Incest Sohni Punjaban ( ਸੋਹਣੀ ਪੰਜਾਬਣ )

[Zaspreet]

Bai ek correction karni a... Genre ta tu "INCEST" ditta par hje tak koi v "INCEST " seen ni aya.... na kite koi gall hoi a.. ek jagah bas Kuldeep nu ohde dosta ne kaha ohdiya Dheea bare... par oh just ek gal hi c... mere vang shyad kyi jane confusion ch a.. ke story "Adultery " a ke "INCEST "  ???

Te duji gal bai 1 sex seen likhya tu... hje tak .. ohde ch Sirf kuldeep ki feel kar oh dasya... jahdi kudi nal oh kar raha ohdi ta tu koi feeling ni likhi... just ena likhya kudi nu maza aun lagga... bas ... sex seen nu bhut improvement di lod a.. bai... je vadiya lagge ta.. dasi.... correction jrur kardi uppar jo kaha mai

je kuch hoya ta.. pakka dasu.,,, baki all good a..

Thank you so much veer jo tusi story dhyaan nal parhi and apna review ditta. Tuhade naal main poori tarah naal ehmat haan and niche jawaab main de reha haan ...

1) Bilkul sahi keha veer k main genre incest likhya hai par story ch hale tak koi incest da scene nahin aaya. Reason eh hai ki pehla eh story incest hi likhi si and hun vi incest hi likh reha si par phir incest di supply jyada hon karke main plot change kar ditta hain. Pehla is story ch ik character si jehra pure incest si . Par hun eh story incest nahin hougi. Main isda genre change kar dena hai ji. Eh adultery hougi story hun.

2) Hanji veer ik sex scene aaya hai kyunki veer ik-do nu shaddd ke meri story de characters thode '. kism de hai jo aini jaldis sex ch nahin fass sakde jiskarke sex scenes ghatt hai. And jehra kuldeep vala sex scene si us ch kudi valo tan nahin dasseya kyunki oh kudi gasti ( Prostitute) si and meri story da main character kuldeep hai. Iskarke kuldeep de point of view toh dasseya hai. 

Baaki veer jo hor v kamiyan hai jaroor dsseo. Main shai karda rahuga. Bahut bahut dhanwaad veer.