01-07-2019, 11:09 PM
UPDATE-10
Majjan de vaare vch pahunch ke ik majj de thalle balti te doungha rakhya te Apne kapre swaaran lag payi. Apni chunni utaar ke naal lamakdi taar te paa ditti te apni pajami de paunche chukk ke thalle baith gayi. Hayee is pose vch baithan nal navdeep di vaddi bund hor v chorhi te uttejit krn vali ban gayi. Usdi patli jehi pajami usde pattan te vadde chitdaan nu lukoon vch asafal saabit ho rahi c. Usde mumme v chunni na hon krke adhe tan saaf saaf nazar aa rahe c. Hun navdeep ne paani nal majj de thann dhotte tan usde doven mumme rubber vang hillan lag gaye.Usne hale thana nu farhya hi c ki ramu v gate kholda hoya andar aa gaya
Hun Aagge
Ramu- " are saradrni ji aap kyun kasht kar rahe ho...." Navdeep de kol aunda hoya ramu boleya. Samne tatti wale pose ch navdeep di bund usde ankhan saamne lishak payi.
Navdeep- " Aa gaya ramu..." Ramu nu kol khada dekh navdeep ne keha. " Ajj masa kawela kar ditta aayun nu..."
Ramu- " Wo beebi ji raaste main ik bujurg sardar ji cycle se digg gaye they...Unhe chakne ke liye koi aaya nahin..." Navdeep de kol baithke ramu dassan lagga. Naal naal oh bina chunni toh adh nange hoye usde kharbooje varge mumme nu jhaank reha si.
Navdeep- " Hayee...phir ramu? Tu chakkeya phir bujurg nu?"
Ramu- " hor ki beebi ji. Humne uthaya sardar ji ko. Woh ghabra gaye they...kaamp rahe they. Maine socha unko ghar tak shor aayun. Isliye kawela ho geya sardarni ji." Ramu apni kahani sunaunda usde mummeyan nu khaa jaan wali nazar maar reha hai.
Navdeep- " Phir tan vaahla changa kita tu ramu. Rabb teri jaroor madad kruga ." Navdeep usnu kehndi hai te usde man ch ramu di izzat hor vadh jandi hai.
Usdi gall sunke man ch sochan lag janda " Rabb madad kare tan hum to apko v chakk de sardarni ji.."
"pach pach...pach pach....chrrrr"
Dhaaaran di aawaz baalti ch pai rahi hai. Navdeep apne sohne-sohne hathan nal than ghuttke dhaara kadd rahi hai. Ramu usde kol hi baitha hai. Oh usde hilde mummeyan nu dekh dekh paagal ho reha hai. Naal thalle chorhi hoyi payi bund usde lun nu khada kar rahi hai. Ramu ne bahut baar keha navdeep nu ki oh kadd layuga dhaaran par navdeep usnu mana kar dindi hai tan aap hi dhaaran kaddan lagdi hai. Naal naal oh usnal babbe di gall sherh lendi hai.
Navdeep- " ramu tu oh baba ji baare jaanda ...preet inder singh ji...jehre oh '. jagah te baithde hunde aaa..."
Ramu- " Wo jinki kaali daari-mooch hai...Roohbdaar chehra hai..." Ramu shayad pehchaan gaya hain.
Navdeep- " Han han..jinha dia aankhan ch noor jhalakda hai..." Navdeep sehej subah hi boli.
Ramu- " Noor toh aapki gaand se bhi bathera jhalakda hai.." Holi jehi aawaz ch ramu boleya.
Navdeep- " ki hoya ramu? sunya nahin ki keha tu?"
Ramu- " hum..hu...hu...humne to yehi kaha ki unki to poore chehre se tapakta hai..." Ramu gall sambhalda hoya boleya. " Wo baba ji bahut aache hain. Mujhe bhi ek din unhone laakh rupeye ki baat kahi thi.."
Navdeep- " Ki ramu? kehri gall kahi si?" Navdeep da chehra tan jive laal ho gaya. Oh gall sunan nu bahut utaawali lag rahi si. Ramu eh dekh ke thoda chaunk gaya hai.
