07-03-2023, 02:38 AM
(04-03-2023, 12:53 PM)wolfy Wrote:Namaste padako,,Is thread ko jitna Pyaar mila shayad ee meine kalpana ki thi, ,Meine update dena band isliye ki thi, kyon ke mein jiss taraf thread ko leh Jana chahti thi Kuch readers k chalte mein USS taraf leh ja nahen payi,, , phir ayista ayista Meri interest katam o gyi, aur Apne kudd ki masrofiyat k chalte meine update dena band kardi, mujhe bohot se readers ne request ki likne ki aur meine Koshish b ki leken sai desha nahen deh payi, isliye yeh thread Kuch mahinon k Liye band kardi,
Abb mein apse pochna chahti hun aur apko 2 option dongi jiss k Liye comment zyada ayenge ussi taraf Apne esaab Kahani ko leh jahongi ,,
1.. Uzra ki death aur aage sirf akmas society mein ,,,
2.. Akmas ko kahin aur shift kardon Matlab kesi aur jaga Jahan log nahe hun ,
Intezaar rahega apke comments k,,,
Mera suggestion hai ke Akmas ko usi society me rakho lekin Uzra ko bhi continue Karo. Ek extreme se doosre pr baar baar jana accha nahi hai.
Pehle sirf Akmas thi, phir last ke sirf Uzra. Ab phir sirf Akmas me mat rakho. Story me diversity khatam ho jaegi.
Dono ko rakho, Akmas ke saath Uzra ki bhi story dikhao.
Uzra ka bigadna bht slow kardo. Uzra ne apni jawani parde me guzari hai to uska bigadna aasan nahi hai, wo Akmas se bht zyada resist kr skti hai.
Agar Uzra nahi rahegi to ek to story ek single line pe chalegi, aur doosra tumne Jo Uzra ki story build-up ki hai wo bekar jaegi gi.
Main story Akams ki aur side story Uzra ki.
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