Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III (Completed)

[The Last samurai]

Hi Krish welcome back , I think u had great time off and enjoyed lot. In readers case it was reverse effect , since it's long gap we are detached form the story , now story is like mist in our head. We know what happened but all minute details don't remember.
Regarding last chapter initially we felt that story was not ended properly but after reading few times we settled with that. Since u also didn't come back soon.
1. Desai was shown as changed man and nothing was there in story telling other wise untill last chapter where he became vilian suddenly.
2. We felt story ended abruptly meeta chose Desai in last but one part and last part this changed drastically. This could have been Meera and desai taking that vacation, going to shimoga also may be spend some time there. Then we see real face of Desai , when he finally gets meera. may be something that kind of ending.
Or Desai is good man only but Meera love towards krish is more when compared to Desai. This she realises only after she is seperated from krish. When the couple are exhausted from their routine sex and attraction is faded away. Then she goes back to krish.
3. Build up from chapter 1 to last was to see how Meera enjoys the sex with Desai and krish getting opportunity to see it. But that was shown in such humiliating manner that it looked like bang of krish. So that could have been better.
4. There are many possibile endings ... U know it better. It's ur decession to touch the story , modify last 2 chapters or change the ending or leave as it is. We are open for everything. It's left to u how u finish it. Request is better to have some more session between Meera and desai with krish in frame. Then end it.
Thank you and enjoy