Adultery The Possession

[Joshua]

Hello Henry Bro.. as you said that it's your first story.. and yes.. the start is quite impressive.. Narration is appreciable.. We feel everything from characterization to surroundings as what we experienced in 90's.. Thanks for this Wonderful erotic attempt.. Keep it up..
This is your story and you have every right to move further as per your wish.. till last update everything going perfect.. still going perfectly.. no doubt about it.. but as story progressed we came to know that what will happen is mostly between two characters i.e. Soma n Dawa.. and you very well cultivated that why they both will come together first.. but it will be better if Soma's husband don't get all the details what happens between Dawa n Soma.. yes he frequently coming to home and help Soma and both her sons.. that's it.. others Soma will keep it secret... Second, the sudden change in Dawa's attitude.. till now he has created the impression is very well behaved person.. but now he turned aggressive and also called Soma a Raand.. which I don't like coz it seems like other stories also where Male characters are dominating and they call female characters raand chinal rakhail etc.
What I have expect as per you storyline that they both will come near slowly n naturally.. Dawa lost his wife and so depriving of sexual needs since long and Soma also misses it as her husband stays away and frequency of sex is less.. suddenly Dawa came bare chested and hugged her and than tore her nighty and pressed bite sucked her breasts and than sat away from her and Soma submissively told to fuck her and Dawa behaves like a master.. it looks like typical other story.. I am talking about last update..
Now let's see what happens next.. you already told that there will not be frequent sex scenes ... That's ok but apart from sex every other erotic seduction foreplays etc. on both parts is very important.. 
May be they Converse a lot.. Dawa misses her wife and so hungry for sex immensely.. Dawa wants her to play the role of her wife .. they behave like husband wife secretly.. they visit some outside places like mountains.. the first sex scene between them in the room of Dawa.. sometime they slept in Soma's bedroom.. husband calls Soma and Dawavis there with her in the bed etc. 
I have expected slow romance.. seduction.. erotic conversations.. some time deep kisses.. hugs.. sometime just touch n go.. sometime they don't get the chance to come near.. sometimes go to terrace etc. etc.
But nonetheless.. it's my view.. you might not agree with it.. you can proceed with your plan.. but one thing is sure.. you have a good quality to write sex erotica.. waiting for the next updates... Thanks..

Perfect explanation and this what most of the people need in this story. Nice explanation thank you bro