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ਘਰ ਦੀਆਂ‌ ਫੁੱਦੀਆਂ
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ghar aa ke roti khan to bad apne room ch bad te pai gia te schon laag ke is sare masle de jankari bare kis nal gal kite gave.ih gal soch-2 main soon gia. te sam nu didi ne othiya te tea dite pin nu chaa pi ke main grond wal nu tur pia. 

jad main ground ch puja ta kala ground di kannd te batha c os nu dekh ke mainu odan wala seen yaad aa gia te main nive pa ke os kolo langan laga ta kale ne mainu apne wal oun nu kiha. 

jad main dard-2 kale kol punchiya ta kale ne mainu apne kol bithen nu kiha main kale kol bath gia. te kala mera hal chal puchan laga te papra bar v kuch de gala karan to bad jad main kale nu kiha ki main hun chal da aa ta os ne mainu rok lia te kihan laga bihja gala karde aa

j - daso kale veer ki gal kar ne aa ( darde darde main kiha) 

k - onj ta kuch ni main kiha kafi din hoge appa nu mil main sochea chal batth de gala karde aa

j - huuuuu

kuch chir mare wal dekhan to bad kala mare wal dekh ke kihan laga

k - tu os din othe ke kar reha c

j - kuch ni veer main ta othe lukea hoia c

k - achea sirf lukia hi c ki kuch dekiya v c

kale di gal sun pihla ta main dar gia par phir himat jahi kar ke main os nu kiha

j - kale veer kuch-2 ta dekhia c par kuch samag ni laga 

k - acha ki samaj ni laga par mainu ni lagda ki tanu kuch samaj ni aaiya 

j - sachi veer mainu kuch v ni pata lag 

k - chal pihr thik aa te pata kar ke v ki lana aa

j - nahi-2 main pata kar na aa ( mare muh cho apne aap hi nikal gia) 

k - ki pata kar na aa 

j - veer jo odan hoiya c oh sab kuch 

k - mainu ni lagda ki tainu kuch dasan di lor aa par je tu kihna ta phir aaj rat nu jad light jan te khelan laga ge ta othe hi aa je 

os de gal sun ke mainu pihla dar v laga ki mainu jana chida ki nahi par phir main os nu kiha 

j - thik aa kale veer main tainu othe hi milu ga ok

k - ok 
chal phir hun khel ga ke te raat nu mil de aa. us to bad main apne dosta na khelan laga te khelan to bad assi sare ghar aa gai te mainu hun light jan di udik ckuch chir bad light chali gai te main phaj ke gali ch gia te holi-2 sare othe aan lage kala v othe aa gia te assi khelan lage te main ose ghar ch ja ke luck gia te kala v othe hi aa gia par aaj oh ikala c te mainu dekh muskuran laga te mainu aa ke kihda 
k - ha das ki pata karna c

os de ih gal sun mainu sang on lage te main nice pa ke khad gia te os ne mainu dubara puchea ta main kiha 

j - jo tusi os din joti nal nar rahe c os bare puch na c

k - kio tanu ni pata oh ki c
j - main kiha mainu ni pata oh ki c
k - sachi ni pata ki mera fudu kich reha ae
j - sachi ni pata tu das de
k - main ta das du ga par tu kise nu das na dai 
j - nahi das da odan wali gal keda main kise nu dasi aa
k - chal puch ki puchna aa
j - kale pihla ta ih das tu joti na ida kio chimbdea c ( sangde-2 puch hi liya) 
k - oda nal lagan nal swad onda aa ta laga c
j - tusi apne toto kio bhar kae hoi c 
mari ih gal sun ke kal hassan laga te kihda ih nu toto ni lun kihde aa toto ta chote jwaka de hunde aa wadea de lun hunda tare v ta lun hona 
j - mainu ni pata ki aa 
k - chal kad ke dikha aapa hune dekh lande aa ki toto aa ya lun 
main os de gal sun ke ghbra gia par dil ch sochan laga ke mainu je kuch pata kar na ta kale di gal mani pani aa te main darde ho kiha 
j - kale mai kio apne toto bah kada 
k - kala kih da kad ta sahi 
main darde hoe ne apne pant te kacha niche kita mera lun bahar aa gia jo ki aad khada c kale ne mare lun wal dekh ke hiha tu is tu toto kiha da ae oe ih ta hale betha ae jad khda ho gia ta is ne pura lun ban jana aae. mainos de gal sun ke sang gia nale swad v aa riha c te mera lun khada hon laga thodi chir bad mera lun pura khada ho gia te kala os nu dekha laga te kihda oe tera te ine choti umer ch kafi wada ae

