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Adultery Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife
Hello Mr. Writer, welcome back after a break. I hope everything is alright back home.

Coming to the updates, while in and of itself they are as tantalizing and erotic as ever, especially their allusion to the white cream that will come out of both their ice creams after enough sucking and licking, I'm worried that this increase in frankness between them to such a level even before Hariya steps into her home, and eventually goes in for the "deed", it might decrease the thrill and nervousness that Anita would otherwise feel if she hasn't already become so Frank with him. For instance, in the movie Unfaithful (not sure if you've seen it, Murder is a copy of this), when the characters are about to indulge in adultery, the woman especially, she is shaking with excited nervousness because of the anticipation alone. This was a kind of feeling that i got in your original version when Hariya entered her home when she was alone on a silent night, and each step they both took was a first step in that direction, not one which they had already felt the excitement for in the past. Nonetheless, I'm hopeful that if you are doing this now, when the time comes, it will be even more excruciatingly erotic than last time.
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RE: Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife - by creamydelight - 26-06-2023, 09:12 PM



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