01-11-2023, 06:25 PM
(01-11-2023, 04:17 PM)RCF Wrote: Awesome writing! I rarely comment here in Telugu section as i like very few stories. I have seen many stories here which start on page 1 and with in page 3 the lead female crosses the line as if she is waiting for it and feels so unnatural.
My fav stories are Passionate's Malathi Teacher , Professor's wife and Shipa's Pooja story. All these stories are cult classics..I feel your story is about to become one if the current slow seduction is well maintained explaining the slow transition of Geetha into a cheating wife and when it reaches its peak the erotic content should take it to next level..There are obviously many male leads here ...one who pulls her over the line(Sri)...one who is waiting for her to cross the line(Bharath)..Her FIL who has secret desire for her..There is lot of scope for this story. Please do not tempt into the comments and increase the dose unnecessarily unless there is a natural transition. Few more encounters like these should push her over the edge and should see who gets the first chance. Anyways Kudos for your hard work and excellent writing. Also thanks for keeping the temp with weekly updates which is maintaining the rhythm.
Links please