j - tera v ta wada e aa jad main os din de kiha c par ik gal das os din tare toto matlab lun cho oh chita-2 ki nkliya c
k - tainu us bar v ni pata 
j - nahi 
k - jao pare kio majak kar reha ae
j - sachi ni pata par tu das de
kuch chir mare wal dikh ke sochan laga te phir kuch chir bad kahan laga
k - os nu muth ja lun da pani kihde 
j - achea par ih nikal da kio aa
k - jad swad aun lagda aae ta ih lun cho nikal da ae.kio tare lun cho ni niklea
main os de gal sun dar gia te phata-2 kiha nahi 
j - nahi main kad swad lita jo mera nikle te mainu ta ih v ni pata ki ih kida nikal da 
kala mari gal sun hasan laga te kihda
k - main tainu das ta dava ki swad kida lai da par te kise nu das dena aa 
j - main chati-2 kiha nahi das de
mari gal sun kala apna pjama niche karan laga te apna lun bahar kad os nu hath ch phar mainu kih da apne lun nu apne hath ch phar ke agge piche kar te dekh phir kina swad aunda .mainus de lun wal dekhiya jo ki mare lun nalo inch k wada hi lag reha c te main apne lun nu phar ke hilan laga ta mainu kuch v ni ho reha c 

main kale nu kiha kale mainu ta koi swad ni aa riha
k - tu soch kise bare jida main joti nal lag ke hil reha c 
kale di gal sun main rimpi bare sochan laga te holi-2 mainu swad on laga te main kale nu dekh ke jida oh kar reha c oda hi karan laga kuch 5 mint bad mainu laga ki mare lun cho kuck niklan laga ae main kale nu kiha 

j - kale bai mainu susu aai aa main is nu bad ch kar laina aa pihla susu kar awa 
mari gal sun kala hassan laga ke kihda 
k - ih susu ni ih ohi swad aa jihde bare tanu dasea c tu bas kari ch jo nikal da aa niklan de 
assi dove apne lun nu hilan lage te phila mare lun cho te phir kale de lun cho muth nikle te main kamban laga te swad nal mariya akha band ho gia te lata kamban lagi mainu laga ki main hun diga. main kannd nal lag ke khad gia te mariya akha hale v band c jad main kuch chir picho apniya akha khol ke kale wal dakiya ta kala apna pjama upar chuk ke apna lun pjame ch pa reha c mainus nu dekh ke phata phat apna kacha lun oper kita te apne pant pa lai kala mare wal dekh ke kihda 

k - kio aiya swad
j - sachi bai bhla hi swad aaiya par ihnu kahde ki aa ( hun mari os nal gal karan da chaka te dar khatam ho gia c) 
k - is nu muth marna kihde aa is nal swad bohut aunda aa
j - kala id hi swad lande aa ki jida tu odan joti nal kar reha c oda v swad aunda aa
k - hass ke kihda tainu sab das du ga par wada kar aapa jo gala kara ge tu os bare kise nal gal ni kare ga 
j - thik aa kale bai main kise nu ni das da par mainu ta das de 
k - aaj hi sab kuch karnaa aa ki kal joga v kuch chadna aa 
os to bad kuch chir bad assi otho bhar aa ke chonk ch bah gae te light aai to apne-2 ghara nu aa gae
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