Ramu- " Wo aise thodi batayenge sardarni ji. Unhone kaha tha ki kisi ko mat batana . Wo gyaan bahut anmol hai.." Ramu jaanbuj ke navdeep nu tadfayaun lagga.
Navdeep- " aidda da kehra gyaan jo lukaun di lorh pave? Ramu chupchaap dassde ki dasseya baba ji ne." Navdeep dhaaran nu shaddke usde jiven tarle paaun laggi.
Ramu- " Wo gayaan anmol hai sardarni ji. Isliye shupane ko kaha hai baba ji ne. Wo nahin hum bata sakte aise hi..." Ramu de dimaag ch kujh pakkan lagga si.
Navdeep- " Ramu dassde please. Unha baba ji di har gall moti di tarah hundi hain. Tu jo kahega tainu oh bana ke khilayugi...tainu paise v vadh dilwayugi . Oh gayaan da khazana mainu vi dassde.." Navdeep hun hor vi tarle maaran lagi.
Ramu- " Nahin sardarni ji. Hum khaane ke thodi bhookhe hai. Ya paise ke thodi bhooke hain. " Ainni gal kehke ramu ruk gaya .
Navdeep- " Tan phir jo tu kahega oh miluga ramu. Bass baba ji di har gall mainu dassde ..." Navdeep ne kaahli kaahli ch usnu eh gall vi keh ditti.
Ramu- " Pakka sardarni ji. Hum jo mangega woh aap deoge. Chahe kujh vi maang lun.." ramu ik vaari pakka karna chahunda si.
Navdeep - " Bilkul ramu kuch v mang li. main mana nahi karugi. Bas mainu baba ji di gall dassde.." Navdeep tan jiven gall pisshe paagal ho gayi si.
Ramu- " Phir theek hai sardarni ji. Par baad main mukarna mat ji." ramu de mooh te shaitaani muskurahat aa gayi hai.
Navdeep- " Kade vi nahin ramu. Main kadi vi jhooth nahin boldi hundi. " Navdeep ne ramu de val vekhdeya keha.
Ramu- " To phir theek hai sardarni ji. Wo baba ji ne bataya hai ki Yeh jo shareer hai naa..woh ik kapde ki tarah hai. Asli insaan toh shareer ke andar shupa baitha hai. " Ramu ne ainni ku gall boli te phir apne waalo vi masala jorh ke usde saamne bolan lagga . " Jaise shareer se kapde utaar de toh woh nanga ho jayega. Aise hi shareer ko utaarke andar jhaanko toh insaaniyat nazar aayegi."
Eh aakhiri gal kehnday hoya ramu navdeep ne adh nange mummeyan da size ankhan naal nappan di koshish karda hain. Oh andaza laganda hai ki ik-ik mumma 2.5 - 2.5 kilo da chakki firdi aa sardarni.
Navdeep- " Dhann hai baba ji. Unha di gar gall dhooongi hundi hain. " Navdeep man sch babbe baare sochke boli.
Ramu- " Aur unhone kaha hai ki agar aap asli insaan banna chahte ho toh logon ki sewa karo. Unki musibat main madad karo . Tabhi main aaj bujurg ko ghar tak shor ke aaya sardarni ji." Ramu ne bade salike naal samjaya . Usda kaala lun sardarni de gore mumme vekhke farrate maaran lagg peya hain.
Navdeep- " Sacchi gall kahi hai baba ji ne. Lakh rupeye di nahin crore rupee di gall hai. " Navdeep ramu nu kehndi hain .
Ramu- " Aur pata hai sardarni ji..unhone ik jagah batayi hai. Kaha hai agar wahan ishnaan kar lo toh saat janmo ke paap nasht ho jaate hai.."
Navdeep- " Accha ramu...? Kithe hai oh jagah?"
Ramu- " Wo hamare pind ke bahar hai. " Ramu ne usde hilde mummeyan nu phir toh gooreya.
Navdeep- " aachaa...pind de bahar koi jagah vi hai ishaan karn di? Main tan pehli vaar sunya?"
