Adultery Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife

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A request to all the readers: Since readers are complaining about repetitiveness of the dialogues, I request you to teach me what kind of dialogues can suit a particular situation. Do come up with a couple of paragraph of story narration and dialogues. I would love to learn from the readers/ other writers.
Also tell me why do you think I keep the dialogue "aap bhi na" by Anita frequent in response to some of the dialogues of Hariya. If any reader can explain it then that would be great. Thanks.

Sean, perhaps this reply may sound repetitive as many respondents have already voiced the same. You are a great writer with a certain flair, and that's what makes it very interesting.

The fact that Anita keeps saying Aap Bhi Na is like a central theme suggesting that she is interested and continuing with what the other person like Hariya is saying, but she is still keep the decorum of society while she is being promiscuous at the same time. .

You should continue definitely. And you are reaching there, the point of no return, soon, and we are eagerly awaiting. Try to see if you can bring more characters after once Anita culminates with Hariya.

Appreciate a long update soon!