04-08-2023, 11:17 PM
Epsiode as usual goes with the flow from where it got stopped. From. The Native speaker point of Gayathri, a lesbo scene with her might be interesting or night not be interesting as when the narration goes on, but it should not be on the demand perspective of the story as an additional narration which Is my point here.. since the third character has come in place btwn and their chemistry is not that great from the beginning, at least what I understood from so far, as they both are keeping a distant relation. Considering this point I think a Lesbian episode might be a drawback to the story which would be an erotic narration as per the demands from the readers perspective nothing but lust without feelings.
That's what my opinion about it
If you feel my opinion is incorrect please excuse. Continue to write the same as u are intended to write about.
Hoping for a rock and roll episode.
Happy Reading and Writing.
That's what my opinion about it
If you feel my opinion is incorrect please excuse. Continue to write the same as u are intended to write about.
Hoping for a rock and roll episode.
Happy Reading and Writing.
Be a happy Reader and Don't forget to appreciate the writer.