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Adultery Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife
(08-10-2023, 10:49 PM)Hellybelly Wrote: Now readers are engaging in story ..this is what every writer wants from readers and this is why he writes the story and use this critical conversation as motivation, as an reader from xossip days, this steady and blurry sexual tension that is building between hariya and anita is what lacked in previous version bcz that was rich in sex here now as sean has planned this story to be a long novella type story we can understand that he has a compulsion to willingly delay the action otherwise this too will loose its essence of erotica, all and I support creamy's comment that physical description of characters can be slightly improved and as Sean has left anita to readers imagination I'll urge Sean sir to plz provide details facial description of anita because you have mastery of description which even surpassed the imagination of reader so there shouldn't be any blank space left for Anita's face...her face, her complexion, her lips and nose everything should be appropriately explained to eventually develop her majestic character bc lz that will prevail. And as we know that story will have new characters in future so I would request that if possible add a character like jeetu bcz that will make it skyrock.,..as far as oil update is concerned it's great and seductive and anita is ready to have fun...where reader too get involved in scene when phone disturbs him... waiting for next regards

Agree with Hellybelly. Your ate already doing great Sean bro and update was too good. We expected this to happen and Hariya is now exploring Anita and doing ultimate seduction, this time also he won't be able to fuck Anita as he has to go now but thay way he put his mouth on Anita boobs, definately he will do bit more before leaving, may be due to short of time if he quickly pulls Anita boobs out from bra and at the same time lift Anita saree to expose her big Gaand and quickly pull down her panty and then while drinking directly milk from Anita lovely boobs if he can slap hard her nude Gaand, that will make this part of update super exciting and if you are planning to do this in next update Sean bro then as Hellybelly said please also explain Anita's facial expressions in detail in all of these actions her face, lips, nose even hiw her body reacts when Hariya will slap on her big Gaand, this will make the scene more kinky. Also this will make Anita super Chudasi in desi term and she will definitely invite Hariya soon in her house to get rough and best fuck of her life.
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RE: Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife - by Lovelychod - 09-10-2023, 08:30 AM



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