Misc. Erotica Politics And/Or Pleasure

[EvilStone]

Oh boy! Oh boy! I must say, the work you have put into this piece is truly commendable. You have managed to completely alter the direction of the story, transforming it into an alluring and sensuous tale that tantalizes the senses. I am deeply impressed by your creativity and your ability to bring such vivid imagery to life through your writing.

Thanks for the feedback. 
Just to clarify I haven't yet altered the direction of story. In the original Yousuf didn't get to have sex even after flashing his dick. I thought Yousuf deserved fucking her.

Story will move ahead with the content original writer provided, but the sex scenes will be elaborated ones.

This is sex story forum, not a thriller fiction. We need context to have sex even in the porn we watch. I will try to maintain that. 
Well that's what I believe