20-01-2023, 11:50 PM
(This post was last modified: 24-01-2023, 12:23 AM by darkharse. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
Hi Bro Mayanair32,
You are working on this story very well...I m sure without right efforts story wont get liked by these many people as I m also one among. Really delicious story for feasting all of us. Very good plot you taken and narrating very well...keep it up..give like this erotic updates.
Salim and Waseem taking advantage of Raj and making him observing his mom and taking her pics is nice...same time we are waiting for Ramesh moves..he will definitely give Maya a best treatment we guess.
Small suggestions...try to let play some games in party like picking a slip randomly from game box and act as written in slip. Also try to plan a cards game where if one loose has to do a task as bet or remove a cloth from their body and perform a task by picking a slip from box....think of it..if supports your story try to incorporate around it.
You are working on this story very well...I m sure without right efforts story wont get liked by these many people as I m also one among. Really delicious story for feasting all of us. Very good plot you taken and narrating very well...keep it up..give like this erotic updates.
Salim and Waseem taking advantage of Raj and making him observing his mom and taking her pics is nice...same time we are waiting for Ramesh moves..he will definitely give Maya a best treatment we guess.
Small suggestions...try to let play some games in party like picking a slip randomly from game box and act as written in slip. Also try to plan a cards game where if one loose has to do a task as bet or remove a cloth from their body and perform a task by picking a slip from box....think of it..if supports your story try to incorporate around it.
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