20-02-2023, 04:39 AM
(19-02-2023, 11:55 PM)redarc Wrote: update aapne accha dala hai, par sundar padhi likhi ladki hai, paise wali hai, sanskari hai, pati se pyar karti hai, to thode naaj nakhre to dikhayegi na, itti easily ramu ne peeche se pakad liya kuch nai boli, beedi pila di kuch nai boli, itti easily give up kyon karegi, aap ek baar woh story padho, banarsi panwala usme ladki kitne nakhre dikhati hai, nokjhok, dhaakka mukii, dant ti hai usmi main to maja hai itti jaldi sundar ladki nai giveup karti usko pata hai ki woh hot hai sundar haiAgar puri story read kro to jo build up ho rha hai wo thik hai. Jo meena ne uska brainwash kiya hai uska asar hai. Aisa mujhe lgga.
just a suggestion, please don't take it otherwise you are writing good