Adultery Maids Conspiracy

[The Thinker]

People who wants story to be back in apartment, they just want Anna to fuck Aditi, ok let's say it happened once, twice.. Thrice, Then what? it's end of story. You will find N number of stories on site like that. 
In sex scenes, I don't think much variations are possible but in seduction process there are lot of possibilities are there and that journey of getting seduced is always pleasant. 
I was trying to make emotional attachment between Anna and Aditi by introducing a villan or competitor for Anna, who is way too superior in some areas but Anna is experienced and big player. 
          Aditi was talking to Bhiva just to tease Anna, and she was pissed off because Anna fucked Rachna in front of her, She was jealous, and angry so she wanted to disturb Anna. Aditi is also human she also has desires and feelings but not in a single line I portrayed Aditi as a cheap woman and same time I did not degraded Annas personality. He is like an alpha man from start of the story. 
            If you come with predefined mindset , your mind won't accept anything else , You want story to go ahead with what is in your mind. If you point out some illogical things that is ok, sometimes I can answer and sometimes I just need it to make bridge for next scene. But if you want whole story to be turned then it's difficult and I would definitely loose grip that I already started loosing. 

I thought of ignoring comments, but some of regular readers I can't ignore. I saw more of negative comments and then I had deleted one encounter describing Bhivas fucking highschool English teacher. 
   If you read the planning of tour or start of the tour, I described Meenal in different way, I wanted to add one encounter of that newly wed lady. But I see now more people want it just Aditi to get fucked as early as possible… 

Bro You Ignore them.. just keep focusing on your Vison.. This Story is like Ladder and The Bhiva Angle is great .. brings the much needed tension that who will get Aditi..

I have been following this from beginning this is the best story on Xossip..
You please focus on Your vision and Ignore the Distractions..

Waiting for the terrace encounter Between Bhuva and Aditi..