who watches the watchmen Chapter 9A
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This story was great. If you want to play a sequel to it, then it has to make a complete turn and end as the second part. But care should be taken that the story is limited to Dara, Menaka and her husband. Never make Menka have sex with more than one lower class man. Only Menka should have a relationship with Dara. And there is no need for monotony if there is no effort to prolong it unnecessarily. The second episode would be rather lively if Menka gives birth to Dara's two children, and how she deals with her own husband and children, and second husband Dara and the children born to her. The story will be great if Menka is a housewife of two families and how efficiently she manages the families and the real husband secretly gets jealous, because Menka is more caring towards her Dara's family.

Carry on. If you can take the story forward like this. I will occasionally draw a few pictures for this story.
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RE: who watches the watchmen Chapter 9A - by Henry - 11-01-2024, 11:41 PM
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