13-04-2024, 01:49 AM
Sema story nanba!!! 
Inaikku morning thaan aarambichaen aana 34 page um mudichutaen
Sema suspense and thriller, anganga konjam spelling mistakes pisuru thattinaalum, arumaiya kondu pora nanba nee....
Particularly unnoda actress selections um and story oda continuous flow ah pora antha picture selection um arumai!!!
Ennoda particular favorites are as below:
1. Nayan maam oda intimacy and then Nayan maam oda real alter ego velila varathu
2. Jo Maam kooda intimacy and Jo kooda evlo close ah palaguran Sam
3. Sneha and Prasanna oda combined cuck plannings
4. Sujitha akka kitta Sam approach pannrathu
5. Nithya akka kooda Sam close aagurathu and Nithya akka Nayan and Aishwarya kitta Sam ah close aakurthu
6. Yaarumae use pannrathukku yosikura actresses ah bold ah choose panninathu (like Shakshi Aggarwal, Ramya Pandiyan, Divya, Amala Paul etc...) naa mention pannina actresses laam naa avlova entha stories layum avlova paathathu illa... aana nee bold ah use panni athayum rasichu story oda flow oda kondu poi irukura...athukku hats off
Ithellam ennoda particular favorites
My few suggestions are as below:
1. Anjanna character konjam dry ah pora maari iruku, I mean verumanae sex kaaga mattum vara character maari portray aagura maari feel and konjam lengthy ah pora maariyum feel (may be unakku Anjanna romba pidichu irukalaam, aana Nithya akka odathum konjam lengthy ah ponalum it was gripping, but enakku Anjanna oda part konjam grip kammi aana maari oru feel) but i loved and enjoyed the swimming pool session... that was fantastic
2. Andea and Kajal oda plot nalla oru hype la vanthuttu irunthuchu aana thideer nu oru long gap aana maari oru feel (but as a writer unakku athulayum oru plan irukum nu i believe)
3. Sherya maam oda plot laam nalla close ah vara maari iruku aana just tease pannitu pora maari oru feel, it might get grippy if you can include more of her background from her POV (En na Anushka odathum appidi thaan irunthuchu aana ponnu paakura scene la oru twist vanthathu we got a grip back)
4. I can understand as a creator u need to continue a flow aana konjam sentences break panni eluthina konjam vaasikavum nala irukum (can use more punctuations in between)
5. Oru Intro page vachi ella particular segments kum oru page number (hyperlink) kodutha vaasikurathukku innum easy ah irukkum readers ku
6. Konjam font sizes increase pannalaam and konjam different font color um use pannalaam, athu nee already niraya effort pottu eluthura story ah readers ku innum interest kodukkum
Mela solli irukura suggestions ellam ennoda observations thaan, itha nee panniyae aaganum nu naa force panna maataen, aana ippidi laam iruntha better ah irukum nu as a reader i felt nu sonaen bro!!
Matha padi keep rocking bro!!!
unnoda story line semaya iruku (including everyone in the family and all)
Adutha update eppo da varum nu wait pannra readers (unnoda fans) la naanum oruthan... adikadi updates kodu bro, I can understand nee already niraya work ku naduvula thaan story eluthura nu, so eppo laam time kidaikutho appo laam konjam long updates ah pottu ennaya maari readers ah innum impress pannu!!!
Inaikku morning thaan aarambichaen aana 34 page um mudichutaen
Sema suspense and thriller, anganga konjam spelling mistakes pisuru thattinaalum, arumaiya kondu pora nanba nee....
Particularly unnoda actress selections um and story oda continuous flow ah pora antha picture selection um arumai!!!
Ennoda particular favorites are as below:
1. Nayan maam oda intimacy and then Nayan maam oda real alter ego velila varathu
2. Jo Maam kooda intimacy and Jo kooda evlo close ah palaguran Sam
3. Sneha and Prasanna oda combined cuck plannings
4. Sujitha akka kitta Sam approach pannrathu
5. Nithya akka kooda Sam close aagurathu and Nithya akka Nayan and Aishwarya kitta Sam ah close aakurthu
6. Yaarumae use pannrathukku yosikura actresses ah bold ah choose panninathu (like Shakshi Aggarwal, Ramya Pandiyan, Divya, Amala Paul etc...) naa mention pannina actresses laam naa avlova entha stories layum avlova paathathu illa... aana nee bold ah use panni athayum rasichu story oda flow oda kondu poi irukura...athukku hats off
Ithellam ennoda particular favorites
My few suggestions are as below:
1. Anjanna character konjam dry ah pora maari iruku, I mean verumanae sex kaaga mattum vara character maari portray aagura maari feel and konjam lengthy ah pora maariyum feel (may be unakku Anjanna romba pidichu irukalaam, aana Nithya akka odathum konjam lengthy ah ponalum it was gripping, but enakku Anjanna oda part konjam grip kammi aana maari oru feel) but i loved and enjoyed the swimming pool session... that was fantastic
2. Andea and Kajal oda plot nalla oru hype la vanthuttu irunthuchu aana thideer nu oru long gap aana maari oru feel (but as a writer unakku athulayum oru plan irukum nu i believe)
3. Sherya maam oda plot laam nalla close ah vara maari iruku aana just tease pannitu pora maari oru feel, it might get grippy if you can include more of her background from her POV (En na Anushka odathum appidi thaan irunthuchu aana ponnu paakura scene la oru twist vanthathu we got a grip back)
4. I can understand as a creator u need to continue a flow aana konjam sentences break panni eluthina konjam vaasikavum nala irukum (can use more punctuations in between)
5. Oru Intro page vachi ella particular segments kum oru page number (hyperlink) kodutha vaasikurathukku innum easy ah irukkum readers ku
6. Konjam font sizes increase pannalaam and konjam different font color um use pannalaam, athu nee already niraya effort pottu eluthura story ah readers ku innum interest kodukkum
Mela solli irukura suggestions ellam ennoda observations thaan, itha nee panniyae aaganum nu naa force panna maataen, aana ippidi laam iruntha better ah irukum nu as a reader i felt nu sonaen bro!!
Matha padi keep rocking bro!!!
unnoda story line semaya iruku (including everyone in the family and all)Adutha update eppo da varum nu wait pannra readers (unnoda fans) la naanum oruthan... adikadi updates kodu bro, I can understand nee already niraya work ku naduvula thaan story eluthura nu, so eppo laam time kidaikutho appo laam konjam long updates ah pottu ennaya maari readers ah innum impress pannu!!!
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