07-05-2023, 03:21 PM
(07-05-2023, 03:04 PM)UntamedAfrah Wrote: Kyu ke aap hamesha realistic feel laate ho toh abhi yeh store room wale me kuch iss tarah kardein ki boobs dabate dabate voh muskan ko neechay se nanga karde ooper se nahi muskan k hath apne boobs ko bachane me lage rehna neechay dhan hi nai jana aur utne me panty utar jana Muskan ki. Aur jo voh Raghu gai vo bhi apna hathiyar nikal lee aur muskan ki sharamgaah per laga ke ragadhdee aur lambaan feel karaye muskaan ko apne auzaar ki. Kya sahab ka itna andar jasakta hai ? Kya sahab is tarah ragad sakte hai soncho memsab ? Lekin Muskan kisi tarah Qabu karke apne aap par vaha se raghu ko dhakel kar nikal jaye. Aur Raghu ko kaam se hi nikal dein.
Yeh meh is liye kehrahi hu kyu ki jis tarah ka apne muskan ka character banaya hai Muskan ka us oer sirf yahi suit karsakta abhii k liye ki voh itna asaani se naa behke just boobs masle jane se aur ass masle jaane se is tarah ka shareef aur paakdaman muskan nahi beheksakti itne pe bas EK HI CHEEZ KAAM KARSAKTI HAI YAHA VOH HAI RAGHU KA HATHIYAR toh vo uska MUSKAN ko uski sharam gaah pe feel karake ke sawal kare lamban motapa aur gehrahi me jake sukh dene ka mehsoos karwaye lekin PAAK DAMAN muskan aone apko bacha kar nikal jaye vaha se aur bas sonchi rahe RAGHU K HATHIYAR K BARE ME USKE FEEL AUR GEHRAYI ME JAA KE KASSS K CHO**NE ke baare me aur paani bahati reh naa chahte hue bhi.
Kaam se nikalwane ke bad Azam ko asli reason na batate hue vo bas RAGHU JAISA MOTAPA LAMBAAN HATHIYAR KA azam se expect karke sex karti jasye aur usko EHSAAS HOJAYE KI AZAM DWARA VO kabhi prapt naa hosake.
TOH EK ROZ JAB AZAM CHUP K AONI HAYADAR BEGUM KO APNI CHO** RAGADHTE HUEE DHEKLEIN AUR BADH BADHATE HUE SUNLEIN .. AAAH RAGHUUUU KYUU TUME TUMHARA VOHH MERE USS PAR LAGAYA EESHH KITNA LAMBAA THAA KITA MOTA THAA SACH BAAT TOH YEH HAI JAB TUM RAGAD RAHE THE TAB HII MERA PANI NIKAL CHUKA THA OPPER SE HI RAGADHNE SE AAAAHHH AZAM MUJHE KABHI KHUSH NAHI KAR OAYEGAA RAGHU VAPAS AJAO AAAHHH.
Aur Phir AZam ko aoni masoom khoobsurat MUSKAN KA YUUU MACHALNA KAHI NA KAHI SHARMINDA BHI KARTA HO KI USME KAMII HAI AUR VEJEH RAGHU K NIKALWANE KI YEH THI TOH KAAFI SONCH VICHAR K BAD VO APNI KHOOBSURAT BEGUM MUSKAN KO VOH MAZA DILWANE RAGHU KO VAPAS LATA HAI aur chupke se dono ka milan dhekta KIS TARAH USKI PAAKDAMAN BIWI KO RAGHU AB AZAM K GREEN SIGNAL K BAAD BESHARMI SE GHAR ME NANGA GHOOM GHOOM KE BINA DARE SEDUCE KAREGA AUR USKO NANGA PAAKAR MUSKAN HI APNI AAG ME KADAM BEHKAYEGI SHARMATE SHARMATE DHEEREY DHEEREY.
AAP MAHIR KHILADI HAI EVIL JIMERI BAAT AAP SAMAJH GAYE HONGE SHUKRIYA.
Thanks, itne detailed feedback ke liye. I'm glad tum meri story xossip ke waqt se padh rahi ho. Main readers ke suggestions ko seriously consider karta hun agar o mere plot se match kar jata hai.
Issue yahan yahi ke mera plot bana huwa aur main uske basis par hi story aage badhata hun lekin zarurat padti hai to thoda boht usme changes kiya jaskte hain. Tum sahi ho muskan ko easily raghu ke hath na aneke bare men.
Story padhte rehna tum disappoint nahi hogi, just trust the process.
My work
1. Koel, ek masoom housewife
2. Bade ghar ki bahu betiyan
3. Game of lust
4. Kahani ek bade ghar ki
5. Muskan
6. Tale of a lustful revenge
1. Koel, ek masoom housewife
2. Bade ghar ki bahu betiyan
3. Game of lust
4. Kahani ek bade ghar ki
5. Muskan
6. Tale of a lustful revenge