Ramu- " Tabhi to kaha tha anmol gayaan ki baat batayi hai baba ji ne. "
Navdeep- " Tu jaake aaya ramu ?"
Hale ramu jawaab den hi lagga si ki manjeet di aawaz aa gayi. " Ve ramu dhaaran nahi kaddiya hale tak". Sunke ramu te navdeep gallan toh bahar aa gaye. Hale adhi baalti vi bhar nahin hoyi si.
Ramu- " Aap rehne do sardarni ji. Main jaldi jaldi kar deta hun..." ramu ne usnu keha te thana nu hathh paa leya. Usnu inj mehoos hoya jiven usne navdeep de mulayam mummeyan nu farh leya hove. Navdeep usdi gall mann ke uth ke khari ho gayi te chitadd nu hath nal jharaan laggi.
Hayee...ramu da jiven lun da paani niklan hi lagga si. Navdeep de hath laggan naal usde vadde vadde chitadd iven hile jiven spring de bane hon. Usnu pehli vaar ainni kolo navdeep di bund di poori shape nazar aayi hai. Oh tan paagal hon lagga si. Phir navdeep ne chunni naal mumme dhakke te andar chali gayi.
RAAT DA SCENE
Adhi raat ho gayi hain. Saare ghar de jee sutte paaye hain. Sivay navdeep te ramu ton. Navdeep moodhi paayi hoyi preet inder singh baare soch rahi hai. Usde man ch khyaal aa reha hai ki preet inder singh diya gallan kinnia sacchiyan te keemti hun. Usnu ajj ramu di gall sunke vi poora yakeen ho gaya si ki usne sahi guru dhaareya hain. Moodhi paayi hoyi di bund uppar nu hai. Te lammi paayi hon karke hor v moti te chorhi lagg rahi hai. Usde man ch eh chl reha hai ki kado saver hove te oh preet inder singh kol jaave te usnaal gayaan dia gallan sanjiyan karey.
Udhar ramu da bura haal hoya peya hai. Ajj navdeep naal kaafi der usne gallan kitiyan si. Nale navdeep de adh nange tarbooj varge mumme usne bilkul kolo dekhe si. Nale kharbooje vargi bund di shape oh kive bhull sakda si. Usnu neend bilkul vi nahin aa rahi si. Oh navdeep baare soch soch apne lun nu masal reha hai. Ant uskolo reha nahin janda. Oh apne manje toh uthya te himmat karke navdeep de kamre wal chala gaya. Pehla usne ainni himmat kade vi nahin kiti si. Par ajj uskolo reha nahin jaa reha si. Ik tan hafte ton usne mutthh nahin maari si kyunki usnu mauka nahin milya si. Utto ajj navdeep di bund jo dekh layi si. Oh Luk-luk ke dabbe pairan de naal navdeep de kamre de boohe agge pahunch gaya. Darwaza khulla hi si kyunki ghar vich andarle darwaze saare khulle rakh ke hi saunde si. Usde naal waale manje te manjeet sutti paayi si.
Ramu ne dekhya ki navdeep mudddi lammi payi hai te usdi bund uppar wal nu hi hai. Kamre bahar jagde bulb di halki roshni usdi bund te pai rahi si. Hayeee...usda dil kita ki sidhaa usde uppar jaake let jaave te usde gore te mote mote chidtan de utte apna kaala lunn ghasave. Usnu navdeep de doven chitad pahadd diya chotiyan lag rahe si jisnu usda lunn charna chahunda si. Usne apna pajama thalle kita te apna mota kaala lun kaddke mutth maaran lagga. Naal naal oh aala dwaala vi dekh reha si ki koi hor na dekh lave. Par sabh paase shaanti si. Oh chupchaap navdeep di bund nu vekh vekh mutth maari janda hain. Man ch tan oh navdeep nu nangi krke usdi bund vich lun dhakk reha hunda hai. Usnu pata nahin laggeya ki kado usne ankhan band kr lyian. Mutth maarni usne jaari rakkhi si. Achanak usnu kujh khadaka sunya. Usne ikdum aankahn kholiyan tan usde tatte gale tak aa gaye. Saamne manjeet manje toh uth ke baithi hoyi usde val dekh rahi si. to be continued
Majjan de vaare vch pahunch ke ik majj de thalle balti te doungha rakhya te Apne kapre swaaran lag payi. Apni chunni utaar ke naal lamakdi taar te paa ditti te apni pajami de paunche chukk ke thalle baith gayi. Hayee is pose vch baithan nal navdeep di vaddi bund hor v chorhi te uttejit krn vali ban gayi. Usdi patli jehi pajami usde pattan te vadde chitdaan nu lukoon vch asafal saabit ho rahi c. Usde mumme v chunni na hon krke adhe tan saaf saaf nazar aa rahe c. Hun navdeep ne paani nal majj de thann dhotte tan usde doven mumme rubber vang hillan lag gaye.Usne hale thana nu farhya hi c ki ramu v gate kholda hoya andar aa gaya
Hun Aagge
Ramu- " are saradrni ji aap kyun kasht kar rahe ho...." Navdeep de kol aunda hoya ramu boleya. Samne tatti wale pose ch navdeep di bund usde ankhan saamne lishak payi.
