Adultery Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife

[seansean007]

absolutely top notch erotic writing. The conversation between hariya and anita is so erotic and arousing that it just raises the temperatures even more. rightly pointed out by readers that it feels like 69 without the actual act being done. this version of the story feels slower than the previous version. the panipuri wala scenes sometimes feels like a distraction from the linear running of the story unless he has a bigger role to play later on. plz post the next update soon. Thank you.

Thanks a lot for the kind words and your valuable feedback. Appreciate it. 

Yeah the story is indeed slow but I believe that is what makes it erotic. Detailed and slow narration is the USP of this story as pointed out by one of the readers. As long as it keeps the readers engaged and there is no decline in eroticism, the slowness should not be a negative point. 

Thanks again for speaking out your mind.