Adultery BAHURANI - Baban

[Mande]

Excellent!! It's not about only sex but the description of nature, rural beauty & culture, the mental tussle of Rebecca and so on. You really a good writer and need to try your hand for writing novels in future about adultery. You have the x factor of eroticism and you know how subtly that need to be mixed with your narration...well done brother!! Keep going and entertain us through your writing...to reach the ultimate goal of physical affair building the plot is necessary and your are doing absolutely right...thank you once again for taking out time and posting your creation...great job and will look forward to more episodes that is the seed you have ploughed should now grow bigger and help Rebecca to taste the rustic & desi sex......thank you...SAATHAY ACHI BHAI...