Adultery Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife

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Itne detailed reply per koi response nahi. Not expected from you

You replied in the story quote which was difficult for me to understand that you had written something in there. I thought may be you just quoted the story and forgot to write anything. Thanks a lot for your feedback. Appreciate it.
As far as your suggestions are concerned, I will just request you and all other readers to have patience. This story is detailed and slow and this is one of the things which as per me makes the story erotic. The eroticism lies in describing the situations, the expressions and the actions. I have already made up my mind where I want to take the story and will take the story in that direction, narrate the story mostly as a day to day life activities which can be repetitive (isn't our lives repetitive?). Therefore, I would request the readers to let me know if they think this slow narration and repetitive incidents are killing their interest in this story and whether they are interested only in fast paced stories. I won't change my style of narration, but atleast will know what the readers want. Let me know.
Thanks again.

Thanks for the quick reply and I do understand and appreciate your way of writing. In fact I am myself a big fan of slow erotic seduction and here I would like to inform you that I am myself in the process of writing a very slow and seductive story of which I have written almost 7 parts but still the story is not even half complete. So it doesn't matter if the story is slow paced , what I wanted to highlight was the repetitiveness of very minor details/ activities which can sometimes spoil the mood of the reader. It is your baby and you can raise it the way you like.
Thanks