11-11-2023, 01:18 PM
(This post was last modified: 11-11-2023, 02:55 PM by Vinay89. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.
Edit Reason: adding suggestion. and not just criticism
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Narration is repetitive. its like boobs, dick every other second. narration is not in flow.
One suggestion though. At somepoint, let devika surprise or shock her husband. Surely Venky would be thrilled to her experience or clips or share her with these boys
One suggestion though. At somepoint, let devika surprise or shock her husband. Surely Venky would be thrilled to her experience or clips or share her with these boys
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