Navdeep- " Aa gaya ramu..." Ramu nu kol khada dekh navdeep ne keha. " Ajj masa kawela kar ditta aayun nu..."
Ramu- " Wo beebi ji raaste main ik bujurg sardar ji cycle se digg gaye they...Unhe chakne ke liye koi aaya nahin..." Navdeep de kol baithke ramu dassan lagga. Naal naal oh bina chunni toh adh nange hoye usde kharbooje varge mumme nu jhaank reha si.
Navdeep- " Hayee...phir ramu? Tu chakkeya phir bujurg nu?"
Ramu- " hor ki beebi ji. Humne uthaya sardar ji ko. Woh ghabra gaye they...kaamp rahe they. Maine socha unko ghar tak shor aayun. Isliye kawela ho geya sardarni ji." Ramu apni kahani sunaunda usde mummeyan nu khaa jaan wali nazar maar reha hai.
Navdeep- " Phir tan vaahla changa kita tu ramu. Rabb teri jaroor madad kruga ." Navdeep usnu kehndi hai te usde man ch ramu di izzat hor vadh jandi hai.
Usdi gall sunke man ch sochan lag janda " Rabb madad kare tan hum to apko v chakk de sardarni ji.."
"pach pach...pach pach....chrrrr"
Dhaaaran di aawaz baalti ch pai rahi hai. Navdeep apne sohne-sohne hathan nal than ghuttke dhaara kadd rahi hai. Ramu usde kol hi baitha hai. Oh usde hilde mummeyan nu dekh dekh paagal ho reha hai. Naal thalle chorhi hoyi payi bund usde lun nu khada kar rahi hai. Ramu ne bahut baar keha navdeep nu ki oh kadd layuga dhaaran par navdeep usnu mana kar dindi hai tan aap hi dhaaran kaddan lagdi hai. Naal naal oh usnal babbe di gall sherh lendi hai.
Navdeep- " ramu tu oh baba ji baare jaanda ...preet inder singh ji...jehre oh '. jagah te baithde hunde aaa..."
Ramu- " Wo jinki kaali daari-mooch hai...Roohbdaar chehra hai..." Ramu shayad pehchaan gaya hain.
Navdeep- " Han han..jinha dia aankhan ch noor jhalakda hai..." Navdeep sehej subah hi boli.
Ramu- " Noor toh aapki gaand se bhi bathera jhalakda hai.." Holi jehi aawaz ch ramu boleya.
Navdeep- " ki hoya ramu? sunya nahin ki keha tu?"
Ramu- " hum..hu...hu...humne to yehi kaha ki unki to poore chehre se tapakta hai..." Ramu gall sambhalda hoya boleya. " Wo baba ji bahut aache hain. Mujhe bhi ek din unhone laakh rupeye ki baat kahi thi.."
Navdeep- " Ki ramu? kehri gall kahi si?" Navdeep da chehra tan jive laal ho gaya. Oh gall sunan nu bahut utaawali lag rahi si. Ramu eh dekh ke thoda chaunk gaya hai.
