Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III (Completed)

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@ author Krish


I thought to retire but felt obligated to pen down following. This is a critic reviews for the writer only and fellow readers are requested not to waste time.
 
I had great regards on your capabilities of story telling. I am totally disappointed with the last episode. For me you have merrily and cheaply submitted to the demands from the readers without bothering to characterization. You fixed your aim to  satisfy the readers totally ignoring the normal characters behaviour.
 

Well articulated Manasi.
My understanding that when you mention 'submitted to the demands from the readers ' means that Krish witnessing Meera & Desai to have sex and not that they both get together and kick off Krish?