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Adultery Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife
(28-05-2023, 02:16 AM)Ramukakalegend Wrote: Absolutely masterclass  Update!!!
Those intricate details....the language consistency....the descriptions........ the increasing boldness of hariya...fingering and now even boob groping...the seduction body part by body part..... so well constructed and realistic
Anita's resistance melting day by day....and her leniency towards hariya....amazing
Was so hoping anita to turn around and generously offer her back view... and so satisfied she did
. hope hariya gets to sniff the sweat aur even lick the sweat from his fingers if not lick from his tongue yet!!....so erotic....
The only aspect i find tough to imagine is hariya doing all this near the veg shop....and vendor is there at times....
But otherwise the scene is ultra erotic

Thank you sean bhai for coming back
Thanks a lot for the detailed analysis and feedback. 
I think I had made it clear that all other vegetable vendors were gone and there was only one vegetable vendor. Also when they were having fun in front of that veg seller I had also mentioned that he sits and keeps the vegetables on a raised concrete platform which is high enough to hide anything below the waist of anyone standing in front of the platform. I have also mentioned that it is usually a little dark at that place. 

As far as them having fun after purchasing the vegetables, I have mentioned that they had vanished from the vegetable vendor's sight. Also Anita keeps looking around every now and then and Hariya also knows the place well enough to understand from where people might come or look at them. 

I have tried to keep the story and events as realistic as possible. If reader's still think that there are any event which seem unrealistic feel free to let me know (but also keep in mind that stories cannot be 100% realistic, slight unrealism has to be there for it to be enjoyable, but it should not be so unrealistic that it doesn't make any sense).So if you feel that the it is unrealistic beyond limit then let me know.

Thanks!!
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RE: Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife - by seansean007 - 29-05-2023, 10:29 AM



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