe apna pani. kuch der bad munde ne kudi nu ghut lia te os de fuddi ch hi apna pani kadan laga. munde de nal hi kudi di fuddi ne jabab de dita te osda v pani nikal gia ote dove ik dusre de gal ch baha pa ke lame pae rahe osh to bad film khatam hoi.

film khatam hon to bad main ik dam hous ch aiya te jad main niche dekiya ta mera hath apne lun te c te main os nu tez-2 hila raha c kuch der bad mera pani nikal gia te main bed te lama pai gia. kuch der bad jad mari akh khuli ta mai robin val dekhiya oh mainu dekh de muskura reha c. main os nu puchiya ih ki c koi bhean bhai apas ch kida chudai kar sakde ne. robin kihda aaj kal sab hunda aa pihla sirf ih baher le mulak ch hi hunda c. par aaj kal apne mulak ch v hon lag pia aa. main us nu kiha ih ta galat aa. oh hasan laga te kihda ih ta pata ni ki ih galat aa ya sahi par hunda aa. ih sirf bhai bhean ch hi nahi * dever bhabi * bap bati * maa putt * te hor kai restiyan ch v chudai hundi aa. robin de gal sun ke mera sir dukhan laga. os to bad os nemainu bhut kuch dasiya te main sunda reha. bad ch jad mainu apna sir kuch thik lagan laga ta assi ik bar ohi film dubare dekhi de muth mar ke soun gai. bed te pai ta gae c par akha ch neend ni c main ta bas ihe soch reha c ki ih kida ho sakda jo robin ne mainu aaj jo kuch v dasiya aa. main robin val rekhiya ta oh suta pia c main us to kuch puchna c par phir sochiya saware puch la ga te aahi soch de hoi mainu pata hi na laga ki mainu kad neend aagi 

dusre din saware outhde hi naha ke main ready hoiya ta jad robin dekhiya ta oh v naha ke ready ho reha c. osde ready hon to bad main os kol gia te os nu kiha ke tu kah reha c ki apne desh ch v oda hi hunda jida da film ch dakhiya c. oh kihda haa hunda aa. main kiha ki tu kide ajhe nu janda aae jo ida kar de hon. pihla ta oh chup reha phir mare val dekh ke kihda tainu das ta dava par tu kise nu dasi na main kiha nahi das da. robin kihda main apne mame de kudi te munde nu chudai karde dekhiya c. main os nu kiha kida kithe te kive. mare ine swal ik dam sun ke oh hasan laga te bad ch os ne mainu sari gal dasi te main sun ke heran ho gia. id hi gala karde hoe assi roti khan tur pai te roti kha ke aun to bad assi apna saman pack kita ghar nu jan tiyar ho gai te akhri bar jande-2 milke phir milan da vada kae ke apne apne ghar nu tur pai mainu mare papa lain aai c te assi gadi ch bah ke ghar nu tur pae. main gadi turan to bad ithe bitae time bar sochan laga. 
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