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Adultery Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife
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(04-09-2023, 04:47 PM)Nostalgic Wrote: Many of the readers already mentioned earlier let me reiterate it "This story is masterpiece"
 The way you are writing it's superb.  Please don't fall for those comments where they are mentioning this story is off the track, they want quick action but I feel that thinking is just like premature ejaculatation.  The builtup you developed is a very good that without any actual action there are many many arousing moments. 
    Regarding new characters , I felt those are requirement of story. 
People should understand that once we go for the actual action that will be the peak of the story and afterwards It will run to the end little faster, We don't want this story to end soon. 
         Till this point we have assumed that Hariya is main hero of the story, everyone wants he should fuck her but if it's normal seduction and fucking then it will be just another story. we have other stories of similar kind BUT this story is different.  Those new characters are adding their flavors and extending this pleasure reading.  As the characters described Hariya is some rough guy, labor, low class and on the other hand Anita is pretty high class, elegant and smart woman that is why when we visualize their copulation it's giving perfect hit (heat) to mind but since In this story He is portayed as hero eventually he will achieve it but but but!!!!! What if some underdog achives it's first, kind of twisted seduction. If the most non deserving person makes her spread her legs, what a awesome site it would be.  
                 This new character has that potential and the situation is very realistic, In this few hours of journey we never saw she was willing but other hand that guy is approaching persistently, If there will be slight leniency from Anita and he will make most out of it from this night.  Situation is such a good that It's night journey, They are on the back seat, no one is near them in that darkness.  She loosing her defense is quite possible. I real life also if any woman traveling alone in night can down her guards if situation is sutaible for her, Infidelity is a concern only when news is out. Let animal instinct out for just 20-30 mins and  her/his life can take them to the highest pleasure and life long memories. So If Anita ignores just few approaches like boob touches, or blushing and naught angry look on vulgar comments, these little sparks might be converted into long flames.  What if he able to finger her? If she give blowjob which Hariya still dreaming?  And eventually If she looses her control just few mins before she get off from the bus? What if Ankit see something happened since she still at her seat adjustjng her clothes even though bus reached their destination, If he see clumsy clothes and some cum strains on her hairs? Not so directly but in hesitation What if he asks did he do anything wrong with you ? What would be her answer if she recalls that final acceptance or rather "Do it/ Dal do" Request was from her. 
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RE: Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife - by seansean007 - 01-10-2023, 08:18 PM



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