Ramu- " Wo aise thodi batayenge sardarni ji. Unhone kaha tha ki kisi ko mat batana . Wo gyaan bahut anmol hai.." Ramu jaanbuj ke navdeep nu tadfayaun lagga.
Navdeep- " aidda da kehra gyaan jo lukaun di lorh pave? Ramu chupchaap dassde ki dasseya baba ji ne." Navdeep dhaaran nu shaddke usde jiven tarle paaun laggi.
Ramu- " Wo gayaan anmol hai sardarni ji. Isliye shupane ko kaha hai baba ji ne. Wo nahin hum bata sakte aise hi..." Ramu de dimaag ch kujh pakkan lagga si.
Navdeep- " Ramu dassde please. Unha baba ji di har gall moti di tarah hundi hain. Tu jo kahega tainu oh bana ke khilayugi...tainu paise v vadh dilwayugi . Oh gayaan da khazana mainu vi dassde.." Navdeep hun hor vi tarle maaran lagi.
Ramu- " Nahin sardarni ji. Hum khaane ke thodi bhookhe hai. Ya paise ke thodi bhooke hain. " Ainni gal kehke ramu ruk gaya .
Navdeep- " Tan phir jo tu kahega oh miluga ramu. Bass baba ji di har gall mainu dassde ..." Navdeep ne kaahli kaahli ch usnu eh gall vi keh ditti.
Ramu- " Pakka sardarni ji. Hum jo mangega woh aap deoge. Chahe kujh vi maang lun.." ramu ik vaari pakka karna chahunda si.
Navdeep - " Bilkul ramu kuch v mang li. main mana nahi karugi. Bas mainu baba ji di gall dassde.." Navdeep tan jiven gall pisshe paagal ho gayi si.
Ramu- " Phir theek hai sardarni ji. Par baad main mukarna mat ji." ramu de mooh te shaitaani muskurahat aa gayi hai.
Navdeep- " Kade vi nahin ramu. Main kadi vi jhooth nahin boldi hundi. " Navdeep ne ramu de val vekhdeya keha.
Ramu- " To phir theek hai sardarni ji. Wo baba ji ne bataya hai ki Yeh jo shareer hai naa..woh ik kapde ki tarah hai. Asli insaan toh shareer ke andar shupa baitha hai. " Ramu ne ainni ku gall boli te phir apne waalo vi masala jorh ke usde saamne bolan lagga . " Jaise shareer se kapde utaar de toh woh nanga ho jayega. Aise hi shareer ko utaarke andar jhaanko toh insaaniyat nazar aayegi."
Eh aakhiri gal kehnday hoya ramu navdeep ne adh nange mummeyan da size ankhan naal nappan di koshish karda hain. Oh andaza laganda hai ki ik-ik mumma 2.5 - 2.5 kilo da chakki firdi aa sardarni.
Navdeep- " Dhann hai baba ji. Unha di gar gall dhooongi hundi hain. " Navdeep man sch babbe baare sochke boli.
Ramu- " Aur unhone kaha hai ki agar aap asli insaan banna chahte ho toh logon ki sewa karo. Unki musibat main madad karo . Tabhi main aaj bujurg ko ghar tak shor ke aaya sardarni ji." Ramu ne bade salike naal samjaya . Usda kaala lun sardarni de gore mumme vekhke farrate maaran lagg peya hain.
Navdeep- " Sacchi gall kahi hai baba ji ne. Lakh rupeye di nahin crore rupee di gall hai. " Navdeep ramu nu kehndi hain .
Ramu- " Aur pata hai sardarni ji..unhone ik jagah batayi hai. Kaha hai agar wahan ishnaan kar lo toh saat janmo ke paap nasht ho jaate hai.."
Navdeep- " Accha ramu...? Kithe hai oh jagah?"
Ramu- " Wo hamare pind ke bahar hai. " Ramu ne usde hilde mummeyan nu phir toh gooreya.
Navdeep- " aachaa...pind de bahar koi jagah vi hai ishaan karn di? Main tan pehli vaar sunya?"
Ramu- " Tabhi to kaha tha anmol gayaan ki baat batayi hai baba ji ne. "
Navdeep- " Tu jaake aaya ramu ?"
