Adultery Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife

[Hellybelly]

I think dialogues are not always repetitive as in a particular scene the happening activity itself took a lot of repetitive sentence. But in scenes do mind that same dialogue must not repeat for multiple times to avoid boredom.for eg hariya keep repeating the same thing and anita keep replying him in same manner....and btw this is also imp but not in all scenes....in some scenes ok but for a particular scene same dialogues can be boring and can portray like author has run out of words....but doing this story will be amply long and slow seductive (not fast in words)as it should be ...just an observation not criticism.