07-10-2023, 10:16 PM
Dear Sean,
Story is progressing in good way. From my point of view, one thing is missing which is thinking process of charcter. If I put myself in Hariya's shoes, I would must be planning my next moves before being naked or doing seductive conversation. Doing seductive conversation or little seducyive play with Anita was OK, but sitting completely naked in someone home in day broadlight although it was known that Anita's husband would not return, required a lot of thinking/planning.
I agree that we read some thinking of Anita during bus journey and some acts with Hariya, but it lacks in recent updates where it was required most due to very bold steps of Hariya.
Just sharing my thoughts.
Story is progressing in good way. From my point of view, one thing is missing which is thinking process of charcter. If I put myself in Hariya's shoes, I would must be planning my next moves before being naked or doing seductive conversation. Doing seductive conversation or little seducyive play with Anita was OK, but sitting completely naked in someone home in day broadlight although it was known that Anita's husband would not return, required a lot of thinking/planning.
I agree that we read some thinking of Anita during bus journey and some acts with Hariya, but it lacks in recent updates where it was required most due to very bold steps of Hariya.
Just sharing my thoughts.
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