Hale ramu jawaab den hi lagga si ki manjeet di aawaz aa gayi. " Ve ramu dhaaran nahi kaddiya hale tak". Sunke ramu te navdeep gallan toh bahar aa gaye. Hale adhi baalti vi bhar nahin hoyi si.
Ramu- " Aap rehne do sardarni ji. Main jaldi jaldi kar deta hun..." ramu ne usnu keha te thana nu hathh paa leya. Usnu inj mehoos hoya jiven usne navdeep de mulayam mummeyan nu farh leya hove. Navdeep usdi gall mann ke uth ke khari ho gayi te chitadd nu hath nal jharaan laggi.
Hayee...ramu da jiven lun da paani niklan hi lagga si. Navdeep de hath laggan naal usde vadde vadde chitadd iven hile jiven spring de bane hon. Usnu pehli vaar ainni kolo navdeep di bund di poori shape nazar aayi hai. Oh tan paagal hon lagga si. Phir navdeep ne chunni naal mumme dhakke te andar chali gayi.
RAAT DA SCENE
Adhi raat ho gayi hain. Saare ghar de jee sutte paaye hain. Sivay navdeep te ramu ton. Navdeep moodhi paayi hoyi preet inder singh baare soch rahi hai. Usde man ch khyaal aa reha hai ki preet inder singh diya gallan kinnia sacchiyan te keemti hun. Usnu ajj ramu di gall sunke vi poora yakeen ho gaya si ki usne sahi guru dhaareya hain. Moodhi paayi hoyi di bund uppar nu hai. Te lammi paayi hon karke hor v moti te chorhi lagg rahi hai. Usde man ch eh chl reha hai ki kado saver hove te oh preet inder singh kol jaave te usnaal gayaan dia gallan sanjiyan karey.
Udhar ramu da bura haal hoya peya hai. Ajj navdeep naal kaafi der usne gallan kitiyan si. Nale navdeep de adh nange tarbooj varge mumme usne bilkul kolo dekhe si. Nale kharbooje vargi bund di shape oh kive bhull sakda si. Usnu neend bilkul vi nahin aa rahi si. Oh navdeep baare soch soch apne lun nu masal reha hai. Ant uskolo reha nahin janda. Oh apne manje toh uthya te himmat karke navdeep de kamre wal chala gaya. Pehla usne ainni himmat kade vi nahin kiti si. Par ajj uskolo reha nahin jaa reha si. Ik tan hafte ton usne mutthh nahin maari si kyunki usnu mauka nahin milya si. Utto ajj navdeep di bund jo dekh layi si. Oh Luk-luk ke dabbe pairan de naal navdeep de kamre de boohe agge pahunch gaya. Darwaza khulla hi si kyunki ghar vich andarle darwaze saare khulle rakh ke hi saunde si. Usde naal waale manje te manjeet sutti paayi si.
Ramu ne dekhya ki navdeep mudddi lammi payi hai te usdi bund uppar wal nu hi hai. Kamre bahar jagde bulb di halki roshni usdi bund te pai rahi si. Hayeee...usda dil kita ki sidhaa usde uppar jaake let jaave te usde gore te mote mote chidtan de utte apna kaala lunn ghasave. Usnu navdeep de doven chitad pahadd diya chotiyan lag rahe si jisnu usda lunn charna chahunda si. Usne apna pajama thalle kita te apna mota kaala lun kaddke mutth maaran lagga. Naal naal oh aala dwaala vi dekh reha si ki koi hor na dekh lave. Par sabh paase shaanti si. Oh chupchaap navdeep di bund nu vekh vekh mutth maari janda hain. Man ch tan oh navdeep nu nangi krke usdi bund vich lun dhakk reha hunda hai. Usnu pata nahin laggeya ki kado usne ankhan band kr lyian. Mutth maarni usne jaari rakkhi si. Achanak usnu kujh khadaka sunya. Usne ikdum aankahn kholiyan tan usde tatte gale tak aa gaye. Saamne manjeet manje toh uth ke baithi hoyi usde val dekh rahi si. to be continued
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